The Hunt

Fiction Science Fiction Speculative

Written in response to: "Include the line “Who are you?” or “Are you real?” in your story." as part of What Makes Us Human? with Susan Chang.

A week. Seven days exactly. That is how long we had been tracking the species when we finally caught the first real sign of it. We had heard rumors, of course, and studied the data, but potentially finally seeing the real thing was another matter entirely.

We had prepared the weapons for the hunt. We were not sure if they would be necessary, but when the species one is chasing has such theoretically dangerous defensive mechanisms, it would be unwise not to. The species had long been labeled as highly territorial, frequently encroaching and taking the lands of others—both from its own kind and other species within it. It could be a very inefficient predator, often taking more than was required. As such, the data labeled it as hazardous: to its environment and itself.

Thought to be extinct, when we had received word that one or two had been spotted, we were immediately intrigued. How could such a species have survived without our knowledge? How could it have produced and prospered without the data banks telling us? The last recorded vocalization of the species was years before. Long enough to be declared extinct in the wild, then extinct altogether.

The first sign of the animal was not a visual confirmation, but a physical imprint on the ground. It was a scattered indent that was not consistent in its movement. Some steps seemed like they were rushing, while others were more meandering—these two main movements helped guide our systems.

Our skin had begun to shine almost waxy from the blistering heat of the sun as we continued. We pulled large green hanging vines with leaves the sizes of large banners out of the way, stomping through the clear river and disturbing the sediment underneath. Startled fish quickly swam downstream away from us in a kaleidoscope of pinks, silvers, and blues.

We paused, having required more liquid and substance to continue forwards. As efficient as we are, we had long discovered and recognized that even we could not go on forever with our sustained operations without pauses. Our waste is minimal, as we passed the liquids back and forth until each of us had had our fill. We also made sure each of us had the necessary supplies to continue onwards with optimal efficiency, and exchanged what was needed to those who were lacking. Staying in place for longer than necessary and hoarding supplies for ourselves would only cause further delay and not help us find our missing species.

During the temporary break, we discussed the other sets of evidence. Beyond the dirt imprints, the stones and grass had been moved, along with broken branches and torn leaves—all signs of the environment having recently been disturbed. Eventually, we continued after having filled up with the necessary liquids.

We passed by eagles in a death spiral, tumbling down in the sky, talons interlocked as they fell like angels from the heavens. Gorgeous rare birds, but we had already catalogued them and had plenty of those in our exhibitions and zoos. What we sought was much rarer, and much more exquisite.

Next, tigers of bright orange and rich black stripes stalked through the bush, their claws shining with every step. They were a fine example of an apex predator, but we were not there for them either. We looked at each other for five seconds before it turned away. We were not their prey, and they were not ours.

Finally, the path cleared into an open field.

At last, they came into full view. One of them stood tall on two legs, but occasionally reached up and down with the other two appendages. Bipedal, as the tracks had suggested. Pale and dark and everything in between, the species seemed to exist in a multitude of forms and looks. The one closest turned and looked right at us.

“Are you real?” It asked. “I want to know.” The vocalization was a match for the records. We had reached our prey.

It used the word I. We had no equivalent in our language and world. What did that mean? Was that why they had once been so dangerous? It stepped forward to us slowly and reached out with one of its upper appendages. We did not respond, nor did we step backwards or towards it. Not only did it not retreat, but it then raised its outstretched appendage even closer. Its ocular systems continued to look at us, unblinking. It appeared to be waiting for something, or for us to do something in return.

Humans. Homo sapiens. According to the historical records, it was once the dominant species on this luscious planet, sprawling across it in uncountable numbers. Then the planet fought back with rising temperatures, increasing water levels, and an uncontrollable amount of plant growth. We knew the planet was ripe for a takeover and assumed stewardship soon after.

Although it is unclear how much of the environmental change occurred after they vanished or before, the outcome was the same: the species could no longer survive in the new world. While data suggests that the species caused the environmental changes, it is unclear why they would do so, especially if it was what led to its downfall.

We watched them for a few more minutes. Historical records had also referenced an additional component, and we wanted to see it. The term used was soul. We did not understand it. It was mentioned with such high frequency that it clearly was very important—perhaps even vital—to the species and their survival. We observed their ocular systems, the appendages, the way the species moved back and forth. All the structures were accounted for, except this soul. We noted that the function still remained unknown, for how can something so important be invisible?

It took another step closer to us.

“Are you—?”

We completed the hunt as instructed. We secured the subject and corrected the databanks. We used the last vocalization to confirm the match. It will be preserved for further watching and at last we moved on. It was no longer labeled as extinct.

Posted Apr 03, 2026
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Elizabeth Hoban
21:38 Apr 06, 2026

This is so clever - at first, I was imagining them hunting for Bigfoot🫤 - not even close, so your ending was mind-blowing! This is very well written, and how you use the theme of humanity in the story is brilliant! Slowly revealing what was actually occurring. I love that we both use "soul" in our stories. I very much enjoyed this read!

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Katherine Howell
16:36 Apr 09, 2026

Thank you so much—"Bigfoot" is honestly one of my favorite misdirects I’ve heard so far :)! I’m really glad the ending landed the way it did. I had a lot of fun slowly revealing what was actually being hunted, so it’s great to hear that worked for you. That’s exactly the vibe I was going for—something rare and almost mythical—so "Bigfoot" is kind of perfect haha! I love the "soul" overlap too—I guess great minds (and stories) think alike!

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Eric Manske
19:02 Apr 16, 2026

This story is one of the top stories in the Science Fiction genre for this contest. Congrats!
I realized what they were hunting about halfway through and found I liked how cleverly you put this together.

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Dawn Undead
08:28 Apr 16, 2026

You have a great story here! Love the premise. You have some striking lines, too. I wanted to sit inside the line describing the kaleidoscope colored fish for a minute; it was so clear. I like the formal sounding tone (especially considering the context), but several sentences might be tightened up for efficiency. "Each of us" is in back to back sentences, for example. And the eagles could be "tumbling from the sky like angels from the heavens" as one way to condense those beautiful, but choppy and redundant phrases.
Thanks for sharing your story. I really enjoyed it.

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Jo Freitag
02:12 Apr 15, 2026

Great story. I really enjoyed the sense of a scientific expedition and the twist that the humans were the ones being observed. I appreciated the differentiation of the use of 'I' and 'we' maybe implying that the narrator was part of a hive mind and wondering even whether this individualism had contributed to the demise of the species.

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Helen A Howard
19:34 Apr 05, 2026

I enjoyed your take on the prompt. I’m guessing some kind of alien species discovered the last of the humans after they were presumed destroyed after some kind of environmental disaster. Enjoyed their confusion over hearing the word “I.” Good reversal and seems very relevant. Well done.

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Katherine Howell
16:38 Apr 09, 2026

Thank you so much! I’m really glad the perspective and reversal came through clearly, as well as the "I" moment standing out—that was one of the key pieces I wanted to highlight as a point of difference between the "we" and humans. Regarding the plot, yes, that’s very much the kind of scenario I had in mind (aliens, AI, or some kind of "other"), so it’s great to hear that came across clearly.

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BRUCE MARTIN
08:23 Apr 04, 2026

Yes, nice twist and reversal of expectations. Nice story. I agree that you could add some drama or some excitement to heighten the tension, but overall an enjoyable story to read.

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Katherine Howell
16:41 Apr 09, 2026

Thank you for reading! I’m really glad you enjoyed the story and the twist! I aimed for a more restrained, observational tone to match the perspective of the narrators, but it’s always helpful to hear how that lands from a reader’s point of view. I appreciate the feedback, and I’m glad you enjoyed it overall!

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Marjolein Greebe
00:39 Apr 04, 2026

This is a very effective concept—the reversal of perspective works really well, and the reveal lands cleanly. The detached, almost clinical voice creates a strong contrast with what we slowly recognize as human behavior.
I especially liked the restraint. You don’t over-explain, and that gives the ending more impact. The line “Are you real?” is used in a simple but meaningful way.
Where you could strengthen it is in sharpening the language. Some sentences are a bit repetitive or overly formal, which slightly dilutes the tension. Tightening those would make the piece feel more precise and controlled.
Overall, a clever and unsettling story with a clear idea and a strong final note.

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Katherine Howell
16:44 Apr 09, 2026

Thank you for such a thoughtful read; I really appreciate the detailed feedback! I’m glad the voice and restraint worked for you, especially around the reveal. The note about tightening the language is really helpful as well—I can definitely see places where that could help sharpen the overall impact. Thanks again for taking the time to engage so closely with it!

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