When Will We Ever Learn

Adventure Friendship American

Written in response to: "Write about two characters who meet and/or fall in love in a museum." as part of Fine Art.

When Will We Ever Learn?


“Careful. That whitewash may still be wet.”

“What are you talkin' 'bout? How would you know?”

“Helpin' paint picket fences is one of ma many talents. Used ta spend hours doin' it just fer fun.”

“Just fer fun? Sounds like work to me.”

“Then ya'll haven't ever met my good ol' pal Tom Sawyer. He'd talk ya inta it alright. But then agin, ya'll pretty little. Maybe ya couldn't handle the big ol' brush, anyways.”

“I'm plenty big enough to use a brush. Ya gots one on ya? I'll prove it to ya.”

“Na, they's got fancy maintenance people in uniforms ta do that kind o' stuff in this high-falutin' place. I'm free an' easy these days. What's ya name anyways. Wheres ya come from?”

“Scout. My name's 'Scout'. Maycomb. Maycomb, Alabamie, is wheres I come from.”

“Boy, ya'll a long way from home up here in Chicaga. How'd ya get here?”

“Don't rightly know. Just opened my eyes an' I'm a sittin' on that bench next ta that book. Thought I would look around tryin' ta figure wheres I at. Where's am I, anyways? Who are ya? Have ya seen my brother, Jem, or my friend, Dill?”

“This here's the American Writer's Museum in Chicaga, Illinoiz. It's a place where lots of famous or well known past writer's from all over the USA hang out to edicate and entertain folks. Name's 'Huck'. Iz comes from the south, too, along the Big Mississippi River. I popped out o' a book just like ya a whiles back.

“Come on. I'll show ya around a bit. It's a really grand place even if it's small. Iz even think I've seen your book here somewheres. Look up above. There's a rainbow of books up there. See one by Miss Harper? That's the same as the one on the bench. A visitor must o' left that behind. Haven't seen ya folks, tho.”

“They're always off on some adventure. They'll be sorry they missed this place.”

“Hey, Iz like adventure, too. Kinda known fer 'em. Stay close an I'll take ya on one now.

“Sos this here room with the picket fence around it is the kid's corner. See the giant oak tree with the little woodland critters curled up in the nooks and crannies o' the branches all a readin' some sort of book. 'Wizard o' Oz', Richard Scarry, 'Cat 'n the Hat' an' others. Big mural paintings on the walls like 'Charlotte's Web'. Bean-bag chairs and cozy couches fer little ones ta curl up in an' have books read ta 'em. An' some fun interactive adventures, too. Kid's can explore an' get lost in this corner.

“This long wall is filled with banner's showing picture's o' authors with some o' their famous words and when they lived. Here's the desk a Mr. Ray Bradbury used. On these tables are typewriters some o' them there authors actually worked with when they wrote their masterpieces. Ya can type some wisdom of your own and pin it on the wall or add ta the story o' the day. Guests create a line ta advance the story started out with a famous first line from a novel, short story, poem, screen play, song or news report. All forms o' written art are represented.

“With these buttons ya can find out what authors liked the same things ya'll like. Other interactive ideas tell ya the story behind the stories and a lot more. Look at that waterfall o' ever-changing words that are quoted from favorites.

“Here's a whole nation showing where writers come from. Ya'll's creator, Lee Harper, come from the same hometown as Truman Capote who wrote 'In Cold Blood'. Betcha never knew that! They even wrote something together once.”

“I never even knew I was created other than by Atticus, and, o' course, Ma who I don't remember.”

“Na, we's all what they call 'characters'. Some o' us are 'protagonists' and some are 'antagonists'. But we live our lives in their creations with conflicts and resolutions and 'character arcs' that prove we learned sumpin' or maybe we didn't learn nuthin'. I know Miss Watson tried to 'sivilize' me with all kinds o' learnin' an' I had ta get away from it all. Iz happiest just floatin' down the Mississippi with good ol' Jim. Boy, did we have some sketchy adventures!”

“Well, I don't know if I'm an agonist or what. Thought I was Baptist. Atticus tried ta teach me right from wrong but things sure got mixed up in my town. See that wall o' Negroes there? Says they was all real educated and wrote a lot o' wise things. But Atticus, ya see he's a lawyer, and a good one, he proved this black man in our town was a good man and never did the cruel thing he was accused o'. But the jury said he was guilty anyway. When poor Mista Robinson tried to escape they shot him dead.

“All along it was this mean ol' girl's daddy that did the mean things to her. Then that mean ol' man tried to hurt Jem an' me. Broke Jem's arm. But Boo came to our rescue. I was always afraid of Boo when I was littler but he turned out to be a good man after all. He just acted differently. Anyways. Hard to understand the justice when an innocent man is thrown in jail 'cause of the color of his skin.”

“Yeah, ma friend ol' Jim was a slave who just wanted ta get home ta his wife an' kids. We had an awful time sortin' that all out. Not right fer someone ta own another person but anyone wit' dark skin were thought o' more like animals in ma time.”

“My time was seventy years after slavery was done away with yet they was still treated poorly. Looks like what this man King says they was still suffering thirty years past my time and fightin' fer rights. When will we ever learn? When will we ever learn?”

“Ya know, Scout, ya'll real smart an' kinda cute even if ya dress like a boy in ya rolled-up bib overalls. But we needs ta get back inta our books 'fore folks come in. Think I can see ya agin tanight afta the place closes up?

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Posted Mar 18, 2024
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Jonathan Page
March 19, 2024 02:05

Hmmmm. Huck Finn meets To Kill a Mockingbird. Honorable mentions to Cat in the Hat, Wizard of Oz, and Charlotte's Web too! Hitting the nail on the head with some Capote-Harper lore! What a cool idea! Great work, Mary!

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 02:16

Makin' me blush here.🤗

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Ty Warmbrodt
March 19, 2024 00:06

Wow. What an imaginative take on the prompt with a moral message. The dialect was an added treat. Thank you for sharing that, Mary. Loved it.

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 01:36

Glad you loved it! Thanks.

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Isabel Jewell
April 08, 2024 16:10

“Na, we's all what they call 'characters'. Some o' us are 'protagonists' and some are 'antagonists'. But we live our lives in their creations with conflicts and resolutions and 'character arcs' that prove we learned sumpin' or maybe we didn't learn nuthin'” — I loved this part lol!! Wow this was a fun and interesting read! Love the style, the language and the creativity of it all!

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Mary Bendickson
April 08, 2024 16:51

Thank you😊
And thanks for liking 'Because He Lives '.

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Martin Ross
March 31, 2024 22:18

Mockingbird was the first adult novel I read, and a lifelong influence. I loved your homage to Lee and to Twain, who many younger Americans today misinterpret or misunderstand. And to the love of writing and reading and books. I hope this story excites others to read TKaM!

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D H
March 28, 2024 19:17

Mary with another banger. Such a great story and great way to end it. Good work!

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Mary Bendickson
March 28, 2024 22:48

☺️

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Claire Trbovic
March 25, 2024 19:09

Hawt dang that was a goodun, queen of dialogue, Mary! ♥️

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Mary Bendickson
March 26, 2024 04:38

Ah, shucks. Thank ya kindly.

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John Rutherford
March 25, 2024 09:52

Dialect is great Mary. It takes time, but this is very well done. Imaginative piece. Thanks for sharing.

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Mary Bendickson
March 25, 2024 13:38

Thank you.😊

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Stevie Burges
March 24, 2024 09:13

An interesting approach to the prompt. A good read.

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Mary Bendickson
March 24, 2024 18:09

Thank you.😊

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Daniel Rogers
March 24, 2024 01:55

Loved how Huck hoodwinked Scout into whitewashing. Great job

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Mary Bendickson
March 24, 2024 02:51

Loved how you loved it.

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Nancy Batty
March 23, 2024 15:30

Very clever approach to the assignment, Mary. Thanks.

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George Beasley
March 23, 2024 12:06

Beautiful story! Loved the content and the setting you put us in deep in the south.

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March 23, 2024 10:00

What a fantastic idea you had to write this. I can see your characters as if they walked straight out of their books. Sounded just like them too. So authentic. Wonderful. Fabulous. Very well done. Great moral message. What more can I say.

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Mary Bendickson
March 23, 2024 22:18

Well, than you kindly.

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Annie Hewitt
March 23, 2024 09:38

Great job, Mary! Scout is one of my favorites so this was very fun to read.

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Mary Bendickson
March 23, 2024 22:17

Glad you liked it and thanks for following.

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Kristi Gott
March 23, 2024 07:38

Enjoyed all the clever references and dialogue. Very original approach to the story prompt and I enjoyed reading this. Well done!

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Aeris Walker
March 22, 2024 11:23

Definitely a creative take on the museum prompt! What a cool idea. I’ve read Huck Finn recently and thought Huck’s dialogue was spot on, but it’s been a long time since I’ve read TKAMB. I wonder if it might make the speaker slightly more clear if Scout’s “my’s” were not also spelled “ma” like Huck. Their speech is very similar is some ways and that might help keep it distinct without dialogue tags.
Great job working in important civil rights conversation. Overall, this is a really awesome story :)

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Mary Bendickson
March 22, 2024 14:32

Thank you. Been a long time reading those myself. Maybe could have done more research. May have time yet.

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Aeris Walker
March 22, 2024 14:37

💕

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Harry Stuart
March 21, 2024 16:58

The past and present struggles intersect by way of Huck and Scout - such an ingenious way to use the prompt and bring back to life two memorable characters. You are spot on with the southern twang and dialogue. I thoroughly enjoyed this one, Mary! Oh, and thanks again for all your supportive feedback. I am appreciative!

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Mary Bendickson
March 21, 2024 18:35

And thanks for yours, too.

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Philip Ebuluofor
March 20, 2024 15:33

What captured me was the man who knew no English like me. I like those who speak that way.

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Mary Bendickson
March 20, 2024 18:52

Thanks for gettin' it.😉

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Irene Duchess
March 20, 2024 02:01

Wunnerful story, Mary. Luved the idea an' the dialogue. :)

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Mary Bendickson
March 20, 2024 05:52

♥️ you ♥️ ed it.

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J. I. MumfoRD
March 19, 2024 22:30

Wow, that was neat. Got most of the references.

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 23:10

Glad you did.

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Viga Boland
March 19, 2024 19:29

Too darn clever for words Mary! Time you won one of Reedsy’s contests!

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 23:06

Wouldn't that be sumpin!

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Viga Boland
March 19, 2024 23:18

Well you’ve been shortlisted once already so why not? And Congrats on your Nashville success. That’s where my singer/songwriter/performer daughter lives!

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 23:31

Small world. Still workin' on getting my book out. Gotta give it more attention.

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Sophie Trevelean
March 19, 2024 18:40

I love this Mary. Wonderful imagining of Scout and Huck and leaves you with lots of themes to think about. Amazing dialect. I loved that you mentioned King as I feel he seems lost in our current society.

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 19:19

thanks for reading and the nice comments.

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March 19, 2024 12:47

Wow! There's not much I can say other than what others have said, so I'll just give up with that and be Echo:
Creative
One of your best
Great work
Impress[ing]
Amazing

Apologies...
All I can add after that is, I love it. 🤍 (But you're probably used to that)

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 14:09

I 💕 that you ❤️it.

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Rebecca Lewis
March 19, 2024 08:14

Wow, your intertwining of Scout and Huck's narratives from classic American literature makes you think. The themes of justice, race, and societal norms they explore are so relevant, showing how these issues persist across different times in history. It's incredible how their experiences highlight the ongoing struggle for equality and understanding. The conversation captures the essence of these timeless stories and makes you reflect on the lessons we still need to learn as a society.

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 14:08

Spot on 😁.Thanks

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Martha Kowalski
March 19, 2024 03:44

I'm so impressed by dialect, it adds so much, and such a creative approach to the prompt - very much liked it!

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 05:09

Glad you liked it☺️ and thanks for following.

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Trudy Jas
March 19, 2024 01:40

Hoo'd have thunk!

Fun piece,

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Mary Bendickson
March 19, 2024 02:00

Glad you thunk it! 😁

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