Last of the Telchines

Fantasy Historical Fiction

Written in response to: "Write a story from the POV of a mythological creature or a natural (not human-made) object." as part of Ancient Futures with Erin Young.

They call us monsters now.

They have always called us monsters, even when our hands shaped the trident that governs their oceans, even when we hammered the sickle that split the old gods from the new. We were there at the beginning of things, before the Olympians sat fat and gleaming on their mountain, before the age of men with their soft, forgettable fingers. We were the first craftsmen. We were the first stewards. We are, because of both those truths, the last of our kind.

My name is Kharybdos. I am writing this in brine and iron on a tablet of basalt, because someone ought to remember what was lost and more importantly, why.

Rhodes was our inheritance before it had a name.

Not the Rhodes of roses and colossal bronze men. Our Rhodes, the older one, where the shoreline was black rock and tide-pools brimming with anemone and bladderwrack. My siblings and I had lived in the shallows for ten thousand years. We had built the place into what it was: forests of kelp seeded deliberately, coral beds cultivated across generations, freshwater springs redirected so that the island’s interior bloomed green even in the dry season. We shaped the land the way we shaped metal, with patience, with knowledge of how materials want to move, with an understanding that the work outlasts the worker.

There were nine of us. Lykos and Skelmis, who were twins, managed the tidal channels, dredging them each season so the water flowed clean. Dexithea read the future in rust-patterns of iron left overnight in seawater, what you might now call chemistry, the language of oxidation and salt. Makelo and Ormenos had perfected bronze-work so refined that their instruments could measure the depth of a current, the salinity of a tide. Tools that had no name yet in any human language because humans had not yet arrived at the problems those tools solved.

I was the youngest. I was also the one they trusted with the most thankless work: the recording. Every season, I etched into basalt the state of the water, the health of the beds, the drift of the currents. Ten thousand years of data, carved by webbed hands into stone shelves beneath the shallows.

None of it survived.

I’m sure what you really want to know about is the poison. Of course you do. That is what they remember us for, in the stories that were allowed to survive. The Telchines poisoned the rivers with Stygian water. The Telchines blighted the crops. The Telchines are wicked.

What the stories do not say, what Zeus himself made certain would never be carved into any lasting record — is why.

The settlers came under false welcome, granted passage by Poseidon in exchange for flattery and offerings of gold. They arrived in boats full of livestock and seed-grain, and they looked at our island and saw only what was useful to them. They planted their barley over our forge-grounds, where the soil had been composted and turned for centuries. They diverted our carefully routed streams into irrigation channels that bypassed the wetlands entirely. They cut the interior forests for timber and pasture, and within two seasons the springs that fed the green interior began to fail. They looked at our dog-faces, our finned hands, and salt-stained bodies, and they decided we were animals who had gotten lucky. That what we had built was accidental, unworthy of preservation.

We warned them. Dexithea went to their settlement in the form they found least threatening. A very old woman, which among humans apparently inspires either pity or authority. She told them plainly: This land is a system. The wetlands filter the springs. The kelp beds stabilize the shallows. Disrupt one and you will lose all of it within a generation. We have the records. We have ten thousand years of records. Please, look at them.

They threw rocks at her.

She came back to the forge with blood on her temple, and she said nothing to any of us for three days. On the fourth day, Lykos asked what we should do. She looked at him for a long time. Then she looked at me.

“Kharybdos knows,” she said.

And I did.

—-

We had kept the vial since before any god had claimed dominion over water, a gift from the elder sea, drawn from the deepest cold channel beneath the ocean floor, where the water moves at the speed of glaciers and carries in it every compound that has ever dissolved from dead and drowned things across the whole history of the world.

We called it simply the deep water. We had never used it. It was a last argument, the way a surgeon keeps a blade that can either kill or cure depending on who is holding it and how much they understand about the body on the table.

I poured it into their diverted irrigation channels. I chose to. I was the youngest, and the most furious, and I told myself it was proportional: they had poisoned our island’s water system by ignorance, and I was simply making the metaphor legible. Their crops died within a day. Stalks collapsing as if exhausted, roots retracting from the blackened soil. The streams ran dark and still.

I told myself I had given them what they gave us.

I was wrong about that. Not about the anger. But about the belief that any act of destruction is ever precisely measured.

Zeus came with a flood rather than mere lightning. He knew we were children of the sea; he knew that drowning a creature who breathes saltwater is not like drowning a human. For us, it is slower. The sensation of being unmade at the edges, freshwater pushing into your gills, the cold of mountain snowmelt instead of ocean, diluting what you are until you become a question rather than an answer.

There was no proclamation. No trial. One morning we woke to the sound of the mountain above Rhodes cracking open, and I knew immediately, the way you know when a forge has run too hot, when the metal is past saving, that this was not weather.

I ran. I am not ashamed of that.

I watched from a sea-cliff half a mile out as the water swallowed the forges, cracked apart the anvils, scattered across the seafloor all the work of ten thousand years. I watched the tide-pools fill with silt. I watched the kelp forests fold. I watched the coral pale.

And I watched my siblings drown.

There was a half-finished helm I had been making for Dexithea, she had laughed about the seabirds that dove at her when she worked on the high rocks, and asked if I couldn’t do something about it. I had been intending to give it to her within the week. It went down with everything else.

It is still down there. Barnacled, probably. Mistaken by some fisherman’s net for ordinary wreckage.

There is nothing ordinary about wreckage.

I went deeper than the flood could follow.

Not the comfortable shallows of Poseidon’s court, but the true deep, the crushing dark where the water is two degrees above freezing and the pressure would stop a human heart, where creatures have evolved lanterns in their own flesh because they have been waiting in the dark long enough to need light and could not afford to wait for someone else to provide it.

I built a forge there. Of course I did. It is what I am.

I have been building in the dark for a very long time. Slowly now, without urgency, the way the deep sea itself works, in increments invisible to any creature with a lifespan measured in decades. I have watched the Olympians rise and fall. I felt the prayers go quiet gradually, then completely, like a forge cooling. First the white heat, then the orange, then the dull red, then dark iron you could touch without flinching.

Humans forgot their gods. Moved to others. Then to none. Then to gods made of numbers and velocity.

And all the while, above me, they have been doing to their whole world what those first settlers did to our island. Diverting the water. Cutting the interior. Planting over the forge-grounds of ten thousand years of equilibrium. Watching the springs fail and concluding that the springs were always going to fail, that nothing before them had known how to keep them running.

We knew. We knew because we had the records.

I am still making records. Every season, in basalt, in the language of brine and iron. The temperature of the deep current. The chemistry of the shifting water. The slow alterations that take centuries to become catastrophe and minutes to become undeniable.

I am not making a weapon. I learned my lesson about weapons.

I am making an archive. The oldest continuous record of this ocean that exists. And I am making, alongside it, the tools to read what the record says. Instruments with no name yet in any human language because humans have not yet arrived at the problems those instruments solve.

They will.

They always do, eventually, these soft-fingered, furious, brilliant, and ruinous creatures. They arrive at the problem just after the problem has become urgent, and they are capable of extraordinary things once urgency clarifies the mind. I have watched them long enough to know this. I have been angry at them long enough to have moved, by geological degrees, into something that is not quite hope but rhymes with it.

The helm is still on the seafloor. I think about it sometimes.

I think about Dexithea laughing about the seabirds.

I think about what it means to build something for someone you know will need it, before they know they need it.

I am Kharybdos. I am the salt in the wound and the memory beneath the water. I am the last Telchine, and I am at the forge.

The deep water knows what the surface has forgotten.

I am writing it down.

Posted May 04, 2026
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Jeremiah Beam
20:18 May 12, 2026

The way you’ve transformed Kharybdos from a mythic whirlpool into a tragic archivist of "deep-time data" is breathtaking. The tension between the Telchines' ten-thousand-year stewardship and the settlers' "soft-fingered" ruin creates such a powerful, timely allegory. I specialize in deepening these atmospheric world-systems and ensuring narrative consistency in high-concept mythic retellings. Would you be open to seeing my deliverables to help refine this archive?

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Zoe Pollock
14:45 May 14, 2026

Very poetic and such a unique POV. I really enjoyed reading this.

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Louise Chambers
14:33 May 14, 2026

Very poetical and lyrical prose. I love reading about Ancient histories so this story really appealed to me. It’s a reminder also that we reap what we sow, and destroy what we should cherish. Thank you.

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