Burying The Hatchet

American Friendship Inspirational

Written in response to: "Include a character with an enemy, rival, or nemesis in your story." as part of Two's a Crowd with Kirsiah Depp.

The first thing Dr. Fatima Sulaymani noticed was the sound.

Not the thump-thump-thump of the helicopter blades cutting through the humid evening air above St. Catherine Mercy Hospital. Not the crackle of the trauma radio clipped to her scrub collar. Not even the distant chorus of ambulance sirens bleeding through the rain.

It was the metallic clang of surgical instruments hitting a tray somewhere down the hall, followed by a voice sharp enough to cut bone.

“You contaminated the field before you even draped him.”

Fatima closed her eyes.

Of course.

Dr. Chava Rosenberg.

Again.

The emergency department at St. Catherine Mercy smelled of antiseptic, stale coffee, sweat, and the fried onions from the cafeteria downstairs that somehow permeated the entire hospital after six p.m. Nurses moved in currents through the fluorescent haze while monitors beeped like anxious metronomes. Outside, rain hammered the windows hard enough to turn the parking lot lights into smeared watercolor halos.

Fatima rounded the corner and found Chava already suited up beside Trauma Bay Three, glaring at an unfortunate resident who looked about three seconds from crying.

“He’s not in surgery yet,” the resident stammered.

“That’s not the point,” Chava snapped. “Sterility begins before surgery.”

Fatima leaned against the doorway.

“You know,” she said dryly, “most people say hello before beginning public executions.”

Chava turned immediately.

There it was—that look. The one that could curdle milk at twenty paces.

Dr. Chava Rosenberg was short, sharp-eyed, and perpetually furious at the universe. Her dark curls were tucked beneath a surgical cap, though rebellious strands had already escaped. She wore exhaustion like armor. People either admired her brilliance or feared it.

Usually both.

“Sulaymani,” Chava said. “I was having a pleasant evening until now.”

“You’ve never had a pleasant evening in your life.”

The resident quietly fled.

A nurse muttered, “Smart man,” under her breath.

Fatima crossed her arms. “What’s the case?”

“Ruptured spleen from a skiing accident. Stable now.” Chava peeled off her gloves with violent precision. “Though I’m sure you’ll inform me I’m violating the Geneva Convention by existing near the patient.”

Fatima snorted despite herself.

Their rivalry had become legendary at St. Catherine Mercy.

It had started three years ago with a disagreement during a hospital ethics board meeting. Chava had argued for reallocating limited ICU resources toward patients with better survival odds during a winter COVID surge. Fatima had accused her of reducing human beings to percentages.

“You worship systems,” Fatima had said.

“And you worship sentimentality,” Chava had replied.

From there, everything escalated.

Politics. Religion. End-of-life care. Healthcare funding. Foreign policy. Hospital administration. Cafeteria food. Whether residents should work twenty-four-hour shifts. Whether artificial intelligence belonged in diagnostics. Whether pineapple belonged on pizza.

Especially the pizza thing.

Fatima believed Chava argued partly for sport.

Chava believed Fatima mistook idealism for wisdom.

And yet both were terrifyingly good doctors.

Which made their clashes even worse.

A trauma nurse approached hurriedly.

“Incoming pediatric airlift,” she said. “Twelve-year-old male. Possible acute abdomen. Severe pain. Rural mountain rescue.”

Fatima straightened instantly.

“How long out?”

“Five minutes.”

Chava was already moving.

“What’s the vitals?”

“BP dropping. Fever of one-oh-three. They suspect sepsis.”

Fatima grabbed a chart tablet from the counter and walked beside Chava toward the trauma elevators.

“Appendix?” she asked.

“Likely,” Chava said. “Possibly perforated already.”

The elevator doors opened.

They stepped inside together.

Silence.

Rain rattled against the shaft windows.

Fatima glanced sideways. “You know, this may be the first pediatric case we’ve worked together in months.”

“God help the child.”

“Oh, good, we’re starting early tonight.”

“I never stop.”

“That explains your blood pressure.”

Chava folded her arms. “And yours explains why administration walks all over you.”

Fatima’s jaw tightened.

There it was.

Always.

Every conversation became a duel.

The elevator dinged open onto the roof access floor.

Cold rain-laced wind blasted into them as they stepped onto the helipad. Rotor wash whipped at their scrubs while nurses wheeled a gurney into place. The helicopter descended through fog and rain like some wounded mechanical bird.

Fatima shielded her eyes.

A paramedic jumped out first.

“Twelve-year-old male!” he shouted over the blades. “Name’s Eli Navarro! Severe abdominal pain for two days! Became unresponsive during transport!”

The stretcher emerged.

The boy looked tiny beneath thermal blankets.

Pale skin.

Sweat-soaked curls plastered to his forehead.

Lips tinged gray.

Fatima’s stomach dropped.

“Oh, no…”

His abdomen was distended.

Rigid.

A dangerous sign.

Chava immediately checked his pupils while Fatima felt for a pulse.

Weak.

Too weak.

“How long symptomatic?” Fatima asked.

“Family thought it was stomach flu,” the paramedic shouted. “Nearest clinic was snowed in. Rescue team had to hike him out.”

“Jesus,” Fatima whispered.

“Save prayers for later,” Chava barked. “Move!”

They rushed him downstairs.

The trauma bay erupted into motion.

Monitors attached.

IVs inserted.

Orders shouted.

The smell of iodine filled the room.

“Pressure’s tanking!”

“Temperature one-oh-four!”

“White count through the roof!”

Fatima pressed gently against the boy’s abdomen.

He moaned weakly.

“Peritonitis,” she said grimly.

Chava nodded. “Perforated appendix.”

“We need OR now.”

“No kidding.”

A nurse looked between them nervously.

Usually, whenever Fatima and Chava shared a room, sparks followed.

Tonight felt different.

More dangerous.

The boy whimpered.

“Mama…”

Fatima looked down at him, her chest tightening.

Twelve years old.

Still small enough to call for his mother when afraid.

Chava was already scrubbing in mentally, rapid-fire issuing instructions.

“Broad-spectrum antibiotics. Prep OR Two. Call anesthesia.”

Fatima frowned at the scans appearing on-screen.

“Wait.”

Chava stiffened immediately.

“What?”

“There’s free fluid higher up than expected.”

“So?”

“So maybe this isn’t just appendicitis.”

Chava walked over.

The two women stared at the CT images.

Rain battered the windows beyond the trauma bay.

Fatima pointed. “There.”

Chava narrowed her eyes.

“Hm.”

“Hm?”

“Hm means I’m thinking.”

“It usually means you’re preparing to insult me.”

“Give me time.”

Fatima zoomed in.

The appendix was clearly ruptured.

But there was another issue.

A pocket.

Higher.

Near the liver.

Chava inhaled sharply.

“Abscess.”

“Exactly.”

“If we don’t drain it—”

“He’ll crash even after appendectomy.”

For one strange moment, they were perfectly aligned.

Then Chava said, “I’ll handle the abdominal washout.”

Fatima immediately replied, “No, you’re too aggressive with pediatric tissue.”

Chava’s eyes flashed.

“And you’re too cautious.”

“We do not have time for one of your surgical cowboy routines.”

“And we don’t have time for your inspirational speeches.”

The room went silent.

A nurse slowly backed away.

Fatima stepped closer. “This child is septic.”

“Yes, I noticed.”

“You rush this, he dies.”

“If we move too slowly, he dies.”

The argument rose instantly like gasoline igniting.

“You always think speed equals competence!”

“And you think hesitation equals morality!”

Fatima jabbed a finger toward the scans. “This is exactly why residents fear you.”

“Oh, wonderful. We’re discussing my personality while a child liquefies internally.”

“Maybe if your ego took up less oxygen—”

“Maybe if your bleeding heart didn’t impair your judgment—”

“Enough!”

The voice cracked like thunder.

Everyone froze.

It came from Nurse Elena Torres, who stood beside the gurney gripping Eli’s chart so tightly her knuckles had gone white.

The room fell dead silent except for the steady beep…beep…beep of the cardiac monitor.

Elena looked furious.

“No one cares which of you wins,” she said. “That boy is dying.”

The words landed hard.

Fatima looked down at Eli again.

His breathing had become shallow.

Tiny.

Fragile.

Chava looked away first.

A long silence passed.

Then she exhaled through her nose.

“Fine.”

Fatima blinked.

Chava adjusted her gloves.

“You take point on tissue preservation,” she muttered. “I’ll handle drainage and irrigation.”

Fatima stared.

That was as close to surrender as Chava Rosenberg ever came.

“…Fine,” Fatima replied quietly.

No more words were needed.

The operating room smelled cold and sterile, all stainless steel and disinfectant beneath glaring surgical lights. Rainwater still drummed faintly against distant windows as Eli lay unconscious on the table surrounded by machines breathing and blinking for him.

Fatima scrubbed in beside Chava.

Shoulder to shoulder.

Like rivals forced into a trench together.

“You know,” Fatima said quietly while drying her hands, “this may trigger the apocalypse.”

“What?”

“Us cooperating.”

Chava snorted unexpectedly.

It was so sudden and brief Fatima almost thought she imagined it.

Then Chava muttered, “Don’t get used to it.”

They entered surgery.

The first incision was clean.

Precise.

Fatima worked delicately, exposing the infected tissue while Chava suctioned contaminated fluid with efficient speed. Nurses passed instruments in perfect rhythm.

For a while, only surgical language existed.

“Suction.”

“Clamp.”

“Retractor.”

“More irrigation.”

Eli’s appendix had indeed ruptured.

Badly.

Infection spread through the abdominal cavity like poison spilled across a floor.

Fatima carefully dissected inflamed tissue.

“He’s been septic for hours,” she murmured.

“At least.”

Chava located the abscess near the liver.

“There you are.”

Pus drained into suction tubing.

A circulating nurse muttered, “God…”

The smell hit next.

Rot.

Infection.

The terrible scent of the body turning against itself.

Fatima’s forehead glistened with sweat beneath the surgical cap.

“How’s pressure?”

Anesthesiology answered immediately.

“Still unstable.”

Chava’s voice sharpened. “Push fluids.”

Fatima glanced at her.

Focused.

Controlled.

For all her abrasiveness, Chava in surgery became something almost frighteningly brilliant. Her hands never shook. Her movements wasted nothing.

Like watching someone conduct an orchestra with scalpels.

Chava noticed Fatima looking.

“What?”

“You’re less insufferable when concentrating.”

“And you’re more talkative.”

Fatima almost smiled.

Then alarms chirped.

Everyone snapped toward the monitor.

Blood pressure dropping.

Fast.

“Damn it,” Chava hissed.

Fatima’s pulse quickened.

“Source?”

“I don’t see active bleeding.”

“Pressure’s crashing!”

The room tensed instantly.

Fatima searched the cavity carefully.

Then she saw it.

“Oh no.”

“What?”

“Microperforation near the bowel.”

Chava leaned in.

Tiny.

Easy to miss.

Deadly if ignored.

“Can you repair it?” Chava asked.

Fatima hesitated.

The tissue looked fragile as wet paper.

One wrong move—

Chava saw the hesitation immediately.

And for once, there was no mockery in her voice.

“Fatima.”

She looked up.

Chava met her eyes over their masks.

“You can do this.”

Simple words.

But startling.

Fatima nodded once.

Then began stitching.

Slow.

Precise.

Every movement mattered.

The OR went nearly silent except for machinery and breathing.

Finally—

“Repair complete,” Fatima whispered.

Anesthesiology checked the monitor.

Pressure stabilizing.

The collective relief in the room felt physical.

Someone actually laughed weakly.

Chava stepped back slightly.

“Well,” she muttered. “I suppose you’re competent after all.”

Fatima barked a tired laugh.

“Careful. Compliments may kill you.”

“Don’t push it.”

Three hours later, the surgery ended.

Exhausted staff shuffled from the OR while rain finally softened outside into a gentle patter.

Eli remained alive.

Critical.

But alive.

Fatima removed her surgical cap in the scrub room, dark hair damp with sweat. Every muscle in her body ached.

Chava stood at the sink washing her hands in silence.

The hostility between them felt…muted now.

Not gone.

Never gone.

But quieter.

Fatima leaned against the counter.

“He’ll make it,” she said softly.

“Yes.”

A pause.

Then Chava spoke without looking up.

“My younger brother died of appendicitis.”

Fatima blinked.

The words seemed impossible coming from her.

“What?”

“We grew up in northern Vermont.” Chava dried her hands carefully. “Tiny town. Snowstorm blocked the roads. No helicopter available.” Her voice remained clinical, but only barely. “He was eleven.”

Fatima said nothing.

“He complained about stomach pain for two days,” Chava continued. “By the time they got him to a hospital…” She shook her head once. “Too late.”

The silence afterward felt sacred.

Fatima had known Chava for three years.

She had never heard her speak personally about anything.

Ever.

“That’s why you moved so fast tonight,” Fatima said quietly.

“Yes.”

Fatima looked down.

“My father almost died because he avoided hospitals.”

Chava glanced over.

“He thought doctors would discriminate against him after 9/11,” Fatima said. “He ignored chest pain for two days.” A faint humorless smile crossed her face. “Turns out stubbornness transcends culture.”

Chava leaned against the opposite counter.

For the first time in years, they were not adversaries in that moment.

Just two exhausted women carrying ghosts.

“Did he survive?” Chava asked.

“Yes.”

“Good.”

Another silence.

Then, inevitably—

“You still handled that bowel repair too slowly.”

Fatima groaned. “There she is.”

“And your suturing technique remains annoyingly delicate.”

“You say delicate like it’s a crime.”

“In surgery, sometimes it is.”

Fatima laughed tiredly.

Actual laughter.

Not sarcasm.

Not verbal warfare.

Just laughter.

Chava stared at her suspiciously.

“What?”

“It’s strange.”

“What is?”

“Not wanting to strangle you.”

“Give it time.”

They walked together toward the pediatric ICU.

Night-shift nurses moved through dim hallways while televisions murmured quietly in waiting rooms. The smell of coffee had replaced the smell of dinner from downstairs.

Eli’s parents had arrived.

His mother stood instantly when she saw the doctors approaching.

Eyes swollen from crying.

“Is my son alive?”

Fatima smiled gently.

“Yes.”

The woman burst into tears.

Her husband covered his mouth with shaking hands.

Chava shifted awkwardly beside Fatima like someone deeply uncomfortable with emotion.

“He’s critical,” Chava said carefully, “but the surgery was successful.”

The mother grabbed both their hands.

“Thank you.”

Fatima squeezed back automatically.

Chava froze for half a second before allowing it.

The father looked between them.

“You saved our boy.”

Neither doctor spoke.

Because the truth sat heavy between them:

They almost hadn’t.

Not because of skill.

Not because the case was hopeless.

But because pride is a venom all its own.

Later, near midnight, Fatima found Chava in the hospital cafeteria drinking burnt coffee beside a vending machine that hummed like an insect.

“You voluntarily came to the cafeteria?” Fatima asked. “Should I call neurology?”

Chava looked up.

“The coffee in the surgeon’s lounge tastes like battery acid.”

“This tastes like old pennies.”

“Yes, but cheaper.”

Fatima sat across from her with a sigh.

The cafeteria was mostly empty now. A janitor mopped near the far wall while rain slid slowly down dark windows overlooking the city.

For a while, neither spoke.

Then Chava said, “You know this changes nothing.”

Fatima smirked faintly. “Naturally.”

“I still think your healthcare policies are economically delusional.”

“And I still think your ethics resemble a malfunctioning calculator.”

Chava sipped coffee.

“But,” she admitted reluctantly, “you were right about slowing down during the repair.”

Fatima blinked.

That might have been the rarest sentence ever uttered inside St. Catherine Mercy Hospital.

“I’m sorry,” she said. “Could you repeat that? I’d like witnesses.”

“Oh, don’t ruin it.”

Fatima grinned into her coffee cup.

The rivalry would continue.

Of course it would.

Tomorrow they would probably argue over hospital funding or religious philosophy or whether administrators belonged in Dante’s Inferno.

But tonight had changed something essential.

Not agreement.

Not friendship.

Respect.

The hard-earned kind forged only under pressure.

Somewhere upstairs, a twelve-year-old boy slept in the ICU with a future ahead of him because two enemies finally remembered what mattered more than being right.

Outside, the rain finally stopped.

And for the first time in years, St. Catherine Mercy Hospital felt quiet.

Posted May 29, 2026
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