Within Zoe’s olive grove, there is a castle.

Contemporary Fiction Friendship

Written in response to: "Write a story that has an unresolved or open ending." as part of In the Dark.


Since moving to a small rural village in Greece two years ago, Zoe had just bought a 6,000-square-meter olive grove right next to her house. The plot was sold cheaply, and she didn't know whether to cultivate it or lease it to local farmers.

Zoe couldn't believe her luck: owning a vast piece of land overlooking the bay, with a castle on its premises. The old Venetian tower was the last standing remnant of a real castle, long gone now. But a castle it was, for the sake of history, and tourists. The tower was on the plot, but Zoe did not own it; it was a local treasure that happened to be on her newly bought land.

That is the Greek way: you can have olive trees growing on your land, but some do not belong to you. You can have a castle tower right there on your property, but it is municipal property. That was fine for Zoe; it was a piece of history, and she enjoyed the sight of it. Admittedly, it was crumbling, being old and unattended, but old buildings were Zoe’s favorite sight.

From her kitchen window, she looked straight through a hole in the tower wall—she wasn't even sure it had ever been a window. The door was on the other side of the hill, higher off the ground. The official entrance to the castle faced the northern side, and because the foot trail was incredibly steep and rugged, reaching it on foot was a brutal climb.

One night, shortly after the purchase of the land, Zoe was looking through her kitchen window while washing the dishes. A light was showing through the hole in the wall, which Zoe preferred to call a window. That was a strange sight, as if someone was pacing from side to side with a candle or a flashlight.

The occurrence went on night after night. The reasonable guess was that it was a night trespasser. Entering the castle at night was forbidden, but one small warning sign would not deter tourists, Zoe assured herself. Soon enough, Zoe grew too curious; a night trespasser could easily drop dead into her olive grove. One careless step and someone could find themselves falling 30 meters down the cliffside, which wouldn't be a nice sight or experience.

To avoid the brutal hike up the foot trail, Zoe drove her Toyota crossover, using its four-wheel drive to scramble up the rough dirt track to the northern entrance of the castle. She carefully climbed inside, carrying two huge garbage bags, ready to collect rubbish. There was none—not one single dirty tissue, plastic bottle, or candy wrapper. Just a few stones clattered down from the walls.

Obviously, the next step was to install tiny surveillance cameras. Zoe had to understand what was going on, what the meaning of the night light crossing from side to side was. Nothing showed up on the cameras except a bat or two. It was becoming obvious to Zoe: without any previous knowledge, she had gotten herself a ghost in her newly purchased olive grove.

Truth be told, she wasn't spooked. It actually gave her a rush. Zoe had always sided with the unexplained, favoring old secrets over boring, modern certainties. Before long, she’d made a whole nightly habit out of the ghost. She’d turn off the kitchen lights, prop herself against the counter, and watch that amber glow rock back and forth. She’d stay there for hours. It didn’t feel like an intrusion; it just felt like quiet company. She became totally fixated on the rhythm, as if it were a lighthouse shining specifically for her.

Thursday night, there was a knock on the door. It was fairly late, but that was Vangelis’ dinner time. Vangelis was a good neighbor and a friend. Vangelis was a fisherman at night and a waiter at the local taverna during the day. At live musical nights, he was the star of the show. He was a very talented singer. With a voice that was strong and loud, unrolling old legends—so loud that Zoe could hear him singing from down the road, as if he were sitting right next to her. Tourists loved Vangelis; he was a friendly, handsome man, carrying a wisp of mystery but not too weird. He was very happy being the star singer and fisherman of the village.

Vangelis passed Zoe by the open door and went straight into the kitchen. In one hand, he carried a large fish, and in the other, a bag full of vegetables. It was dinnertime, and Vangelis was the cook, since Zoe had no interest in cooking for visitors, or even for herself.

He immediately took over the small counter space, treating the kitchen like his personal stage. With the practiced, dramatic flair of a taverna professional, he began chopping tomatoes, cucumbers, and onions, tossing them into a bowl with heavy splashes of olive oil and a shower of dried oregano. Between verses of a booming, tragic love song about a sailor lost at sea, he held the fish aloft like a trophy, scaling it with rapid, rhythmic strokes of a knife while using the rhythm of the music to pace his work. He was dancing between the sink and the stove, a completely carefree soul, entirely at home in Zoe's quiet kitchen.

In the meantime, Zoe was looking through the window, and the light was indeed shining in the castle. She decided to share the phenomenon with Vangelis. He might even know what was going on. As a member of the Mylonnas family, who had once owned most of the land in the area, Vangelis knew the village’s secrets better than anyone.

“Vanie, look at that,” she pointed to the light in the castle. “Can you see that light?”

“Nai (Yes),” he said, looking busy with the fish. As a vegetarian, Zoe found the sight of the fish unsettling. It was for Vangelis, while the vegetables were being cut into a beautiful, tasty Greek salad for her.

“Vanie, you don’t look very surprised.”

“Oxi (No), that is only Dante.” He didn’t even glance up from his work. “You are just now noticing him? Zoe, he is there every night.” Zoe was amused; in the two years she’d known Vangelis, his attitude had never ceased to surprise her. She just shook her head, a smile playing on her lips; nothing about this man was predictable.

“Who is Dante? I haven't heard about any guy named Dante in the village. Is he Italian?”

They both knew they were referring to a ghost, but the make-believe was too funny to stop. “How do you know his name, Vanie?”

“Pooo, that is not his real name. We call him Dante because he wears that red hat, you know, the one that looks like a pie crust folded over his head.”

The good neighbors enjoyed their meal, the ouzo washing down the food and raising their spirits to the point of mischief. Vangelis started singing again, and the light in the castle vanished.

“Vanie, Dante hates your singing; he is hiding from you and your noisy song.” They couldn't stop laughing.

“Let’s go and meet Dante,” Zoe said, made brazen by the ouzo.

“Do you climb?” Vangelis grinned, thinking of the steep hill.

“We can use my Crossover to get up the trail, let's go and meet Dante,” she said too loudly.

“No need, we can call him to meet us here. That was his land, you know. He will come.”

Zoe was surprised that they could summon Dante to the house so easily, while she had been looking through the kitchen window, obsessed with the mystery, and all this time, she could summon him to her kitchen.

“Let me tell you one thing, though.”

For a Greek man, Vangelis was getting tipsy too quickly.

“Dante is boring. He keeps talking about the same thing and will only drink local wine—and let me tell you, it's a terrible wine.”

All through the following day, the memory of their drunken laughter felt faint, eclipsed by a growing sense of anticipation every time Zoe looked up at the crumbling tower. The Mediterranean summer was coming to an end, and as the blazing afternoon dissolved into a cool, silver dusk, the landscape seemed softened. By nighttime, the atmosphere on the patio had completely shifted from mischief to a heavy, waiting silence.

Vangelis had arrived early, carrying an uncharacteristic air of ancient, mystical know-how, ready to engineer a theatrical presentation. He instructed Zoe to set the table precisely with traditional mezes, thick crusts of heavy bread, and a shallow dish of locally dark and aromatic olive oil. "He won't leave the tower boundaries for just anything," Vangelis had whispered with dramatic gravity, gesturing to the dust-covered, dark glass bottle he brought.

"But tonight, the late summer air is clear, and the breeze will carry the heavy, sun-baked scent of the Limniona wine. It is made from a similar ancient grape that his people pressed right here five hundred years ago. He is a merchant at heart, Zoe. When the night turns, he cannot resist a proper invitation to trade."

“So it's not a cheap local wine this time? You bought Limniona wine, nice, I thought local acid wine was his favorite?”

The neighbors sat on the patio, looking out at a 180-degree view of the dark bay, and they could see the silhouettes of the mountains forming the shadow of a woman lying on her side. The village was getting ready for its winter beauty sleep. The only sound was the wavelets bouncing from the cliff back to the sea, and some fish or dolphins jumping out of the water and back again. The moon was almost full, the light was silvery, and the night sky was clear.

The red Limniona wine was poured into fancy-looking glasses that Vangelis had brought from his house, probably an inheritance from his grandmother; they even had that dusty look of old inherited glasses kept for many years in a dark corner of a rusty shed.

Sure enough, as the sharp, crisp aroma of the wine drifted out into the cool night air, the amber light in the distant tower abruptly vanished.

A moment later, a figure approached from the backyard, tall and confident in its stride. The greatest surprise was its robe—deep red with beautiful brocade on the sleeves, matching the hood covering its head. 'Red Riding Hood' was the first thing Zoe thought of. It was a funny, almost creepy comparison—he was easily six feet tall and dead serious under that massive crimson hood.

Yet as the figure stepped closer into the silvery moonlight, any thought of children's stories vanished; the sheer historical luxury of the outfit became undeniable. He looked like an aristocratic merchant who had stepped straight out of a Renaissance painting, completely out of place next to Zoe's modern patio furniture. The red robe was heavy, made of a rich, velvety fabric that seemed to absorb the shadows, and the intricate gold-and-silver brocade threading along the cuffs was still remarkably bright.

But it was the hat that truly drew the eye. Just as Vangelis had described, it was a massive, padded chaperon hat, draped in heavy folds of matching red cloth that sat absurdly high on his head. It looked precisely like a meticulously crimped, oversized pie crust, complete with a long fabric tail that hung over his shoulder like a glamorous velvet scarf. Despite the elegant gravity of his posture, the hat gave him the distinct air of a very serious man who had accidentally put on a bakery item before leaving the house.

“I told you, here comes Dante.” Vangelis looked as serene as ever.

"Eiríni sto spíti toúto" (Peace be to this house), called the figure as it approached the table that the neighbors had prepared with wine, bread, olive oil, and mezes.

"Kalos orises, geitona!" (Welcome, neighbor!), they both greeted back in unison, prepared with the answer.

He didn’t introduce himself; it looked as if both neighbors should have already known him. The greeting was informal, so no names were given.

'Unbelievable,' thought Zoe, her ghost-friendly heart beating with quiet fascination rather than fear. 'So he stays. Dante stays'

“Who uprooted the vines?” asked Dante, looking around, walking here and there, seeing only olive trees. Driving the fabric tail of his pie-crust hat over his shoulder with a sharp flick of his head, he adjusted his heavy sleeves.

Drinking the glass of wine offered to him in one gulp, he seemed less anxious, returning to his merchant self:

"Listen to me, friends. This nectar. This Pteleotic wine is magnificent. It is better than the wine we sent to the King of Cyprus last spring. I have three galleys sitting down at Pigadi—or they will be there when the tide turns. Tell me, who owns these barrels? What is the price per barrel in Venetian ducats? Let us strike a deal, and we will make this coast richer than Constantinople itself!"

This was not funny anymore. Looking at Vangelis, Zoe stomped on his bare foot. “Vanie, tell Dante we don't make our own wine, we buy it at Lidl.”

Vangelis looked amused again.

“Dante doesn’t hear us; he just keeps on saying the same things every time we meet.”

Zoe watched Dante's swift movements, his red robe catching the breeze from the Aegean. He was walking purposefully towards the edge of the patio, where her two private grapevines were trained along the terrace railings. It had taken her a lot of care to make them spread so beautifully, but they were just table grapes for eating, not a grand vineyard. The summer was over, a few small late clusters of grapes were left on the branches, and birds or worms had eaten some. The leaves were mostly green, but the end of summer was starting to show.

“Honestly, he is looking for grapes!” Zoe whispered, realizing he was drawn to the only vines left on the hillside.

Vangelis looked up from carefully balancing an olive pit on the edge of his wine glass, completely unimpressed. Dante's haunting panic didn't faze him at all.

Zoe approached the robed figure of Dante. standing closely by his side.

Dante’s aristocratic composure completely slipped, his voice tightening with a sudden, raw panic."

“Did the well go dry? Is this the rot, the fire?” Covering his face with his hands, his voice broke.

“Where is the harvest? Where are the barrels we were supposed to load onto the galleys at Pigadi?

Are we ruined?”

Posted Jun 19, 2026
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23:33 Jun 29, 2026

Hi! I really enjoyed your story great pacing and atmosphere. It naturally feels very visual. I’m a professional commission artist, and if you’d ever like to see it as a comic, I’d be happy to talk ideas. Feel free to message me on Discord (laurendoesitall) Instagram (elsaa.uwu).
Warm regards,
lauren

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