A Recipe For Disaster

Fantasy Funny Kids

Written in response to: "Write a story in which two people who know each other are introduced — but neither person admits to knowing the other." as part of Introductions.

Author’s note: this story uses the same character’s as my previous story, ‘Can You?’. While it’s perfectly fine to read this story by itself, it might be more enjoyable and maybe more sense if you read ‘Can You?’ first. Thanks for reading, and ENJOY!



~*~ℝ𝕠𝕤𝕒𝕝𝕖𝕖~*~


“How’re you holding up?” Samantha whispers.

“Could be better,” I reply.

My gaze wanders over the multi-purpose room. We don’t have prom in ninth grade—we have a ‘DJ Dance Party’. 

It’s exactly what it sounds like: ninth graders pile into our glammed-up cafeteria, with the tables pushed up, the lights out, a disco ball attached to the ceiling, a DJ, and way too many glow-sticks.

The DJ Dance Party is loud and filled with people—kids who seem to have a knack for talking my ear off. Not my kind of night.

Most people like the social outing. But I’m like a meme I've read: I’m not prejudiced; I dislike everybody. People are really annoying—minus Samantha, that is.

It’s been a couple months since my best friend learned I had powers. She’s the only person who knows, and I intend on keeping it that way. Sammy’s sworn to secrecy, and I’m actually glad I told her. She looks out for me as a person, and a magical person. But mainly the first: we’ve been besties for a while. For instance, she’ll check on me every now and then at this dreaded dance party she made me come to.

“It’ll be fun,” she said.

“You need to be more social,” she said.

“Just give it a shot,” she said.

Sorry, Samantha, but this isn’t fun, and I’m perfectly content with only ever talking to you. I don’t even live with my family—ever since I was banished from the Enchanted Academy, I live by myself in a home only accessible by magic.

“Did you hear it?”

“Hear what?” I say, staring into the green eyes of my brown-haired friend. We’re leaning against the wall, watching everybody party.

“There’s a new kid at school,” Sammy says. “Her name’s…Margarita, I think.”

My blue eyes are probably the size of dollar coins. Margarita. I know a ‘Margarita’. She’s the girl who used to be my friend at the Enchanted Academy…before she got us both banished. 

It’s best if I forget about her. 

Besides, this is a different Margarita! My friend Mara couldn’t be here. It’s not the most common name, but there are over 100,000 Margaritas in the USA alone. Yup, it’s a different girl.

“She's over there, so I’m going to go talk to her,” Sammy continues. “Be back in a sec.”

She walks away and I’m left in a crown of partying teenagers. I stride towards the food table and I’m sipping on some punch when Samantha returns, a girl with a black hoodie and jeans next to her.

“Margarita, Rosalee,” Sammy says. “Rosalee, Margarita.”

The girl’s hood slips off and I resist gasping. She has thick, curly brown hair falling to her shoulders, and the bottom half is chock-full with streaks of red. She has brown eyes with a smattering of freckles thrown across her nose, her full lips wearing a playful smile.

The smile disappears when she sees me.

It’s her.

Margarita Draanen.

Are you kidding?!

Samantha’s grin wavers. “Guys, do you know each other? Or is something else wrong? ‘Cause you both froze up…Um, okay, this is awkward.”

“Sorry,” I say, shaking my head to get rid of the feeling. “No, we don’t know each other. Hi, Margarita.” I stick my hand out to shake—something I hate doing.

Her smile returns as she takes my hand. “Yeah, we don’t know each other. Hullo,” she says in her faint British accent. “Nice to meet you, Rosalee. You can call me Mara.”

I nod and back away from my friend and ex-friend.

Margarita Draanen is here. Seriously?!

This is a recipe for disaster, I think.

This night has taken an unexpected twist….


~*~мαrɢαrιтα~*~


I can’t believe this.

I can’t freakin’ believe this.

Rosalee Adams is here!

That girl and I have a…rocky relationship. We both attended the Enchanted Academy, a place where we and dozens of other teens with powers learned to master and control our magic.

Rose and I were close friends. Until…the incident.

I’m a rash person with a hot head and strong emotions. Magic has direct ties to feelings, and I’m really bad at controlling both. 

At EA, we learned that anytime we feel a strong emotion, magic can happen accidentally. Everyone mastered shutting down the magic when they felt happiness, sadness, excitement and more until called upon.

Everyone but me.

Rosalee and I didn’t think that was a problem until I got mad at her. And I felt an emotion, accidentally did magic, and one thing led to another until we were both kicked out of EA.

I vowed to forget about her.

But now she’s here?

At the same school the EA placed me in (even after we leave the academy, they still keep close tabs on its magical students by assigning us new schools) after I got kicked out of my other private middle school?

You’ve got to be kidding.

But I’m not going to get involved with Rosalee Adams. Nope. I’m going to ignore her, ignore my magic, and try to be a normal fifteen-year-old. Rosalee might exist, but I’m going to forget her as my ex-bestie. She’s just another non-magical human.

Okay. All that leaves is to ignore everybody else at this blasted party.

I despise parties. And people. I hate all these teens crowded into this noisy place—I dislike the people and the situation, I mean. It’s overwhelming and I’m afraid of what I’m going to feel and do if I hang around too long. 

Pretty much everybody at the EA is introverted at first, and doesn’t like parties and other gatherings because of emotions, but most adapted and now enjoy them.

Not me.

I want to, need to, get out of here. But it's barely eight p.m. Going home now would definitely be weird compared to the teens who dance till eleven, and I am trying to fit in…. 

No, I think. I can stand embarrassment if it keeps everybody safe from my stupid magic.

“Where’d Rosalee go?” Samantha wonders.

“I don’t know,” I say.

“She doesn't like large gatherings. Do you?”

“I’m going home in ten minutes,” I mutter, and only after the words come out of my mouth do I realize I’ve answered her question.

“Already, Margarita?” She frowns. 

“Yeah,” I say, taking a deep breath. “I’m going to go to the bathroom. Be right back.” I flip my red hair and march off.

It’s a wonder what empty hallways can do to you. As soon as I step out of the muti-purpose room, with all its action and madness, and into the deserted, air-condition hallways, I feel way more relaxed. 

I only got to this private school yesterday, so it takes me a moment to find the bathroom. As soon as I step into the restroom, I glance up into the mirror. My pale face is clammy with sweat.

I just want this night to be over.


~*~ℝ𝕠𝕤𝕒𝕝𝕖𝕖~*~


I watch Margarita disappear into the bathroom. By now, I’m just wandering the halls, migrating from place to place. The party’s too overwhelming—sorry, Sammy.

I wonder if Mara really has to use the bathroom, or is just trying to escape from the crazed teenagers. It could be both—lots of EA students and ex-EA students are introverted and dislike loads of people.

Especially Margarita.

I recall the day we both got kicked out. Mara and I were going to lunch when we got into an argument about…something. I forget. It’s barely been half a year, but I’ve been trying to forget about her—and it was working until now.

Anyways, Mara being Mara, she couldn’t stifle the magic woven into her emotions. She started doing magic—fight magic.

Fight magic is illegal at the EA.

And it was aimed at me.

Any fighting is illegal at the EA.

Margarita was—is—one of the most powerful EA students ever; she got her magic straight from raw emotions. But she couldn’t control her powers because of that.

I know she didn’t mean to start using fight magic, but she was—and she was about to hurt me.

I remember my strawberry-blond curls swinging in my face as I countered the magic with my own. I was barely fighting—just defense against Mara’s powerful fight magic.

The headmaster didn’t care.

Margarita got kicked out and so did I. To different schools.

But now…the same school.

What was our headmaster thinking when he thought it was a good idea to place Margarita and me together again? 

Whatever the reason, she’s here now.

Samantha seems to like her. That’s…good. But my friend can’t know I know Mara. I don’t know why, but she can’t. Sammy has no idea Margarita is magic, too. Which also means Margarita has no idea that Sammy knows I have magic. 

Hmmm….

“Hi, Rosalee,” Samantha says.

I jump and glance to my left. Sammy’s standing there, her greens eyes darting around. “Why’re you here? What ever happened to giving the DJ Dance Party a shot?”

I shrug. “Too many people.”

“Come on, Rosalee! You’re a teenager. This is fun!”

“Too many people,” I repeat.

“But—”

“Sammy, go away,” I groan.

“Fine,” she huffs. “Maybe I’ll go tell Margarita to stay. She’s leaving soon—she seems to hate parties like you.”

“You’re not going to be able to convince her to stay.”

Sammy gives me a funny look. “Why? And how would you know? You just met her.”

“Yeah, I know,” I say. “But I have a feeling she’s still going to”—I flick my wrists—“vamoose. I’d say just leave her alone.”

“You know,” Samantha says, “I think you’re jealous.

Of Mara?

“Nope,” I say, popping the ‘p’ sound.

“Mmhmm,” Sammy eyes me. “I’m going to go walk Margarita home. ’Night, Rosalee.”

“’Night, Sammy,” I echo.

She walks off to wait for Margarita.

I stand there and observe as Mara comes out of the bathroom. She and Samantha chat—it seems like Mara doesn’t want to be walked home (duh, I think. If she’s living like me, she’ll need magic to get home.) but Sammy insists. Margarita finally sighs and leads Sammy off.

I start to trot after them.


~*~мαrɢαrιтα~*~


“It’s a nice night, isn’t it?” 

I let out a breath out of the corner of my mouth. “Yeah.”

In truth, it does feel pretty good. The winter air is barely 40°, but I don’t wear any coat besides my hoodie—which I take off. The cool breeze feels amazing against my skin, especially after the hot, stuffy dance party.

“You can let me walk from here,” I tell Samantha.

“No, it’s okay,” she insists.

I inwardly groan. I need to use my magic to get home, and Samantha can’t see. I need to ditch her before the next block—I can enter my house from the woods, and the trees lining the sidewalk are about to end.

I stop. “No, seriously, please let me walk home alone.”

Sammy glances at me uncertainly. “Um, fine.”

I pick up the pace and am relieved to hear no footsteps follow. Samantha must’ve gone back to the school.

I continue my brisk trot until I reach the path into the woods. I walk into the forest and breathe a sigh of relief. I’m safe. 

No kids, no noise, not a single person to hurt with my magic.

My feet sink into the ground a little as I walk through the forest. The trees make freaky shapes in the darkness of 8:30 p.m., but I don’t care.

I eventually reach the clearing. I walk up to the tree I enchanted and glance at the hole in it’s trunk. Time to open the portal.

I wave my hand around the forest and the nearby plants wither as I suck the water out of them. “Sorry,” I whisper as a huge ball of water, easily a couple gallons, hovers above my palms.

The way I open the portal is by shooting water into the knot. I’m about to use my hands and magic as a water gun when I hear something.

Crack.

Something, stepping on a twig.

I whip my head around. If it’s an animal, I’m fine. If it’s a human—well, I’m doing magic. I hope it’s not a human.

Naturally, it’s a human.

“Margarita?” A voice calls.

I pale and turn around until I see Samantha standing on the path. The moon casts a sheet of white across her body, illuminating her startled expression. “You’re doing magic,” she breathes.

Instead of dropping the water, I do something way worse.

Panic builds up inside of me as I shift my gaze from her, to the floating patch of water, from her, to the water. I’m shaking and breathing way too quickly as I steady my hands.

But the pressure inside is too much.

I cry out and shoot the water at her.

Splash.

“AH!”

Crackle.

“AHHH!”

My eyes are shut tight and I don’t want to open them for fear of what I did. But I have to see the damage I just caused.

I slowly blink my eyes open.

Samantha is frozen, a coat of ice covering her entire body neck-down.

I’m hoping that’s the end of it when I see something else I did without realizing it:

Dozens of floating knives made of ice, positioned around Sammy’s head. 


~*~ℝ𝕠𝕤𝕒𝕝𝕖𝕖~*~


My feet pound on the ground as I run down the path.

I was just leisurely going after Samantha, to talk to her and repeat I’m not jealous of Margarita, when I hear screams.

Sammy’s screams.

So now I’m jogging, running, sprinting to the clearing I know is at the end of this trail. It’s the one I go to to practice my magic—the other clearing by the playground is the one I use at recess.

“SAMANTHA!” I yell. “I’M COMING!”

I burst into the clearing to see Mara, her brown eyes wide and a startled expression planted onto her face, backing into a tree.

Opposite from her—Sammy, frozen in ice, with knives hovering above her head.

Margarita seems to be trying to undo the magic, but it’s not working. Margarita’s not great at controlling her powers, when she uses them or has to fix the effects, so I’m worried. “Stop,” I say. “You’ll just make it worse.”

I ignore Mara’s eyes as I run up to Samantha.

I flick my wrists, and a second later, all the ice is just a pool of water at our feet. I hug Sammy and she hugs me back. “Thank you,” she says.

“I’m so glad you’re okay.”

Samantha pulls out of the hug and stares at Margarita. “You have…powers.”

“And you saw,” Margarita says miserably.

Mara jogs over to me and grabs my hand. She starts pulling me away but I rip my hand away. “We need to go,” Margarita tells me. “Samantha saw. We have to get out of here. Probably erase her memory, too.”

“Nobody’s erasing anybody's memory,” I say firmly.

“Rosalee, I know she’s your friend, she knows we have—”

“She already knew we have powers,” I say. “At least, that I have powers. Sammy’s known for months. She’s not going to rat us out.”

Samantha nods. “I would never.” She peers closer at Mara. “So. You have magic, too. And…Rosalee seems to know that already.” She backs up and gives a knowing look. “You guys have met before, haven't you?” 

Margarita and I exchange looks.

“…Yeah,” I say.

“But it’s a bit more complicated than that,” Mara agrees.

Samantha looks at me suspiciously. “Rosalee…?”

“We have a lot to explain. But let’s start with the Enchanted Academy.”


*


“So,” I say, “mind blown, right?”

Sammy shrugs. “I wouldn’t say my mind is blown, but if I were a robot, I’d be saying ‘beep-boop-bop, circuits overheating’.”

Margarita and I laugh and Sammy joins in, before abruptly stopping.

“Hold on,” Samantha says. “Let me get this straight.” She turns to me. “You and Margarita went to school at this place called the… Enchanted Academy, a place for other teens with powers. You two were best friends, until Margarita's magic got out of control, you magic-battled, and you both got expelled. Banished. Whatever. And, here, Margarita’s magic got out of control again, because she didn’t know I’m already aware of magic.”

“Right. Sorry,” Mara apologized for the millionth time.

Samantha grinned. “Don't be. It’s fine.”

“You call frozen in place with knives over your head fine?” I throw my hands up. “Wow, Sammy. Just…wow.”

“Still,” Margarita says to my friend. “I owe you one.” The red-haired girl checks her watch. “It’s not even nine p.m.. Do you guys want to go get ice cream? I’ll pay.” 

Sammy looked like she wanted to protest but Margarita mouths, Again, I owe you one!

“Sounds good,” I smirk.

“Umm….”

Margarita side-eyes Samantha. “What?”

“I just got frozen in ice. Let’s skip the ice cream, please.”

Mara chuckles. “Riiight. Does bubble tea sound good?” 

“Yup,” Samantha says.

The two set off down the trail but don’t follow yet. I scan my surroundings. It’s chilly but I don’t mind. The full moon sports a halo of silky white light, and glittering stars are scattered against their blue-black backdrop.

I step into the path and start walking out of the woods, the only sound being the birds tweeting and my friends’ laughter ringing up ahead.

Posted Aug 26, 2020
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Liling Wei
August 31, 2020 22:33

Congrats on first place Aerin!

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August 31, 2020 23:10

Thanks!! 🤩

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Liling Wei
September 01, 2020 04:17

Hey could you check out my profile? I have a new story up and I'm not sure if it's really good enough. I'm fairly certain it sucks and I'm not sure if I should just delete it.

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September 01, 2020 11:15

Sure!

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Great story!!!!!! I'm so happy you're in 1st place! Congratulations! I bet you'll become an awesome writer someday! That's an amazing accomplishment!

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August 31, 2020 23:10

Aww thank you, SS!! 😁😁😁🤩🤩🤩 You too!!

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Megan Sutherland
August 31, 2020 22:20

Aerin!
OH MY GOSH YOU'RE FIRST!!! I AM SO HAPPY FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
As always great story!!!
WOWWWWWW YYAYAYYYAYYA CONGRATULATIONS AERIN!

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August 31, 2020 23:06

THANK YOU MEGAAAAAAN!!! I’m so excited...THANK YOU!!

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Megan Sutherland
September 01, 2020 00:48

Of course, Reedsy friend!
oof that was cheesy lol

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September 01, 2020 00:52

😉

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D. Shikha
August 31, 2020 07:40

Oh my goshhhh! Aerin, you are at #1, Congrats!🎉🎊🎊🥳🥳 It's amazing, it's so so so amazing.

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August 31, 2020 12:01

THANK YOUUUU!

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D. Shikha
August 31, 2020 12:39

You're welcome! Everybody likes you and your stories very much.

But someone is still downvoting your comments, In morning(for me) there were 9420+ points and now they are 9340.

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August 31, 2020 22:06

Aww thank you!!! Yes I noticed...😕. But it’s okaaaay. Thanks!

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D. Shikha
August 31, 2020 14:00

Oh no, Aerin, You're on second. Zilla's points suddenly increased.

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August 31, 2020 22:08

😬

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D. Shikha
August 31, 2020 14:04

Wait, I just upvoted you. You're back on #1 now. Congrats again!!!🍕🍔🍟🌭🍿🧂🍭🍬🍫🍬🍭🍬🧁🎂🎂🎂🎂 (I don't know what you like to eat)

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August 31, 2020 22:08

YAAAY THANM YOUUU!!! mmm, mmm!

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D. Shikha
August 31, 2020 16:42

Oh my gosh!!! I hate that downvoter!!!😡😡👿👿 I'm constantly upvoting your comments and that person is downvoting them. He/she is also downvoting mine and everyone else's, who upvoted you.

ANONYMOUS DOWNVOTER!!!!! SHOW YOURSELF!!!! WHO ARE YOU!!!??

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August 31, 2020 22:07

Yeah, totally!
Thaaanks!
Yikes, I’m so sorry to hear that! I’ll upvote you in an hour (I’m still at the beach and hafta shower...)
YESSSS

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August 31, 2020 00:26

Hi Aerin! This story is amazing! Also, btw, I love the daily clusters :).

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August 31, 2020 00:45

Thank you! Hehe, thanks, I’m glad! :)

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D. Jaymz
August 30, 2020 18:11

Excellent story, Aerin 👏

In the sentence, 'She walks away and I’m left in a crown of partying teenagers.', I think you meant 'crowd' instead of 'crown,' as in, 'She walks away and I’m left in a crowd of partying teenagers.'.

I like this sentence, 'The full moon sports a halo of silky white light, and glittering stars are scattered against their blue-black backdrop.'. It is rich in imagery through your words.

Well-written! 😊

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August 30, 2020 18:22

Thanks so much, D. Jamyz! Yup, that was a mistake...aw, thanks!

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D. Jaymz
August 30, 2020 18:51

You're welcome 😊

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August 30, 2020 18:22

Thanks so much, D. Jamyz! Yup, that was a mistake...aw, thanks!

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August 30, 2020 18:22

Thanks so much, D. Jamyz! Yup, that was a mistake...aw, thanks!

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B. W.
August 30, 2020 14:49

Hey Aerin, i'm sorry about what happened to you with the mysterious Down-voting person and that you got out of the third place. I hadn't heard of it for a little while until you said something about it and your my friend, i don't know why this is happening. so guess what? im gonna go and kind of go on a up-voting spree type thing for you since you seem sad from it. maybe we can stop them later

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August 30, 2020 14:57

Awww thank you so much, B.W.!
Yeah, I’m kinda annoyed and sad that that many points died, but it’s more sad that somebody would actually do that...I mean, people are ticked off when even ten points go missing, so you can understand how I feel when 150 are subtracted.
BUT HEY, 99.9% of people on Reedsy are sooooooo nice!!! So I’m not gonna...umm...I dunno where I’m going with this.
Anyways, thanks agaaain!

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B. W.
August 30, 2020 15:01

No problem i'll try my best to try and help you get back to where you originally were ^^ i don't even understand WHY someone would want to do it, isnt there maybe a way to find out who its been as well? and yeah like 99% of the people here are really nice and all the only people that arent are the ones that do this.

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August 30, 2020 15:13

Ohmygosh, my points just skyrocketed! Thank you so much, B.W.! I’m back where I was last night ;)
🥰🥰🥰😘😘😘

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B. W.
August 30, 2020 15:16

No problem Aerin :) i up-voted mostly everything on the most Recent Story and both of 'the choosings" anything for you, you deserve to be back there and even higher later on :)

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August 30, 2020 18:14

Aww thank you!!!

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August 30, 2020 11:17

Hey Aerin, I've been wondering - well I haven't seen this happen on Reedsy before but maybe we could do a collab book together?

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August 30, 2020 12:11

Hmm, sorry, we can’t! For one, I don’t really know how we can write a collar story together without giving away personal information...also, how would we post it? Thanks for the offer, but I’ll have to decline. Bye! 💛💛💛

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August 30, 2020 12:17

That's totally fine! I understand

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August 30, 2020 12:18

Btw, I just posted a new story if you wanted to check it out! :D

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August 30, 2020 12:22

Okay, I left a comment!

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User 34258u92
March 31, 2021 12:09

cool🐈‍⬛🐞

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March 31, 2021 12:15

XDDDD

love dat show btwwwwwwww

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B. W.
September 21, 2020 19:49

Dang it, it's getting more annoying and making me mad but someones started to down-vote me again

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September 22, 2020 00:39

nikdshfsidhfuruferf Oop sorrrry

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B. W.
September 22, 2020 00:39

eee it's okeh. so when do ya plan on making a new story on here tho?

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September 22, 2020 00:40

Um...I’m hoping to have my zombie one out in a few days!

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B. W.
September 22, 2020 00:43

It's the funny one right?

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נιмму 🤎
September 13, 2020 17:03

hey aerin! I'm pretty bored, and i have no yellow dot :( so i was wondering if we could go on a upspree of each others comments? dont think weve done that in a moment

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September 13, 2020 17:52

Sure-hure-hure! Although I’ve upvoted all of your comments on your own stories and comments I’m other stories are tricky, so I can’t upvote much. Maybe 50 points or so?

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Jen Park
September 03, 2020 14:31

I love this! The three characters are so endearing. I liked the twisted emotions between Rosalee and Margarita, and how they sort of made up(?). I loved the idea of magic coming out straight from your emotions, so if you can't control your feelings the magic will be released out of you. I remember that there was something similar with that in Harry Potter, he accidently blew up his aunt because he was angry. :) Nice story!

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September 03, 2020 14:32

Thanks so much!! Ohhh YEAH, I forgot there was something like that in HP! Okay, thanks for stopping by!
~A

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Doubra Akika
September 03, 2020 11:54

Amazing job with this Aerin! I absolutely loved the ending and dialogue throughout! And congratulations on the leaderboard!
Hope you’re staying safe and thanks for all the positive feedback you’ve given me!

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September 03, 2020 12:09

Thank you so much!
You too! Haha, no problem!

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Doubra Akika
September 03, 2020 12:53

My pleasure!

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September 02, 2020 21:03

Finallyy!! Got to it! I'm about to read the next one too!
I really liked this, the whole plot and story line was cool. I also liked Rosalee, and Margarita, cause I too hate parties, 10 minutes in and I already want to go home.
I also like Samantha being a great friend to both! And promising not to tell anyone. It was also funny at some parts and I enjoyed the whole emotions-tied-to-powers!
LOVED IT!!
-Ugochi✨*~

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September 02, 2020 21:07

Yay, thanks!
Thank youuuuuu, Snow!! Yeah, I like parties, but I’m naturally introverted and I’m too hot and louded-out that far in. My school actually has a DJ dance party, where I got the idea, and I always want to leave pretty soon ;)
Thanks so much!!
~Aerinnn 🍭~

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September 02, 2020 21:13

Of course!!
My eyes glanced over some comments and I saw that your birthday is on March ... OMG my brothers birthday is on that date!! I have a whole new respect for you now!!😌😆

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September 02, 2020 21:20

Wooooah, your brother is born on St. Patrick’s day? Cool!

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September 02, 2020 21:07

OUU YOUR ALMOST NUMBER 1!!
Also me, upvoting a good amount of your comments!!! (girl you got like 400 comments I'll try my best!)!

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September 02, 2020 21:18

Yessss I’m so excited! Hopefully I’ll be in 1st soon 😄. I was, temporarily, but then Zilla got a new 800 points...hehe

Awww thank you!! Really? I think I have more like 2,700...ohhhhh you mean comments on this story! THANKS!

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Akshat .
September 01, 2020 13:07

This is the 400th comment on this story!

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September 01, 2020 18:31

Wowza!

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Akshat .
September 02, 2020 07:35

xD

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<inactive> .
September 01, 2020 11:10

Aerin I have a lot of things to tell you-
1. AREN'T CHU'S POINT GETTING JUST A TAD BIT TOO HIGH!?! THEY'VE CROSSED 10,000!!
2. I'm so glad the hater's gone!
3. I'm friends with Celeste now, because of you, so thanks for introducing me to her! She's an amazing person!
4. Did you know a person dies every four seconds? It's sad, but because someone is born every second, it kind of makes up for it. Even though it's because of this we have overpopulation.
Ok byeeee, homework is summoning me :'D

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September 01, 2020 11:19

Hey, Priyamvada!
1. HEHE BUT THEY CAN ALWAYS GET HIIIIIIGHEE
2. Yup!
3. Celeste IS awesome, isn’t she? I’m so glad y’all are friends!
4. Sad, but yeah. I swear, humans are multiplying WAY too fast.
Ohhhh no! Homework! My school starts in a week, so...😏
Bye!

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<inactive> .
September 01, 2020 15:21

i'm still doing homework

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September 01, 2020 18:32

😬😬😬

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<inactive> .
September 02, 2020 05:27

lol
i
hate
homework
so
much

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September 02, 2020 12:02

I
Completely
Agree

H.O.M.E.W.O.R.K.:
(H)alf
(O)ur
(M)ind’s
(E)nergy
(W)asted
(O)n
(R)andom
(K)nowledge

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<inactive> .
September 01, 2020 15:21

:')

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נιмму 🤎
September 01, 2020 01:20

HOLD THE PHONE SiS how aRE u at 10,000 points?? is it just me but everyone went up like zilla had 8,000 but now she has 10,000 in the matter of like one day wut?? i didnt even go up :(

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September 01, 2020 11:08

I dunno. Yesterday I got upvoted a LOT...I was the first person at 10,000 points, haha. Oh, yeah, and Zilla’s points SKYROCKETED. So now she’s first again 😭😭😭. 😂 but whatevs. Yeah, sorrrrrry, sis! When I start driving home from the beach (tonight) I’ll be upvoted evvvvvverybody who upvoted me, so at least you’ll have those new points!

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August 31, 2020 23:19

Hey, Aerin!
Everyone is talking about that mysterious downvoter of yours. I was agreeing with you all until I found out who it was. I really hate to admit this. My brother was commenting negative things on my account and I had to apologize to those writers. I looked at your (and many others') comments, and I saw it was red which meant I downvoted them. I confess, I'm truly, truly, truly sorry about my brother. I am upvoting all of your comments that my brother decreased. I hope the downvoting has stopped for you. I hope my apology is accepted :(

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August 31, 2020 23:25

Ohhhh, this clears up SO much!! Ima response to that in order!
1. As I said above, that makes so much more sense!! Thanks so much for telling me...I’m really glad I know because I was starting to make assumptions and that is BAD!! 🤗
2. It’s not your fault at all!! You don’t need to apologize, Kendra!! 😘 Aw, thank you!!

Hmm...okay...wow...I don’t really know what else to say! This is veeery interesting because I didn’t even consider it wasn’t another Reedsy-er...I hope this means no more downvotes, LOL!!
Have an awesome day, and stay safe, Kendra!! 😆😆😆

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August 31, 2020 23:28

Thank you so much! I will upvote all 2456 comments if I need to :3
You too! 😊

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August 31, 2020 23:39

😄😄😄

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B. W.
August 31, 2020 21:15

Aerin! :D i'm so happy for you i just came back on and saw that you were in 1st place ^^ congrats :)

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August 31, 2020 23:03

Thaaaanks!!! You’ve been supporting me since the beginning (literally 3 weeks ago...😂😂😂) so THANK YOUU!!!

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B. W.
August 31, 2020 23:08

No problem anything for a friend like i've said ^^ jeez that was 3 weeks ago?? i thought that was way longer tbh! still no prob friend ^^

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August 31, 2020 23:14

Yeaaaah I only met you three weeks ago!! Wow....I feel like we’ve known each other at LEAST a month!! Bye, sis!!

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B. W.
August 31, 2020 23:19

Yeah i was honestly about to say the same thing it felt like more of a month than just three weeks

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B. W.
September 18, 2020 12:53

someone just down-voted me a lot a couple minutes ago- i don't even understand why and it's annoying and getting me mad

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Unknown User
September 05, 2020 23:24

<removed by user>

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September 05, 2020 23:33

Thanks!

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Anika G
September 01, 2020 00:51

Hi, I just wanted to say congrats on moving up to second place in the leaderboard!!

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September 01, 2020 00:53

Thanks!

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August 31, 2020 22:54

OMG FIRST TO 10000 POINTS!!!! YOU GO GURLLLLLLLL! Stay safe and happy and keep writing!

Btw, Hope you're having a wonderful time at Virginia Beach!

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August 31, 2020 23:12

YAAAAY THANK YOU!! You too!

Ohhh, I am!! It’s actually funny because from 9 am to 7 pm I was on the surf...when I came back, I has 3+ pages of notifications and a LOT of drama that happened! With the whole downvoter thing going down it’s a bad time to be absent from Reedsy most of the day, LOL...

Bye, sis!

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August 31, 2020 23:35

Lol! That's hilarious! So do you know who the downvoter is?

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August 31, 2020 23:36

Yes, I JUST did! I’m not going to say the whole story but there will be NO more downvotes!!! 😁😁😁
Oh and congrats on 100 points!!

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August 31, 2020 23:56

OMG, I JUST REALISED I HIT A CENTURY!! TY SO MUCH! It's okay u don't have to say who the downvoter is, although I'm really curious. LOL!

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September 01, 2020 00:08

Well, the downvoter was Kendra’s sibling! He logged into her account and downvoted...I’m so glad it isn’t a Reedsy-er! I never would’ve expected this...

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August 31, 2020 21:57

Great job with this one Aerin! I also wanted to congratulate you on being in first place. I can only hope that I'll make it on the leaderboard one day. :)

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August 31, 2020 23:05

Thankssss so much!! YES YOU WILL!!

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August 31, 2020 23:41

Aww, thanks so much! When you get the chance can you check out my stories? When and if you do, please tell me what you think. I know my most recent story had a few grammar errors.

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September 01, 2020 03:49

Hey again Aerin, if it's not too much to ask of you again could you check out the story I just wrote?

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Leya Newi
August 31, 2020 21:47

Aerin, you pass God-Zilla on the leaderboard. I cannot believe it. I'm not really sure what to say, I kinda expected her to be at the top forever and ever, so congrats!

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August 31, 2020 23:03

Thanks so much, Leya!

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