Nika the Menacing (Part 5 WoE)

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Written in response to: "Start your story with one character making a vow that they never would have made the year before." as part of New Year, New You.

Part 5 of War of the Elements! Nainika the Menacing... read other parts if you haven't already. Or if you haven't, should still make sense.


ok i'm rushing. Bye love y'all have a nice day.


“We promise to exterminate all other elements except for the Darkness Kingdom.” 

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Twenty Minutes Ago 

 “Dad, I don’t think we should be attacking other empires.” I was Nika the Menacing (no prim, prissy princess title for me), the eldest daughter of the Sand King. We were a tribe of only two-thousand, but nomads. We were fierce in battle, but we weren’t ruthless barbarians. We were civilized, and we strayed from attacking lands which had done nothing to us. In fact, the last time we had attacked was almost thirty years ago. I hadn’t even been born (I’m eighteen, do the math). I heard stories of victory and loss on the mighty battle field. Elements clashing and fighting in a vicious war.  

I was the eldest child of the royal family, and for ten years, my mother gave birth to no children. So instead of having a son to nurture as a general, my father became content with grooming me into his ideal son. He relayed battle strategies, epic tales, and how to use weapons.  

“Sand is most compatible with fire. which combined with sand can either create a flaming sheet of glass which could trap hundreds of soldiers under a molten glass cage, or stinging pieces of rock which come flying at you at 100 miles an hour which can kill you. Next is air, howling wind and sharp, tiny specks of sand can form a raging sandstorm. Light is always an extremely powerful ally, so we never cross them in battle-” 

“But father. What about water, ice, earth, light or darkness?” 

“Tsk. Don’t you use your brain? Water practically dissolves us, and frozen sand is just a joke! Not to mention we don’t ally with dark, ever, since they are the sneakiest and least trustworthy of them all!” 

“But wouldn’t we want to pair with them otherwise they can hurt us?” 

“You mustn’t speak of things you don’t know, child.” 

So he was harsh, but that’s the way to raise a true warrior. I took it as a compliment.  

So why was he going against his own advice right now? Twenty minutes ago the King of Darkness had arrived in the throne room by shadow-traveling. Like one minute it was just a shadowy corner, the next minute, boom, person!  

“Greetings, King Adorini of the Darkness Empire. What do we owe this pleasure today?”  

“I want you as my ally for the war.” 

“Why-” There was a pause as my father locked eyes with King Adorini. Then, he dropped his eyes and muttered, “Yes, of course.” 

“Father, you must think this over.” I was his daughter, but I was also his chief general. I was not afraid of some dopey dude who traveled through dusty, cobwebbed corners! Ok, maybe I was, but my kingdom was in dire trouble! If we consented to ally with King Adorini, who knows what would happen. They were the type in history who didn’t care for their allies, and took advantage of them. Once they had what they wanted, they wanted nothing more to do with you. On the other hand, darkness was one of the most formidable elements. In a snap, King Adorini could shroud the whole room in darkness. But in return, that formidableness could be used against us. I opened my mouth, ready to say something to my father, but King Adorini interrupted me.  

“I shall take over this world, eliminate all other kingdoms and have all the elements eliminated except for darkness. And, if you aid me well in battle, perhaps I’ll keep a few Sand Kingdom advisors. But no sand powers. It’s well known that darkness is the most powerful element of them all, because while everything is dark, nobody has any power. Everybody will be at our mercy to see light everyday. First, we’ll kill off the Light Kingdom.” What the heck? He was literally talking about terminating all other kingdoms, including us, right in front of me! The audacity!  

“Excuse me, but that seems very extreme-” 

“Shut your mouth, daughter!” 

“Father!-” He glared at me menacingly, but his eyes held no anger. Instead they looked confused, blank even. He must know that refusing the offer to ally with the Darkness kingdom would mean more trouble for us. But we mustn’t back down! We were a strong empire, and we could afford to lose an ally! 

“And who’s this?” King Adorini looked condescendingly at me.  

“I am Nainika the Menacing, General in the Grand High Army of the Sand Kingdom, heir to the throne.” I straightened myself up and puffed out my chest to emphasize my power. 

“I see.” With an affirmative nod, he grazed his eyes over my body. 

“Eighteen? Perfect age for my son, Jean Valerie.” 

“I’m sorry, but I’m not interested-” But a figure rose from the shadow in the corner. Jean Valerie. A breathtaking sight. Tall, muscular, dressed in black armor. I then desperately hoped that my dark brown hair wasn’t that messy and there were no pimples on my light caramel colored skin.  

What the heck? What was I thinking? I was Nainika the Menacing, Nika the Menacing, Nika the Menacing, Nika...  

“Well? You’ll be his wife won’t you?” My brain clouded with darkness, and I could only think, “Yes. Yes. Yes.” 

“Then that’s settled! You’ll ally with us as well won’t you?” 

“Yes.” My father and I said at the same time.  

“Excellent. You promise?” 

“We promise to exterminate all other elements except for the Darkness Kingdom.” 

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Meanwhile... 

Mira’s POV 

I missed my father. Who knew where he had been kidnapped to? All I wanted was to curl up on my bed and read a good book back home in a palace instead of sitting in this damp forest pondering what to do. Besides, what else was there to do? It was sure that Jean Valerie and his creepy group of darkness soldiers were trying to invade our kingdom. Maybe I would have to live this life of a commoner on the run from now on.  

In fact, my life right now seemed just like those plots of intriguing novels I always read.  

“Kate... show us another trick you can do.” We hadn’t gotten very far with our plans (um... sneak into the kingdom and like attack? Three people? Yay. Menacing.) So we were entertaining ourselves by seeing how our powers reacted with each others. Fire+water=steam. Water+Ice= more ice? Ice+Fire=More steam. Results were not the best, but we found out Kate could create intricate designs just by blowing into the air. She had already created an eeriely likening portrait of me, and she was working on Luke’s.  

Suddenly, a girl appeared in front of us in a gust of wind.  



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Dedicated to Nika!!! Amazing author!! Squeeeeeee...

Posted Jan 09, 2021
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I am pretty sure that Katniss Everdeen learned how to swim in a lake. Is that true?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 22:51

er... yah... um... er... I'll try to get you to 3rd place but um... 1st place is a tough one...

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Oh no! I wasn't doing it for that! Just...fun trivia, that's all. But thanks for liking all the stories, really appreciate you doing that! :)

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I loved this story so much Jennie!
Also, to answer your hardest question, is it the letter F? (Not for the points, but because I feel like I learned this.)

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 19:15

Wow thanks! Wrong sorry... :( hint food

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Your welcome!! It's ok...

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I also remember studying something about electric blue...is that it?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 19:22

Hint: fruit

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Hmm...
Blueberries? I thought it has something to do with blue...

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Up Voter
January 10, 2021 21:39

Incredible story, Jennie! You are such a creative writer! Let me know if you're being downvoted!!! Have an excellent day :)

Love,
Upvoter

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 11, 2021 00:39

Upvoter must be upvoted! Marshmallows, UNITE!

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Sapphire 🌼
January 09, 2021 23:10

ALERT- AMETHYST NEEDS UPVOTING

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:29

saph, do you wanna be a fruit?

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Sapphire 🌼
January 19, 2021 15:42

hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....what fruit would I be?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 15:45

erm... you could be watermelon willow... check my bio for more ideas!

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Sapphire 🌼
January 19, 2021 15:48

kk

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Sapphire 🌼
January 19, 2021 15:54

heheheheeh

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January 09, 2021 21:35

OMG IS THE HARDEST QUESTION IN EXISTENCE YELLOW??

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 21:41

Nope

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January 09, 2021 21:54

Really??

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January 09, 2021 21:25

Hi Jennie!! This was a great story (Love Nika BTW) but you NEED TO EASE UP ON THE I AM OR WE ARE SENTENCESSSS THEY ARE INFO DUMPSSSS!!! Great job tho, can't wait to see my prophecy in it...

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 21:27

Hehehe info dump crew idk how else to do it 😞

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January 09, 2021 21:28

Just reveal it with emotion behind it (Omg I pester about the emotion soooo much) or reveal with added description or dialogue. You need that extra behind it to back it up.

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 21:30

*king of emotion*

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January 09, 2021 21:31

XD yes I am!!!!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:29

hihihihihi

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January 19, 2021 14:46

Hiiiiiiiiiii why you change your name??

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:47

cause im part of the fruit gang!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:48

you could be blueberry bob 🤣 ahahahhaha

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January 19, 2021 14:54

XD no thankssss

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HElP I NEEd TO GET TO 7000 but people Are DOWNVOTING ME SO mUUuUcH

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Can you tell me about my relationship with Jean hehehhee XD

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 22:14

No spoilers

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Waaaah 🥺🥺🥺
Okie XD

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 22:40

hehehehe. light powers+dark powers like that needs to be shipped

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Their BEGGING to be shipped...
Wot ship name...?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 22:44

💜Jeaneste 💜

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January 21, 2021 16:32

Hey do you like my tomato?
(Im celeste's brother)

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 21, 2021 16:37

Hello draco! nice to meet ya! I'm best served on top of ice cream... what about you?

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January 21, 2021 17:13

Hmmmmm
salad
can i go in the fruit gang?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 21, 2021 17:14

You are! I've added you!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 21, 2021 17:14

there's like 20 peeps

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January 21, 2021 17:16

Woah
is ma sis there....

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January 19, 2021 01:21

👑
🐷
👙
👢👢
Queen Pig of Bikini Land

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 02:06

yaaaaaasssssss queen. Aight, so you going in my exhibition too! Love ya!

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January 19, 2021 03:12

*kisses*

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January 18, 2021 21:36

Hey, Jen!
So, I'm writing a story that's going to use all of my Reedsy friends, and I want you in it. If you also want to be in it, fill in this:
Name (if you want something different):
Power:
Spirit animal:
Eye:
Hair:
Favorite color:
Weakness:
Thanks if you do this! If not, that's okay, too. :D
Your friend,
Brooke

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 18, 2021 22:34

OMG GURL I LOVE YA NEW NAME!!!! I wanna be a new name toooooo

Name (if you want something different):
Power: transform into any animal
Spirit animal: dove (my fav animal to transform into)
Eye: blue
Hair: light blond like draco malfoy's hair color lol
Favorite color: pale blue
Weakness: arrogant

squealllllll i can't wait!!

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January 18, 2021 22:35

SHANK YA!!!! lol just find a cool name on a random name generator, and add a plant/fruit/veggie in front of it lol

That all sounds good! Except for the weakness... I meant that your weakness would be like the thing that makes you do really stupid things, or just do anything. If being arrogant is that, then that can stay the same :) Sorry 'bout that

Me, either!!!!!! XD

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 18, 2021 22:38

ooooooooooooh got ya... like a weakness for puppies lol

erm weakness for cute guysssssss

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January 18, 2021 22:39

Yerp. Lol

XD That works!!!!!!! Wait... I'm gonna have Luke (Litlover) in this story... if he's good-looking....??

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 18, 2021 22:50

hey kiwi, I'm cherry. Nice to meet ya.

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 18, 2021 22:42

heh. you da author... you got da power. welp.

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 18, 2021 22:42

i wanna be a fruit name tooooo. hmmmm if I'm like blueberry bella tommorow don't be surprised

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:29

oui

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pretty sure brynne is straight...i could be wrong tho....
Also hogwarts has 142 staricases im pretty sure

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 13, 2021 15:39

Brynne is not straight... sorrry
CORRECT!!!! +50

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at least i got one! its been a little while since i read aru shah

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:29

yah samee

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Im reading it now tho! and if you havent gotten an answer...is she bi?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:43

yessss!!! sorry somebody else answered... but I'll still upvote you!!!

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15? 16 for age? Also, I need a hint for the hardest question.

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January 11, 2021 17:21

NEW STORY

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Kate Reynolds
January 11, 2021 13:34

HELLOOOOO JENNIEEEEEEEEEE
GREAT JOB YET AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS STORY WAS LOVELY! I love the whole "Nika the Menacing" part, and how the story was not too serious!!!!!!!!!

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Brynne is bisexual right?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 11, 2021 13:20

YES!!!! +100 karma

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Mira Caplan
January 12, 2021 03:04

EEEEEEEEEKKKKKKK YES

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:30

heheehe thanks to you for the questions!

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Nainika Gupta
January 09, 2021 21:06

OMG AHAHAHAHA
yessss
so dark
so beautiful

i obvi have a crush on Jean now

loll
I LOVED THIS :D:D:D:D:D
thanks soo much Jennie

also
also
also
Part 3 of Game of Lions is out
your character is AMAZING!!

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 19, 2021 14:30

oh lollll sorry late reply but yep

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B. W.
January 09, 2021 19:00

Hm, I think this was a really good story ^^ This was the first story of yours that I've read, though ill go check the rest out soon. I think I'll go and give this story a 10/10 :)

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 19:14

Thanks! Yay wow 10/10 me happy!

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B. W.
January 09, 2021 19:32

No prob ^^ You should make more stories, though only when you arent busy or anything.

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 09, 2021 21:20

Good idea... when school calms down

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B. W.
January 09, 2021 22:27

Thats fine

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January 09, 2021 17:34

OMG YOU PUT MY SONG IN YOUR BIO I'M CRYING LITERALLY THIS MEANS SO MUCH TO ME THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

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Sunny 🌼
January 23, 2021 00:56

IT'S MIND CONTROL (called it). Also, are Celeste and Priya here and ready to join the party!?

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 23, 2021 00:57

OH MAH FRICKEN GOD YOU GUESSED CORRECCT

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 23, 2021 00:59

Plus happy birthday! (sorry if it's belated, i just read your bio)

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Sunny 🌼
January 23, 2021 01:04

Thanks!

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Mira Caplan
January 22, 2021 20:49

I POSTED PART 14

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hi!
would you like to be a part of a reedsycast story about superheroes?
if so, please fill this out:
Superhero's secret identity (can be real or made up):
Superhero name:
powers:
what their uniform looks like:
where they are from:
their personality:
any other notes:
thank you!

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JEN LOOK AT MA BANANOOOOOOOOO

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 21, 2021 18:54

OH MA FRICKIN GOD I LARB. I MUST GET MY OWNNNNN

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 21, 2021 18:57

LOOK AT MA CHERRY

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 22, 2021 22:43

part 6 is outtttttttttt

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✰ Jennie ✰
January 21, 2021 01:54

Yep! Asian American

Born in America tho.... both parents are chinese.

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