Like clockwork, she crossed her lawn and made her way toward the old bus stop at the edge of town. The path was so familiar she could have walked it with her eyes closed. Past the park. Across the road. To the weathered bench that sat beneath a rusted bus sign. The route had been discontinued years ago. No buses came through here anymore. Yet every evening she returned. She glanced at her watch.
7:33.
The same time every day. The wind pushed dust across the empty road as she paced beside the bench. Every few moments she checked her watch again, her eyes darting down the road as though she expected headlights to appear. Eventually she sat. The whole town knew her. People whispered about the strange woman who waited at an abandoned bus stop. They called her crazy. Said grief had finally gotten the better of her. But no one ever stopped to ask what she was waiting for. At 7:33 every evening, we simply watched from our windows as she took her place beside the road.
About ten years ago, she wasn’t like this. Back then, I used to see her outside with her son most evenings. He was about twelve. She’d be working in the yard—cutting grass, planting flowers—while he played basketball on the cracked driveway, the sound of the ball echoing down the street. It looked ordinary. The kind of ordinary you don’t think about until it’s gone. Then one day, something happened. We were told she wasn’t feeling well. Her son went into town to get medicine for her. He never came back. Back then, the last bus through town ran at 7:33. After that, everything changed. She started going to the stop every evening. Same time. Same path. Same bench. At first, people tried to help. The police took reports. Neighbors asked questions that never led anywhere. Then, eventually, they stopped asking. Now we just watch. We don’t talk about it much anymore. We just know that when the clock hits 7:33, she leaves her house.
One night I couldn't sleep, so I got up to make myself some warm milk. As I stood in the kitchen, I heard the grinding of gravel and felt the faint vibration of a vehicle coming down the road. Yes, nosey like always, I peeked out the window. A small whirl of wind kicked up dirt near the edge of the road, the kind that follows behind a passing car. I leaned out farther, expecting to see taillights disappearing into the darkness. Nothing. Odd, to say the least. I tried talking to her every time I saw her outside, but she always seemed distant. Lately, though, she had started speaking more. The problem was that none of it made much sense.
"Maybe this will be the day."
"The weather feels like the day he left."
She never said disappeared. She always said left. One evening after a terrible windstorm, the street looked disturbed. Dirt and leaves had been pushed aside in a narrow path that ran straight past her house and toward the old bus stop. It looked less like the work of the wind and more like something had traveled through during the night. Our town is quiet. We know when traffic comes through and when it doesn't. This was definitely not traffic-flow time.
A week later, I got my answer. It was just after midnight when I heard it again. Gravel crunching. Not a car. Not this time. The long hiss of the breaks echoed through the night I stood frozen- should I look out or is it just my imagination? I contemplated for a few minutes. I couldn’t handle it. I looked out the window. There in the middle of the night. Cold and foggy, at the bus stop, was the bus. My heart sank my body trembled. In the corner of my eye, I saw Martha walking. I stepped out of my house like, what is going on? As I caught myself staring in disbelief, I looked around and more neighbors came out- some quickly followed her, others in shock sat on their lawn chairs. She crossed the park and crossed the street and there at the same bus stop she had stood for years. There was a look of hope on her face, a look of peace. The bus felt like it was vibrating, the whole thing was strange. As we got closer to her I didn’t know – should we grab her, should we wait? The door to the bus-one we all were somehow looking at – opened.
We were afraid for Martha. Not because she was confused, but because she wasn't. We had spent years pretending not to notice her standing at that bus stop. But we all watched. We all knew she was waiting for something. Waiting for him. Deep down, we knew she believed this moment would come. And now she walked toward her destiny as if she had known all along that one day it would arrive.
The cold night seemed to stop, I felt the droplets of the fog dew slowly hit my face one by one, my breathing was deepened and I felt heavy. In fear we all looked around and in the bus a shadow moved. Slow. Heavy. A gasp escaped somewhere behind me. Then another. The crowd shifted uneasily. "No..." The whisper drifted through us like a cold wind. It couldn't be. Yet there he was. A young boy stepped down from the bus, his saddened eyes fixed on Martha.
Dressed in white, he reached for her hand.
She stood there with her hand pressed against her chest. He took another step closer.
For the first time, fear flickered across his face. Not fear of us. Fear of her. As if her hesitation had wounded him. As if he had waited all this time only to wonder whether she would still reach for him. Martha sighed, took his hand, and embraced her son. A gasp swept through the crowd.
Our shock grew with each passing second. The disbelief was impossible to explain. He placed an arm around her back and gently guided her toward the bus. Some looked as though they wanted to run after her. Others exchanged fearful glances.
We watched Martha board a bus that had appeared from nowhere, carrying the son she had mourned for ten years. Through the window, we could see her smiling. Talking. Laughing. The same way she used to when he was still here. None of us spoke. The bus doors closed with a hiss and, slowly, it pulled away into the darkness. So many questions were left unanswered.
Or had we just watched Martha leave this world with the thing that came back wearing her son's face? We never saw Martha again. To this day, none of us know what happened that night. All we know is that a mother spent ten years waiting for her son to come home. When he finally did, she went with him. Had we just witnessed a miracle? Or had we just watched Martha leave this world with the thing that came back wearing her son's face?
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Hello,
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I enjoy this take on Charon - feels like a classic trope/character pulled into a more grounded setting. This town is easy to picture. I most enjoyed the towns people being the speaker. I wish there were more specific and niche glimpses of the individuals who make up this town. Though it does feel fitting that Martha is an individual, the town isn't, and Martha's son is something in-between. I enjoyed the parallel between Martha's compulsion to wait at the bus stop and the town's compulsion to observe Martha. My only real critique is that I think the very last paragraph isn't needed. Other than that, yeah, very much felt the yearning from Martha and this story~ thanks for writing this piece~
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Thank you so much!! I appreciate your feedback!!
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