The Lie He wROTe

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Written in response to: "Center your story around a character who has lost their ability to create, write, or remember." as part of The Tools of Creation with Angela Yuriko Smith.

Tristan woke up, his wrists were killing him. He tried to lift them, they refused. They were clung to something. He looked down and saw them strapped at the rests of a chair as well as his legs. Where was he? How did he get here? He tilted to the left and saw a tinted window showing his reflection. His beard was bushy and most probably unwashed for days. His brown leather jacket also fitted the same role. It was tattered only holding on with the stitches made that were almost everywhere. All this he saw from the one bright light hanging at the ceiling. Wherever he was, it wasn't anywhere pretty.

The door opened and two people, male and female, wearing military uniform entered. The female looked like a colonel and the man a rank behind her. There was a chair on the other side of the long table, the woman took her seat and stared at Tristan intently. He saw it from the glare, there was something he had done. But what was it and why couldn't he remember.

"Tristan Blake," the woman called alarming him. "When is today?"

Today? That was the first thing she started with, not even a hello? Was this some kind of test? If it was, knowing today would be easy enough.

"Um... okay," he said, his voice was raspy. He tried clearing it. "Today is..."

Wait, when was today? How could he not know the date. He always checked his calendar... did he have one?

The woman squinted her eyes. "Okay, what did you have for breakfast?"

Breakfast! That he knew, no worries.

"I had..."

No clue, what did he actually have?

The woman sighed. "Do you have a family?"

These questions, they were too much. "What's up with all of these questions, why am I being interrogated?"

"How dare you talk back!" the man barked. The woman placed her palm in front of him, he calmed down.

"I understand you must be very confused," she said. "But you must answer them. Do you have a family?"

"I..." he thought around it. "I...I don't know. I... can't remember anything."

The woman stood and took strides towards him. She dug through her pocket and removed her phone. Sliding it to him, there was a picture of a journal laced with a white cover.

"Last question," she said, finally reaching him. "Do you know what this is?"

He stared the screen for some time, this journal... Yes! This one he definitely knew!

"That's my journal," he said turning to her. "It's for my latest novel."

The woman looked at him and took the phone from the table. Her worst fears were confirmed.

"My name is Gwendolyn. I'm a colonel," she pointed the man. "That is my lieutenant, Jerry. Tristan, you might not remember but this book, it's led to a massive calamity."

Calamity? How was that possible?

The looks she saw confirmed he wanted to ask. "You see Tristan, you are a renowned author who specializes in Dystopian novels. Your fanbase is huge, everyone loves your books. But then suddenly you went silent and you began drafting your latest idea."

"Okay," he uttered. "How is it related to the calamity."

"The events that were happening in the book, they were happening in real life."

He trembled, what did she say?

"What do you mean?"

"Do you mind explaining the idea."

He kept mum, if he couldn't remember what he had for breakfast or what day it was, would he really remember what the draft was all about. There was some tingling feeling around his head, it increased with each second. The draft, it was clear to him! He could remember all about it. He could do it.

"A meteorite crash lands the planet," he said. "The immense pressure within releases a deadly gas that spreads all over. It kills everything in its path, living organisms, the air, the water, the planet is dying. No solution is found to curb it. Chapter by chapter, I was showing how different people lived their lives around it. They were to never survive at the end of the day."

"And what chapter are you on?"

"I guess... forty five."

"How long?"

"Fifty chapters."

They sighed. Jerry was brimming with anger. Gwen gave him a look that restrained him.

"Tristan, everything you just explained, it's been happening in real life. Every time you conclude a chapter, a fraction of people are killed. And if you have indeed reached forty five, then you have done this in forty five cycles. The population of the earth has dwindled ever since."

"What?" he said, shaking. "I... I've... killed people."

"We called this calamity, the rotting. That's because the gas has been decaying everything away."

He remained silent, gazing down, contemplating. It didn't add up. Something around it was amiss.

"How come... I can't remember anything?"

The colonel breathed deeply, moving to his right side. "You were involved in an accident. A dangerous one that robbed you the chance of being a father. While you were in the hospital and they made tests on you, they said you would lose memories temporarily as the days past. After your release, they made observations without your consent, their was a daily pattern in your routine in which not one day would pass until you write something."

She heard him sniffle, she looked back and saw him immersed in misery. His eyes were bulging and the tears did not cease falling.

"I was... gonna be a dad?"

Gwen didn't answer. She allowed him the time, they didn't have its luxury but it was the only reasonable option. To not even recall a family, that was harsh.

He looked up, eyes red. "What did... they discover about me. In that routine."

She carried on with her movements. "Well, they saw that the events of whatever happened the previous day was all gone. When neighbors said hello to you, you would wonder. Appointments that were scheduled early on, you would forget about them. But never would you forget to write. And that was where they made the conclusion that you were responsible for all this."

He sniffled his last. "Is there nothing I can do to fix it?'

Gwen reached the other side of the table and shot glances at Jerry, they already planned options but whatever would come across, would he accept them? They knew that this was the life of one man equated to the lives of millions with so many gone already.

Gwen was hesitant, she imagined herself in his shoes, she didn't have the guts to say anything.

Jerry on the other hand, he was ready. He took his turn and moved closer to him.

"Here's the deal," he spoke. "There are two options. Only two and you must comply."

Gwen wanted him to take it slow but she knew he wouldn't listen. Hopefully Tristan would be aboard with them.

"Okay, tell me," Tristan said.

"One, knowing what you can do, we cannot guarantee your freedom, that's why you will remain in military confinement until the world is healed in some sort of way. The other option, if you really desire that freedom, you will hand us your manuscript and that journal but you will be under supervision at all times to ensure you never write again. Blue pill or Red pill?"

Freedom versus passion, what would he do? He valued both. But this was for the sake of humanity though how could he even predict that any of this would happen. It wasn't fair, there had to be some other option that would satisfy both the needs. Anything.

"Clock's ticking," Jerry reminded him.

"I..."

A sudden pulse ran through his mind. The chapters, one by one, they were racing through his brain. From the crash to the panic to the aftermath, everything was coming in line. He could see a clear glow.

"When the sun blocks the moon at night

And the man docks at noon for light

With cries blare from birds in flight

Do lives dare to chant with might"

Jerry looked at him in confusion. "What the hell are you saying?"

Tristan turned to him and looked directly at the pool of his eyes, he found the solution.

"You... you have to let me out," he said. "I... I know what must be done."

Gwen walked hurriedly to him and touched his shoulders making eye contact.

"What is it? We can do it for you?"

"No, no you don't understand I have to do this alone. I have to finish the book."

"That's not going to happen," Jerry bickered.

"No please, with it in my mind I have to write it," he said, fighting with the restraints on him. " I have to finish the book, It has to be done."

"Tristan, calm down. We can help you."

"No...No! I HAVE TO FINISH THE BOOK!"

The straps on his legs gave in and he stood up, as embarrassing as it was. Gwen knew she stood no chance against him in the state he was, she needed help. The door yanked open and three soldiers swarmed in.

"Keep him calm," Gwen said.

They approached him, Tristan seeing them like monsters. This was not going to heal the planet! Why would no one listen?

"Sir," one of them told him. "Just calm down."

"Don't come near me. None of you want to listen. I have to write the book."

"Hey, listen to us, it will be all fine," another said.

"NO! NO! I HAVE TO-"

He felt an itch in his chest, it grew to be much painful. The soldiers stopped coming closer and the stares they gave him, they were a warning. He felt something coming out, it made the chest feel wet. He checked and saw the shirt tucked within the jacket was drenched in crimson red. Blood? But how? He looked up, jerry held a pistol, a silencer and aimed straight to his chest.

"Jerry, you fool!" Gwen shouted and moved towards him snatching the gun.

Tristan staggered, his head was getting heavy. One last tear formed in his eye and fell. He had the chance, he could do it. Time slowed down, he felt he was not under control but the world, it was going upside down. The soldiers were rushing to take him under their arms while Gwen gazed horrified. Was this the end? THUD!

One of them touched the base of his neck. He turned her. "I'm sorry Colonel. We lost him."

Gwen exhaled and crossed her arms, she was furious. She wanted to hit Jerry but felt compelled not to. How did he get in with a weapon, they left them at the table outside.

"I've done this world a favor," he said, his voice was so cold and unforgiving.

This was the line, he went ahead and cut it. She glanced at him, for the sake of respect and the condition of the world, she let it be.

"A favor that no one asked for," she said. "Leave Jerry, you're work here is done."

He wanted to protest but he couldn't. He stood alert and saluted her then left.

"Two of you notify the morgue," she said, they left as instructed.

She stood beside the one left, his hands shuddered. as he touched the man's chest. She patted him.

***

A white linen cloth was placed over his body. They removed the straps at his wrist and carried him on a stretcher. Gwen gazed as they took the body out and left. All that, for nothing.

As much as she didn't want to admit it, Jerry made a valid point, he was gone so no more deaths, right? But then, he had a plan. One he was so enthusiastic about and was ready to correct what he did. Tristan never wanted this, nobody did and if his plan was meant to work, would it play out and the earth saved.

Tristan Blake, this lie you had written, what truth did you discover that would change the fate of all things

Posted Apr 21, 2026
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08:37 May 03, 2026

I really love the idea that an author's writing affects real-world calamities. It’s super creative and a really cool way to handle the prompt.
I enjoyed the opening because it drops the reader directly into a tense, mysterious situation, and the rising tension makes it highly engaging.
I also appreciate the emotional depth and moral complexity. His amnesia, loss, and gradual realization of his role in the disaster, along with the dilemma he faces, give the story depth.
Excellent work!

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Aaron Luke
10:02 May 03, 2026

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Veronika. I'm really honored that you did.
This gives me hope that we can all do our best. Thank you so much.

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10:47 May 03, 2026

You're welcome.

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Katherine Howell
17:21 Apr 24, 2026

This is a really interesting premise. The idea of waking up and being told your writing is literally affecting reality is such a strong hook. I honestly love that concept. It also made me laugh a bit thinking about how many writers would be in trouble, given our well-known inability to finish things!

I did find the middle section a little hard to follow at times, especially around the explanation of Tristan’s accident, memory loss, and the observation of his routine. There’s a lot of important information there, and I think tightening or clarifying that sequence would help keep the reader grounded in what’s happening. That said, I liked how his lack of memory added to the mystery, and it made the interrogation feel more tense and uncertain. I also thought the dialogue, while a bit formal in places, worked in the context of the military setting and the urgency of the situation.

The ending raises some really compelling questions—could Tristan have actually fixed everything if he’d been allowed to finish the book? Did killing him stop the problem, or make it worse? I thought that ambiguity was used really effectively and left me thinking about the story afterward. Also, great use of the title; it ties in nicely with the concept. Overall, really well done!

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Aaron Luke
10:38 Apr 25, 2026

Thank you so much for reading. I feel honored that you did.
It's quite hard for me but I always do try to refine my dialogue. And I agree that the middle part did feel a bit constrained. That was me trying my best to remain within the word count.
I'll take your opinions into consideration. Thank you so much for reading.

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Rebecca Lewis
20:13 Apr 23, 2026

This story has a strong concept. The idea of an author whose unfinished novel is causing the end of the world is the kind of premise that grabs attention. It feels original, cinematic, and it raises a lot of interesting questions about creation, responsibility, and whether Tristan is a villain or just someone trapped in something bigger than himself. The opening works well because it throws us straight into confusion with Tristan. Him waking up tied to a chair with no memory creates tension right away, and since he doesn’t know what’s happening, the reader learns everything alongside him. That makes the mystery stronger. The interrogation setup was a smart choice for that. Tristan is also a strong character because he feels more tragic than dangerous. The memory loss makes him sympathetic, but the part about him losing the chance to be a father is what adds emotional weight. That moment makes him feel human and not just like “the guy causing the apocalypse.” It gives the reader something personal to connect to. I think the biggest issue is the dialogue. A lot of it feels more like characters explaining the plot than people talking. Gwen sounds too formal sometimes, like she’s giving a report instead of talking to someone who’s scared and confused. Some of the exposition is too direct. It would feel stronger if the characters spoke and let the reader figure some things out instead of explaining everything. One thing I liked was the “forty-five chapters” reveal. That was a smart detail because it gives the disaster structure and makes the threat feel real. It creates urgency because now there’s a countdown attached to the story. The ending is strong too, the idea that they might have killed the only person who could save the world. That’s a great final note. The idea is the strongest part here, and that’s a good thing because strong ideas are hard to come by. The story already has the emotional core and the kind of premise people remember.

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Aaron Luke
10:26 Apr 24, 2026

Thank you so much for reading and commenting Rebecca.
I've been trying to figure my way through with my dialogue since I'm writing a fantasy book on the side and every time I re-read what I wrote, I feel like I have info-dumped a bit too much which makes my head feel like it's going to explode.
Thanks for pointing that out, I need to make sure my dialogue is better.
Once more, thank you.

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Marjolein Greebe
09:25 Apr 22, 2026

I liked this — the premise is strong and that realization really lands.

The tension builds nicely, especially with the memory loss and the writing link. The ending moves quickly, but the idea itself is solid.

Was the ending always meant to cut off like that?

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Aaron Luke
09:59 Apr 22, 2026

I'm honored you like it. I wrote it after reading "I've said too much".
I'll be honest, I'm not sure whether the last question is meant to be rhetoric but if not, I would say the ending is what you believe, what's going to happen after, depends on what you theorize.

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Marjolein Greebe
10:09 Apr 22, 2026

Hahahaha loved your reply. The question was intentional. Your answer is exactly what I hoped for.

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Aaron Luke
10:10 Apr 22, 2026

Glad I could deliver

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Akihiro Moroto
02:34 Apr 22, 2026

If we put all of our will and intentions into one concise action, at times, it comes to fruition. Perhaps Tristan's pen was deadlier than a sword, and maybe he really could have changed the story to save humanity. Unfortunately, not all have faith in human creativity. Most are like Jerry, even though his reaction was due to losing so much from the calamity and wanting revenge. Killer story. Thank you for sharing, Aaron!

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Aaron Luke
09:17 Apr 22, 2026

I'm grateful you liked it and I am honored you got to read it. There was the point I wanted to drive, not everyone will be willing to hear someone's side of the story and truly Tristan may have had the way but then, it's all gone now. Thank you so much for reading it.

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Hazel Swiger
01:09 Apr 22, 2026

Hi, Aaron!
I enjoyed this one, and it did make me a little sad.
This story is so compelling! I think a quick proofread for grammar would help the pacing and make sure your great ideas really pop without any distractions.
I can relate to really needing to finish a book but sorta losing the ability, or at least spark, in order to do that. This had a lasting impact, and it lingered, which is the best part.
Keep writing, this is really strong! Great work!

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Aaron Luke
09:19 Apr 22, 2026

Thank you so much for reading and reaching out Hazel. I'll make sure to improve the skills that I lack. I'm so glad you reached out, this really means a lot. 💛

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Hazel Swiger
12:33 Apr 22, 2026

Of course!

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