Comatose

Sad

Written in response to: "Write about two people reconnecting after a rough patch in their relationship." as part of Candy Hearts.

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The cold air flowed in through the open door of Biblio Phile. Mr. Murton, an old man dusty from age and tomes of days past, peeked over the stack of New Arrivals to see who was letting in "that infernal draft". To his surprise, opposite the top of the stack, stood a young gentleman. Now, you and your ilk have no idea who this person is. None of you have a clue or a guess or a thought or an inkling. But I, yes, I know this man, and Mr. Murton did too.


"Hey, Max! What the devil are you doing here? How's college treating you?" Mr. Murton spoke in a slow voice of sticky molasses, letting the words slop off of his tongue. Well, you get that type of speech only after a Monday of reading Chaucer.


"Ah, is that Mr. Murton? How are you still alive??" Max threw his arm around the shoulders of the old man, patting his back in a delicate manner. To Max, there was nothing different about the store. The shelves seemed to be in order, only a couple of obvious careless placings by customers. The Classics aisle was still strong as ever, boasting all the books one would ever need to read. Murton was conquering the Solzhenitsyn section at the moment*.


"Ah, well, you know what they say. A reader lives a thousand lives and dies but one!" Always full of wisdom.


"I'm... looking for a specific book."


"What's it called?" For a moment, Max was silent and looked at the floor with disdain. "Well, out with it!"


"I need to find my old Lord of the Flies." Murton's face contorted in some foreign expression that I can only describe as nostalgia.


"Really? After all this time? I'm not sure we even still have it." Creaking away from the back of his chair, the old man stretched to reach the ebony cane next to the cash register. Max lent an affectionate glance to the copy of Remembrance of Things Past lying next to his foot. What a great stepstool that book was.


The small specks of fuzzy light that clouded the store felt like fireworks at a welcome home party to Max. The rows of shelves were gigantic punch bowls of knowledge and wonder that were yet to be spooned into cups. If only he'd been around more. If only he'd read at all.


"Right this way!" Mr. Murton stood next to the Island Adventure aisle, scanning the sections for the name GOLDING sticking out from the spine.


"Where are you, my pretty... no, Ballantyne, not you, no no no... Ah, there you are!!" With a sigh of fulfillment, he retrieved it. The pages were crisp and clean-cut, seeming the same as when Max had given the book away so long ago.


"Ah, yes, I remember when I got you..." Mr. Murton's voice trailed off the side of a cliff, leaving the world stranded behind. The adventures of Ralph and Piggy and Simon... his heartstrings felt a little twang when reminiscing over the old memories.


"Max? Where'd you go?" The world around seemed quiet. No sounds echoed through the door, no drafts. Where had that boy gone off to?

***


As Mr. Murton closed up for the night, the sign on the door waved a solemn goodnight. No customers had come today besides that Max, who'd left as soon as he came.


"Night, Moe!" The tabby cat on the corner of Rosemont Road squeaked a reply as it wandered its ways through the streets. That cat was never claimed, no signs of any kind put up around the city. Moe was better off that way, though. He didn't like the warm of the house.


Where was I? Oh yes, Mr. Murton. Our old dodger waved to the incoming cars as he hobbled across the street, throwing wide open the door to his car. An old 1960s Bentley, he could never bear to part with it. He appreciated the car in a way more true and pure than any other thing. It was his own. His way of saying "I might be old, but I can still be free". However, Murton's cane told otherwise.

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"Max, can you hear me? Max, it's Georgia. Please come back." The strands of wire that hung to the old man's heart were a maze that Georgia Murton made no attempt to make sense of. She hung by her partner's side without caring for a medical solution. Emotions would solve everything, she believed, and so it shall be.

***


When our kooky senior reached the edge of his street, he felt a sharp pain underneath his arm. The jutting edge of a cover was sticking into his flabby underarm, and he reached out to retrieve it.


"Lord of the Flies. Well, I'll be..."

***


Ralph was sitting in the corner of the platform, looking across the triangle of logs to his friends. Jack was sitting in a corner with his choir, laughing about something with Maurice. Simon, well, Simon was simply there, there was no two ways about it.


"Max?" A face looked up at him through the din of childish humor and games. Ralph laughed for a second, trying to catch on to whatever joke he might've missed. In another life, Ralph would've ignored it. This, however, is not that strand of life.


"Max, it's Georgia. Please, if you can hear me, please come back for your wife."

***


Moe was a solitary cat, never caring for the company of others. People bothered him, made him antsy to get away. There was never a way around them, though. Humans were just always there.


The train station was brimming with life at the late hour of night. Voices and intercom mixed into a slushie of sound that seeped through Moe's feline earlobes. He hissed for a second, hoping that the sounds would go away. Well, that's humans for you. Never caring.

***


Georgia Murton was a stout, loyal woman. She stood by her husband in all of his antics, all of his eccentric quirks. There was never an instance where she thought of unfaithful acts. Betraying her husband was simply not in the scope of possibility. We are called here today to commemorate her horrible, painful journey, and to respect the battle she waged on life. May we all grow to be as resilient as she was and to love another as she did Max. She can be with her husband again. Thank you.


*Thanks Zilla heehee


Posted Feb 16, 2021
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Amany Sayed
February 25, 2021 14:28

dudeee happy bdayyyy! glad i got to 'meet' you on reedsy! keep writing and hope you have a great day and year and life! I missed like everyone else's bday so here this is lol.
🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
I want to give you a gift, but there's so little I can do online...so...um...
🎈

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. .
February 25, 2021 14:29

Thank youuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!! Awwwwww that's so sweet of youuuuuuu!!!!

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Amany Sayed
February 25, 2021 14:41

Could I haveee your favorite color real quick?

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. .
February 25, 2021 14:43

Gold!!!

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Amany Sayed
February 25, 2021 14:50

K bro, don't even know if Luke's your real name, but here's your 'gift' xD
file:///C:/Users/Acer/Downloads/Notebooks.pdf

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. .
February 25, 2021 14:52

Thankoooooooooooooooooooooo so much Amany!!!!!!!!!

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February 25, 2021 14:01

Happy Birthday Luke!!!!!!🎉🎉

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. .
February 25, 2021 14:04

THANKOOOOOOOO

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February 25, 2021 14:05

THANKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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Maya -
February 25, 2021 20:50

No problem! :D
Have any plans for your birthday?

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. .
February 26, 2021 13:19

WENT TO A BOOKSTORE, DISCOVERED WHAT I THINK IS MY NEW FAVORITE BOOK OF ALL TIME BY LIKE A MILLION... and had cake and watched forrest gump

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Maya -
February 26, 2021 18:08

OMG REALLY WOWWW THAT'S AMAZING
Lol niceeee :DDD

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. .
February 26, 2021 18:38

YERPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

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. .
February 26, 2021 18:38

BTW NAINIKAS BACK

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✰ Jennie ✰
February 25, 2021 13:57

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!!!!

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. .
February 25, 2021 14:04

Jennnnnnn don't post my age plsssssssssssssss but thankoooooooooooo!!!!!!

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✰ Jennie ✰
February 26, 2021 17:18

updated.......!!!!!!!!! SORRY I FORGOT errrrrrrrrr I meant 21 hehehe anyways the new prompts are legit MEANT for elemental fantasies

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. .
February 26, 2021 17:20

XDXDXDXDXDXDXDXDXD YESHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THEY ARE I POSTED A NORSE-ISH ONE LIKE 10 MIN AGO!!! it has greek names but norse cultural details so WUT? ON EARTH? IS IT?

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✰ Jennie ✰
February 26, 2021 17:36

O - M - G wwwwwwwwwwwhaaaaaaaaaa MUST SEE

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Mira Caplan
February 25, 2021 13:29

HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY BESTIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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. .
February 25, 2021 13:29

THANKOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOoOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

how goes your AsSiGnMeNtS?

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Mira Caplan
February 25, 2021 14:53

My assignments are now in order :)

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. .
February 25, 2021 14:58

... okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk... any ideas for the civilization???

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Mira Caplan
February 25, 2021 15:01

erm....no...

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. .
February 25, 2021 15:07

Dat's fineeeeee

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Kate Reynolds
February 25, 2021 13:10

HAPPY BIRTHDAY LUKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE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(It's supposed to be a birthday cake XD)

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. .
February 25, 2021 13:18

THANKYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!

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Kate Reynolds
February 25, 2021 20:58

OFCCCCCCCCCCCC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Did you do anything fun??

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. .
February 26, 2021 13:17

YESH I WENT TO A USED BOOKSTORE AND GOT SOME AWESOME BOOKS, HAD SOME TRIPLECHOCOLATECAKE, AND WATCHED FORREST GUMP!!!

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Kate Reynolds
February 26, 2021 13:21

That... sounds like my perfect day.
WOW THAT MUST HAVE BEEN SO FUNNNNNNN

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. .
February 26, 2021 13:26

I KNOWWWWWWWW I GOT AN 1840 EDITION OF A BOOOOK AND ITS IN PERFECT CONDITION AND THE SPINE IS SO PURTY...

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Whitney Jones
February 24, 2021 22:34

I feel like a very slow person. I don't know what have this story is about(I got confused a lot) and I have no idea what's going on in the comments. I'm a very slow person. 😭😭😭😭😟
But if I understood it correctly, this was a good short story.
Is Georgia Murton related to Mr. Murton? OMG, I'm so freaking slow.

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. .
February 24, 2021 23:19

OMG I made this with the intent of it being extremely confusing... here goes:
Max is a reflection of Mr. Murton's young self that appears to him while he's in a coma, Georgia is his wife who is faithfully by his side, and then he dies causing her to die and the ending is a speech at her funeral... I'm genuinely sorry for the confusion XD

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Whitney Jones
February 25, 2021 14:18

Lol. Yea, slow. You're fine. And thanks for clearing it up.

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. .
February 25, 2021 14:31

Yerp it was easily the weirdest one I've written, kinda with the weird POVs

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Whitney Jones
February 25, 2021 14:57

Yeppur. The POVs is what confused me the most and how you written it.

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. .
February 25, 2021 14:58

I know!!! So basically The Enemy, another of my stories, illustrated a mind with PTSD, and this was a take on a mind in a coma.

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Haven't talked in for ever...

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. .
February 24, 2021 18:54

I KNOW!!!!!!!!! HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!!!

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I've been feeling kinda sad lately.... :(

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. .
February 24, 2021 19:04

awwwwwwwwwww why???

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My friends are Leaving and I have a lot of stress in my life...

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. .
February 24, 2021 19:31

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO THAT'S HORRIBLE

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Sapphire 🌼
February 24, 2021 18:07

*GASP* The level of organization in your pfp makes me so happy XD

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. .
February 24, 2021 18:10

XDXD

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Sapphire 🌼
February 24, 2021 21:38

God I'm so bored

To answer the question in your bio (and to annoy you with my comments cause GOD I'm weird) probably Bangs Boy or Lord Hunkyhair, I mean, who wouldn't want to be friends with Keefe Sencen? Especially after reading his registry files-

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. .
February 24, 2021 22:24

hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe that's true

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Sapphire 🌼
February 25, 2021 17:07

HEHEHEHEHEHEEHEHEHHEHEHEHEH (did you see it?)

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Mira Caplan
February 24, 2021 16:55

HOW DARE THY

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. .
February 24, 2021 16:57

HEEHEEHEEHEEHEE WELP

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Mira Caplan
February 24, 2021 16:59

AHAHAAAAAAAAAAA WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY -_-

At least there is Reedsy

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. .
February 24, 2021 17:00

YERP

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Mira Caplan
February 24, 2021 17:06

YEAS.
OH I KNOW THIS STORY FROM PASSOVER!!! The angel of death and stuff!!! Kinda. I know Hindu mythology better

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. .
February 24, 2021 17:09

Ha lolllllllll did you see what I said about what I was going to do tomorrow for mine????

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Jay DMer
February 24, 2021 15:51

Ohhh a picture:)

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. .
February 24, 2021 15:55

Yerp!

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Radhika Diksha
February 24, 2021 15:45

LUKE CAN I SAY SOMETHING,
YOU ARE JUST LIKE MY LITTLE BROTHER. I KNEW YOU WOULD YOU KNOW COME TO SEE THE CHAT. I WAS JUST GONNA SAY FOOLED YOU KINDA JOKE. I REALLY CARE FOR YOUR FRIENDSHIP AND I REALLY LIKE YOU. It's JUST THAT I FIND YOUR FRIENDSHIP PURE AND JUST THOUGHT TO AMO SOME THINGS UP AND HAVE FUN. NO INTENTION OF HUNTING YOU, JUST WANTED TO LIGHT THE MOMENT,
FOR EXAMPLE, IN MY SCHOOL WE USED TO JUST PAIR A BOY AND GIRL AND JUST TEASE THEM AND HAVE FUN, LIKE HEALTHY TEASING. JUST YOU KNOW TO INCLUDE EVERYBODY AND HAVE SOME TEENAGE FUN. NOTHING ELSE. DONT GET ANGRY BECAUSE YOU HAVE TO DRESS UP FOR THE MOVIE. BYE.

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. .
February 24, 2021 15:47

I knowwwwwwwwwwwwww and that's really sweet of you to call me that, but this is the internet so I don't want misinformation, so could you delete all of the threads about it? I'm grateful to have you as a friend tooooooooooooo :)

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Radhika Diksha
February 24, 2021 15:50

SEE LUKE LETS BE OKAY, WITH IT. YOU HAVE FAITH IN YOUR FRIENDSHIP SO DONT LET MY COMMENT RATTLE IT. IF ANYONE SEES IT, THEN EVEN THEY WILL REALISE YOUR BOND. LET IT BE. TAKE IT IN A FUN WAY. Let's CREATE A TEENSY ATMOSPHERE HERE. WHY SO SEROUS, HAVE FUN. AND BY THE WAY, I KINDA SAW THAT YOU DOWNVOTED ME, IN FIT OF RAGE. ( I THINK SO) DONT GET OFFENDED. I LOVE EVERYBODY HERE.

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. .
February 24, 2021 15:54

a) This is the internet, its not a place to be lax... so maybe you could please take them down?
b) I didn't downvote you!

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Mira Caplan
February 24, 2021 14:52

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHH LOOK WHAT RADHIKA JUST SAID TO ME AFTER I SAID SHE COULD SAY SOMETHING BECAUSE SHE SAID SHE WANTED TO SAY SOMETHING

Ok, please don't troll me or get offended.
But I think in the future you both should date each other
Like sometimes I stalk your chats and I see his behavior to you is so sweet and gentle. I know I am just going too far. But sometimes I see sparks flying in your chats. Don't date now, but if you wanna date someone then I think you both should date each other. And see even Lukes's birthday and yours fall to each other. It's the fate signaling my dear.
*I am running away*

And I was just like

.....no.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGG

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February 24, 2021 15:13

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! Let's just laugh at it, Mira, there's no way anyone can judge our Bestieship over a colored screen. But seriously, comedy gold... AND THE OSCAR GOES TO... RADHIKA DIKSHA!!!!

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Mira Caplan
February 24, 2021 15:24

It is HILARIOUS.

XDDDDDD Like.... I died. And then got resurrected in time to conjugate French verbs. *Claps from the audience while laughing hysterically*

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February 24, 2021 15:25

LOL CONJUGATIONNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!! YoU rEaDy FoR a BoOk BaShHhH?/?/?/ Guess what I'm doing on my birhday!!!

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Mira Caplan
February 24, 2021 15:28

It's SO BORING AND HARD BUT NOW I GET TO PLAY PICTIONARY SO AHAHAHAHA. YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!! Having a competition to see who has the most book knowledge?????????????????????

We're wathcing The Force Awakens because VIJU HAS NEVER SEEN IT. AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH SHE DOESN'T UNDERSYAND KYLO REN AND REY!!! B-B-8!!! JEDI...STUFF.

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February 24, 2021 15:30

Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe nope!!! I'm going to that old bookstore that I told you about where I got my 1862 book and my 22 karat gold inlaid Moby Dick, and I'm buying 15+ books in total, some of them suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuper old and fancy (by that I mean all of them) and I'm not skipping school tho.... but the BOOKSTORE IS GOING TO BE SO DARN AMAZING

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February 24, 2021 15:28

OMG I FORGOT TO SHOW YOU THIS!!!!! I BEEN LISTENING TO IT SO DARN MUCH 1 MONTH AGO https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=M9cMMEaX6fQ

AND THIS https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IbUfOhEv1sc

AND THIS https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3VTkBuxU4yk

PLEAAAASE LISTEN TO ALL OF THEM THEY'RE SO GOOD ESPEECIALLY THE LAST TWO... THE MIDDLE ONE IS ELIZA FROM HAMILTON SINGING BTW

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Mira Caplan
February 24, 2021 15:29

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE I WILL

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February 24, 2021 15:30

COMPOOTER BESTIE PROMISE???

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Amaya Reddy
February 23, 2021 20:19

the picture of dorian gray!!!

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February 23, 2021 20:38

Yerpppppp

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Amaya Reddy
February 23, 2021 21:32

yes! im at 4!

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Mira Caplan
February 23, 2021 16:47

Did you hear what Jen said?

-_-

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February 23, 2021 16:49

What??

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Mira Caplan
February 23, 2021 16:51

Lukira

UUUUUUUUGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH

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Mira Caplan
February 23, 2021 16:52

And the people in class were laughing about it -_-

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February 23, 2021 16:58

UGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

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Mira Caplan
February 23, 2021 16:59

IKRRRRRRRRRRRR
YOU'RE MY BEST FRIENNNNNNNNN
Why does she have to make it weirdddddd like Dex and Sophie
Breathe in, breathe out.

LET'S TALK ABOUT BIRTHDAYS INSTEAD. MINE IS TOMORROW. TOMORROW. T.O.M.O.R.R.O.W.

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Hey Luke! Sorry you couldn't 'sign up' your name for my 100th Reedsy Cast Story, but when I let you know, would you check it out? Thank you!

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February 23, 2021 00:32

Ofc!!! OMG YOU'RE ALREADY AT 100???? CONGRATS!!!!!

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Haha, thank youuuuu! :)))))
Also, the 100th story is out!

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February 23, 2021 22:54

YAYYYYYYYYYYY

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Thank you!

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February 22, 2021 21:36

Ngl, I’m really, really stuck on your emoji puzzle XD

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February 23, 2021 00:32

Hahahahahahahahahaha I'll give you a hint: The author is one of the most famous one-hit-wonder novelists...

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Courtney C
February 23, 2021 00:51

The Picture of Dorian Gray???

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February 23, 2021 01:03

I was ABOUT to say that! It makes so much sense! One of the emojis being a picture and all.

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February 23, 2021 01:25

Yerp to both!!!

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February 23, 2021 01:25

Yep!!

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February 23, 2021 01:39

:DD

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Maya -
February 21, 2021 21:25

Hey Luke, can you add Bill Cipher to your memorial? He left permanently from all Reedsy things today. To sort out things in his life and figure out where he wants to go. :(: 💐

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Maya -
February 21, 2021 21:47

And Radhika. Apparently she left too? I only just saw that. So sad everyone is leaving. :(

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February 21, 2021 22:38

Wahhhhhhhhhhh welp I added them!!! I have a couple of things that I'd like to say to Radhika...

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Radhika Diksha
February 22, 2021 18:18

Hey, just you know we re-reading my stories and kinda stumbled in your chat. You can say anything you want. I have always thought of you as my dear friend and the best honest critic. So, blast out your thoughts and spill your thoughts. Actually, I was thinking of deleting my stories so came back for a few sec.

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February 22, 2021 18:23

Awwwwwwww well I was going to say that if you think that some of us are still great, its not fair to call the site no longer art but fake emotions. I mean, there are so many great, talented people on here, and you can center around those people like Rhonda, Zilla, the peeps that we know. However, the thing that happened with the Julian Race person was horrible and I feel that you could easily condemn the whole site. I won't try to make you stay because you have a right to leave, but just remember the good things. You have been a great friend :)

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Radhika Diksha
February 22, 2021 18:30

You have been a great friend too and I miss you a lot. It's about Julian's race at all. Keen to read your stories. I know you must have gotten hurt by my bio but Luke I am telling things after noticing a lot of it. Here some people were so keen on writing, but recently they have turned into mean girls parody. Just gaining sympathy, they are good to some people and behave badly to others. I have seen a lot of people like this recently. Instead of focusing on writing and friendship, they have been trying to prove others wrong. I kinda was tired of my outbursts too. I want to come back with a clean mind literally wiping them out of my memory.

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Maya -
February 22, 2021 01:01

Oh yeah, me too. And btw no offense but you spelled her last name wrong...

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February 22, 2021 12:07

Oh oops I was phone typing

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Radhika Diksha
February 21, 2021 11:37

2 new stories would love your feedback on it.

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February 21, 2021 12:21

Well I got this new one out and would love your feedback:) I’ll check em out sometime today!! 😝

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Heyooooo! I just saw on someone's bio that your birthdays on the 25th. Mines on the 23rd; Happy Early Birthday!

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February 20, 2021 19:25

Thanks!!! You tooooo!!!

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No problem and thank youu! 🥳🥳

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February 20, 2021 16:03

ViCtoRy Is OuRs!

Apparently it’s a challenge where you say it to someone and then have them pass it on? I got it from Amethyst who got it from Luna who got it from Sapphire who got it from Kate who got it from Jade who got it from Emerald.

Sorry, this is really random... XD

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February 20, 2021 16:37

IVE GOT THIS FIVE TIMESSSSSS

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February 20, 2021 17:32

WHOOPS! XD I JUST POSTED IT ON THE FIRST PERSON I CLICKED ON... XD SORRY!

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Amaya Reddy
February 20, 2021 01:33

the graveyard book? that's probably wrong but it's the only thing i can think of

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February 20, 2021 01:37

Yerp!!!

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Amaya Reddy
February 20, 2021 01:49

yesss im at three now!

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LUKE D::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::

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February 20, 2021 01:38

WUT

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Nainika D""""""""""""""""""""""""":

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Mira Caplan
February 19, 2021 20:32

New thread!

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February 19, 2021 21:56

Did you check out the Jane Mount idea?

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Mira Caplan
February 19, 2021 21:57

uh...no... I was writing Part 18. sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

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February 19, 2021 22:01

Fineeeeeeee well check it out now

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Mira Caplan
February 19, 2021 22:32

Just did. I don't really get it...

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Mira Caplan
February 19, 2021 22:32

Just did. I don't really get it...

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February 19, 2021 22:44

You draw the spines of fave books when they’re stacked

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February 19, 2021 19:31

your story was cool

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February 19, 2021 19:31

Thanks!!!

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