Two More Days

Adventure Contemporary Happy

Written in response to: "Write a story with a time, number, or year in the title." as part of In Discord.

Two More Days

“Most enjoyable lunch experience, ever! You and this local place have a knack for entertaining, Ian.”

“Thanks, Mark. Doing the limbo really conditions the core muscles you're gonna need to master snowboarding. Wait and see.”

“Take it easy on me, please. I still need to be able to photograph tonight's parade down the mountain into Vail or I'll sabotage my career at 'People Magazine'.”

“We better get a wiggle on if we're going to get any snowboarding practice in this afternoon, Guys.”

“My body can't think about wiggling until this lunch settles some, Meredith. The food's delicious here, Ian. Thanks for sharing it with us.”

“It's been my pleasure but she's right. We better head up the mountain.”

“I want to get some skiing in but that means I have to go it alone while you three are snowboarding.”

“How about I get Mark started then he and Meredith can work out some beginner flaws together while I hit the ski slopes with you for a while, Whitney? I don't have any classes to instruct this afternoon other than Mark.”

“Sounds like a good plan, thanks.”

“Oh, wow! Look! Is that who I think it is coming in the door? No! Don't all look at one time, we'll freak her out. Maybe this is the chance we've needed, Whitney. She is back in town. We can tell her about our find.”

“Yes, that's the real Lindsey Vonn. What are you two look-a-likes talking about?”

“We'll explain later, Ian. Do you know her? Could you introduce us?”

“I don't personally know her but she'll respect my Instructor logo on my jacket and possibly give us the time of day. She must get swamped by fans all the time. Especially long-haired blonds resembling her. She may be trying to avoid tourists by coming here.”

“We found something valuable in my second-hand yellow parka probably belonging to her. We gotta return it to her. Do you have one of your business cards with your number on it, Whitney? We could hand it to her on the way out explaining why it's important. She may even recognize my coat.”

“Could I ask her if I can take a picture of her for 'People's'? Maybe with the two of you returning her medal?”

“Worth a try but we don't have the medal with us now, Mark. We put it in the hotel safe until we could take it to the police so they could return it to her when she returned home.”

“Good call, Whitney. Let's at least congratulate her qualifying for another Olympic game and I could ask for a picture to celebrate. 'People' would definitely publish it.”

“We can't all simply rush her. Let me have the waiter send a drink her way and ask her if she minds us stopping over to talk a minute. Okay?”

“Sure, Ian, thanks for being the man of reason. The rest of us are star struck.”

“The worse she can do is say no, Mark. But the 'People' angle may help. And, of course, she'll want her medal back, Ladies.”

>>>

“That went well. Thanks, Ian. She is so gracious. We have a photo shoot all lined up before the parade when the sisters will return her Bronze medal from 2010 Vancouver Games to her. She's eternally grateful you two found it and not some money grabbing bargain hunter who would have sold it to highest bidder.”

“Now let's hit the slopes. Are all of you ready? We can take my SUV.”

“It's why we came to Vail. Let's blaze some trails. Say, Ian. Everyone usually rides shuttles or free buses around town. Why your own vehicle?”

“I drive in from a nearby town daily to work here, Whitney. Vail has restrictions on any new construction so there's a severe housing shortage. Employees live elsewhere.”

“Sounds like a national problem, too. Housing prices have sky-rocketed. It's made my services of redecorating older homes boom and once Meredith gets her degree this spring we plan on buying and flipping houses. She'll have the business and marketing know how and I have the decorating sense. We'll both get real estate licenses.”

“Impressive. All I do is play in the snow all winter.”

“What about the summer time?”

“I help out a friend with his construction business. I'm pretty good with my hands, Meredith. Hope I get a chance to prove it to you sometime soon.”

“You're making her turn red. But I have to admit I'm hoping to prove my prowess with a camera lens to willful Whitney. Maybe some winsome shots showing off your wondrous willowy body somewhere other than the slopes. Didn't you mention hoping to go to the hot springs in Glenwood?”

“Mark! I'm astonished. Is getting women to take off their clothing all men ever think about?”

“Now you mention it, I'd say you're right. Do you agree, Ian?”

“Don't get me in your tub of hot water there, Pal.”

“I'd say you jumped in yourself, Instructor Ian. Are we supposed to trust you guys from here on out?”

“What did we do? We're simply enjoying your company, having a good time! We've got a couple of days of great skiing still ahead of your departure. Don't spoil it. I usually never connect with tourists like I have with you three. Yeah, men tend to be men and you must confess you ladies like a little male attention. Am I right?”

“Okay. Indeed we do and you two are gentlemen. I think I speak for Meredith, also, when I say we're being cautious and don't intend on jumping into bed immediately with someone we only knew for a day. Hope you understand. Let's enjoy our time here knowing we'll go our separate ways when it's over. If something more develops afterwards, then it's meant to be.”

“Ah, oh! Guess I better cancel the romantic room I booked for the luxurious Austria Haus Hotel, Whitney.”

“Did you really do that for us, Mark?”

“I've high hopes on high slopes!”

“Well, forget everything I said. We still do have two more days.”

Posted Jan 09, 2026
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January 26, 2026 08:31

Hi Mary. Haven't been submitting here in a while, as went.back to college last August and its taking up all of my free time. I just heard about Trudy though and im devastated and in shock.... youre the only other person I really communicated with regularly here so just wanted to reach out and say I hope you are doing well. I will return here at some point , probably after exams in may. ...
In the meantime I enjoyed this little read, difficult to do a story with dialogue only but you nailed it, it read naturally (unlike my attempt where i had my characters constantly addressing everyone by their names in every sentence they spoke 😬). Take care!

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Mary Bendickson
January 26, 2026 13:57

Always nice when someone reaches out to see how you doing. Thanks for your concern. I am doing well. Normal aches and pains,etc. But blessed in many ways. Shocked about Trudy also. I considered her as a sister. My two sisters had episodes in the past several months but have pulled through fine so far.
I haven't submitted anything in the last 3 weeks or so. After being here for 3 years I see so many near repeats of prompts and so many first time winners I think it is time for me to focus elsewhere. I still haven't succeeded in getting my book out there. Maybe isn't what people are interested in. Husband says I should be proud it won me a medal and that's enough for a first ever attempt. He may be right. I have fallen so far behind in reading stories from everyone I may be burned out and need a new hobby.😅. Best of everything for your studies and where ever life leads.

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L. S. Sansoni
May 28, 2026 06:15

The fast-paced dialogue sets a fun, casual mood right away. Meeting a celebrity creates an exciting hook that keeps the reading fluid. Thanks for sharing your work!

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Suzanne Marsh
February 26, 2026 22:31

hope you are feeling better, saw the message you left. I really miss reading your stories

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Joseph Ellis
February 13, 2026 15:10

Quite the timely theme.

And your skill with telling a story through dialogue remains strong Mary.

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Mary Bendickson
February 13, 2026 17:59

Thank you. I kind of left the story hanging. I used Lindsey Vonn before she qualified for this Olympics then worked it in when I found out. Now that she got injured I should follow up maybe.
Haven't done any writing here for few weeks now because working on a project with my son.

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Suzanne Marsh
January 24, 2026 19:15

wow! That story is great, it kept my interest to the very end.

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Mary Bendickson
January 24, 2026 20:50

Thanks. Glad you liked it.🤗

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Philip Ebuluofor
January 22, 2026 11:56

Yeah. One of your best works i have read. It holds interest to the end.

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Mary Bendickson
January 23, 2026 07:22

Glad you liked it so well. Behind in my reading. Hope to get to yours soon.

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Philip Ebuluofor
January 28, 2026 19:14

I sure do.

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Eric Manske
January 21, 2026 16:40

Now this is a story that is only dialogue the entire time. I glanced over some of the other entries, and they didn't really stay true to that. Nice job juggling more than two characters without attribution in the scenes as well. Not easy to do.

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Mary Bendickson
January 23, 2026 07:08

Thank you and thanks for following.

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Miri Liadon
January 19, 2026 01:22

I've really enjoyed following the story of these characters. Best of wishes to Mark and Whitney. Have a lovely day.

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Mary Bendickson
January 19, 2026 02:56

Thank you. Not sure whether I will be continuing to write more about them.🤗

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Marjolein Greebe
January 17, 2026 05:44

This piece sparkles with momentum and voice. The dialogue carries the story effortlessly — playful, layered, and surprisingly efficient at revealing character dynamics without exposition. What really stands out is the tonal confidence: it knows exactly when to flirt with lightness and when to anchor itself in sincerity, making the final line land with charm rather than cliché.

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Mary Bendickson
January 19, 2026 02:59

Thank you for the deep comments.

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John Rutherford
January 14, 2026 17:22

Good luck to Mark

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Mary Bendickson
January 15, 2026 01:50

Thanks for liking

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January 13, 2026 10:36

Winter story for winter time :)

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Mary Bendickson
January 13, 2026 18:52

Thanks for liking and commenting.😊

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Nina H
January 12, 2026 13:39

Perfect story for the cold, snowy, January weather!

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Mary Bendickson
January 13, 2026 00:28

Glad you liked it.😊

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VJ Hamilton
January 11, 2026 20:18

A famous athlete appears in a low-key setting, creating thrills and opportunity to converse & flirt! Looks like you also tackled the "tell the story only in dialog" challenge, too!

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Mary Bendickson
January 12, 2026 00:33

Yep. Thanks for liking.😊

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Daniel R. Hayes
January 11, 2026 17:09

Hi Mary! I really enjoyed this one. I've never been snowboarding. It sounds fun though. You're very productive! Keep up the great work! 🏆

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Mary Bendickson
January 12, 2026 00:33

Thanks for the trophy.😊

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Maisie Sutton
January 10, 2026 15:50

Fun story...high hopes on high slopes! Good luck to Mark😉

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Mary Bendickson
January 10, 2026 19:02

Thanks.😊

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Alexis Araneta
January 10, 2026 14:51

A fun one, Mary!

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Mary Bendickson
January 10, 2026 19:02

Thanks. Glad you liked it.😊

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