Beautiful- The Legend of the North Star

Fiction Friendship Inspirational

Written in response to: "Write about someone giving or receiving a gift." as part of Giving Thanks.

"Beautiful,"


                  whisper the stars


"You are beautiful."



                 "But how can you say that?"


I whisper back.



                 "Because, child, it is the truth,"


the stars sing into my ears.



                "Surely--  surely you are more beautiful than I?"


I ask, my words carried on the wind to the heavens.



                "Nay, we are but lights in the sky,

                lights that disappear,"


they laugh, their voices soaring through the night.



                "But you are so beautiful, so bright, so- so..."


I am at loss for words,


unable to express their beauty.



               "We only come out at night,

                and sometimes we are not there,"


the stars tell me, as if they know

something that I don't.



               "I know that, but people still love you."


I tell them, crestfallen, for I know

something they do not.



"Ugly."

"Stupid."

"Dumb."

"Trash."

Words that hurt, words that sting,

Swirling in the air around me.

"Useless."

"Dramatic."

"Self-centered."

"Clumsy."



                 "Child, why do you keep thinking of those words?"


the stars ask, concerned.



                "How did you know I was thinking of them?"


I reply, startled.



                "We know your heart, love, we know your heart,"


they say, voices blending into one. 


                "Don't listen to people who can't show kindness,"


the stars tell me, their voices smooth and soothing.


               "You are a beautiful light, brighter than any other,"


they whisper comfortingly.



               "N-no I'm not.

               I'm not beautiful.

               I'm not a light,"


I cry, my voice cracking and trembling. 



              "You do not believe us?

               Then we will  show you."


Suddenly the sky is bright,

The stars shine like candles,

And I am swept off my feet.



              "Where are you taking me?"


I cry, scared and shaking.



              "We are making you the

              brightest star in the world,

              the one that everyone

              will see no matter what,"


the stars sing with voices like angels.



             "But how?

              How will I be the brightest star?

              I'm not good enough,"


I tell them, my mind full of doubt. 



             "Yes you are, child.

              You were born for this.

              This is your destiny,"


they sing to me, as they place me among them. 

I can see the whole world,

All the planets and other stars. 

I look down to see that I am glowing.



            "What's happened to me?

             Why am I here?

             Why am I like this?"


I ask, my voice filled with fear.



The stars laugh, a tinkling, bell-like sound.


            "You, child, are the North Star.

            People will look to you for an eternity.

            And do you know why?"



I shake my head.



           "It is because you are beautiful."

Posted Nov 23, 2021
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November 23, 2021 09:11

Amazing poem, Missa! I really liked the way you formatted your story, very compelling and something a lot of people could relate to. Great job lol the lil note at the end was wijegajsdl soo cute, friendship goals ;p

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March 25, 2022 23:03

Aw really cool poem! I love the star aspect and exalting her to be the brightest star. The way you showed her doubts and thoughts was really unique, and it gave us a different perspective. The conversation the stars and the child have is super cool, and nice use of adjectives to describe that experience.
Super great job!
and also: 👓📖👍
-LB

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TJ Squared
January 23, 2022 04:34

Hewo

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Octavian Adams
January 22, 2022 21:20

This was beautiful, Missa. Well done

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Dhwani Jain
January 18, 2022 03:55

Just a comment on your bio,
Actually, 'Reading' is a town/city in England/UK and it IS pronounced as 'red-ing'

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Dhwani Jain
January 17, 2022 13:28

Are you back yet, Ivy?

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TJ Squared
January 15, 2022 21:41

hruuuuuuuuuu

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TJ Squared
January 12, 2022 15:00

Oof it seems like you’ve deleted the story

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TJ Squared
December 18, 2021 14:46

Bye Missa! See ya in 2022! Luv u <3333

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TJ Squared
December 09, 2021 19:19

that's awesome that you're doing awesome :DDDDD

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Dhwani Jain
December 09, 2021 10:04

Missa,
Can we make it a 'job' of the grammar police to find mistakes and then 'fine' people?

If yes, then I'll start with you.
You bio says that "send a musical NOT to me"....
Hope you found the mistake.

For this severe crime against SPELLING, you will have to pay 50 Reedias

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What's a Reedia? A read of one of your stories? A comment on one of your stories?

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Dhwani Jain
April 17, 2022 10:39

Nah nah
It's like, the CURRENCY of Reedsy.

I just formulated the term out of nowhere.

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Dhwani Jain
April 18, 2022 09:18

Idk...I went crazy that day 😁

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Marissa Reilly
April 21, 2022 23:13

=D she did. she made me pay a fine of 50 Reedias. She gave me 30 for being super nice to her and saying smth like, "I love you DJ you're so amazing!". I'm still 20 Reedias in debt. :(

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TJ Squared
December 08, 2021 01:47

Hey, sorry about dropping out in the middle of our convo.
All that’s left to do is pray. I love you like a sister, Missa <3

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Dhwani Jain
December 08, 2021 11:31

Um, I read your announcement, WHAT HAPPENED?!?!?

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TJ Squared
December 08, 2021 14:12

Stuff happened DJ. At least I’ve still got Reedsy tho.

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Jexica Marcell
December 02, 2021 23:09

👓📖👍

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TJ Squared
November 30, 2021 23:22

Noice bio

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this is amazing and so wonderfullll
also i love your name missa!

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Victor .
November 29, 2021 17:11

Hello, my name is Nightmare Phantom, but you can call me Night or Mare or any other name you see fit. I am reaching out on reedsy to find more friends and meet more amazing people. If you are interested in getting to know me more, feel free to respond, if not, that's completely fine. I may seem stiff and emotionless at first but I'm a great person once you get to know me, at least I'd hope I am.

~Nightmare Phantom

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Dhwani Jain
November 24, 2021 12:26

I want to apply for the Reedsy Grammar Police!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Marissa Reilly
November 28, 2021 18:32

Okie.

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TJ Squared
November 23, 2021 01:11

nice story, very meaningful, very true <333

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Roger Scypion
February 05, 2023 22:31

Absolutely beautiful! The power of the stars shines in your words ever bright.

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Anne Zubrick
December 12, 2022 15:00

I love it so good I wish my daughter was little so l could read each night to her. the world gets such negative picture that we do not believe in our beaty. This is wonderful. I hope this get published.

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Marissa Reilly
December 13, 2022 02:15

Aww, thank you so much. You just made my day! I wrote it because I felt that the world we live in just creates such an unachievable "beauty" that is just so unrealistic, when in reality, we are are all beautiful. Thank you for your kind words, and God bless you a thousand times! <3

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April 28, 2022 19:21

You managed to convey a lot, very compelling. The star's and the child's conversation is superb. Such a beautiful poem, loved it!

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Marissa Reilly
April 28, 2022 20:07

:) Thank you so much for reading it and for giving me feedback! I'm glad you liked it!

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April 28, 2022 20:09

My pleasure, Missa. Beautiful name btw

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Marissa Reilly
April 28, 2022 20:12

😊 thank you, it's just one of my many nicknames, along with Mis, Miss Mis Missa, Rissa, SaSa, Salsa, Rice, and the newly appointed one, Ritz.

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April 28, 2022 20:16

You've got so many cool nicknames! Man, that's my dream (don't worry I've got many other strange dreams haha)

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Marissa Reilly
April 28, 2022 20:23

Thank you! I came up with all of them except Miss Mis Missa, Mis, Rissa, and SaSa. Which is pretty much just three. I'm pretty sure I have more, but i can't remember them. And I'm a pro at nicknames, if I do say so myself, so I could give you some! (and I'm worrying- not about your dreams, but about mine. i've had plenty of strange dreams, perhaps stranger than yours!)

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Dhwani Jain
April 20, 2022 12:46

Awwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Marissa Reilly
April 20, 2022 13:09

=D
(how else are you supposed to respond to "awwww!!!!"?)

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Dhwani Jain
April 20, 2022 13:18

With an AWWWWWWWWWW?

Idk...;)

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Marissa Reilly
April 20, 2022 13:21

hmmm, maybe....
or ig i did ok, since you responded :)

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Dhwani Jain
April 20, 2022 13:56

Yeah you did!

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Marissa Reilly
April 20, 2022 14:23

:)
my blog is all messed up now TvT I changed the theme bc I didn't like how the other theme was full page, and now I don't know what to do 😭😭😭

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Dhwani Jain
January 19, 2022 16:31

New story with YOUR character!

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Silias Welson
January 14, 2022 16:02

Hey Missa. :)

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