The Kilometer They Left Blank

Science Fiction

Written in response to: "Include a character with an enemy, rival, or nemesis in your story." as part of Two's a Crowd with Kirsiah Depp.

Marvin adjusted his glasses, the blue light of his tablet reflecting in the lenses. He sat in the center of the ruins, surrounded by data-mining equipment. Hunting for acoustic anomalies was his passion. This particular site was cataloged in the local archives as Blackwood Sink.

His theory, which he’d spent years developing, was that the Earth’s crust acted like a massive magnetic storage drive. He believed that significant historical events: battles, massacres, and sacrifices left behind “echoes” in the structure of the limestone.

He had designed a rig that used ultra-low frequency sensors to capture these echoes and convert them into readable data. He wasn’t looking for gold or stone tablets; he was trying to “download” the sensory memory of the past.

It was a rough, sunken patch of limestone about a kilometer from the Blackwood Forest entrance. A scar in the land that locals avoided. Geologists called it a collapsed cavern system while old maps annotated it with neat labels. The ancient folklore Marvin had scoffed at gave it a name no report would ever use: the Thin Place.

Nothing would grow there. A few dry lichens clung to the edge and then stopped. Young trees bent away like they were ashamed. The soil looked pale and dull, like old bone, and when Marvin pushed his gloved hand into it, the cold felt off. Not the usual stone chill but something like the absence of heat, as if the ground had been compared to something far colder. His breath came out in thin puffs that disappeared without a sound.

For centuries the woods had been blamed for disappearances, quick-tempered storms that came up without warning, and a melancholy that sank into the surrounding villages. Marvin was diligent, reading every clip in old parish registers and every drunken narrator's scribble in the county library. But to him, those stories were simply data points.

The void felt like a theory needing the right words, a perfect underground ruin with no tracks, pipes, or signs of modern work. For a man who loved mapping underground places and oddities, it was exactly the clean find he wanted. He believed he was uncovering history, not realizing he was picking at a scab that should have been left alone.

The first night, his survey lamp hummed sporadically like it was arguing with something. He recorded the anomaly in his usual clinical style, but his camera didn’t capture what he could feel in his ribs. That night, in the hut he had rented at the village edge, Marvin’s dreams were interrupted by a small, persistent sound, like someone trying to speak through a cracked wall and finding the words inaudible. In the morning the maps he'd drawn had a smear that hadn’t been there before, a hairline fracture traced in charcoal across the legend. He convinced himself it was a smudge from the wood stove.

The ground under his tape measure wouldn’t give a clear reading. Instead of the usual layers of topsoil, clay, and rock, there was a gap; a thin, shiny film that looked like oil but smelled like aged, dry paper. He dug in with a trowel and the blade pulled up a dust that made his teeth ache as the particles swirled in the lamp’s light. Marvin called it an oddity like others he’d seen, but this felt different. He told himself sleep would calm his worries and that tomorrow at the ruins he’d see things clearly.

He arrived early. Dawn was just breaking as he entered the cavern and set down his gear. And that’s when he heard it… a heavy thud echoed off the cracked stone walls. A figure emerged from the shadows. Chainmail glinted in the dim light. A heavy broad sword hung at his hip, and his steel visor was fixed in a permanent hollow stare. A knight - looking like he’d been ripped from a history textbook and dropped into the 21st century.

"Leave," the knight ordered, his voice a rasp of sandpaper dragged across granite, raw, relentless, and full of promise that the command would be enforced. "This place is not for the living."

Marvin, convinced this was some kind of prank, plugged a cable into his console. "I'm just running a scan here, dude. Historical preservation is my gig. You’re not real, anyway. Some elaborate projection, right?"

The knight’s hand tightened on the sword’s hilt. "You hold a tool of the void. That beam you call a light... it reveals what must remain hidden. Put it out. Now."

Marvin grabbed his heavy tactical flashlight, clicking it to high-beam. "You mean this? It’s just LED, buddy. Stop with the role-play routine, OK?" The knight stepped forward. His armor shifted, metal plates sliding like a hard, protective shell clicking into place. Where his neck should have been, translucent filaments pulsed behind the visor.

"I warned you," the creature hissed.

Marvin swung the beam upward. The light hit the knight’s breastplate. But instead of reflecting, the light was being absorbed into a swirling vortex of violet, orange, emerald green and pink, located where his heart should have been.

The knight dropped his sword. His helmet fell away, revealing not a face, but a pulsing, multi-faceted orb that hummed with an other-worldly frequency. Marvin broke out in a cold sweat. None of this made sense. It wasn’t possible. It wasn’t real.

"You signaled them.” The voice was louder now, not human, more like grinding gears.

Outside, the sky began to tear open. For an instant, Marvin stared at his useless flashlight, batteries now dead, realizing this wasn’t a prank. He didn't think. He reacted. Lunging toward the knight, he hurled the dead flashlight into the orb's center. It sparked as it passed through, followed instantly by the sound of crackling lightning. For a second, gravity wavered. The floor buckled beneath him. Marvin scrambled backward, boots skidding on loose dirt.

Panicking, he lunged through the ruins’ entrance as a foul smell rolled in behind him. He didn’t dare look back, but crossing from the void into normal air felt like hitting a solid wall. He sprinted for his truck, heart pounding so hard he feared collapse. The ground suddenly heaved with a heavy thud, then an eerie, complete silence that made him think he’d gone deaf.

Marvin didn't make it back to his hotel. He didn't even stop for gas. He drove until the dawn light completely took over the sky, knowing that while he had escaped the ruins, the "signal" he’d sent was still broadcasting. He wasn't just running from a monster; he was running from the realization that his eyes were now permanently adjusted to seeing the cracks in the universe. He looked in the rearview mirror and saw, for just a heartbeat in the reflection of his own eyes, the faint, violet flicker of the vortex.

At Blackwood Sink, Marvin’s equipment wasn’t just picking up geological shifts, it was recording the raw frequency of the entity—the knight—that had been stationed there to keep the portal closed. By hurling the flashlight, it amplified the signal. Marvin felt, for the first time, the real magnitude of his error. He wasn't just a witness anymore. He was now part of the map.

Sometimes at twilight, hikers say they hear a faint tapping coming from the depression, like a knuckle against window glass. The Thin Place still refuses to support growth and still gives off an eerie cold. When new maps of Blackwood Forest are made, cartographers leave that kilometer by the entrance blank, as if the only proper choice is to mark nothing at all.

Posted May 31, 2026
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