Saturday

Coming of Age Friendship Teens & Young Adult

Written in response to: "Two or more of your characters strike up an unlikely friendship. What happens next?" as part of Two's a Crowd with Kirsiah Depp.

First Saturday

I don't want to be here.

I park at the curb and stare at the slip of paper my guidance counselor gave me. One stupid decision. One spray-painted wall behind the gym. Twenty hours of community service. The edges of the paper are already soft from being folded and unfolded too many times. Community Service Hours: 20 Remaining. Apparently the school had some partnership program with elderly residents who needed help. Maggie was my assignment—I got to choose between this or picking up trash on the highway. Twenty hours of my life, spread across seven Saturdays I could've spent sleeping in or doing literally anything else.

The workshop sits behind the house, larger than I expected. Weathered gray siding catches the morning light. A gutter sags on one side like a tired shoulder. A faded birdhouse hangs from the corner, its paint peeling in long strips.

The backyard is quiet. No kids playing. No dog barking. No signs of life except an old woman waiting on the back porch with her arms crossed, watching me like she's been standing there for hours.

I check my phone. 9:02. I was supposed to be here at nine.

I get out of the car.

Before I can introduce myself, before I can offer the apology I've been rehearsing, the old woman speaks.

"You're late."

Two minutes. I'm two minutes late.

"Sorry, I—"

"Follow me."

She doesn't wait to see if I'm following. Just turns and walks toward the workshop, her steps careful on the uneven grass. I hurry after her, the community service slip crumpling in my pocket.

She opens the workshop door and the smell hits me first. Sawdust. Old wood. Machine oil. Dust everywhere.

Everything looks untouched. Tools hang on pegboards, their outlines traced in marker. A table saw sits in the corner, its blade clean. Shelves line every wall, packed with boxes and jars and things I can't identify from the doorway. It's like someone walked out one afternoon expecting to return tomorrow and never did.

"I'm Maggie," the old woman says. She doesn't offer her hand.

"Noah."

"I know." She picks up a cardboard box from a workbench and sets it on a cleared space near the door. "Start there."

I look inside. Loose screws mixed with nails. Hinges tangled together. Scraps of wood no bigger than my palm. Receipts from hardware stores, the ink faded to ghosts. Nothing useful. Nothing organized.

"What do you want me to do with it?"

"Sort it."

"Into what?"

Maggie looks at me like I've asked the stupidest question she's ever heard. "Into things that go together."

She leaves me there.

I spend the first hour separating screws from nails, my fingers going numb from the repetitive motion. The workshop is cold despite the spring sunshine outside. I can hear Maggie moving around somewhere behind me, opening drawers, closing them. Not speaking.

After the second hour, my back aches from hunching over the box. I've found three different types of screws, two types of nails, hinges that might be brass or might just be dirty, and a receipt from 2003 for sandpaper.

"Why don't you just throw some of this away?"

The words are out before I can stop them.

The sounds behind me stop. Complete silence, like the workshop itself is holding its breath.

Maggie appears beside me. She doesn't look angry. Just still. Frozen in a way that makes my stomach drop.

"Because it isn't garbage."

Her voice is quiet. Careful. Like she's explaining something to a child who should already know better.

I look down at the box. I want to apologize but don't know how. I go back to sorting, my mind replaying the conversation.

The workshop feels smaller now. Heavier. Like the air itself is pressing down on me.

I don't try to talk to Maggie again.

She walks away. I don't see her again until my phone alarm goes off at noon, signaling the end of my first three hours. She appears in the doorway to sign my community service form, her signature quick and illegible.

"Next Saturday," she says. "Nine o'clock."

"I'll be here."

"On time."

I nod and leave, the workshop smell clinging to my clothes all the way home.

Second Saturday

I almost don't come back.

I sit in my car Saturday morning, engine running, thinking about how easy it would be to just drive away. But if I miss a day, I have to make it up. Better to just get it over with.

I arrive at 8:58.

Maggie is already in the workshop. She doesn't mention last week. Neither do I.

"Shelves today," she says, pointing to a wall unit packed with jars and cans and boxes. "Everything needs to come down, get wiped off, go back up."

It's mindless work. Exactly what I need.

But as I work, I start to notice something. Every object Maggie picks up comes with a story. Not long stories. Just fragments.

"Frank made this." A wooden box with dovetail joints.

"Frank fixed this." A lamp with a new cord.

"Frank used this." A hand plane, its blade still sharp.

Frank. Everything is Frank.

I find a rhythm. Take something down. Wipe away the dust. Listen to Maggie's quiet commentary. Put it back. The workshop slowly reveals itself as less of a storage space and more of a museum. Every shelf is a gallery. Every object is an exhibit.

Around eleven, I find a birdhouse on a high shelf. The same one that hangs outside, or maybe a brother to it. One side hangs loose where a nail has come out. Without thinking, I grab a hammer and a nail from the sorted box—my box from last week—and fix it.

Three taps. The side holds firm.

"You know how to do that?"

I turn. Maggie is watching me, something different in her expression. Not quite approval. More like recognition.

"My grandfather taught me." The words surprise me. I haven't thought about my grandfather in months. "Basic stuff."

Maggie looks at the repair. For a long moment, she doesn't say anything.

"Frank was supposed to fix that," she finally says.

I realize what she means. I just did work that Frank didn't get to finish. I open my mouth to apologize, but before I can speak, she takes the birdhouse from my hands and puts it back on the shelf herself.

She doesn't say anything else.

Third Saturday

There's lemonade waiting when I arrive. Two glasses on the workbench, condensation already forming on the outside. Neither of us acknowledges it, but I drink mine and it tastes like summer.

Maggie moves more slowly today. She keeps rubbing her left knee, her face tight when she thinks I'm not looking. When I offer to carry a heavy box, she refuses. When I do it anyway, she doesn't argue.

We work in silence for a while before Maggie speaks.

"What'd you do?" she asks. "To get the community service."

"Spray-painted a wall," I say. "Behind the gym."

"Worth it?"

"No."

Maggie nods, satisfied. "Good. Means you learned something."

I learned that old people are hoarders, I think. But I keep it to myself.

We're cleaning the shelves on the far wall when I find the photographs. A shoebox full of them, the cardboard soft with age. I almost put it back, but Maggie sees me hesitate.

"You can look."

So I do.

Frank holding up a chair, grinning at the camera. Frank standing beside a canoe, one hand on its smooth hull. Frank laughing at something off-camera, his eyes crinkled. Frank younger, his hair dark. Frank older, his hair white. Frank everywhere, in every corner of this workshop, in every photograph, in every story Maggie tells.

"What did he build?" I ask.

Maggie's answer lasts half an hour.

She tells me about the dining table that seats twelve, made from a tree that fell in their backyard during a storm. About the bookshelf that wraps around their living room, each shelf perfectly level. About the toy chest for their grandson, with a lid that won't slam on small fingers. About the canoe they took to the lake every summer, its wood glowing golden in the sunset.

While she talks, I remember my grandfather's workshop. The smell of fresh-cut pine. How he taught me to sand with the grain. My grandfather died three years ago. I haven't touched wood since.

Until now, I hadn't realized I'd been avoiding that loss.

I realize now why this workshop matters—it's about work left unfinished. Skills meant to be passed on but stopped mid-motion. My grandfather's hands are gone. Frank's hands are gone. But somehow, they're still in mine.

"No," I finally say. "He died before we could start."

Maggie nods. She understands. She's been living with an unfinished project of her own.

We go back to work, but something has shifted. The workshop stops feeling like a prison sentence. It feels like a place where two different losses can exist in the same room and somehow that makes both of them a little less lonely.

Fourth Saturday

The fourth Saturday, we reach the back wall.

There's a workbench there, covered in tools. Chisels and rasps and files, all arranged with the same careful precision as everything else in the workshop. I start to clean them, one by one, wiping away dust and checking for rust.

That's when I see it.

Underneath the workbench, covered by a canvas tarp, sits a rocking chair. Half-finished. One arm attached, smooth and curved. One missing, the dowel holes empty and waiting. The seat is rough, not yet sanded. The rockers are uneven, one shorter than the other.

"What's this?"

Maggie doesn't answer right away. She comes over slowly, her hand finding the workbench for support. She looks at the chair like it's a ghost.

"He was working on it before the hospital."

That's all she says. That's all she needs to say.

I crouch down, running my hand over the attached arm. The wood is beautiful.

Something catches my eye. A piece of paper, folded and tucked beneath the seat. Not hidden. Just placed there, the way you'd leave yourself a note.

I pull it out carefully. The paper is yellowed, the creases deep. I unfold it.

Frank's handwriting. Blocky and certain.

Finish sanding seat. Check rocker lengths. Attach second arm. Done by Saturday.

That's all it says. A to-do list. A plan. The kind of note a man leaves himself because he expects to come back.

Except it didn't wait. And Frank didn't come back.

I look up at Maggie. She's staring at the note in my hand, and for the first time since I met her, she's crying. Tears, quiet and steady, running down her face.

"He thought he had more time," she whispers. "He always thought he had more time."

I don't know what to say. There's nothing to say. So I just stand there, holding the note, watching this old woman cry for her husband who expected another Saturday.

After a long moment, Maggie wipes her eyes with the back of her hand. She takes a shaky breath.

"We should finish it," I say.

Maggie looks at me.

"The chair. We should finish it. I don't—I'm not as good as Frank was. Or my grandfather. But I know enough. We could do it together."

Maggie stares at the rocking chair. At the empty dowel holes. At the rough seat. At all the work left undone.

"Yes," she says finally. "Yes, we should."

Fifth Saturday

The rocking chair sits on the workbench, positioned in the best light.

"He kept plans," Maggie says. "For everything he built."

She opens a drawer and pulls out a folder labeled Rocking Chair in Frank's blocky handwriting. The sketch inside shows careful measurements, notes in the margins, a side view and a front view. Cherry wood. Curved arms. Smooth rockers.

"He drew this?" I ask.

"Always." Maggie traces one line with her finger. "He said if you don't plan it right, you waste good wood."

I can see where Frank was in the process—the seat roughed out but not finished, one arm attached, the rockers cut but not evened. The note makes sense now. Finish sanding seat. Check rocker lengths. Attach second arm.

"We should start with the seat," I say. "Get it smooth first."

Maggie nods. She hands me sandpaper—fine grit, the kind that takes patience—and I begin. The wood is rough under my hands, but I can feel the shape Frank intended. Smooth. Comfortable. Made to last.

Maggie works beside me, checking the rockers with a level, measuring them against each other. We don't talk much. We don't need to.

The workshop fills with the soft sound of sanding, the whisper of paper against wood. Outside, the afternoon light shifts. Inside, we're continuing work that stopped too soon.

Sixth Saturday

The second arm doesn't want to fit.

I've measured three times. The dowel holes are right. The angle matches Frank's sketch. But when I try to slide the dowels into place, something's off. A fraction of an inch, maybe less, but enough to matter.

"Try sanding the dowels," Maggie says. She's watching from her stool, her knee propped up. "Frank always said wood swells. Especially in spring."

I sand carefully, testing the fit every few passes. Slowly, the arm begins to slide into place.

"He planned this chair for our granddaughter," Maggie says quietly. "She was pregnant. He wanted it ready before the baby came."

I pause, the arm halfway attached.

"He collapsed in the hospital two weeks before she was due. Never came home."

"You're doing it right," Maggie says after a moment. "The way he would've done it."

The arm holds. Solid. Secure. The chair looks almost complete now—both arms attached, the seat smooth, the rockers even. Just needs final sanding and finish.

"One more Saturday," I say.

Maggie nods. "One more."

We both look at the chair, nearly whole. Nearly finished. Nearly the thing Frank imagined it could be.

Almost there.

Seventh Saturday

I arrive at 8:55 on my last required Saturday. The community service paperwork is in my pocket, ready to be signed. Twenty hours across seven Saturdays, completed. I'm free.

The rocking chair sits near the workshop window, catching the morning light. Finished. Smooth. Solid. Both arms attached. The seat sanded until it glows. The rockers even and true. Over the last three Saturdays, we checked Frank's measurements, followed his plan, and slowly brought the chair to completion.

It's not perfect. There's a spot where my chisel slipped. A place on the seat where the grain didn't quite match. But it's done. It's real. It exists in a way it didn't before.

Maggie is waiting on the porch. She has the paperwork ready, a pen in her hand.

"All finished," she says, signing her name.

I take the paper and I start walking down the driveway. Get halfway to my car and I stop.

I turn around. Maggie is standing in the workshop doorway, one hand on the frame, watching me go.

"Same time next Saturday?"

Maggie folds her arms across her chest. She's trying very hard not to smile, but I can see it anyway, pulling at the corners of her mouth.

"Try not to be late."

I laugh. It's the first time I've laughed in this driveway, in this backyard, in this place that felt so foreign six weeks ago. It sounds right. It sounds like belonging.

"I won't be."

I get in my car and drive away, thinking about next Saturday. About what we'll build next. About how sometimes what you're forced to do becomes what you choose to keep doing. The workshop will be waiting. I'll be there.

On time.

Posted Jun 06, 2026
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