love, M

Fiction

Written in response to: "Start your story with the flickering of a light." as part of Of Stranger Things.

Note: part 2 to “love, X” so if you want, listen to Molly by Chase Atlantic lol. Sorry about the song

The light flickers, and she walks out of the other dark room, all alone.

She watches me, walks over and sits in my arms.

What does she do next?

She cries.

Everything I hoped wasn't true comes out of her mouth. She says it all, not stopping to spare me from pain.

But she's perfect, she's magic.

She was the only one there for me, when no one even looked at me, she tried to make me better but she couldn't.

I got up, and left, than got in my car and drove, because why waste my time if there is nothing left?

Molly.

Molly.

Molly.

You should be here.

Why did you lie to me?

You need to be here.

But your the one who turned me into an addict.

Everyone leaves,

I thought she was perfect.

She was all I needed.

Wanted.

Had.

And now my trust is broken.

And it sits right next to my heart.




Posted Jun 08, 2022
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Leo Luzvardi
June 23, 2022 00:52

Hey Jex, been a while since we talked. How’s your summer?

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Jexica Marcell
July 27, 2022 13:03

Good. Todays execution day....
not excited :(

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Leo Luzvardi
July 27, 2022 14:50

Oh calm down its not that bad.

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Nicole Of 2022
June 09, 2022 19:32

CONGRATS ON PASSING YOUR CLASSES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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Ace Quinnton
June 08, 2022 23:20

Again, this is good. But instead of just very mini short stories, could you flesh it out like it's an actual story? More backstory, more DRAMA, more intel on the characters please.

It's up to you if you'd like to do this, but in my opinion, just basing the story completely off the song makes it quite bland to be perfectly honest.

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Jexica Marcell
June 08, 2022 23:41

omg yes i was going to fix this but i wrote these in class and I have a ton of things going on lately lol.
tysm for the feedback!!!!

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Ace Quinnton
June 08, 2022 23:49

No problem mate. Have a nice day/afternoon/night.

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Jexica Marcell
July 27, 2022 13:03

I DOOOOOO

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Jexica Marcell
July 28, 2022 17:32

yesssssss

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