Two Views, One House

American Coming of Age Teens & Young Adult

Written in response to: "Write about two characters who each want to change the same thing, but resolve to go about it in very different ways. " as part of New Year, New You.

Author’s Note: I wrote this story with the fantastic help of my Reedsy friend, Maya Emerson. She will be submitting the same story, in her own style and in Cynthia’s point of view. Please go read it, follow her, up-vote her, and like her stories. She deserves it. Also, there will be three headlines in one part of this story, and I found those on the CNN website. I didn’t make them up. Plus, this is my first story of 2021! Yay! Enjoy! :D


“Wooh! Happy new year to us!” Cynthia hollered. I laughed and clinked our beer glasses together before taking a sip. We continued to sit on the couch and watch the excited-for-2021 people on TV. I broke the calm.

“You know what, we don’t have a New Year’s resolution. We should do one together,” I suggested. Cynthia nodded and her face contorted into the “I’m thinking; do not disturb” look. So, I stayed quiet until Cyn snapped her fingers.

“Got it. Let’s try to be less judgemental of other people. Especially since the people here are so… different. We’ll take different approaches, and compare results. I’ll go out tomorrow and start meeting people. What about you?” She stared at me expectantly.

“I guess I’ll research the people in this town and everywhere else on my computer. See what I’ll find out,” I decided. Cynthia nodded and yawned.

“I’m tired. See you in the morning. Well, later this morning,” she laughed. I gave her a small grin as she walked down the hall and into her bedroom.


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The next day, Cyn went out to meet people while I sat in the recliner and opened my laptop.

Google… There we go. Now. What should I search first? Probably Northsin, Oklahoma. See what comes up, I thought. And I did just that. Lots of things came up, like the bake sale happening the upcoming Friday, the sale at the flower shop down the road, all of the usual small-town stuff. Nothing interesting. That meant that maybe they weren’t so bad… Maybe. But what if I searched something that applied to the entire U.S….?

So, I searched “recent new in us”. (Yes, I know. I have bad grammar. It was just a Google search, though, so get off my back, man!)

“Proud Boys leader arrested for allegedly burning Black Lives Matter banner at DC Church”.

“A sword taken from a Revolutionary War statue as a prank 40 years ago is finally returned”.

“Los Angeles County ambulance crews are told not to transport patients with little chance of survival.”

Those were the first three headlines that I saw. These people are awful! How could people do that? It disgusted me; I slammed my laptop shut.


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A week later, Cynthia is standing in the kitchen and I’m sitting at the dining table. Fire burns in both of our eyes, our jaws set.

“You’re so stupid! Why would you choose to research?! The Internet is only going to tell you the bad stuff about our country! You have to talk to people. You have to meet them, idiot,” Cynthia fumed. I shook my head and resisted the urge to jump up from my chair and scream.

“If anyone is an idiot, it’s you. Going out there and meeting all of those weird, crazy people. They’re probably already filling your head with all of their wrong ways! You’re going to be just as bad as them soon enough!” I shouted back. Tears rolled down her face; normally I would stop and comfort her, but not this time.

“Oh, shut up! Looking at that screen all day has made you go whack. You’re not thinking correctly. Go into town with me, just once. Meet people. Please, Aislado. They’re nice and normal in their way.”

“That’s what they want you to think.” And I stormed out of the room.


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One day later, Cynthia and I are continuing our “experiments”. She always came back home cheerful, especially on Sundays after she went to church with those brainwashers. And Cyn stayed in that good mood as long as she didn’t talk to me.

I became grumpier by the minute. Everything I read about the people of the U.S. was atrocious. The world I was living in was horrible. I got barely any sleep anymore--I stayed up, messaging every organization about the things they were doing wrong. I messaged news networks, magazines, and everywhere else. I told them what was wrong with the world, and how they were making it worse.

This happened day after day. Every morning when we woke up, every night when we went to bed. My days got drabber, Cyn’s were getting brighter.

Until that one day.

Cynthia and I were sitting at the peninsula in our kitchen, crunching on Frosted Flakes. Our Amazon Alexa played country music from the other side of the room. The refrigerator made its usual hum.

“What’s happened?” I murmured. Cynthia peered at me from the corner of her eye.

“If you’re gonna talk when I’m sitting right here, at least talk so I can hear you,” Cyn growled.

What’s happened? What has happened between the two of us? We used to be so close, Cynthia. There was nothing that could separate us before...” I trailed off, unsure of how to continue. Cynthia was silent for a moment, then began her sure-to-be snarky reply.

“That was then, this is now. Now we have two completely different ideas of this world and the only reason we go anywhere near each other is that our parents won’t let us live in different houses. Now, can we go back to not talking? I’m begging you, please let us stop talking,” she snapped. I shook my head and pushed my bowl of cereal away from me.

“No! Even though I see the world differently than you do doesn’t mean that the two of us should hate each other for the rest of our lives! For Pete’s sake, Cyn, you’re still my sister! Twin! Sibling! Whatever! We’re still… together. So, we should set aside our differences and be civilized adults,” I declared. Cynthia looked at me. And she looked. And she looked.

Something clicked.

“Well, if we’re going to be ‘civilized adults’, you better start paying more attention to your grades.”

Posted Jan 06, 2021
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An amazing story Brooke!! :)

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January 09, 2021 13:36

Thanks so much, Laila! (I love your name!)

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Aww, thank you! I too love your name!

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January 09, 2021 15:30

My pleasure! Aw, thanks!

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Your welcome Brooke!

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I really like this story. The world is REALLY terrible these days.

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January 06, 2021 23:20

Thanks! I know. It's awful. If you read Maya's part when she comes out with it, you'll be able to read about the good parts. :D

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Hey Brooke! I just wanted to thank you so much for liking all my stories!! Means the world to me! :)
I wish I could do the same...but I already have, since the first day I joined here. I already knew that you were an amazing person. =)

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January 10, 2021 21:43

Hi, Laila! (I love that pen name!) You are welcome! You deserve it! :) OMG Seriously? That makes me so emotional and happy to hear! Thank you so much! :D

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Wow, thank you so much! I actually chose that name for fun, but glad you like it!
Yes, I am not kidding! Honestly, the first day I joined, I liked your story first. Seriously, I read your story first on here...so, yeah. 🙃

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January 10, 2021 21:48

No problem! Lol
WAIT WHAT I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS I AM SO STINKING HAPPY THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU btw, I have always loved reading your stories as well, and just talking to you. You're really nice. Like, EXTREMELY nice.

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Haha, it's really true! I am so glad that I made you HAPPY!!!! :)
Aww, really? Thank you so much! You are too!!!!!

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January 10, 2021 21:56

*squeals really loud*
Yes, really! It's my pleasure--you deserve it! Aw, not really, but thanks!

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Kristin Neubauer
January 08, 2021 13:54

I love this, Brooke! And I love the collaboration with Maya. It really gives us such a 360 view as to what is unfolding here and such clear and strong writing. Congrats to both of you!

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January 08, 2021 21:55

Thank you so much, Kristin! It means a lot to me. :)

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I love the story Brooke! And 🍕

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January 07, 2021 23:55

Thanks! Yay thank you again

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🍕🍕🍕🍕
(Lol...)

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January 10, 2021 21:48

Yay!
Lol

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Liling Wei
January 09, 2021 18:35

Wow, great story, Brooke! I love how you incorporated real world news and whatnot into the story!

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January 09, 2021 23:00

Thanks so much!

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January 07, 2021 14:33

NEW STORYYYYY

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January 07, 2021 23:56

I'LL READ IT ASAHP

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January 08, 2021 00:00

YASH

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Thom With An H
January 12, 2021 02:58

I love the concept here and the execution sealed the deal. It’s a perfect way to look at how media influences people. You two were geniuses to take this prompt and make it your own. I am looking forward to reading the other perspective. I’m curious it if it will be like I think.

If you have a moment I’d also love to hear your opinion on my new story “The One”. Be brutally honest. I can take it.

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January 12, 2021 20:20

Thank you so much, Thom! From a stunning author like you, this means so insanely much to me.

Of course. I don't think there's any reason for me to be "brutally honest". I'm sure it will be magnificent.

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Hi Brooke! I read Maya's part so I wanted to read yours! WoW, great work on this, It was a very interesting story to read:)

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January 09, 2021 13:28

Hi, Varsha! Thank you!

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Megan Sutherland
January 07, 2021 21:01

Heyyy, Brooke!
🍕(I read your bio hehe)
We haven't talked in forever. I am so sad that you think Among Us is overrated, but to each his or her own. :):
Great story, I don't have much critique because this was awesome. Keep it up, bestie :D
-Meg

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January 07, 2021 23:53

Hiii, Meg!
Lol yay thanks
I know... :):
Aw, thanks! I will! You should, too :D
-Crazy Girl

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Megan Sutherland
January 08, 2021 02:46

I miss u!!! How's it been recently? Taken any trips? ;)
I have a new story, if you'd have five minutes to check it out.... :D

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January 08, 2021 21:55

I miss u 2! We haven't talked in so long... It's been good! Nope, I've been staying close to home and happy with it
I always have time! Just not right now... lol I'll read it soon

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Megan Sutherland
January 08, 2021 22:06

Thank you!!
I was just making a point at the... um. location fact thingy. hehe.
if that makes any sense :/

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January 09, 2021 00:40

No problem!
Yeah, I know what you mean... XD

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Fav color? Choose oooone

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January 07, 2021 12:25

Hm... Light/baby blue
What's yours? :)

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Purple!
Great! Now I can start my new series! Including youuuuiu

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January 07, 2021 23:55

Oh, I like purple a lot, too. But light/baby blue is my all-time favorite.
OMG Yay! Thank you! (People have been insanely nice to me lately and I cannot get over it and now I feel like I need to be a way better person and up-vote every single one of you...)

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:D
No prob! I have been downvoted lately and need to make ppl feel better to make myself feel better!

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January 08, 2021 21:56

I GONNA UPVOTE YOU ASAHP

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Megan Sutherland
January 15, 2021 02:26

Bio check plz

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January 15, 2021 02:43

1.) It's awesome, as always. Thanks for putting me as one of your friends, bestie.
2.) Does this mean you're staying?!

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Megan Sutherland
January 15, 2021 13:02

shhhhhhhhh

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January 15, 2021 14:02

*happy dance that goes on forever*
Squeeeeeeeeeee! I won't tell, though. :)

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Megan Sutherland
January 15, 2021 14:05

Well i was a little afraid that if I didn't agree you'd show up at my house and attack me hehe

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January 15, 2021 14:08

I wouldn't put it past me... XD
I'm kidding! :D

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January 13, 2021 23:02

🍕

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January 15, 2021 01:37

Yay! Thanks, Lit! (hehe)

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January 15, 2021 01:39

XD

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Megan Sutherland
January 12, 2021 16:53

WOOP WOOP WOOP NEW STORY ALERT

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January 12, 2021 20:17

BEEP BEEP BEEP YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Megan Sutherland
January 12, 2021 21:19

hehehhheheheheeheheheheh

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January 12, 2021 23:38

heheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheheh

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✨Abby ✨
January 11, 2021 03:43

🍕

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January 11, 2021 21:17

Yay! Thanks, Abby!
I like your name, and the pizza to go with it.

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✨Abby ✨
January 11, 2021 21:28

thank you!

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January 11, 2021 22:38

You're welcome!

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Can I based my part on yours?

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January 10, 2021 21:44

What do you mean?

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Like you write it first, then i follow.

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January 11, 2021 21:17

Sure, if I finish it first. I'm almost finished with my rough draft now.

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Megan Sutherland
January 09, 2021 04:09

Hey, Brooke!!
Maya Emerson and Luke (Litlover) did one of those stories where you have your Reedsy friends as characters, and I am going to do one too. Where I'm going with this is: would you mind being in it?
If yes, could you answer these questions about your character?
Favorite Color:
Power:
Hair and Eye Color:
Pet/Spirit Animal:
Weakness:
Thank you, bestie!! and if no, that's completely fine toooooooo
-Meg

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January 09, 2021 13:28

Hi, Meg!
I saw those! I want to do one, too, at some point. I would LOVE to be in your story! It already means the world to me that you just ASKED.
Favorite color: Baby blue
Power: Water (I'm able to control any type of water)
Hair and eye color: brown hair with blue tips and gray eyes
Pet/spirit animal: My pet is a dog and my spirit animal is an otter.
Weakness: Books, the chance to write, and chocolate
My pleasure, but thank YOU! I'm so excited *happy dance*
-Crazy Girl

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Megan Sutherland
January 09, 2021 14:21

Yes ofccccccc

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Brooke, can you tell me your character’s:
Hair:
Eyes;
Clothes they wear all the time:
Personality:
Fav color:

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January 08, 2021 21:54

Sure!
Hair: Brown with green tips
Eyes: Gray
Clothes they wear all the time: A sweater paired with jeans and boots
Personality: caring, a bit of a know-it-all (she is actually smart, though), and has a sweet soul
Fav color: Baby blue

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YES! Thanksssssssssssss

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January 09, 2021 00:36

My pleasure!

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Megan Sutherland
January 16, 2021 16:44

BROOKE I RELEASED MY REEDSY FRIEND STORYYYYYYY

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January 16, 2021 17:04

YAYYYYYY I'LL READ IT ASAHP :DDDDDDDD I SO HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYy SQUEEEEEEEEEEEee

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B. W.
January 15, 2021 18:09

Hey

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January 15, 2021 20:25

Hello there!
How are you? (give me an answer other than 'fine', please)

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B. W.
January 15, 2021 20:58

I'm good I guess, and that's at least not a "fine" so yeah :/ I'm still just really bored and tired, how about you? I still haven't had time to relax

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January 15, 2021 21:05

Yes! No "fine"! Wahoo! Oh, I'm sorry. If you're bored AND tired, go watch your favorite show, then fall asleep watching it. I'm good, thanks for asking! I submitted my collab with Celeste today, so I'm happy about that. I'm sorry. You don't deserve that.

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B. W.
January 15, 2021 23:17

Isn't being fine still a good thing though? I'm still at least not saying "I feel terrible" or something. That's good, ill check it out soon. I'm working on a new part to my demi-god spin off ^^

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January 15, 2021 23:26

I mean, yeah, but you could be "good", or "great", or "awesome". Yes, that's the good part.
Alright, thanks! Yay! ^^

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January 15, 2021 21:06

Yes! No "fine"! Wahoo! Oh, I'm sorry. If you're bored AND tired, go watch your favorite show, then fall asleep watching it. I'm good, thanks for asking! I submitted my collab with Celeste today, so I'm happy about that. I'm sorry. You don't deserve that.

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Akshaya Sutrave
January 15, 2021 15:36

Hi Brooke!
I love this story, it was a fantastic first story for 2021! The concept was very well written, and it kept me reading till the very last line! I'll def check out Maya's story now! Great work, keep writing!
And, 🍕! :D

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January 15, 2021 15:52

Hi, Akshaya!
Thank you! That's great because Maya is a wonderful author. I will!
Yay! Thank you! :D

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Akshaya Sutrave
January 15, 2021 15:56

Of course!! :)

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Akshaya Sutrave
January 15, 2021 16:12

I saw your bio, and I wish they remove the whole karma points feature, too!

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Hey when the story ? I am waiting and REeEeE it’s sooooo close to the deadline AAHaahhHah

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January 15, 2021 01:36

I know; I'm so sorry! I have been really busy this week, and I haven't gotten time to work on it much. I will work on it tomorrow, finish it, and submit it! :p

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maybe i wont have time but i will sumbit it! NO MATTER THE PROMPT I WILL GET IT OUT

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January 15, 2021 01:40

Me, too!

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MeGaN IS LEAVING THIS IS NOT A JOKE

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MeGaN IS LEAVING THIS IS NOT A JOKE

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January 15, 2021 01:41

WHAT???????? NO THAT IS NOT HAPPENING I AM GOING TO GO TALK SOME SENSE INTO HER

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January 15, 2021 01:44

NO. I JUST POSTED A COMMENT. SHE BETTER RESPOND SOON, AND WITH THE RIGHT ANSWER.

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Maya -
January 14, 2021 00:13

I think I might've found a downvoter: https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/stop-upvoting/

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January 15, 2021 01:36

Okay; thanks. I'll check it out.

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January 15, 2021 01:37

I tried to use the link and all it did was send me to the Reedsy home page...?

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Maya -
January 15, 2021 01:50

That's cause the person changed their name and deleted all the comments. Sorry.
So, how have you been? Btw did you hear Megan is leaving? It's so sad!!!!!

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January 15, 2021 01:51

Oh. It's okay.
I heard. I'm yelling at her right now for doing that. So, because of that, I am really, really, really, really, really sad. And mad. And frustrated and everything else other than happy or its synonyms.

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Maya -
January 15, 2021 01:53

Same. I wish all the politics and haters and everything didn't exist on this site so it could just be about writing and receiving feedback and talking to other people. I wrote a message as a story if you want to read it. Some stuff about the upvoting and mallows has changed.

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January 15, 2021 01:55

I agree with you. Alright; I'll read it.

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Maya -
January 15, 2021 01:54

You don't have to answer this, but do you know Megan in real life or just online?

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January 15, 2021 01:55

Just online. Like you and me.

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