The Supper at Blackthorn Hall

Crime

Written in response to: "Set your story at a dinner where two or more people share the table. Each is carrying a secret, or hiding something about another person in the room." as part of Around the Table with Rozi Doci.



By the time the fifth bell tolled from the chapel tower, the storm had already begun its slow assault upon Blackthorn Hall. The wind whipped the rain and slammed it into the windows.

The storm pressed itself against the old manor as if it wished to be invited in. The old house, however, had never been generous with invitations. It stood on the cliff above the black sea, ancient and stark. While the storm ranged outside five people nursed 5 different versions of guilt. None of them suspected that a dead man had arranged matters so their guilt would be the instrument of this final revenge.

Inside, beneath a blackened iron chandelier with half melted candles, the five people sat down to dinner.

They had all come for Lord Elias Vale.

And every one of them knew something about his murder.

Julian sat at the head of the table, as the eldest son should. His handsome face held the expression of well-practiced sorrow. Beside his plate rested a silver goblet which he immediately drained. Wine was necessary for a dinner like this one.

Across from him sat Lady Seraphine, Elias’s widow, her black mourning gown buttoned to the throat with a jet black brooch. She looked fragile in the candlelight, all bone and shadow, but there was nothing fragile in the way her eyes moved around the table. She watched each guest as if weighing how much truth could be carved from them before they screamed.

To Julian’s right sat Alistair Crowe, the family solicitor, a skinny man with ink-stained fingers and the air of someone who had spent too many years keeping other people’s sins in locked drawers. His leather satchel never left his sight.

Beside him was Dr. Silas Vey, physician, scholar, and rumored alchemist. His hair was silver, his eyes pale, and his smile faintly unpleasant. He smelled of cloves, rainwater, and something else that was bitter and foreign. Few people knew that he had supplied medicines to Lord Elias in the weeks before his death.

And finally, at the far end of the table, sat Evangeline Hart, companion to Lady Seraphine and the only person present who did not belong to the family by blood, law, or profession. She was young, quiet, and lovely in a way that made men careless. Her hands trembled only once, when the waiter set a wine carafe on the table in front of Lady Seraphine.

The first course was served in silence.

No one trusted the soup. This, perhaps, was wise.

Lord Elias had died three nights earlier after taking his evening tonic. He had collapsed in this very dining room, one hand at his throat, the other knocking over his wineglass. The physician had called it failure of the heart.

The servants whispered poison.

And the dead man, had he been capable of speech, might have whispered a name.

Julian lifted his spoon but did not eat. “We are a grim assembly tonight.”

“Grief is rarely festive,” said Seraphine. “More wine, Julian?” She filled his goblet. Her voice was soft, but it cut cleanly through the room.

Julian smiled without warmth. “And yet you wear it beautifully, stepmother.”

Evangeline looked down at her plate, not making eye contact. It was small and silent, but she was the first person to crack. She was not eating the soup or anything else.

The hatred between Julian and his step mother was the worst kept secret in Blackthorn Hall. What they did not all know was why. It was rumored she had married his father for the estate, the jewels, and the power of the Vale name. He also suspected she had taken a lover.

But not in the way he thought.

Seraphine’s lover had not been some nameless stableman or visiting noble. It had been Alistair Crowe, the solicitor, whose thin hands had once trembled against her waist in the library while Lord Elias slept drugged upstairs.

Alistair knew she had no love for her husband. That was his secret.

Or rather, one of them.

He loved her with the desperate obedience of a starving dog. He had altered accounts for her. Burned letters for her. Lied to Elias for her. And when she had come to him two months ago, eyes bright and voice low, asking whether certain poisons could mimic illness, he had pretended not to understand. But that was a great lie.

Dr. Vey dabbed his mouth with a linen napkin. “Lord Elias had enemies. This house breeds them the way damp breeds mold.”

Julian’s eyes shifted to him. “You would know, Doctor. You were here often enough.”

“As his physician.”

“As his supplier.” The word hung there, ugly and deliberate.

Vey’s mouth curved. “Medicine is only poison with better manners, Mr. Vale.”

Evangeline choked on her wine and sputtered.

Julian noticed. So did Seraphine. So did Alistair. The doctor noticed most of all.

Because Evangeline knew what he was.

Not merely a physician. Not merely a scholar. Beneath his respectable practice, beneath the shelves of dried herbs and anatomical sketches, Dr. Silas Vey kept a locked room behind his surgery. In that room, he made powders that stopped breath, tinctures that invited madness, oils that blistered skin, and clear little drops that left no trace unless one knew exactly where to look.

Evangeline had gone to him once. Not for herself. For Lady Seraphine.

She had carried a folded note and a velvet purse heavy with coin. She had not asked questions. That was the terrible thing about Evangeline; she had been raised to be useful, and useful women learned early that survival often wore the same face as obedience.

But she had read the label on the vial before handing it over.

Essence of foxglove (digitalis).

Enough to kill Lord Elias Vale and make it look like it look like heart failure.

The second course arrived; roasted pheasant glazed with black cherries, potatoes crisped in goose fat, carrots sliced thin as coins. The servants moved like ghosts around the table, their faces carefully blank.

Outside, thunder rolled over the sea.

Inside, secrets shifted in their chairs.

Alistair cleared his throat. “There is another matter to discuss.”

Seraphine did not look at him. “Must it be tonight?”

“I’m afraid so.”

Julian leaned back. “How dramatic. Has my father risen from the grave to revise his will?”

“No,” Alistair said. “But he left instructions.”

That silenced them.

Even the candles seemed to bend closer.

Alistair’s fingers tightened around the satchel. “Lord Elias kept a private journal.”

Seraphine’s face did not change, but something in her eyes went still.

Julian’s smile faded.

Dr. Vey set down his knife.

Evangeline forgot to breathe.

Alistair looked at each of them in turn, and for the first time that evening, he seemed almost powerful. “He called it his book of secrets.”

Rain struck the windows harder.

Julian laughed once, low and humorless. “Of course he did. My father did love a performance.”

“He instructed me to bring it here after his death,” Alistair said. “To be opened at dinner, in the presence of those named within.”

“Named?” Seraphine asked.

Her voice was too calm.

Alistair nodded.

He opened the satchel and withdrew a book bound in cracked black leather. Its edges were worn, its clasp tarnished, and across the cover, pressed into the hide, were the initials E.V.

Elias Vale.

Dead, but not silent.

Julian’s expression sharpened with hunger. He had spent his life waiting for his father to make one final wound, and now here it was, placed neatly between the pheasant and the wine.

“Read it,” he said.

“No,” Seraphine whispered.

The word was small, but the room heard it.

Alistair looked at her, and in that look lived every kiss, every lie, every moment he had mistaken being needed for being loved.

“I must,” he said.

He opened the book.

The pages smelled faintly of dust, smoke, and old rage.

Alistair began to read.

“If I am dead, look first to my wife.”

Seraphine closed her eyes.

Julian smiled.

Dr. Vey watched Evangeline.

Alistair continued, voice thinning. “She has grown tired of waiting for widowhood. She believes herself clever. She forgets that beautiful women are watched more closely than plain ones, because men are fools and fools are useful.”

Seraphine stood so abruptly her chair scraped against the floor.

“This is obscene.”

Julian lifted his glass. “No, dear stepmother. This is inheritance.”

Alistair read on, because stopping now would have been worse.

“She has taken Crowe as her creature. Poor Crowe. A man so hungry for affection he would forge the devil’s signature if praised for his penmanship.”

Color rose in Alistair’s face.

Seraphine looked at him then, truly looked, and he hated her for the pity in it.

The book had not finished.

“She has also sent the girl, Evangeline, to Vey. I saw the note. I saw the purse. I know what was purchased.”

Evangeline made a small sound, barely human.

Dr. Vey folded his hands.

Julian turned slowly toward her. “You?”

Evangeline’s eyes filled. “I didn’t know.”

But that was not entirely true.

She had known enough.

Everyone always knew enough.

Alistair swallowed. “There is more.”

Seraphine’s face had gone very white. “Alistair, don’t.”

But he did.

“Julian believes himself innocent because he did not pour the poison. Yet he came to me six weeks ago asking what would become of the estate if his father died before changing the will.”

Julian’s hand tightened around his knife.

“That is not murder.”

“No,” said Dr. Vey softly. “Only anticipation.”

Julian lunged halfway from his chair. “You sanctimonious corpse. You made the poison.”

Vey’s smile returned.

“Yes.”

The word struck the table like a dropped blade.

No one moved.

Vey reached for his wine and drank deeply, as if confessing to murder were no more troubling than discussing the weather.

“I made it,” he said. “I have made many things. Men come to me when they are afraid. Women come when they are desperate. Sons come when they are impatient. Servants come when they are invisible. Poison is merely truth in liquid form.”

Seraphine stared at him. “You promised it would leave no trace.”

“And it didn’t.”

Julian’s laugh broke out sharp and wild. “So you admit it.”

“I admit to craft,” Vey said. “Not intent.”

Evangeline was crying now, silently, tears slipping down her cheeks. “My lady, tell them. Tell them why.”

Seraphine looked at her companion, and for a moment the widow’s hard beauty cracked. Beneath it was terror. Beneath that, something older.

“He was cruel,” she said.

The room seemed to darken.

It was not a defense. Not truly. Cruelty did not balance murder on any honest scale. But Blackthorn Hall had never been an honest place.

“He locked me in the east room for two days when I displeased him,” Seraphine said. “He dismissed every maid who showed me kindness. He threatened to send Evangeline away. He told me he would change the will and leave Julian with nothing, just to watch him beg.”

Julian’s face twisted. “Do not pretend you killed him for me.”

“No,” she said. “I killed him because I wanted to live.”

There it was.

A simple, terrible hunger for survival.

Alistair lowered the book. “Seraphine.”

She looked at him. “I never asked you to love me.”

“No,” he said. “You only asked me to ruin myself.”

A gust of wind struck the house so hard the chandelier trembled. Wax dripped onto the tablecloth in pale, cooling tears.

Julian stood fully now, knife in hand. “Then it is done. You will hang.”

Seraphine laughed.

It was not loud, but it was enough to chill the blood.

“Oh, Julian,” she said. “You still think this dinner is about your father.”

He froze.

Across the table, Dr. Vey looked into his empty goblet.

Alistair went very still.

Evangeline whispered, “My lady?”

Seraphine sat down again with slow elegance. “Elias wrote his little book because he thought secrets belong to the person who discovers them. He was wrong. Secrets belong to whoever knows how to use them.”

Julian looked from her to his glass.

He had not touched the soup.

He had not eaten the pheasant.

But he had raised his wine when Alistair read from the book.

Only once.

Only enough.

His face changed.

The knife slipped from his hand and struck the floor.

“What have you done?”

Seraphine’s eyes shone in the candlelight, not with tears, but with something colder.

“What I should have done before dinner.”

Julian staggered back. His hand went to his throat. For one suspended second, he looked very much like his father must have looked in the moment death first laid its fingers upon him: confused, offended, betrayed by the body he had assumed would always obey him.

Evangeline screamed.

Alistair rose too late.

Dr. Vey merely watched, expression unreadable.

Julian collapsed beside his chair, his body striking the floor with a heavy finality that seemed to shake dust from the ceiling beams.

No one went to him.

The storm roared.

Seraphine lifted her napkin and touched it to the corner of her mouth.

“You poisoned him,” Alistair said.

“Yes.”

“With what?”

She turned to Dr. Vey.

He sighed, almost regretfully. “Something of my own design.”

Evangeline pushed back from the table, horror widening her eyes. “Doctor?”

Vey did not look at her. “Lord Elias was not my only patron.”

Alistair’s voice cracked. “You planned this together?”

Seraphine stood. “Not together. Men always mistake usefulness for partnership.”

Vey’s expression hardened, but he did not contradict her.

That was his mistake.

Seraphine had learned from the best of them. From Elias, who collected secrets. From Alistair, who buried them. From Vey, who bottled death and called it medicine. From Julian, who wanted power but lacked patience.

And from Evangeline, sweet Evangeline, who had carried the first vial and wept afterward, proving that guilt was a leash if one only held it tight enough.

Seraphine picked up the black book from the table.

“What will you do?” Alistair asked.

She looked at the dead man on the floor, then at the living ones around her.

“Survive.”

For a moment, no one spoke.

Then Evangeline rose.

Her tears had stopped.

“No,” she said.

It was not loud. It was not dramatic. But it carried through the dining room with more force than the thunder.

Seraphine turned.

Evangeline’s face was pale, but there was something new in it now. Something that had not been there when she first entered Blackthorn Hall as a poor girl with one trunk and no family name worth speaking aloud.

“I carried your note,” Evangeline said. “I carried your poison. I kept your secrets. I pitied you.”

Seraphine’s mouth tightened. “Sit down.”

“No.”

Alistair looked at the girl then and understood too late that innocence, once broken, did not always become weakness. Sometimes it sharpened.

Evangeline reached into the pocket of her gown and withdrew a folded page.

Seraphine went still.

“What is that?”

“One page from his book,” Evangeline said. “The page he tore out before giving it to Mr. Crowe.”

Alistair stared at her. “How did you get that?”

“Lord Elias gave it to me the morning he died.”

The room shifted around them.

Even dead men, it seemed, had contingencies.

Evangeline unfolded the page with shaking hands.

“He knew about the poison,” she said. “He knew about the affair. He knew about Julian. He knew about all of us.” Her eyes lifted to Seraphine. “But this page names the murderer.”

Seraphine whispered, “Give it to me.”

“No.”

Dr. Vey rose slowly.

Evangeline backed toward the fireplace. “Come closer, and I burn it.”

Vey stopped.

The flames behind her painted gold across her hair and made her shadow loom tall against the wall, no longer a companion’s shadow, no longer a servant’s shadow, but something fierce and winged.

“Read it,” Alistair said.

Evangeline did.

“My wife will be blamed, and perhaps she deserves blame. My son will rejoice, and perhaps he deserves death. Crowe will tremble, as weak men do. The girl will cry. Vey will smile. But the hand that kills me will not be Seraphine’s.”

Her voice faltered.

Seraphine stared at her.

Evangeline continued.

“I have dosed myself for seven nights.”

Silence swallowed the room whole.

“I chose the poison from Vey’s stores. I chose the hour. I chose the witnesses. Let them devour one another after I am gone. That will be my final entertainment.”

Alistair sank back into his chair.

Dr. Vey’s face, for the first time, showed something like admiration.

Seraphine did not move.

The truth settled over them, black and suffocating.

Lord Elias Vale had not been murdered.

He had staged his death as a trap, and they had all walked willingly into it, carrying their knives, their lies, their hungers, their little bottles of borrowed darkness.

All except Julian.

Julian lay dead on the floor.

That murder was real.

Seraphine looked at him, and whatever defense she might have made died before reaching her lips.

Evangeline folded the page.

“I am leaving,” she said.

“You have nowhere to go,” Seraphine replied.

Evangeline looked at the dead man, the alchemist, the solicitor, and the widow.

Then she looked toward the rain-streaked windows and the dark world beyond Blackthorn Hall.

“Yes,” she said softly. “I do.”

And while the storm battered the old house and the sea raged below the cliffs, Evangeline Hart walked out of the dining room with the final page of Elias Vale’s book held tightly in her hand.

Behind her, four people remained at the table.

One dead.

Three damned.

And in the center of the table, beneath the trembling candlelight, the black book lay open, its pages turning slowly in the wind, as if the house itself were reading what came next.

Posted May 20, 2026
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L J
19:46 May 28, 2026

HI Andie, I Was asked to critique your story. It was very well written but needs to be made into a novel for more story line and more character development! I am an Agatha Chrisie fan, and this is so close to a Christie Mystery! Please think about making this into either a mystery or Gothic genre story! Nice. Will look forward to reading more

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Andie Posey
14:12 May 29, 2026

Thank you so much. I just started writing in the gothic genre and this was my very first murder mystery. I appreciate your comments!

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Kate Winchester
16:53 May 27, 2026

This is awesome. I love how everything unraveled. Great job!

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Andie Posey
17:37 May 27, 2026

Thank you so much. It was really fun to write.

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