Blackout

Mystery Science Fiction Suspense

Written in response to: "Center your story around a character who has (or is given) the ability to time travel." as part of In Real Time.

Caleb Rourke pulled into his driveway at 10:47 p.m., killed the engine, and sat behind the wheel for a moment enjoying the fact that nobody needed anything from him. It had been that kind of Friday. Three residential lockouts, a broken key buried to the shoulder inside a deadbolt, an apartment manager who needed cylinders changed after an eviction, and a woman who had somehow managed to lock herself out of a running Nissan with her purse, phone, and six-month-old daughter still inside. Caleb had gotten that one open in less than a minute. The woman had cried for twenty. He’d stayed with her until she stopped.

Seventeen years as a locksmith had taught Caleb that nobody called him because they were having a particularly good day. They called him angry, drunk, occasionally half-naked, and almost always eager to explain why what had happened wasn’t actually their fault. Caleb had stopped caring about fault somewhere around year three. Locks didn’t give a shit who was to blame.

He grabbed his tool bag from the passenger seat and went inside. His boots came off beside the front door, followed by his belt, which he draped over the back of a kitchen chair on his way to the refrigerator. Caleb grabbed a beer, twisted off the cap, and drank deeply enough that the bottle was half gone when he paused to breathe. He stood there for a minute, the house completely quiet, with the fridge door still open, letting the cold air roll across his legs.

Caleb lived alone and generally preferred it that way. After spending most of his day meeting people at some variation of their worst moments, solitude became a luxury. He closed the fridge door and carried the beer into the living room, lowering himself into the recliner with a grunt he would have denied making had anyone been around to hear it. His knees had recently started notifying him that nearly two decades of kneeling in front of doorknobs was probably enough. 

He found the remote between the cushions and turned on the television. A commercial was playing for a medication Caleb had never heard of, accompanied by footage of attractive old people kayaking while a cheerful voice explained that taking it could cause organ failure, internal bleeding, stroke, sudden psychosis, and death.

“Hard pass.”

Caleb took another drink and changed the channel. When the screen went black, he thought he’d hit the wrong button. Then the lamp beside him went out, the refrigerator stopped humming in the kitchen, and the ceiling fan overhead began slowing until the individual blades separated from the blur.

“Well, shit.”

He waited, hoping the power would come back on. It didn’t.

Caleb pulled out his phone. Full service. He checked for an outage notification and found nothing. He sighed as he rose from his chair and walked to the utility room. His phone’s flashlight cast a white circle across the breaker panel as he opened it. Nothing had tripped. Caleb ran his finger down the switches anyway, more out of obligation than expectation, then closed the panel and headed back to the living room.

His phone rang halfway there. Caleb looked at the screen. The number wasn’t saved.

The phone rang again.

Caleb sighed and answered. “Rourke Locksmith.”

“Oh, thank God.”

The relief in the man’s voice told Caleb everything he needed to know.

“What’d you lock yourself out of?”

“My house.”

The voice was older and had the faint rasp of someone who had either smoked for a long time or spent enough time yelling over machinery to accomplish roughly the same thing.

“Where are you?”

The man gave an address. Fifteen minutes from his house. Under normal circumstances he would have taken the call without thinking about it. Tonight, the half-finished beer next to his chair was making a compelling argument.

“Anyone else have a key?”

“My wife.”

“Can she let you in?”

“She can. I’d rather she didn’t, though.”

Caleb waited.

“She’s upstairs asleep. She’s been sick, and this is the first decent rest she’s gotten in days.” The man paused. “It’s…not looking good.”

Caleb nodded to himself. “All right. What’s your name?”

“Walter.”

“Walter what?”

“Bell.”

“Okay, Mr. Bell. Give me twenty minutes.”

Caleb ended the call. He stood in the middle of his dark living room considering the decisions that had led him to a career where an elderly stranger could summon him from a well-deserved rest at eleven o’clock on a Friday night. Then he picked up the beer and took one last drink before carrying it to the kitchen. He tipped what remained into the sink and dropped the bottle in the trash.

His boots and belt went back on, and he grabbed his tool bag. He opened the front door, closed it behind him, and stopped.

The neighborhood was completely dark. Not mostly dark, with the occasional porch light running off a generator or the distant glow of a convenience store lucky enough to be on another circuit. Every house on the street had disappeared into silhouette. The streetlights were dead. So were the shopping center beyond the subdivision, the gas station at the corner, and the billboard beside the highway that normally threw enough white light across the rooftops to make Caleb consider buying blackout curtains.

But it wasn’t the darkness that stopped him. It was everything above it.

He had lived in the house for nine years and couldn’t remember ever seeing more than a few dozen stars at once. Tonight there were thousands. They filled every corner of the sky, bright enough that the longer he looked, the more seemed to appear. A pale cloudy streak crossed overhead that Caleb recognized as the Milky Way only because he’d seen pictures of it.

“Holy shit.”

He tore his gaze away from the heavens long enough to make it to his van. Whatever had gone down, it had gone down big. Caleb started the engine. The headlights swept across his garage door before he backed into the street. He reached the entrance to the subdivision and slowed.

There was no traffic.

Caleb sat at the stop sign for several seconds, looking in both directions. The road had been backed up nearly to this intersection when he’d come home less than twenty minutes ago. Friday nights were always bad, and he’d waited through three changes of the light just to make the left into his neighborhood. Now there wasn’t a single pair of headlights in sight.

The signal at the intersection was dark. Caleb rolled forward, looked both ways again, and turned. By the time he reached the highway, his level of isolation had become impossible to ignore. Six lanes of pavement stretched beneath a sky crowded with stars, illuminated only as far as his headlights could reach. Caleb drove down the center lane with his hands resting loosely on the wheel, watching storefronts emerge from the darkness and disappear behind him.

He reached for the radio, hoping to find out how widespread the outage was. Static. He pressed the seek button. The numbers climbed steadily across the display without stopping. He tried AM with the same result.

Caleb switched it off. Whatever had knocked out the power had apparently taken every radio station in range with it, but the cell towers were still working. He didn’t know enough about either to know whether that made sense.

It was strange seeing a city this way. Places he had passed a thousand times became unfamiliar without their signs to identify them. A restaurant he’d eaten at the previous month was little more than a black rectangle behind an empty parking lot. Farther on, his headlights caught the reflective lettering of a medical office where he could have sworn there used to be an empty lot. Caleb glanced at it in the mirror after he passed. Then it was gone.

He continued toward Walter Bell’s house. He had told the old man twenty minutes, but since leaving his neighborhood, Caleb hadn’t touched the brake once.

Walter Bell lived near the end of a cul-de-sac in a neighborhood Caleb had worked in several times over the years. The houses were mostly two-story brick builds set farther apart than newer developers seemed willing to allow anymore, but little else was recognizable in the dark.

Caleb slowed to read the numbers painted along the curbs until a flashlight blinked twice from the third house on the left. He pulled into the driveway behind an old red pickup and parked. A live oak filled most of the front yard, its branches spreading over the driveway and nearly touching the roof. Caleb had to duck beneath one of them on his way to the porch.

The man waiting there looked to be in his eighties. He was tall, though age had pulled his shoulders forward, with white hair that appeared not to have seen a comb that day. He wore jeans, a golf polo, and a pair of house shoes.

“Walter?”

“That’s me.”

They shook hands.

“Sorry to call you out so late.”

“You’re paying me. Takes some of the sting out.”

Walter smiled, but it didn’t reach his eyes. Dark circles hung beneath them, and several days of white stubble covered his face.

Caleb nodded toward the door. “What happened?”

“Trash.” Walter pointed his flashlight toward two garbage cans near the curb. “Walked them out. Door shut behind me.”

“Not deadbolted, then?”

“No.”

“Should be easy.”

Caleb set his bag on the porch and knelt in front of the door. A wooden swing hung several feet away. Walter sat while Caleb removed a tension wrench and pick from his bag. The chains groaned beneath the old man’s weight.

Caleb propped a small flashlight toward the lock and went to work. The first pin set, then the second.

“You said your wife’s sick?”

“Cancer.”

“Sorry.”

Walter nodded. “Pancreatic. Six months now.”

Caleb knew enough about cancer to understand what Walter had meant on the phone.

It’s not looking good.

Walter rocked gently on the swing while Caleb kept at it.

“She picked this thing out,” Walter said.

“The swing?”

“Begged me to put it up. Told her we’d hang it up and neither one of us would ever use the damn thing.”

The chains creaked again.

“Guess you were wrong.”

“Usually am.”

A more genuine smile touched Walter’s face as the third pin set.

“Power’s not doing her any favors,” Walter said.

“Hopefully it won’t be out long.”

Walter gave a tired laugh. “Been out five hours already. I’m not holding my breath they kick it back on tonight.”

Caleb stopped. “Five hours?”

“Something like that.”

“Mine went out maybe twenty minutes ago.”

“Must’ve been the last grid to go down.”

Walter shrugged and let his gaze drift away. Caleb shook his head, his puzzled look unseen by Walter, then got back to work.

“Radio’s out too. Couldn’t get a station the whole way here.”

“Radio?” Walter asked.

Caleb looked over at him. “In the van.”

“Oh.” Walter nodded. “Right.”

Caleb watched him for a moment.

Walter pointed toward the door with his flashlight. “You planning on opening that tonight?”

Caleb smiled and returned to the lock. “Almost there.”

The fourth pin clicked into place. Caleb adjusted the tension wrench and worked the pick deeper into the cylinder. The final pin resisted him for a moment before giving with a soft click he felt more than heard.

“There we go.”

The cylinder turned. Caleb removed his tools and twisted the knob. The door opened inward.

Walter pushed himself up from the swing. “Music to my ears.”

Caleb stepped aside as Walter approached the doorway.

“What do I owe you?”

“Hundred fifty.”

Walter looked surprised. “That’s it?”

Caleb glanced at him. “You want me to charge you more?”

“No.” Walter pulled his wallet from his back pocket. “I appreciate the discount. And there’s an extra fifty in there for you.”

Caleb wasn’t sure what discount he was talking about, but he wasn’t about to argue himself out of a tip. Walter handed him the money, and Caleb folded it once and slipped it into his pocket.

A cough came from upstairs.

Walter stopped. The sound was deep and wet, muffled by the walls but unmistakable in the silence. For several seconds he stood listening until the house went quiet again.

“Thanks for coming out,” he said.

“No problem.”

“Drive safe.”

Caleb nodded toward the empty street. “Shouldn’t be too difficult.”

Walter gave him a tired smile and stepped inside. “Good night, Mr. Rourke.”

“Good night.”

Walter quietly pulled the door closed behind him.

The latch caught.

The world came roaring back, and Caleb flinched.

The porch light snapped on above Caleb’s head. Streetlights ignited down the block in both directions. Windows lit up across the neighborhood as air conditioners shuddered awake between the houses. A car horn sounded from the main road beyond the subdivision, then another. Engines passed somewhere nearby, followed by the steady rush of tires against pavement. After twenty minutes of near-total silence, the noise was overwhelming.

Caleb grabbed his bag and turned.

The red pickup was gone.

He straightened and looked at the empty stretch of driveway in front of his van. He had parked directly behind it.

Caleb turned toward the yard. The oak was still there, but the branch he had ducked beneath on his way to the porch was gone. The entire canopy was gone. What stood in its place was a young tree barely tall enough to reach the second story, its trunk a fraction of the size.

Caleb stared at it, then looked toward the porch.

The swing was gone.

“What the fuck?”

The front door opened behind him.

“Step away from the door.”

Caleb turned. A man stood in the doorway with a pistol pointed at him.

“Easy.” Caleb raised his hands.

“Back up.”

Caleb did.

The man was in his forties, barefoot and dressed in basketball shorts and a faded band T-shirt. His hair was flattened on one side from sleep.

“What are you doing to my door?”

“I’m a locksmith.”

“I didn’t call a locksmith.”

Caleb nodded toward the lock. “Somebody did.”

“I heard you fucking with it.”

“I was picking it.”

“Why?”

“Because the guy who lives here locked himself out.”

The man stared at him. “I live here.”

Caleb glanced toward the open doorway. “Where’s Walter?”

The gun lowered slightly.

“What?”

“Walter Bell.”

“How do you know my name?”

Caleb looked at him. “Your name?” Then he really looked at him.

“Yeah.”

For a moment neither spoke. Caleb lowered his hands a few inches.

“You called me here.”

“No, I didn’t.”

“About twenty minutes ago.”

“I’ve been asleep for two hours.”

Caleb reached slowly toward his pocket.

“Phone.”

The man nodded. Caleb took it out and opened his recent calls.

“There.”

The man stepped closer, no longer aiming the pistol. Caleb read the number.

“That yours?”

The man pulled a phone from his pocket.

“Yes. But I didn’t call you.”

The man opened his own call history.

Nothing.

Caleb looked at the screen.

“What exactly did I supposedly call you for?”

“You locked yourself out taking out the trash.”

The man’s eyes moved toward the curb. Caleb followed them.

The garbage cans were gone.

Caleb looked back at him. “You said your wife was upstairs asleep. You didn’t want to wake her.”

“My wife is upstairs.”

“You said she was sick.”

The man’s expression tightened. “Sick how?”

Caleb hesitated. “Pancreatic cancer.”

The gun lowered completely.

“My wife doesn’t have cancer.”

“Walter?”

A woman’s voice drifted down from upstairs. Both men looked toward the staircase.

“You okay?”

“Yeah,” Walter called back, his eyes still on Caleb. “I’m fine.”

A door closed upstairs.

Caleb looked toward the empty place where the swing had been.

“He sat right there while I opened the door.”

Walter followed his gaze. “Who?”

“You.”

Walter stared at him.

“An old man. Eighties. White hair. He sat on a wooden swing while I worked.”

“I don’t have a swing.”

“He said your wife picked it out.”

Something moved across Walter’s face.

“What?”

“He said she begged him to hang one. He told her neither of you would ever use it.”

Walter looked at the empty section of porch.

“She’s been asking me for one.”

Caleb’s eyes moved toward the oak.

Walter noticed. “What are you looking at?”

“That tree.”

“What about it?”

Caleb didn’t answer. He reached into his pocket and removed the folded bills.

“He paid me.”

Walter looked at the money.

“Two hundred dollars. Hundred fifty for the lockout. Fifty-dollar tip.”

Caleb remembered Walter’s surprise.

That’s it?

I appreciate the discount.

“You said you opened the door.”

“I did.”

“You didn’t.”

Caleb looked at him.

“I watched him walk inside.”

“I was standing on the other side. I heard somebody working the lock. Then the power came back.”

“And?”

“I opened the door.”

Neither man spoke.

Caleb had felt the cylinder turn. He had opened the door. He had watched Walter step through it and pull it closed behind him.

And the man standing in front of him had been on the other side.

Caleb looked down at his phone.

Walter followed his eyes. “What?”

Caleb opened the call log. “Let’s settle one thing.”

“How?”

“I’m calling the number.”

Walter raised the phone still in his hand.

Caleb pressed call.

They waited.

Walter’s phone remained silent. Its screen stayed dark.

Caleb frowned.

Then, very faintly, a phone began ringing inside the house.

Posted Sep 01, 2026
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Marjolein Greebe
September 03, 2026 17:14

Keith, the moment that really got me was when Walter closes the door and the whole world suddenly comes roaring back — only for Caleb to realize the truck, the swing, and even the oak are no longer the same. That transition is so clean because up to that point the strangeness can still almost be explained away as a blackout. After that, there’s no safe explanation left.

I also really liked making Caleb a locksmith. Someone whose entire job is opening doors he isn’t supposed to be on the wrong side of is exactly the right person to stumble into this. And that final phone ringing somewhere inside the house is a terrific ending — it answers just enough to make the situation much worse.

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Keith Grant
September 03, 2026 17:24

Thank you! That transition when the power comes back was probably the most important moment. I wanted everything before it to feel strange but still just explainable enough that Caleb could keep going without really questioning what was happening. I love your observation about him being a locksmith, too. There’s something fitting about a guy who spends his life opening doors being the one who accidentally opens the wrong one. And I’m glad the final ring landed—I knew pretty early that wherever this story went, I didn’t want to explain my way out of it.

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Diogo Vilas
September 01, 2026 19:59

Such a carefully structured story! The transition from the ordinary into the fantastical was well-crafted, especially toward the back-half of the story. While I think both dialogue sequences were executed brilliantly, the last one is certainly my favorite; Walter truly comes across as a real individual rather than a mere character. Great read!

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Keith Grant
September 01, 2026 20:50

I’m so glad the structure worked for you! I really wanted the shift from an ordinary late-night service call into something impossible to happen gradually enough that Caleb—and hopefully the reader—wouldn’t realize how far things had gone until it was too late. I’m especially happy Walter felt like a real person. Giving him a life beyond the mystery was important to me, and that final conversation was probably my favorite part to write.

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Eric Manske
September 24, 2026 23:14

This story is one of the top stories in the Mystery genre for this contest. Congrats! Quite a bit going on in this one.

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Keith Grant
September 25, 2026 05:33

Thank you! I may have thrown a few things at poor Caleb, but at least he got paid for his trouble! 😂 Really appreciate you taking the time to read.

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Lawrence Hankins
September 15, 2026 13:11

That was a fun read!

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Keith Grant
September 15, 2026 13:21

Appreciate it!!! 🙏

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September 11, 2026 16:11

What a well-written story, I really enjoyed reading it! I loved the pacing -we start with the introduction of Caleb, who is immediately likeable and witty. I love how you made a locksmith feel like some superhero or a secret agent ;).
I also loved that you describe the switch of time with details of the surroundings (the truck, swing etc) and not with saying it very clear. It's a tricky part of writing stories to make them clear enough for the reader to understand, but not too "in the face".
The ending was amazing in overall, yet I must say I did not fully grasp why did the phone ring in the end (as I guess it did not exist yet?). I guess it may have been a metaphor of calling for help? I may have missed something perhaps :)

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Keith Grant
September 11, 2026 16:26

Time travel is tricky like that. Paradoxes and whatnot. To quote Doctor Who, "People assume that time is a strict progression of cause to effect, but actually from a non-linear, non-subjective viewpoint, it's more like a big ball of wibbly-wobbly, timey-wimey... stuff."

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Jason Basaraba
September 11, 2026 15:47

From the opening line to the final ring, you had me hooked. A normal person placed in a situation that seems common yet you ,are it eerie from the beginning and kept it that way until the end. Eerie yet hauntingly beautiful.
An absolute treat to read

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Jason Basaraba
September 11, 2026 15:48

Ps. you have a new follower.

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Keith Grant
September 11, 2026 18:19

Thank you! My liminal space one is even better in my opinion. Let me know what you think when you have the time.

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Blake Sherman
September 10, 2026 14:02

Great story! I thought the character development was particularly well done. I particularly enjoyed the depiction of Walter before and after - Suffering and loss can have a way of softening the heart. Well done!

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Keith Grant
September 10, 2026 14:53

Thank you! I really love that you picked up on the difference between the two versions of Walter. I wanted them to clearly be the same man without simply making the younger version feel like “Walter, but younger.” The Walter Caleb meets first has lived through decades that the man at the end hasn’t experienced yet, including everything happening with his wife. I think you’re absolutely right that suffering and loss can soften some of our edges. Really appreciate you reading!

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Dr. Josh Valk
September 09, 2026 20:19

Very creepy and supernatural. Unexpected ending. Well done my friend!

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Keith Grant
September 09, 2026 20:42

I do what I can.

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Kate Winchester
September 06, 2026 13:45

Fun story! When I read the prompt, I assumed that the time travel would be voluntary. I like that it’s not here. The locksmith aspect is cool. You never really think about the fact that they deal with people in stressful situations and in some ways are unsung heroes. The way the time changes was intriguing with Walter suddenly being younger and pointing a gun at Caleb. Great job!

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Keith Grant
September 06, 2026 15:52

Thank you! I liked the idea that Caleb wouldn’t choose to travel through time—or even realize he’d done it until it was already over. As far as he’s concerned, he’s just a tired locksmith answering one last call on a Friday night. I’m glad you enjoyed that aspect of his character too. Locksmiths really do show up when somebody is already having a pretty lousy day, so it felt fitting that Caleb would treat even this bizarre situation as just another problem he needed to solve. Really appreciate you reading!

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Tyler Carys
September 06, 2026 01:55

This story is immaculate. I love the way it grabs hold of you from the start and kind of draws you closer with the dialogue, confusion, and sharp turns. I also enjoy the metaphors with the door as a passage of time, in a way, and the power representing that switch. Very captivating writing!

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Keith Grant
September 06, 2026 01:59

Thank you so much! I’m especially glad you picked up on the door and the power. I wanted those elements to work literally first and let any deeper meaning emerge naturally rather than calling attention to it. Caleb spends his life opening doors, and this time he happens to open one he probably shouldn’t have. Really appreciate you reading!

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Nicholas Lira
September 05, 2026 23:42

Great story! that was great to read. The ending definitely got me. The way everything seems so everyday life/normal/ordinary, then it switches. Great job on that! Again, great story, really enjoyed it!

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Keith Grant
September 05, 2026 23:46

Thank you! I really wanted to spend some time in Caleb’s completely ordinary world before pulling the rug out from under him, so I’m glad that transition worked for you. I wanted the strange stuff to creep in quietly enough that by the time things really switched, both Caleb and the reader had already wandered pretty far from normal without realizing it. Really appreciate you reading!

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David Sweet
September 05, 2026 23:23

I was really wondering when the sci-fi element of the story was going to kick in because it felt so ordinary. Nice twist, Keith. Now, what will Walter do with this information?

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Keith Grant
September 05, 2026 23:44

Thank you! That’s the real question here, isn’t it? I love time travel stories, but they get messy when you factor in causality and paradoxes. Also, the answer depends on one more thing: Which Walter? The one standing next to Caleb or the one who’s about to answer the phone?

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Marjolein Greebe
September 03, 2026 17:35

Keith, the moment that really got me was when Walter closes the door and the whole world suddenly comes roaring back — only for Caleb to realize the truck, the swing, and even the oak are no longer the same. That transition is so clean because up to that point the strangeness can still almost be explained away as a blackout. After that, there’s no safe explanation left.

I also really liked making Caleb a locksmith. Someone whose entire job is opening doors he isn’t supposed to be on the wrong side of is exactly the right person to stumble into this. And that final phone ringing somewhere inside the house is a terrific ending — it answers just enough to make the situation much worse.

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