Kinesis and Phobias

Drama Fantasy Fiction

Written in response to: "Write a story that begins in the light and ends in darkness, or the other way around." as part of Chiaroscuro.

WHOS EXCITEDDDD PART 1 OF REEDSYCASTTT


WHOOOOOOOOO ok let's get to it


First, people featured:

Just the main character (Violet)


Character Gallery:




------- Lillian ----- Violet (main character) ------ Ivy --------



------- Aralya -------- Talia (main villain) -------- Lyn ---------



----- Lawrence ------------ Lumi ------------ Celeste -------



-------- Zayd ------------- Dakota ------------- Tormenta -----



------- Palak ---------------- Kylee -------------- Ethan ------



------ Tsuyoi -------


OK NOW ON TO THE STORY:


"This isn't real..." whispered Violet.

"It's not.

None of it is.

This is all an illusion

To make you click that blue button

And you have.

You got excited,

You saw the gallery,

But that's all you're getting.

Nothing else.

Get pranked."


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If you actually made it this far and scrolled this much down, I'll give ya a lil spoiler.


...two important people die in the first part.

That's it.


Also here is a video clip of the characters:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ



Posted Apr 30, 2021
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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
April 30, 2021 21:55

I JUST REALIZED THIS STORY EVEN FITS THE PROMPT LMAO
We started in light, excited for the new Reedsycast
and ended in darkness when we learned it was just a prank
you smart little sneak

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Valerie June
April 30, 2021 22:40

I didn't even think about that until just now. Abbie is one smart cookie! XD

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Kylee Haverty
May 01, 2021 20:19

Wow. You started the story and then you were like ยจThis is all an illusionยจ and I was like ยจWHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYยจ
You totally fooled me! I was literally jumping out of my seat, so excited to read this and then.....that happened. I am internally crying. It was funny but also meannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. Hahahaha (sarcastic laugh). I am sad now. Wow. You really just did that. WOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW.

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May 01, 2021 07:51

I was like... today feels like the perfect day for a prank and eh.... seriously? SERIOUSLY?

Lol, and... the two important characters... are they 'reedsy' characters? (i smell some sneakiness in that...)

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XD lol no they aren't reedsy characters, i wanted to clarify but i thought i should torture some people more by leaving it vague >:) i do, however, have two other reedsy characters in mind that I can kill... -amen- -a certain Atmokinesis and Chlorokinesis- -you know who you are- XD

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May 03, 2021 13:02

Bha-ha-HA-Ha-hA, I KNEW It! i-knew-it! Lol

i'll watch me step around Atmokinesis and Chlorokinesis people..., or let me tell them something rude just before they die! more suffering and guilt for this Aurakinesis!

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Phoenix LaRue
May 03, 2021 18:22

*sharply clears throat, goes into Stitch mode* You will not break me. *glares evilly*
(Imagine it being said in a Russian accent.)

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Phoenix LaRue
May 03, 2021 18:40

(in deep, accented voice) Kill me if you want, Abigail. But just know -- you will live to regret this. I will throw your story character into the Pitt of Misery and make sure she never, ever leaves.
*adjusts gas mask, glares with one good eye and one glass eye*

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(in a threatening, maniacal psychopath voice) death is too merciful. That is what you will be begging for when I am done with you. Besides, that is what I want
-grins maniacally with one blind and scarred eye- you will learn to FEAR ME

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Phoenix LaRue
May 04, 2021 21:19

The young woman's words send a cold shot of fear down my spine. It takes all my effort not to show it.
"Who-who are you?" I whisper, aiming at her, ready to pull the trigger at any moment.

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"Does it really matter who I am?" I said, smiling. I raised my knife at him, fresh blood dripping off the tip. "Now tell me who you are, and I might exchange my name in return. Not like you're going to live long enough to tell anyone else, anyway."

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Valerie June
May 03, 2021 18:24

Agreed! LOL You watch Abbie, weโ€™ll come out victorious in some way or another. Just you watch! ๐Ÿ˜‚

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Valerie June
May 03, 2021 18:53

Then I guess this time around things will go differently. Hehehe.

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Amara Tillington
May 03, 2021 19:30

Whaaat? How does it fit? The laughing... hehhehe just a teaser trailer I guess

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Amara Tillington
May 05, 2021 18:18

Fawn?

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yeah, she's my default reedsycast character. It's featured in Lillian's story TSD Part 10 if you want to see. She is an innoccent lil nature lover with a super overprotective, intimidating older brother :)

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yeah, she's my default reedsycast character. It's featured in Lillian's story TSD Part 10 if you want to see. She is an innoccent lil nature lover with a super overprotective, intimidating older brother :)

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Amara Tillington
May 05, 2021 18:23

Ok

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May 01, 2021 13:53

(By the way, if any innocent viewers of this story happen to stumble on my comment, the link at the bottom is a Rickroll. You're welcome.)
...
https://makeameme.org/meme/why-you-do-bc6a3f01d0
How dare you. I was so excited about this! You're almost as bad as Uncle Rick.
I am not clicking on that link; I know it's a Rickroll.

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Phoenix LaRue
May 01, 2021 02:32

Abigail! You twisted girl! I was expecting the actual story, and instead all I got was a list of characters, a whole bunch of cackling, and that song! THE SONG.

Scroll, dang it.

SCROLL SOME MORE, DAUGHTER OF LUCIFER.

Actually, even though you fooled me, the song actually didn't make me too mad, since it's one of my favorites. But still. Why are you so freaking evil?!
Also, whoever's gonna die in the first part. . . it had better NOT be me.

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Phoenix LaRue
May 02, 2021 23:30

Ahhh, Abigail, there you are. Did you enjoy scrolling all that way? Huh? I think some of your wickedness is starting to rub off on me.
And if you do decide to ruin my and Jose's characters, then, oh well, I guess there's always next Reedsy-cast. Right?
In the meantime, I'll just decide what to do with your future character. Suppose I'll have to give her the worst fate possible. . .

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hmm yes i enjoyed scrolling, it gave me time to think of ways to torture you >:)
XD lololololol
lol i already asked for max suffering and for her death to completely disorient flint, what more can you do? XD

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Phoenix LaRue
May 03, 2021 17:18

I'm sure it did, Abigail. ๐Ÿ˜
Hey, Jose and I could come up with something else. Don't you think?

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Valerie June
May 01, 2021 02:42

I can't wait to see Abbie's reaction to this. ๐Ÿคฃ

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Phoenix LaRue
May 01, 2021 02:44

I think we all have the right to be wicked after what she just did. What's a little scrolling compared to that? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

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Valerie June
May 01, 2021 02:49

ยกSรญ! If I ever make a Reedsy cast I told her that she better expect me to be a little tough on her lol.

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Phoenix LaRue
May 01, 2021 02:54

If you do, show her no mercy, Jose. No mercy whatsoever! ๐Ÿ”ช๐Ÿ’€

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Valerie June
May 01, 2021 02:58

Alrighty then! ๐Ÿ˜†
Nice touch with the emoji's! I'll add a couple, too: ๐Ÿฅ€ ๐Ÿชฆโšฐ๏ธ๐Ÿฉธ Too much? Nah...

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Sunny ๐ŸŒผ
April 30, 2021 21:52

OH
MY
GOD!
ABBI WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!
I LEGIT SCREAMED IN EXCITEMENT WHEN I FIRST SAW THIS
YOU LIAR
I feel betrayed on so many levels
*cri*
Ok enough with the theatrics...but seriously HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO US?!

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I donโ€™t even know why I opened the link; I could already tell it was gonna be... that.
If two important people die in the first part... then are they important?

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Ohhh. Lol. I donโ€™t think Iโ€™m gonna die bc... idk... I gUeSS iM tOo iNTeResTiNg
I mean I got stabbed in the head and survived, lol
Ooh, but I have one question. So I know I filled it out similarly, but are my two characters going to act similarly?

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April 30, 2021 18:39

ABBIE

I WAS WAITING FOR THIS

FOR LIKE DAYS

HOW

COULD

YOU

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Valerie June
April 30, 2021 18:27

You, you, you.
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I'm debating whether to 'like' this or not lol
I thought it was too good to be true, but I didn't listen to myself. Oof

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Valerie June
April 30, 2021 18:28

Oh and two characters are gonna die in the beginning, too. Wow just watch one of them be me. XD I really hope it's not though. Abbie, are you listening. I'm scared lol.

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Valerie June
April 30, 2021 18:29

I 'liked' it, happy?!?!? XDDDDD

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Omg if I die then
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XD
Ooh a vid-
(Sersiously. Donโ€™t MKE Me DiEEEEeEE)

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TJ Squared
April 30, 2021 17:58

how dare you
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kjhgfdfgyuiolkmnbvcxsdfghjklkmnbvcxdfghjknbvcxdfghjk
my dude

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TJ Squared
July 17, 2022 02:36

Donโ€™t mind me just reliving the good ol days ๐Ÿฅฒ

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