Nika the Menacing (Part 5 WoE)

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Written in response to: "Start your story with one character making a vow that they never would have made the year before." as part of New Year, New You.

Part 5 of War of the Elements! Nainika the Menacing... read other parts if you haven't already. Or if you haven't, should still make sense.


ok i'm rushing. Bye love y'all have a nice day.


“We promise to exterminate all other elements except for the Darkness Kingdom.” 

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Twenty Minutes Ago 

 “Dad, I don’t think we should be attacking other empires.” I was Nika the Menacing (no prim, prissy princess title for me), the eldest daughter of the Sand King. We were a tribe of only two-thousand, but nomads. We were fierce in battle, but we weren’t ruthless barbarians. We were civilized, and we strayed from attacking lands which had done nothing to us. In fact, the last time we had attacked was almost thirty years ago. I hadn’t even been born (I’m eighteen, do the math). I heard stories of victory and loss on the mighty battle field. Elements clashing and fighting in a vicious war.  

I was the eldest child of the royal family, and for ten years, my mother gave birth to no children. So instead of having a son to nurture as a general, my father became content with grooming me into his ideal son. He relayed battle strategies, epic tales, and how to use weapons.  

“Sand is most compatible with fire. which combined with sand can either create a flaming sheet of glass which could trap hundreds of soldiers under a molten glass cage, or stinging pieces of rock which come flying at you at 100 miles an hour which can kill you. Next is air, howling wind and sharp, tiny specks of sand can form a raging sandstorm. Light is always an extremely powerful ally, so we never cross them in battle-” 

“But father. What about water, ice, earth, light or darkness?” 

“Tsk. Don’t you use your brain? Water practically dissolves us, and frozen sand is just a joke! Not to mention we don’t ally with dark, ever, since they are the sneakiest and least trustworthy of them all!” 

“But wouldn’t we want to pair with them otherwise they can hurt us?” 

“You mustn’t speak of things you don’t know, child.” 

So he was harsh, but that’s the way to raise a true warrior. I took it as a compliment.  

So why was he going against his own advice right now? Twenty minutes ago the King of Darkness had arrived in the throne room by shadow-traveling. Like one minute it was just a shadowy corner, the next minute, boom, person!  

“Greetings, King Adorini of the Darkness Empire. What do we owe this pleasure today?”  

“I want you as my ally for the war.” 

“Why-” There was a pause as my father locked eyes with King Adorini. Then, he dropped his eyes and muttered, “Yes, of course.” 

“Father, you must think this over.” I was his daughter, but I was also his chief general. I was not afraid of some dopey dude who traveled through dusty, cobwebbed corners! Ok, maybe I was, but my kingdom was in dire trouble! If we consented to ally with King Adorini, who knows what would happen. They were the type in history who didn’t care for their allies, and took advantage of them. Once they had what they wanted, they wanted nothing more to do with you. On the other hand, darkness was one of the most formidable elements. In a snap, King Adorini could shroud the whole room in darkness. But in return, that formidableness could be used against us. I opened my mouth, ready to say something to my father, but King Adorini interrupted me.  

“I shall take over this world, eliminate all other kingdoms and have all the elements eliminated except for darkness. And, if you aid me well in battle, perhaps I’ll keep a few Sand Kingdom advisors. But no sand powers. It’s well known that darkness is the most powerful element of them all, because while everything is dark, nobody has any power. Everybody will be at our mercy to see light everyday. First, we’ll kill off the Light Kingdom.” What the heck? He was literally talking about terminating all other kingdoms, including us, right in front of me! The audacity!  

“Excuse me, but that seems very extreme-” 

“Shut your mouth, daughter!” 

“Father!-” He glared at me menacingly, but his eyes held no anger. Instead they looked confused, blank even. He must know that refusing the offer to ally with the Darkness kingdom would mean more trouble for us. But we mustn’t back down! We were a strong empire, and we could afford to lose an ally! 

“And who’s this?” King Adorini looked condescendingly at me.  

“I am Nainika the Menacing, General in the Grand High Army of the Sand Kingdom, heir to the throne.” I straightened myself up and puffed out my chest to emphasize my power. 

“I see.” With an affirmative nod, he grazed his eyes over my body. 

“Eighteen? Perfect age for my son, Jean Valerie.” 

“I’m sorry, but I’m not interested-” But a figure rose from the shadow in the corner. Jean Valerie. A breathtaking sight. Tall, muscular, dressed in black armor. I then desperately hoped that my dark brown hair wasn’t that messy and there were no pimples on my light caramel colored skin.  

What the heck? What was I thinking? I was Nainika the Menacing, Nika the Menacing, Nika the Menacing, Nika...  

“Well? You’ll be his wife won’t you?” My brain clouded with darkness, and I could only think, “Yes. Yes. Yes.” 

“Then that’s settled! You’ll ally with us as well won’t you?” 

“Yes.” My father and I said at the same time.  

“Excellent. You promise?” 

“We promise to exterminate all other elements except for the Darkness Kingdom.” 

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Meanwhile... 

Mira’s POV 

I missed my father. Who knew where he had been kidnapped to? All I wanted was to curl up on my bed and read a good book back home in a palace instead of sitting in this damp forest pondering what to do. Besides, what else was there to do? It was sure that Jean Valerie and his creepy group of darkness soldiers were trying to invade our kingdom. Maybe I would have to live this life of a commoner on the run from now on.  

In fact, my life right now seemed just like those plots of intriguing novels I always read.  

“Kate... show us another trick you can do.” We hadn’t gotten very far with our plans (um... sneak into the kingdom and like attack? Three people? Yay. Menacing.) So we were entertaining ourselves by seeing how our powers reacted with each others. Fire+water=steam. Water+Ice= more ice? Ice+Fire=More steam. Results were not the best, but we found out Kate could create intricate designs just by blowing into the air. She had already created an eeriely likening portrait of me, and she was working on Luke’s.  

Suddenly, a girl appeared in front of us in a gust of wind.  



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Dedicated to Nika!!! Amazing author!! Squeeeeeee...

Posted Jan 09, 2021
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Maya -
January 20, 2021 16:46

I’m doing a science-fiction themed reedsy-cast story and I would like to put you in it if you want. If you want to be in the story, there are just a few questions that I need you to answer.

Questions:
Alien’s Name (either your name or it could be different):
Alien’s size:
Alien’s color (can be any color or combination of colors):
Alien’s special features (horns, tail, wings, tentacles, fur, scales, fins, etc.):
Any other details about their physical appearance:
Personality:
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Other (just anything else in general):
-Maya

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 17:00

OMGGGGGGGGG THANKS SO MUCH MAYA (0r LL) AFTER THIS ILL TRY TO PUT YA IN MY STORYYYY YAYYAYA I'LL NEED TO START IT THO

OK SO...

Jenniveve
erm... 5 foot 4
light purple!!!
I want a tail like a monkeys so I can hang ove rthe place and wings and instead of hair, shining scales
Also, a long scar from forehead to lip that is white...
Reederlandia peeps there have amazing intellectual powers and all have scales for hair and tail
plus can I have a pet dragon yay

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EXCITEMENTT

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Maya -
January 20, 2021 17:02

Yayyyyyyyyy!!!!!!
Thanks so much! Btw do you want to play skribble the (online pictionary game) at 2:30 EST with other reedsy people?

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Kate Reynolds
January 20, 2021 15:07

Helloooo

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 15:47

hiiiiii part 2?

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Kate Reynolds
January 20, 2021 15:49

Nope not yet
I prob won't get it out this week bc the prompts don't really match. But I am working on a horror story!
I was just boredddd

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 16:25

awww darn. a girl can hope tho. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHhhh horror

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Kate Reynolds
January 20, 2021 21:14

XDDD Yeeessssssssss

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Kate Reynolds
January 19, 2021 18:14

NEW FRUIT MEMBERRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!

Her name is Strawberry Sarah 🍓!!!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 18:55

omg whooooooo

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Kate Reynolds
January 19, 2021 18:56

Well changed it to Starfruit Sarah but stilllll!!!!!!!!!!!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 19:35

awwww alright! That's still great

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<inactive> .
January 19, 2021 05:08

jennieeeee
how did your ice thing go? hope it went well

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 02:09

it went gooooooood. plus Luke doesn't hate you, he's just freakin confuzzled. Yah, he's a real person in my middle school class and I bet he just thinks you were talking about the character

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<inactive> .
January 20, 2021 04:47

i was talking about the character tho- oh dang I'M OLDER THAN YOU REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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<inactive> .
January 20, 2021 04:48

*eighth grader laughter*

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Last one! Sassy Wolf Swimmer

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 13:30

oh yes!!! You so amazing!

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January 19, 2021 02:07

blueberry bella
"nika the menacing" fantastic title :D

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 02:09

hehe!!! Thanke! yessssss you planning on submitting a character or not... ? pls do I've already got pig in bikini and panda in dress

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January 19, 2021 02:10

yessss i already did :D

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 02:29

yaaas queen!! You coconut charlotte now!!!!!! happy!!!!! OMG OUR INITIALS ARE BOTH CC yyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyy

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January 20, 2021 15:52

yaaaaaaa! OMG YEAH they're the same :DDDD

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 16:25

coco chanel vibez

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Queen Pig of Bikini Land

and

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Pretty Panda

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 02:03

OH MAH FRICKIN GOD I LOVE I WANT I WANT

YOU DA BEST!!!! Also I love your new name!!!! yay!! we fruits! OK YOU DEF GOIN IN MAH MUSEUM.

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HEHE

Yay! We fruit vibing! YaSSsSsSsSssS

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 02:30

I'm best served on top of icecream! What about you?

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Kate Reynolds
January 15, 2021 20:54

New storyyyyyyy

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:31

hey hi

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January 14, 2021 19:22

YESSSSSSSSSS!!!! I love this seriessssssssssss!!!! When will the next part come outttt?!?!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 15, 2021 20:06

Omg thanks!!! I guess hopefully this week? I'm hoping to get like all the backstories out an take a little break :)

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January 14, 2021 15:14

JEN. HELP. NOW. https://blog.reedsy.com/directories/comments/297716/

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✨Abby ✨
January 13, 2021 05:32

Heyyyy! I don't really know you but Radhika said you upvoted me and I wanted to say thank you sosososososo muccchhhhh!!!!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 13, 2021 15:18

No prob! Marshmallows to da rescueeeeeeee

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<inactive> .
January 13, 2021 05:28

can lupriya pls be canon

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January 13, 2021 01:05

YAY-YUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH THIS WAS SO AMAZING I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT PARTS ALSO I JUST CAN'T BELIEVE THAT YOU'VE BEEN ABLE TO CREATE THIS ENTIRE FANTASY SERIES. LIKE IT'S A WHOLE OTHER WORLD make this into a novel please I want to read it and I don't mean to beg or be annoying or rude or whatever but when is it my turn to come into the picture??

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 13, 2021 01:11

IM VERY SORRRRYYYY but none of teh prompts exactly fit because I don't want to make you like a super goody two-shoes for not lying, but I also don't think I can do it in all dialogue... so sorry. BUT do you wanna hear an excerpt?

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January 13, 2021 20:06

Oh, it's okay!!!!!!!!!!!! I totally understand, Jennie. You don't have to be sorry. I was just curious. But it would be wonderful to hear an excerpt! :DDDDDDDDDD

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Mira Caplan
January 12, 2021 14:29

JEN DID YOU LIKE PART 12??? You'll be in it, don't worry. Just not in the arena... unless you want to be. (I had a different plan, but I could always change it)

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Mira Caplan
January 11, 2021 15:13

Jennnnn I really want to show you my huge poster for French it's AMAXING and I'm drawing seasonal characters and I LOVE IT

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 11, 2021 15:23

Madame king says that at the end you will hold up your posters!!! I will ask her to pin you!

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Mira Caplan
January 11, 2021 15:24

YAAAAAY

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Mira Caplan
January 11, 2021 15:24

YAAAAAY

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 11, 2021 15:45

I SAW IT!!!!! SQUEEEEEEEEE SO GOOOOOOOOOD

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Mira Caplan
January 11, 2021 15:51

Thank youuuu!! The art takes longer than the writing, so I drew those to block out the space etc

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 11, 2021 15:59

yah good planning!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:29

miraaaaaaaaa hi we in facs together!!!! can you pls pls pls be a fruit name? oh yah, I'm jennie lol

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Mira Caplan
January 19, 2021 20:24

I LARB IT!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
January 19, 2021 20:24

I LARB IT!!!!!

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Radhika Diksha
January 10, 2021 17:38

Abby has been downvoted very badly. She has only 39 points. Let's upvote her.

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 19:15

I’m at ski racing training lol

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Oh
Just wannna say that i have a crush on Jean now....

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 21:21

No. You don’t have a crush on him. He has one on you... hehehjeje

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Radhika Diksha
January 09, 2021 14:43

I have been downvoted too. Can you upvote me? I will upvote you back.

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Akshaya Sutrave
January 09, 2021 14:20

Hi Jennie!
I loved reading this story, and the entire series till now!! It was a great idea to dedicate each story to an author here! I can't wait to see what happens in the next part of this series!
Keep writing!! :)
Also, someone has been downvoting me recently. I was on the leaderboard but they down-voted me and I wasn't on it any longer. Although I'm back on it now, I think they might strike again because it's clear they don't want me on it! :( Can I have some help with my points?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:31

OMG YOUVE BEEN DOWNVOTED???????? noooooooooopee help is on da way!

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Akshaya Sutrave
January 19, 2021 15:40

Thank you so much!! :)) But it's okay! They're just going to keep doing it.
I just realized I must have unfollowed you by mistake (my bad). Following you again (sorry!)

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<inactive> .
January 19, 2021 05:04

👑
LORD KING RACCOON ELEPHANT
🐨
👘

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 13:25

Yaaaaaas!! !! I LOVE IT!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
January 14, 2021 21:03

JEN ARE YOU GOING FOR PICTURES??? UIYOTIRUDFGHIYUTRSDGFHKLUGJCFXBV

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Mira Caplan
January 12, 2021 03:04

PART 12 OF TDR HAS BEEN POSTED

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Mira Caplan
January 09, 2021 02:21

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IS THERE GOING TO BE A LOVE TRIANGLE WITH NANIKA, THE DARK PRINCE, AND SOMEONE ELSE??????? OH THAT WOULD BE AWESOME. OR LIKE.....YEAH.

You've improved sooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 02:24

Like you rejected him tho lol...... ok. romance goes like this:

Priya likes Luke... A LOT
Luke likes Kate or you because he feels that he is safe around you and he won't hurt you
Nika likes the dark prince and Priya is related to him and Celeste is the one with Light powers, so some boy/girl (depends on her orientation) will be introduced i guess. Its a freaking complicated story with 7 peeps.

Oh yah, brooke is earth lol and she's coming soon

OMG I"VE IMPROVED!?!?!??! THATS THE BEST PRAISE!!!!!!

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Mira Caplan
January 09, 2021 02:27

..........ok. So. I just want to see how it would go if Priya like Luke but Luke liked Mira (I just want to see it because we're besties irl and it would be HILARIOUSLY GREAT) but Kate also had a minor crush on him but then ended up with another character. And then when Jean Valerie meets everyone else, he could like someone else instead of Nika, and then it's like this love hexagon!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 02:32

jean valerie is the baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad guy da doo da doo doo doo doo da doo (billie eilish)

well he gets charmed by Celeste's hopeless beauty... that's what i was figuring out! And yah Kate should kinda like luke, but you Mira likes him and he likes mira and that would be freaking perfect cause its water and fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and then Nika and Priya will find somebody lollll

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Mira Caplan
January 09, 2021 02:37

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!! He the baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaddddddddddddddd guyyyyyyyyyyy

......CELESTE HOW DARE YOUUUUUUU!!!!!!! But...but......
YES!!!!! They cancel each other out!!! That should totes be a thing.

(Spoiler: Eriene x Luke Castor's gonna be a thing, too. Luriene!!!)

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 02:31

ahhhhhhhh you stalk our convos (hehe i do too but like hey it was a surprise engagemnte)

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Mira Caplan
January 13, 2021 15:56

Jen I forgot if you were in the building or not, lol. DID YOU SEE MY POSTERRRRR??? I'm adding color, and it's gonna look SO much better after that XD My sis designed the leaves and snowflakes

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 13, 2021 16:36

IT WAS FRICKIN GOOD!!!!! YOUR PEOPLE WERE SOOOOOO AMAZING!!!! I loved the hair!

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Mira Caplan
January 13, 2021 16:39

THANKS YOUUUUU!!! What was everyone saying??????????? I couldn't hear that well

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 20, 2021 02:32

everybody was like "what da hekk. wut she doin in school?" and Brad was like, "confirm she printed that out" and I was like, "I KNOW HER" and the other boys were like *stick figure vibin'*

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Mira Caplan
January 21, 2021 00:17

XDDDD YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! I did not print it, I drew it with my own hand

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 21, 2021 01:45

Hehehhe i know but considering Brad didn't even draw and printed out Clipart that looked wayyyyyy worse than your drawings...

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Mira Caplan
January 21, 2021 00:17

XDDDD YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!! I did not print it, I drew it with my own hand

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Mira Caplan
January 13, 2021 16:39

THANKS YOUUUUU!!! What was everyone saying??????????? I couldn't hear that well

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