Caur'ten Coin

Adventure Fantasy Fiction

Written in response to: "Write a story from the POV of a sidekick, or someone who is happy to stay away from the spotlight." as part of Two's a Crowd with Kirsiah Depp.

The fog in Eight Bells didn’t just cloak Caurithène; it swallowed it whole. It rolled off the bay thick as wool, smothering the clang of the shift-bells and leaving the air tasting of brine, dead fish, and wet soot. I kept my lockpicks moving anyway. In Caur’ten, you learn to work blind, or you don’t eat.

“Hurry it up, Nym,” Fennick hissed from the doorway. He shifted his weight from boot to boot, wringing the wet out of his cap. “Watch patrol is due. If they see us…”

“They won’t,” I muttered, pressing my ear to the lock. “Watch don’t walk past the fish-gutters when the fog is this thick. Just keep your eyes on the alley. Soon as we pop this, we’re eating Old Tassi’s hookcrackles in Blush’s Berth. Spiced mash, hot oil, and a pint of something that won’t strip the enamel off our teeth. Ah!” The lock gave a grinding click.

The box sat on Guild Clerk Valen’s desk. It was plain wood, scarred and salt-stained, but the seams hummed against my fingertips. A faint vibration, like a trapped wasp. Weftbinding. Some low-tier scribe had forged a knot into the lock, twisting the world just enough to make the iron stubborn. I hated magic. I hated the people who used it, and I hated Valen most of all. The man was a bloated tick on the harbor’s neck, skimming tariffs from honest smugglers and clipping coins from dockhands. But Maela wanted the box, unopened, and Maela paid in hard silver and hot stew.

“Got it,” I breathed, wrapping the box in my oilcloth cloak and hoisting it against my hip. “Let’s move, Fen. I can already taste the ale at Nine Turnings.”

I turned to leave just as Fennick stepped backward into the alley, pulling the heavy oak door with him.

“Fen?” I stepped forward, confusion slowing my tongue. “What are you… oh.”

His eyes wouldn’t meet mine. He was shaking, his knuckles white around a bruised iron token he held in his free hand. A Ramshackle debt-marker.

“They had my sister, Nym,” he choked out, his voice cracking over the muffled groan of the harbor. “Valen said he’d clear it. I just had to —”

The air in the counting house felt too thick to breathe. Every muscle in my back locked rigid, waiting for the blade. A debt in Ramshackle. The Weft-locked box. He didn’t have to finish the sentence. He had sold Maela out.

“Fen, you idiot, you burn Tradetown and we’ve got nowhere left to hide!” I lunged for the door.

He slammed it shut. The iron bar dropped into place with a sound like a coffin sealing.

As the door at the far end of the counting-room started swinging open, I spun around, looking for another way out. A window, a loose floorboard, anything.

Guild Clerk Valen stepped in, flanked by two brutes carrying brass-ringed cudgels. Valen was a man who looked like he’d been poured into his velvet doublet and forgotten there. He smelled of expensive pipe smoke. He didn’t even look at me. He fixed his eyes on the box in my hands.

I knew exactly what he was calculating. A Weft-sealed secret traded to the Chanters wasn’t just a few coins. It was a villa in Highward, a permanent ticket out of the stink of this rotting harbor.

Valen brushed a speck of damp soot from his sleeve and flicked his fingers toward the guards. “Take it from him. Hang the rat from the winches at Guild Pier, then bring the box to my carriage.”

I wasn’t there to save the world. I didn’t give three shits about whatever grand, sweeping nonsense the priests argued about in Highward. At this point, I just wanted to survive the night. Be nice if I could make a little coin, too, but that ship had sailed off to pay Fen’s token. I smiled, the flat, dead smile of the docks.

“You’re right about one thing, Valen,” I said, shifting my grip on the box. “I am a rat.”

I threw that box straight at his smug face.

It was solid ironwood. Valen shrieked and ducked, colliding with his guards in a tangle of velvet and steel. I didn’t wait to see where it landed, but the wet crunch of wood on bone echoed off the stone. You take your victories where you find them. I snatched a brass ledger-weight from the desk, hurled it through the thick sea-glass of the narrow window, and threw myself into the blinding gray of Eight Bells. The air outside was dead and cold, freezing the sweat on my neck, but I didn’t stop to question the weather.

I hit the slick cobblestones of the pier, rolled to absorb the impact, and came up sprinting. Shouts echoed behind me, instantly muffled by the dense fog. A thud told me the guards had broken down the door.

“Get him! Break his legs!” Valen’s screeching voice faded as I ran.

I didn’t have the box, but I had my life. Right now, that was the only coin I cared about. I scrambled through the narrow, twisting alleys behind the warehouses, pushing west.

A mile is a long way to run when you can’t see your own boots. The fog turned every corner into a guessing game, and the waterfront was playing to win. I nearly cracked my skull on a suspended cargo hook hanging invisible in the mist, ducking just in time to hear the massive iron slice the air over my ear. I vaulted a stack of salt-stained crates and slid into a narrow gap just as a pair of watchmen lumbered past the alley mouth. The fog pooled around my boots, swallowing the sound of my ragged breathing. Their curses were loud, but they were searching blind. My lungs felt packed with hot sand, but pain meant I was breathing, and breathing meant Valen’s noose was still empty. I’d call that a profitable night. Or at least a break-even one.

I kept pushing. Soon the neat, paved stones of Eight Bells gave way to the rotting planks and slick mud of Twilight Anchor. The smell shifted too — from damp spices and wet wood to stale bilge, hot tar, and desperation. The alleys tightened like a snare. I lost my footing on a patch of discarded fish guts, slamming my shoulder hard into a sagging wall, but I kept my legs moving. The shouts behind me were distant now, but in this soup, sound played tricks. They could be three streets back or right on my heels. I needed altitude.

I burst out of a narrow passage right at the base of the western cliffs. The Lantern Steps zig-zagged up the sheer rock face, a damp spine of stone lit by sputtering, oil-soaked lamps that barely pierced the gloom. If I could get to the top, I could lose them in the sprawl of the Lean.

Just as I hit the third step, a meaty hand closed around the collar of my cloak, jerking me backward so hard my teeth rattled.

I hit the stone flat on my back. The impact knocked all the air out of my lungs, which at least saved me the trouble of screaming. I kicked out hard, my boot connecting with a guard’s knee in a satisfying crunch. He cursed, swinging his brass-ringed cudgel blindly in the fog. I scrambled toward the narrow gap between two rotting fish barrels, clawing for the rusted boot-knife I kept strapped to my ankle.

Before my fingers found the hilt, cold filled the fog.

It wasn’t the normal chill off the bay. This was a deep, bone-aching cold. The distant clatter of the docks didn’t fade — it just died, snuffed out like a pinched lantern. The fog thickened, pressing against my eardrums until the roar of the harbor sounded like it was buried under a foot of wet wool. A suffocating pressure pushed the breath right out of my lungs.

I opened my eyes.

A woman stood in the alley, though I hadn’t seen or heard her approach. Her skin was the color of a tarnished silver coin, pale and gray. She dressed in layered veils of bruise-colored silk. But her hair… copper flooded my mouth as my teeth bit deep into my tongue. It wasn’t hair at all. It was mist, writhing and twisting around her face, melting right into the thick fog rolling off the bay.

Scáthabha.

The guard with the cudgel froze, his weapon half-raised. He tried to swear, but the sound barely scratched through the dense air. The woman didn’t draw a blade. She didn’t weave a glowing glyph. She didn’t do anything at all. She just stood there and looked at him with eyes that caught no light.

I have seen men gutted on the docks who didn’t look half as scared as that guard. Whatever he saw in that gray face broke him completely. His knees just gave out. The cudgel slipped from his fingers, hitting the mud with a muffled thud. His chest heaved in panicked, shallow gasps. His partner didn’t even check to see if he was breathing. He let out a strangled sob and bolted back toward the docks, vanishing into the gray before his boots even splashed the puddles.

I sat in the mud, staring at the woman. The lockpicks in my inner pocket pressed against my ribs like dead iron, and every survival instinct I possessed rusted shut.

“Don’t hurt me,” I babbled, scrambling to my feet, pressing my back against the wet stone of the cliff. “I ain’t got no coin. I ain’t got nothing. I’m just a nobody.”

She turned her dark eyes on me. She didn’t speak. She just pointed up the Lantern Steps.

I looked back over my shoulder. The second guard would be screaming for the watch by now. Valen would have half the pier locked down in minutes. I had two choices: wait here for a rope at Guild Pier, or follow a walking nightmare up a wet cliff.

“Right,” I swallowed hard, my chest tight. “Up. Good idea. Lots of guards down here. We should go up.”

I started climbing. She followed. She didn’t make a sound. No boots scraping the wet stone, no rustling cloth, no breathing at all. I kept glancing over my shoulder. Half of me prayed the fog had just swallowed her back up. The other half was terrified that if I took my eyes off her, she wouldn’t be behind me anymore. She’d be waiting on the next step.

I clamped my jaw shut, biting back the urge to babble. The silence on those stairs was worse than the shouts of the watch. It pressed against my eardrums, broken only by my own ragged, desperate gasps. The wet slate grew steeper, and the fog grew thicker. I kept my eyes locked on the stone in front of me, terrified that if I spoke, the thing behind me would finally close the distance. My mind spun, grabbing at frantic thoughts to keep the panic down. The burn in my thighs. The mud on my palms. The absolute certainty that whatever was gliding up the stairs behind me was keeping the watchmen away. The priests in Highward claimed her kind drank souls, dragging them out into the mist. I didn’t know if I had one worth taking, but I didn’t dare look back to find out. Still, a personal escort from FenRiven? Lucky me, I was moving up in the world.

She paused on a landing, the flickering yellow light of a nearby lantern catching the silver in her skin. She tilted her head, and for a second, her eyes softened.

“Maela,” she whispered.

Her voice sounded like wind scraping through an empty cargo hold, hollowed out and carrying an echo that had no business being in an open alley. Then it hit me. The sudden cold outside the counting house. The fog swallowing my racket in Twilight Anchor. I wasn’t just lucky. I was being managed.

I nearly slipped off the edge of the step, my hands scrambling for purchase on the slick rock. “You know Maela? Maela Surran?”

She nodded once, slowly.

I stared at her, the copper taste of my own blood turning to ash in my mouth. I thought I knew who I was working for. I thought I knew the angles. But if Maela was calling in favors from the threshold-born, I was in so far over my head I couldn’t even see the surface.

“Right,” I exhaled, turning back to the climb, my legs feeling like lead. “Just stick close, then.”

We hit the top of the plateau, my legs burning from the climb. The fog thinned a little up here, but it still choked the narrow streets of the Lean, settling low over the sagging roofs and broken cobbles. I knew this maze of rot and debt by heart. Somewhere in Ramshackle, the boys who held Fennick’s strings huddled around the Ashbraziers, warming their hands and waiting for their silver. I kept us to the shadows of Gloaming instead, skirting the main lanes and avoiding the watch patrols that clustered near the braziers for warmth.

I didn’t look back to see if she was following. The sudden, icy drops in the air whenever the wind shifted told me she was close enough.

My boots were waterlogged and caked with mud, but I pushed the pace. Every shadowed doorway looked like a guard with a cudgel, every rattle of a loose shutter sounded like a drawn blade. The rush was fading, leaving nothing but cold and an ache in my jaw from clenching my teeth. At least it was still in one piece. I just needed walls. I needed a door that locked.

The Nine Turnings Inn sat at the edge of Tradetown like a fortress against the damp. Warm, yellow light spilled from the windows, and the smell of roasted meat, yeasty bread, and wood-smoke hit me like a physical blow. I pushed open the heavy oak doors, the noise of the common room washing over me. It was packed with travelers, merchants, and locals waiting out the fog.

Maela was behind the bar, wiping down the wood with a rag. She looked up, her sharp eyes taking in my mud-stained clothes, my empty hands, and the silent, terrifying figure gliding in behind me.

“Cobbles,” she said, her even voice cutting right through the noise of the taproom. “You look like you’ve been dragged behind a barge. Where’s Fennick?”

“Fennick sold us out,” I said, leaning against the bar, my legs shaking as the terror finally let go of them. “To Valen. The Ramshackle debt collectors got to him. He locked me in the counting-house. I had to throw the box at Valen’s head just to get out the window.”

Maela’s jaw tightened. She didn’t sigh, didn’t panic. She just absorbed the blow, filing it away in that tired ledger in her head.

“And the box?” she asked.

“Still in Valen’s office,” I said bitterly. “Maybe it broke his nose. I hope it did. I’m sorry, Maela. I blew it.”

Maela froze. For a long second, the only sound was the clatter of the common room behind me. She looked past my shoulder, meeting the flat, dark eyes of the Scáthabha. Some unspoken calculation passed between them.

She reached under the counter and pulled out a small leather pouch. She dropped it on the bar in front of me. It clinked with the sound of hard silver.

“You didn’t blow it, Nym,” she said, her voice dropping to a murmur that wouldn’t carry past the wet wood. “You survived. In this city, that’s a victory. But if Valen gets that Weft-lock open, he’ll have the Chanters at our door before the shift-bell rings.”

She offered a slow, deliberate nod toward the kitchen. “Fennick made his choice. You made yours. Get a bowl of stew, sit by the fire, and keep your head down.”

I took the pouch, the weight of it a sudden, overwhelming comfort. “Thanks, Maela.” I hadn’t died, and I was still getting paid. It was turning out to be a banner night.

She turned her attention to the Scáthabha. The common room had grown a lot quieter since Caelithe had entered. The rough dockhands and loud merchants were giving the woman in the violet veils a very wide berth, their eyes following her every move.

“Caelithe,” Maela said, inclining her head respectfully. “You made it. The others are gathering in the back room.”

Caelithe didn’t speak, but she bowed deep to Maela, the writhing mist of her hair brushing the floorboards. She turned, her flat, dark eyes finding me one last time, and she offered a slow nod before gliding toward the back hallway.

I shivered, turning toward the kitchen.

I grabbed a bowl of thick, dark stew and a heel of hard bread, finding a quiet corner near the hearth. The heat of the fire started to bake the damp out of my bones. I watched the door to the back room click shut, sealing Maela, the Scáthabha, and whoever else was in there away from the noise of the inn.

Whatever they were plotting in there — fighting the priests, burning the ledgers, or fixing a world that was broken long before I was born — it wasn’t my problem.

I dipped my bread into the stew, letting the rich, salty heat chase the chill from my blood. Let them have their secret wars. Let them fight the Chanters and whatever nightmares lived out in the fog. I had a full belly, a warm fire, and hard silver in my pocket. I was just Nym “Cobbles” Orlain, a Caur’ten street-rat, and the shadows suited me just fine.

Posted Jun 04, 2026
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10 likes 7 comments

Elizabeth Hoban
05:57 Jun 08, 2026

What an intense read! Holy sh**burger! You had me on the edge... so descriptive without being heavy-handed. Great fit for the prompt - well done indeed.

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Mike Patterson
00:20 Jun 09, 2026

Thank you very much, Elizabeth! I'm happy you enjoyed it!

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Rabab Zaidi
00:52 Jun 07, 2026

Interesting. A lot of violence. Well written, all the same. Loved Nym's narration.

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Mike Patterson
12:25 Jun 07, 2026

Thank you, Rabab! I appreciate you reading, and taking the time to comment. Glad you liked Nym!

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Marjolein Greebe
15:02 Jun 06, 2026

This was wonderfully immersive.

The atmosphere is superb from the opening paragraph onward. The fog, the harbor, the grime, the slang—it all feels lived in rather than merely described.

I particularly enjoyed Nym's voice. He's funny, practical, self-interested, and completely believable as a survivor navigating a dangerous world.

The appearance of Caelithe shifts the story beautifully from gritty crime fantasy into something stranger and more mythic.

And perhaps my favorite aspect: Nym never suddenly becomes a hero. He remains stubbornly focused on survival, which makes him feel refreshingly human.

A strong opening that left me wanting to spend more time in this world.

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Mike Patterson
12:23 Jun 07, 2026

Hi Marjolein, thank you so much! I really appreciate you pointing out that Nym doesn't suddenly adopt a hero complex. That was a strict rule for me while writing this—surviving a place like Caurithène requires pragmatism, not nobility, and Nym is one of my favorite characters to write. I'm glad you liked this story.

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Marjolein Greebe
12:26 Jun 07, 2026

You're welcome. .
You did a good job.

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