Submitted to: Contest #328

THE LAST ORCHARD

Written in response to: "Write a dual-perspective story or a dual-timeline story."

Historical Fiction Romance Sad

THE LAST ORCHARD

Timeline One-1942

The evening sun rested low over the apple orchard throwing gold light across the rows of trees. The air smelled of leaves and ripening fruit. Evelyn Harrow ran her fingers along the rough bark of a tree she’d known all her life. This orchard was her family’s pride-and their burden especially know that war had taken the men away.

She heard boots crunch behind her.

“You disappear out more than you should,” said a familiar voice.

Evelyn turned to see Lieutenant Daniel Whitaker, his uniform jacket draped across his arm, his shirtsleeves rolled up. He had only been stationed in Harrow’s Crossing for a week, but he already looked like he belonged there all his life.

“I like the quiet,” Evelyn said.

Daniel smiled, though his eyes carried exhaustion. “Then I hope you don’t mind if I use some of it too.”

She didn’t.

They walked between the trees. Evelyn could feel something resting unspoken between them-possibility or danger or both.

“You know,” Daniel said after a moment, “my mother used to say trees remember the hands that plant them. I wonder how many hands have shaped this place.”

“My grandfather planted the first row,” she replied. “He said orchards are the closest thing to immortality we get.”

Daniel stopped. “And what do you believe in?”

She didn’t answer. Not yet.

Not with war waiting to take him away.

Timeline Two-Present Day

Clara Whitaker was late in arriving to Harrow’s Crossing and didn’t much care. Her father’s last request was not one she wanted to honor, but death leaves a person with sentimental obligations.

The orchard stretched out on the horizon as she parked the rental car. It was just as the old photographs had shown-endless rows of apple trees, many grown wild from neglect.

Her father had left it all to her.

She didn’t want it.

Clara stepped out of the car and breathed in the scent of fallen leaves and apples rotting sweetly in the grass. The farmhouse door creaked when she pushed it open. The inside was dim, dust-thick, unchanged for decades.

She found the letter on the kitchen table. Her father’s handwriting-unsteady, fading.

Clara,

There is a story you were never told. The orchard remembers. Find Evelyn’s box. You’ll know where to look.

-Dad

Clara frowned. Evelyn? The name meant nothing to her.

Until she noticed the framed photograph hanging crookedly on the wall.

Her father, younger, smiling-and beside him, a woman Clara had never seen.

The woman from the orchard.

The Timeline Connect

1942

Daniel gently brushed Evelyn’s hair from her face and whispered, “When I return, we’ll plant a new row together. Our own.”

Present Day

Clara stood before a dying apple tree near the western fence line, shovel in hand, her father’s letter crumpled in her jacket pocket.

She did not know why she dug.

Only that something-memory or fate-guided her.

Her shovel hit wood.

A box.

And inside wrapped in cloth and time-

A stack of letters tied in faded blue ribbon.

Letters addressed to:

Evelyn Harrow

From Lieutenant Daniel Whitaker

Clara’s breath caught.

Her father’s name was Daniel Whitaker too.

But these letters were not written by him.

They were written to a woman he had never once mentioned.

A love that predated her family.

A history buried.

Chapter Two-The First Letter

Timeline One-1942

The train station smelled of coal smoke and rain. Evelyn stood pressed against the crowd, her hands gripping the strap of her satchel so tightly her knuckles blanched. Daniel’s unit had received orders the night before-quick, efficient, ruthless in their timing. There had been no long goodbyes.

He found her in the milling crowd, his uniform stiff and his eyes unbearably soft.

“I didn’t think you’d make it,” he said, his voice rough.

“You didn’t give me much time to try,” Evelyn whispered.

Something like laughter passed between them, small and aching.

Daniel pulled a small envelope from his breast pocket and placed it in her hand.

“I- “he hesitated. “I’m not good with words when I should be. So, I started writing them early.”

Evelyn blinked. “How many are there?”

“Enough for a while,” Daniel said. “More, if I can manage it. Read them when you want to hear my voice.”

The loud speaker crackled. Boarding.

Evelyn reached up and touched his cheek and he leaned into her fingertips like a man already half a world away.

“When you come back,” she breathed, “the orchard will still be here.”

Daniel smiled.

“And so will you.”

And then he was gone.

The first letter came two weeks later.

Timeline Two-Present Day

Clara sat in the farmhouse kitchen; the box of letters opened carefully before her. Dust coated her fingertips; the ribbon left faint blue smudges on her skin. The paper crackled like leaves when she untied the first bundle.

She unfolded the top letter. The handwriting was neat, deliberate, hopeful.

October 19th 1942

My dearest Evelyn,

The nights are long already, and we’ve barely left the country. A man gets to thinking, out in the dark surrounded by others who cannot sleep. I have found that the clearest images are of you.

I carry the memory of your hand on mine the entire train ride. I don’t know what comes next. None of us do. But when it frightens me, I close my eyes and picture you among the orchard rows.

Promise me you’ll walk there sometimes.

And think of me growing beside them.

-Daniel

Clara lowered the letter and exhaled a breath she did not realize she was holding.

Her father had saved these. Protected them. Hidden them.

Why?

The house answered with its silence.

She took the letter upstairs to the hallway lined with old framed photographs. For the first time, she looked closely.

Among the images of her grandparents, and father as a child… there was Evelyn.

Young. Dark haired. Laughing in the orchard, standing beside Clara’s grandparents on the porch.

But never older.

Never past her twenties.

Clara touched the glass.

“What happened to you?” she whispered.

Timeline One-1943

Winter came early that year. Snow gathered between the apple trees like lace. Evelyn wrapped her coat tight as she walked the orchard path. Daniel’s latest letter tucked close to her heart.

His words were different now.

War had found him.

The letters spoke less of orchards, more of hunger, fear, silence.

But always he returned to her.

She reached the tree where he had once placed his hand beside hers, the one they had promised to replant when he returned. She pressed her coat sleeve to her eyes and held in the ache.

A figure stepped through the orchard gate.

Mrs. Whitaker.

Daniel’s mother.

Her face was pale. Her gloves were clenched.

Evelyn knew before she spoke.

And the world went still.

Timeline Two-Present Day

Clara closed the box.

She needed answers.

She grabbed her coat, keys, the first letter, and stepped outside. The wind carried the scent of apples and frost. The trees rustled like old whispers.

She headed for the town’s records office.

Someone in Harrow’s Crossing remembered Evelyn.

Someone knew how her story ended.

And why her father had spent his whole life mourning a woman Clara had never known.

Chapter Three- The Orchard Keeper

Timeline Two-Present Day

The Harrow’s crossing Historical Society was housed in what used to be the town’s post office-small, square and stubbornly beige. The bell over the door jingled as Clara stepped inside.

A woman in her seventies sat behind the desk, knitting something deep maroon. Her glasses rested halfway down her nose. She looked up eyes wide and saw someone she remembered from long ago.

“You must be a Whitaker,” she said-not asked, said.

Clara stilled. “How did you-?”

“You have the same eyes,” the woman replied. “Daniel’s eyes.

Clara felt something tighten in her chest. “You knew my father?”

“Oh, everyone here knew your father.” The woman set down her knitting. “I’m Margaret Kane. I grew up two farms down from this orchard. She tilted her head. “You found the letters, didn’t you?”

Clara swallowed. “Yes.”

Margaret closed her eyes briefly. “Then I suppose it’s time the story was told.”

She gestured for Clara to sit.

Timeline One-1943

Snow flurried around Evelyn, dissolving on her eyelashes as Mrs. Whitaker stood before her.

The older woman shook her head, slow, trembling. “We received word this morning. Daniel’s battalion was… there was shelling. They haven’t recovered.” Her voice broke. She pressed a handkerchief to her lips.

The world tilted.

Evelyn heard herself say, “No,” though it came out like mist. “No. He wrote me. He said-he promised.”

Mrs. Whitaker stepped forward and gathered Evelyn into her arms as if she were her own daughter.

Evelyn crumpled.

The orchard swayed.

Someone far away. Someone screamed.

It might have been her.

Timeline Two-Present Day

Margaret watched Clara with a gentleness that was almost unbearable.

“Everyone thought Evelyn Harrow would fade after that,” she began. “But she didn’t.”

Clara blinked. “She didn’t leave town?”

“No.” Margaret shook her head. “She stayed. She kept the orchard alive on her own. Worked herself to the bone. Most days we wondered how she didn’t break.”

Clara leaned forward. “But she must have moved eventually. My father ended up with the orchard.”

Margaret hesitated. Her knitting needles clicked together, once, twice.

“She didn’t move,” Margaret said softly. “Evelyn passed in the orchard. She was only twenty-one.

Clara froze.

“What-how?”

Margaret’s voice was woven with sorrow. “Her heart gave out. Too much grief in one too young to hear it. Your father-Daniel’s son-was only a child. Her family had already gone. So, the orchard became his.”

Clara felt the room contract around her.

“My father never told me any of this.” Clara whispered.

Margaret’s eyes soften.

The silence between them turned thick.

Timeline One-1943

Five months later, spring returned.

But Evelyn did not.

Neighbors found her seated beneath the very apple tree where Daniel once laid his had beside hers, the blossoming branches formed a pale pink canopy overhead.

Her eyes were closed.

Her hands were folded.

Her face was peaceful.

She had simply stopped.

Stopped fighting the loneliness.

Stopping waiting for letters that would never come.

She left no note.

Only the orchard.

Timeline Two-Present Day

Clara felt the breath leave her.

“He didn’t know,” she repeated, voice thin.

“No,” Margaret said. “Your grandparents raised him. He thought they were his parents. They believed it was kinder. They never spoke her name. Daniel-the soldier-wasn’t spoken of either. Too much sorrow. Too much war.”

Clara closed her eyes.

Her father had lived his entire life surrounded by ghosts he didn’t even know where ghost.

But something inside her shifted-not grief exactly.

Recognition.

“He spent so much time in that orchard,” she whispered.

Margaret nodded. “Some memories don’t need names. They live in the bones of a place.”

Clara stood.

“I have to go back.”

Margaret smiled sadly. “The orchard’s been waiting a long time for someone to listen.”

Clara walked the orchard rows at sunset, letters tucked beneath her arm. The wind rustled the leaves overhead, soft as breath.

She stopped before the old tree-the one Evelyn had died beneath.

Clara placed her hand against the bark.

It was warm.

She didn’t cry.

Not yet.

But something in her, for the first time in a long while,

Opened.

Chapter Four-The Echo of Apples

Timeline Two-Present Day

The morning mist lay thick across the orchard, silver and still. Clara wondered between the trees; the box of letters balanced in her arms. She had spent the night reading-every page, every fading word.

Daniel’s voice had changed over the years: from the optimism of a young soldier to the weary ache of a man learning what war could take.

She reached the old tree again. Its back was scarred but alive, moss soft around its roots. “I found you, Evelyn,” Clara murmured. “And I found him too.”

The wind stirred, as though answering. And for just a moment, Clara thought she smelled apple blossoms, though it was November.

She knelt and brushed away the leaves at the base of the tree. Something caught the light-metal, dulled by age.

It was a locket half-buried in the soil.

Inside: a photograph of Daniel in uniform and opposite, a lock of hair tied with a blue ribbon. Clara’s throat tightened. She turned the locket over.

There was an inscription barely visible.

For every spring that waits beyond the frost.

Timeline One-1944

The war dragged on, endless and gray.

Daniel wrote from somewhere in France, the tone of his letters thinner, edges sharp with exhaustion.

June 2, 1944

My dearest Evelyn,

The orchards here are nothing like yours. The apples are small and bitter, but they remind me of home.

Sometimes I dream I’m walking that path again-and you’re there, sunlight in your hair. I wake before I reach you.

If I make it, we’ll start over. But if I don’t… promise me you’ll plant the new row.

Then I’ll still be there, in the row.

-Daniel

Evelyn read that letter by candlelight, her hands trembling. She pressed her lips to the page and whispered,

“I promise.”

The next letter never came.

Timeline Two-Present Day

Clara drove into town that afternoon. She stopped at the small cemetery behind the chapel. Rows of headstones gleamed pale in the cold light.

There near the edge of the fence, she found two graves.

Evelyn Harrow-1922-1943

Lieutenant Daniel Whitaker-1919-1944 (Missing in Action)

Buried side by side thought they had never reunited in life.

Someone-perhaps her father. Perhaps the town itself-had made sure of it.

Clara placed the locket between them.

“I think you found your spring,” she whispered. “You just had to wait for it.”

A tear slipped down her cheek, but it wasn’t sorrow anymore.

It was gratitude.

Timeline One-1944 (Final Letter)

The letter was found years later, returned from the front with Daniel’s belongings. It was never mailed.

July 15, 1944

My dearest Evelyn,

We move again tomorrow. The air smells like rain, and for a moment, I swear I can hear the wind in your orchard.

If you ever read this, know that I loved you longer than I lived.

Tell the trees our story.

-Daniel

Timeline Two-Present Day (Later)

Clara spent the next week clearing the farmhouse, one room at a time. Old photographs, brittle newspapers clippings, her father’s childhood toys. Each object felt like a memory she was finally allowed to hold.

When she stepped outside that evening, the orchard glowed in the late sun.

She carried a single sapling-young, green, delicate-and planted it beside the old tree. The earth was cold and rich.

“This one’s for you,” she whispered. “For every spring that waits beyond the frost.”

As the light faded, the wind carried a scent she hadn’t known since childhood-sweet, bright, alive.

Apple Blossoms.

And for a moment Clara could almost see them-a young man and a woman walking hand in hand between the trees, smiling, final home.

Posted Nov 13, 2025
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12 likes 3 comments

Crystal Lewis
01:33 Nov 16, 2025

Ohh what a lovely and sweet story, if a little bit bittersweet. Good flow between the timelines and a good glimpse of how awful, horrible and pointless wars often are to the people’s whose lives it rips apart. Well done! :)

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Mary Bendickson
00:28 Nov 15, 2025

Rediscovery.

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Melinda Madrigal
01:32 Nov 16, 2025

Rediscovery of what was lost and what was gained.

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