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American Coming of Age Funny

Written in response to: "Write about an author famous for their fairy tale retellings." as part of Fairy Tale Truths.

I have been watching a lot of diss tracks lately, tik tok is so hype. SO taught to kinda give everybody a friendly diss, please don’t take it personally, it's just for fun and some change.


Hey, hey you downvoter

Running behinds others points, shows how shallow you are from the mind

You think taking karma makes me a loser

But you are wrong you pathetic chooser, instead of downvoting me

You should have chosen yourself, because your writing needs a band-aid, just like your mental health

Devaki you downvoted everybody because you were jealous

But instead of doing that you should have worked on your focus

Spent a lot of time downvoting us, wasted it instead of investing in us

Your actions don’t bother me, because I am the queen here

To other downvoters who are obsessed with me.

Better catch my writing before you get depressed about your doing

I am way better at these karma points, soon to get published my works which worth more than your dime

Thanks for investing time over me, better hit the like before you get dismissed

Aerin, Luke, and others, I have a message for you all

Don’t run behind points, that’s lower than your bar

Your writing is healthy just like quinoa, don’t flex your muscles on this loser na,

Hey Mania, my soul sister, keep showering us with your load

Your writing makes me cry and gives a preload

Lone wolf you are my bestie, I love when you get a little rusty

Your care has given me powers, watch ur steps downvoter before knocking you out in this rattle

Sia, babe we were bitches to each other, but now let's get hitched back together

You remind me of my teenhood, so better make it a best friend jab, so let's make it to first name dude

Maya my babe you are soul soother, I wanna hang out on your pad to take a little Breezer

I am not your bad girl, stay off my lane

If you try to mess me then I am gonna grab your fame

SO, bye everybody, not interested in you


Wanna hang out then Dm me fast here too.





Posted Apr 06, 2021
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April 06, 2021 15:28

Ha this makes me laugh so harddddddddddddddddddd I'm just imagining someone speaking this whole thing and I'm like NO ONE BUT RADHIKA COULD. BECAUSE SHE A KWEEN.

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Radhika Diksha
April 06, 2021 15:31

Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkssssssssssss a lot.
You are a Duke too. 👌👌
Loved your feedbakc.

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Radhika Diksha
April 06, 2021 15:31

Thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkssssssssssss a lot.
You are a Duke too. 👌👌
Loved your feedbakc.

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Sia S
April 06, 2021 16:49

*roasted and burnt*

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Radhika Diksha
April 06, 2021 17:04

Thanks, how are you? Is everything fine?

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Sia S
April 07, 2021 00:53

Sort if, dead by stress

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Writer Maniac
April 06, 2021 15:54

Oooohh. That was so fun to read! I loved it! Thank you for including me in it too, you've really got some guts putting this out for everyone to read. I really enjoyed it!

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Radhika Diksha
April 06, 2021 15:57

Thanks, Mania. I loved that you enjoyed it

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Writer Maniac
April 07, 2021 15:25

Hey, check my message on Hangouts

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April 06, 2021 15:35

:)

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Radhika Diksha
April 06, 2021 15:39

WOuld love your feedback.

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April 08, 2021 17:16

It's amazing :)
(I know this is very, very late...sorry about that)

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April 07, 2021 21:32

XD luv it lol

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Nainika Gupta
April 06, 2021 18:54

oml hah :)

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 02:28

THANKS.

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Keya M.
April 06, 2021 18:10

😆 wow...okay, funny for sure, but a little weird lol

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 02:28

wEIRD IS FUNNY TO ME, LOL.

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Keya M.
April 07, 2021 13:36

😅👍🏽

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Cookie Carla🍪
April 06, 2021 16:09

Periodt sis!!!!

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 02:32

THanks sis, my Amandala . Sorry, I don't know the actress's name properly.

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Maya -
April 06, 2021 20:35

Lolol oml this is hilarious. I love it. xD

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 02:33

thanks for the feedback.

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Sunny 🌼
April 06, 2021 20:07

this was hilarious

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 02:33

Thanks for the feedback.

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Sapphire 🌼
April 06, 2021 20:01

omggggg

RADHIKA THIS WAS FIREEEEE

I loved it omg SO GOOD

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 02:33

Thanks, for the feedbakc.

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Sapphire 🌼
April 07, 2021 18:24

No problem!

How are you doing? :))

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Radhika Diksha
April 08, 2021 09:36

I am fine. How are you too.

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Sapphire 🌼
April 08, 2021 17:22

I'm doing pretty good!

Working on anything recently? :D

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Kate Reynolds
April 06, 2021 19:11

I LOVE THIS XD
(... are you still leaving??)

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 02:28

NOPE, TODAY IS THE DAY I JOINED REEDSY, I DID NOT START WRITING BUT I JUST JOINED IT FOR FUN.

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Kate Reynolds
April 07, 2021 11:37

YAYY
Please stayyy
Just ignore all the other idiots in Reedsy

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 11:58

Yeah, It's just that I don't want the journey or writing to be stagnated due to some idiots.
Hope you are fine?
What do you think of this diss track apart from loving it?

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 11:58

Yeah, It's just that I don't want the journey or writing to be stagnated due to some idiots.
Hope you are fine?
What do you think of this diss track apart from loving it?

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Kate Reynolds
April 07, 2021 12:32

Yeah, same
I'm fine, I came here to write and I don't want to leave just because of the point drama
I honesty thought it was pretty creative, I would never think to write a diss track lol

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 16:06

THanks bestie. Part 3 and new story coming out soon.

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April 06, 2021 18:09

This is pretty good! You back?

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 02:29

yA, HOW ARE YOU. tHANKS FOR THE FEEDBACK.

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April 07, 2021 11:49

I'm good! Got downvoted for the first time but they can't break me.

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 11:58

Dont worry, i will upvote you some points. And just don't care about it.

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April 07, 2021 12:04

Aww, thanks!

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 12:07

100+ points. Done. Can you upvote me too? Just asking.

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Frances Reine
April 08, 2021 23:18

So bold. You're a rhyming machine, haha. I hate things that rhyme because I can't do it myself. Now I'm just jealous but I love this :)

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April 07, 2021 15:45

oOoOoOo! This is really really really good! I could see the feeling and emotion you put into it, and it was amazing! Great job! :D

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 16:07

Thanks. Your feedback means a lot.

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April 07, 2021 17:30

NP! Just let me know if you ever want me to leave feedback on your other stories! :D

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 17:39

Ok, sure you too are a good writer.

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Moon Fox
September 02, 2021 15:48

Rap style. I dig it. STOP DOWNVOTING MOVEMENT!

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June 10, 2021 11:24

Hehehe! Diss? No, more than that *winks*

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April 13, 2021 16:15

'your writing needs a band-aid, just like your mental health.'
truer words have never been spoken. nice job.

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Radhika Diksha
April 13, 2021 16:24

Thank you very much. Loved your feedback.

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AAAAHHH
ROASTED
THIS WAS PERFECT AAAHHH

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Radhika Diksha
April 11, 2021 17:25

Thanks

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April 08, 2021 06:10

ackk this is amazing dhhdhdhdvdgsgshd lol, which track in particular inspired you to do this? XD

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Radhika Diksha
April 08, 2021 06:26

Willy wonka and alyssa diss track.

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April 08, 2021 10:33

oohh yeah, i've seen it too, it was interesting :)

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Radhika Diksha
April 08, 2021 10:37

Yeah, I kinda watched it last week. I know I am late, but I liked it. Are you also on tik tok?

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April 08, 2021 11:23

ohh, not at all
ooh yeah, but i dont go on it as much anymore, are you? :)

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Radhika Diksha
April 08, 2021 11:32

No, i am not there. I saw it on youtube.

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Radhika Diksha
April 08, 2021 10:37

Yeah, I kinda watched it last week. I know I am late, but I liked it. Are you also on tik tok?

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April 07, 2021 11:04

WOOOWWWW!!!!!!!! THAT WAS A HUGEEEE ROASTTTTTTTT!!!!! Great job!

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Radhika Diksha
April 07, 2021 11:16

Thanks.

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