The Secret Organisation {Part 1 }

Mystery Thriller

Written in response to: "Write a story about a meeting of a secret society." as part of In On a Little Secret.

Tring, Tring, Tring! “Who’s calling me at midnight at 2 pm “, said Mr. Bond.

Mr. Bond picks up the call says, “ Hello! “

“Hello! Agent no. 007.  Tomorrow there is a secret meeting. You have to come to the city hall at sharp 9 am. Other details would be messaged.”

The call cuts.

“ Hello! Which meeting for what is the meeting”, questioned himself. Is the phone of MI6. The company for I work. I think there’s another mission as it’s the secret service.

But I have told MI6 that I am on leave and in my last mission I got 6 bullets in my heart. But anyways I need to go.

Phone beeps.

“Here’s the message”, exclaim Mr. Bond. He reads the message aloud.

Agent no. 007. Tomorrow at 9 a.m you have to come to Cameroon City Hall. Then exactly at 9:05, a black car will stand near the gate. Don’t get into the car if the number is not CB 87 H 4567. Then we will take you to the place where the meeting would be conducted. You can carry your special watch as you think that you are not safe or we are going to harm you. It’s important for you to attend. So, please come to the meeting.

So, I need to go to the meeting.

It’s 8:45. I need to leave. 

Mr. Bond messages. I have reached Cameroon City Hall.

He goes and sees the car number which is near the gate. “Oh!”, this is the car.

“I am agent no. 007”, says Mr. Bond. “Come Mr. Bond”, says the driver. 

After an hour they reached their destination. It was an isolated land where no one was there. Even there was not a single tree, bird, and a drop of water.

“Where are we”, questioned Mr. Bond to the driver.

“There is a tunnel. Follow me”, answered the driver.

They walked for an hour and then they reached a small hole. The driver removed a circular key. He put the key inside the hole. Then many big holes came up. 

Mr. Bond says, “ In which hole we need to go?”

“There is a puzzle here for more security. Just come behind me”, answered the driver.  

He went to the nearest hole and dropped a can no voice came. He continued the practice. But when the last whole came he dropped the can as usual but a voice came.

“We need to jump inside this hole”, says the driver.

Then they jumped inside the hole. When they reached the bottom of the hole. There they saw a giant black door that had 24 carrot gold knob. The driver told “MI6.” A tablet came from the bottom which asked for fingerprint. Then the driver scanned his finger on the tablet. A robotic voice came from the tablet saying, “Welcome sir.” The door opened.

There was a map drawn on the first wall saying where are the different rooms in which different tasks are performed. There were a total of 25 rooms and 5 floors including the ground floor.

Then the driver takes him to the conference room which is on the 5th floor.

When they go to the conference room Mr. Bond sees Ms. Em. 

Ms. Em is the head of MI6 the secret service department.

“Ms. Em why are you here. Our headquarters are in London so, why are you here?” questioned Mr. Bond to Ms. Em.

“Wait! Bond, I will tell you everything in detail just be patient”, answered Ms. Em.

“Ok”, Ms. Em. 

Mr. Bond had many questions in his mine regarding MI6.

“Mr. Bond 2 months before when you were on leave, Mr. Ernst Stavro Blofeld, Mr. Auric Goldfinger, Mr. Jaws, Mr. Alec Trevelyan, Mr. Francisco Scaramanga, Mr. Le Chiffre, and Mr. Dr. No came together with their assistant to fought against us,” said Ms. Em.

“Then what happened Ms. Em” questioned Mr. Bond.

“Mr. Bond then they attacked us. We fought bravely but we hadn’t many agents. We need to run so, we took are software engineers with us. Then after a day, we came to this place. It was isolated so we thought to make an underground headquarters. Then we thought we should contact you but you were injured badly on the last mission and you were on leave. So, we didn’t call you.” said Ms. Em

“Where did the other agent when”, questioned Mr. Bond.

“Other agents were on leave like you”, answered Mr. Em.

“And why didn’t you call me”, questioned Mr. Bond.

“You were on leave so, we thought that when our new headquarters would be made that time we will call you”, answered Mr. Em.

“I am an agent of MI6 Ms. Em and it’s my wright to save MI6. Now I am ready for the war, I am going for it”, questioned Mr. Bond.

“Don’t go for the war, there is a big problem, bigger than the incident of the past 2 months”, answered Ms. Em.

“What’s the big problem, Ms. Em which is bigger than the incident,” questioned Mr. Bond.

“I’ll tell the problem, Mr. Bond. First, go around are new headquarters and see what new features we have added”, answered Ms. Em.

Mr. Bond Goes around the headquarters. There were many new features like invisible laser lights, invisible CCTV cameras, and many more. Many cars are building.

After  Mr. Bond goes around the headquarters. He goes to the cabin of Ms. Em to know what’s the problem.

“Ms. Em what’s the problem. Please tell know I have seen the whole headquarters”, questioned Mr. Bond.

“You know the adventurous family. The family of Smith’s. They have done many adventures in the past. Now Ben Smith’s son Rush Smith is going for an adventure to Atlantis.” answered Ms. Em.

“So, what’s the harm for going on an adventure”, say’s Mr. Bond.

“There is harm. Ben Smith conducted an audition for the partner who will go with Rush. The partner was Shane Washington the best agent of Spectre. He is going there to take all the treasure from there. So, I have appointed you for the mission. He should not take a single gram of the treasure.” exclaimed Ms. Em.

“Okay, Ms. Em. I will work on it”, exclaimed Mr. Bond

“Do well Mr. Bond”, says Ms. Em


Posted Aug 15, 2020
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Amogh Kasat
August 24, 2020 06:13

I have changed the title of the story to The Secret Organization {Part 1}

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Parul Srivastava
August 23, 2020 03:33

Interesting take on the prompt! Well written and quite gripping.
Please read and review my story Guest in Room No. 301, thanks!

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Amogh Kasat
August 23, 2020 04:49

Sure and thank you

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August 21, 2020 23:00

great job! keep writing! please go check out my new stories.

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Amogh Kasat
August 22, 2020 07:44

Sure and thank you

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August 22, 2020 07:58

Your welcome!😊

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Deborah Angevin
August 21, 2020 12:04

As others have mentioned, I also realized some grammatical errors throughout the story. However, the concept was great and creative!

P.S: would you mind checking out my recent submission, "Yellow Light?" Thank you :D

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Amogh Kasat
August 21, 2020 12:08

HARRY POTTER THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENT AND HARRY POTTER IS GOING TO UPLOAD A COMMENT IN 5 MINUTES WITH HIS MAGIC.

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August 21, 2020 03:02

Hello, Harry. I'm alive. Nice story, I thought you were an Auror, not a writer.

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Amogh Kasat
August 21, 2020 12:06

THANK YOU :)

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August 21, 2020 17:58

Haha sorry if the i'm alive part didn't make sense. I was being dumbledore

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Amogh Kasat
August 22, 2020 07:43

Oh

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Ola Hotchpotch
August 20, 2020 15:47

nice story. An old broken man died in hospital. They did not let his daughter in to see him on his death bed. They said she was going to take one gram from him. And Duryodhan did not want that to happen. And the old man died thinking his daughter didn't love him. Then he came home and lived as if he never had a daughter. The daughter on the other side was gaged and bound with energy rings. No bond came to unravel the mystery. They closed the glass door. Just kidding.

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Amogh Kasat
August 21, 2020 01:36

thank you :)

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Rayhan Hidayat
August 20, 2020 07:43

I don’t think there’s any critique I can give you that others haven’t already, so I’ll just say that you really captured the James Bond vibe with the mysterious phone calls, the globe-trotting and the secret headquarters. Keep writing! 😁

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Amogh Kasat
August 21, 2020 01:35

thank you:)

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PAMELA ABWAO
August 19, 2020 01:40

Is it a continuation of part one?
Well written
It made me have a sense of mystery. With practice the grammar will get better

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Amogh Kasat
August 19, 2020 01:42

No, it's not a continuation of part one. Thank you :)

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Anna Maria
August 18, 2020 14:17

This was a refreshing story! It's a really nice take on the prompt! Thanks for the follow! Every follow and like makes a difference for a new author like me.

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Amogh Kasat
August 18, 2020 16:02

think you :)

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Aubrey Maria ✌
August 18, 2020 13:49

I enjoy James Bond stories, keep it up!

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Amogh Kasat
August 18, 2020 16:01

thank you :)

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Karin Venables
August 18, 2020 12:30

I get the feeling English is your second language and you are to be commended for what you have accomplished already with this story. Fan fiction is difficult at best, but you've provided us with an interesting secret mission in fine Bond style. As mentioned, Grammarly will help, but so will ProWritersAid.
Keep writing. You have interesting ideas.

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Amogh Kasat
August 18, 2020 16:01

thank you :)

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Kristin Neubauer
August 18, 2020 09:21

I love this updated take on Bond, especially how you sprinkled moments of humor throughout. Well done!

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Amogh Kasat
August 18, 2020 09:52

thank you :)

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Barbara Burgess
August 18, 2020 08:04

good story - I liked it very much - yes as people below are saying Grammarly can hellp and it is free. Keep writing.

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Amogh Kasat
August 18, 2020 09:51

thank you:)

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September 08, 2020 05:53

Very well written. Love the suspense. I can't wait to read the part 2.

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Amogh Kasat
September 08, 2020 05:57

thanks please like other stories

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Amogh Kasat
September 08, 2020 06:01

are you writing any stories this week

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September 08, 2020 06:40

maybe l am not sure

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September 08, 2020 06:41

and i will surely like your other stories.

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Amogh Kasat
September 08, 2020 11:23

ok

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