A Doorway on Lenox

🏆 Contest #317 Winner!

African American Creative Nonfiction Historical Fiction

Written in response to: "Center your story around someone who has (or is given) the ability to time travel." as part of Across Time and Space with Laurie Chittenden.

Theo had been staring at the same sentence so long the letters bled together. Lineage in Postmodern Black Poetics. He mouthed the words once more, flat and sour on his tongue. His coffee from the bodega on 121st sat cold beside him, the surface gone slick and oily, but he drank anyway.

The radiator groaned in protest, the pipes rattling like brass warming up before a set.

Theo pressed a palm against the open book, willing the words to stay still. For a moment they held. Then the page trembled beneath his hand.

He told himself it was fatigue.

The air sharpened with coal smoke. Somewhere beyond the walls, a horn broke loose in the night.

The lights went dark.

And when he opened his eyes again, Harlem was different.

The words swam, and the sidewalk cracked into cobblestones.

Horse hooves clopped. Trumpets rang from a window above. A boy in suspenders sprinted past with a sack of newspapers.

Theo looked down. His phone was gone.

He closed his eyes again, slowly, and he was back in Harlem 2025. The coffee had spilled all over his notes.

He told himself it was a stress-induced hallucination.

Two weeks later, when he touched the yellowed cover of Torchlight Verse, it happened again.

This time, the streetlamps and car horns didn’t dissolve into fluorescent light and radiator hiss.

***

Theo Marshall had never planned to write about his great-granduncle. Elias Marshall was barely a footnote in most Harlem Renaissance anthologies. His one slim volume of poems, printed in 1925. Then nothing else. It had taken Theo three semesters and an irritable dissertation advisor to even find the book.

But here he was, dozing over its fragile binding in Columbia’s archive reading room, the heater rattling like a dying trombone, when the world folded neatly into itself.

The cold vanished.

Ink and coal hung heavy in the room, a bitter perfume. From outside drifted Harlem’s chorus: boots striking pavement in syncopation, a horn laughing wild from a tenement window, a dice game punctuated by cheers, and far off, the steel tempo of the train threading it all together.

Theo stood. The desk under him was now a dark walnut, carved with initials.

Outside the tall window, dusk spread over Harlem, streetlamps flickering on as voices rose from the sidewalks.

His hand dug into his sternum, waiting for the sharp bite of something fatal. The pulse was strong, stubbornly alive.

But if he was right, and Theo Marshall put more faith in science than faith, he had time-traveled by accident. Again.

Footsteps pounded the stairs, each one strong enough to rattle the doorframe.

The door flew open hard, slamming against the wall.

In the doorway stood Elias Marshall.

***

Elias’s suit sagged at the shoulders, the fabric gone shiny with wear. Ink clung to the creases of his fingers, and one sock had slouched low inside a scuffed shoe. The socks didn’t match. His steps struck the floor with a restless energy that filled the room.

“Jervis lied,” Elias muttered, slamming a folder onto the desk. “He said he’d get it to Locke. Said he’d help. All they want is another Langston, another Claude. I ain’t the right color for them.”

Theo blinked.

Elias spun on him. “Who the hell are you?”

“Me?”

“Yeah, boy. I don’t see no one else here.”

“I… uhm.. friend of Jervis.”

“Make sense. You got that damn Jervis look.” He poured himself a half-glass of amber liquid. “You here to laugh too? Read my poems, say they ain’t finished, ain’t worth a damn?”

"No. I…” Theo stared. “You’re Elias Marshall.”

The man narrowed his eyes. “Boy, how do you know my name?”

Theo’s throat tightened. ‘You… wrote Torchlight Verse. Published next year.’”

“Next year?” Elias squinted. “You drunk already?”

Theo let out a single bark of laughter that cracked the silence. “Maybe.”

Elias stared a beat longer, then dropped into a chair. “Well, mystery man, since you’ve materialized into my misery, might as well read them. Maybe you’ll say something new.”

Theo picked up the folder. Inside: ink-scrawled lines, thick with metaphor, grief knotted into cadence. They weren’t finished, but they carried a heat that felt alive.

He cleared his throat. “This one here, Stove Smoke. It’s got the bones of something incredible. But here.” He pointed. “Don’t finish this metaphor. Let it hang. Let it ache.”

Elias frowned. “The line about Mama’s laugh?”

“Yes. Let her live in the smoke. Don’t tie a bow on it.”

Elias leaned forward. “What did you say your name was again, boy?”

Theo paused. “Doesn’t matter.”

“You some kind of spirit or figment of my ‘magination.”

“Maybe.”

They traded short, uneven chuckled bursts, the kind that tested the air, before the sound grew freer, tumbling between them.

Elias poured him a drink. Theo accepted.

***

They worked through the night.

“Your verbs are good,” Theo said. “But you over-explain the emotion.”

Elias bristled. “People don’t read between the lines.”

“They do if the line hits right.”

At one point, Elias demanded, “You sure you’re not Alain Locke in disguise?”

Theo snorted. “Please. Locke doesn’t quote Kendrick.”

Elias blinked. “Who on earth is Kendrick.”

“Never mind.”

Later, as they restructured a poem called Inheritance, Elias leaned back. “When I was eight, I wrote about a dead bird. Mama said, ‘you got heavy hands for a child.’ Been dragging that weight since.”

Theo nodded. “Heavy hands leave marks.”

“You talk like a professor.”

“Guess I do.”

Elias laughed.“ You’ve got the look of a man stuck between places.”

Theo’s eyes dropped to the ink stains on Elias’s hands. His own fingers flat against the desk, unsure what to hold on to. “I… I shouldn’t be here,” he said, then after a breath, “though I’ve never felt more at home.”

He leaned in slightly, his next words quiet, as if asking permission. “Can I give you one line?”

“Only one, huh.”

Theo wrote: You cannot name the stars unless you’ve walked beneath their heat.

His gaze lingered on the words. His lips parted, and released a breath so slow it seemed to carry something out of him.

“Damn. That kind of line could make a man immortal.”

Theo shrugged. “It’s yours.”

“Hell it is,” Elias said. “A line like that don’t belong to one man. But I’ll keep it.”

He turned back to the page.

Theo felt the jolt before it happened.

The room shimmered. Elias’s voice echoed. And the desk beneath his fingers transformed.

***

He woke in the library. A radiator hissed.

The poem lay open on the desk. The final one. The one that had always ended mid-line.

Except now it didn’t.

You cannot name the stars

unless you’ve walked beneath their heat –

so I walk. Still walking.

Theo’s throat caught.

He flipped to the acknowledgements. There, in ink faded by time:

To the man whose name I never caught, who found me in the hour I was ready to quit.

Theo sat back.

He checked the archive database. Elias Marshall: still one book, still no further publications, still nearly forgotten.

But that line, the one about stars, had become part of the canon. Quoted in anthologies. Tattooed on artists. It had survived.

Theo had given it. And history had kept it.

Without him.

***

He didn’t tell anyone.

Not his advisor. Not his friends. Not even his mother.

He redrafted his proposal:

Inherited Voice: Ghosts, Lineage, and the Unwritten Contributors to the Harlem Renaissance.

He quoted Elias liberally.

And when he defended it months later, voice steady, heart full, he wore a pin in his lapel: a star, tiny and unremarkable to anyone else.

***

One rainy afternoon, Theo found himself outside the old brownstone on Lenox, the one he’d first “arrived” in. It was a crumbling walk-up now, paint peeling, windows cracked.

He stood for a moment in the doorway and listened.

He didn’t hear any music, nor keyboard clacking, only the rain working its way through the cracks where sound used to be.

A boy passed on a scooter, blasting trap music.

Theo smiled.

He decided not to go inside.

Instead, he walked down Lenox, coat collar up, heels tapping to the music in his head. He wasn’t chasing after doorways or strange coincidences anymore.

For now, he held on to what he’d found.

He carried a past close enough to touch and a future opening ahead, his shoes striking wet pavement as he walked clear between the two.

Posted Aug 25, 2025
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Mahayla Graves
September 05, 2025 17:38

This is beautiful. Somehow your words transport me straight into the story. How did you learn to write like this?

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Willis Rice
September 05, 2025 20:56

Thank you. Honestly, I have been inspired by so many others. That and reading A LOT, especially on the art of writing fiction.

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Victoria West
September 07, 2025 19:28

Wow what a great story, the line that particularly stuck with me was the "heater rattling like a dying trombone" in not sure why, but that line really stuck with me. Thanks for writing and I can't wait to see more from you!

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Willis Rice
September 08, 2025 04:21

Thank you and I appreciate that. I just hope you enjoy the rest of my writing just as much.

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Reesey McELVANE
September 07, 2025 14:53

Man, where can I read the rest of this Author’s stories?!?!?
This resonated so well!! I LOVED IT! I even felt my collar go up at the end. The Vibes’ll get ya if the heartwarming truth of ancestry and deep longing reaching across years, decades and centuries— doesn’t get ya first🤌🏾

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Willis Rice
September 07, 2025 17:32

Still in awe that this story has landed so well with so many people. I'll have some more stories coming out soon, as I am looking to expand my writing as an author. Thank you so much for your positive support.

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Dibe Hill
September 05, 2025 17:28

Congrats on the win! This is beautifully written!

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Willis Rice
September 05, 2025 20:55

Thank you. Really appreciated.

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September 05, 2025 16:53

Beautifully written! Rich and vivid, poetic and warm. Congratulations on your win!

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Willis Rice
September 05, 2025 20:54

I was really striving for that poetic undertone, so glad you appreciated it. Thank you.

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Franki K
January 29, 2026 21:08

“Please. Locke doesn’t quote Kendrick.”

Mic drop. w o w.

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Willis Rice
January 30, 2026 21:36

Glad you appreciate that. I love the idea of connect these two artist.

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Yat Chen
October 11, 2025 07:51

"To the man whose name I never caught, who found me in the hour I was ready to quit." I got goosebumps when I saw this sentence. Great job!!

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Willis Rice
October 12, 2025 00:09

Thank you! I appreciate your support of my little story.

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October 08, 2025 00:43

I came across this story a couple of weeks ago after making my first submission. I was browsing the site, and decided to read your story. I very much admire your writing. In my imagination I can feel this kind of direct phrasing and style wanting to take shape, as an ideal, but what I actually put down is not this. It's a great little story. The idea is very interesting and it has heart. Kudos to you on this artistic success.

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Willis Rice
October 10, 2025 16:18

Thank you for reading and sharing your kind thoughts. This was my first submission to this style of writing. I very much appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

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Stevie Burges
September 23, 2025 11:33

Thanks Ovett loved the vocabulary and how it fitted into each part. Well done.

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Willis Rice
September 24, 2025 01:10

I appreciate that. Thank you.

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Woo Smith
September 22, 2025 20:30

Beautiful story! I love how the time traveling connection between Theo and Elias brings alive the realities of generational connections and how time is not really linear but cyclical. Bravo.

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Willis Rice
September 22, 2025 22:12

Thank you. I really enjoyed writing this one.

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Jennie Creel
September 19, 2025 18:22

Congrats! A very well deserved win. I notice you master creating emotion by drscribing observable things. Only once did you use the verb “felt" (he felt the jolt"). I have a hard time acheiving this. So evocative! I truly enjoyed your story. Thank you for showing me how to do it.

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Willis Rice
September 19, 2025 18:48

Thank you! I appreciate it. That's one of the areas I came into this with intention. I really want to show, not tell. I often have to go back through my writing and revise, but I am happy it has not gone unnoticed.

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Caleb Cave
September 14, 2025 18:51

Love your writing style! Your scene descriptions pulled me into the story, hook, line and sinker.

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Willis Rice
September 14, 2025 21:00

Thank you for that. Hoping to keep getting better.

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Marilyn Flower
September 13, 2025 22:46

Wow, Ovett, this one took my breath away. The line, “Hell it is,” Elias said. “A line like that don’t belong to one man. But I’ll keep it.” really moved me. And I think it straddles the two different generations and the issue of changing the past. I like to think Theo and Elias somehow shared in the creative moment. Congratulations on a well-deserved win!

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Willis Rice
September 13, 2025 23:36

Thank you Marilyn. I really enjoyed writing the scene between Elias and Theo. Happy to hear you enjoyed reading it as well.

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Kavya Janani U
September 12, 2025 13:45

Marvellous story! This was a treat to read for a time-travel buff like me. Thank you for writing it. I love your style and imagery.

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Willis Rice
September 12, 2025 18:28

Thank you! Happy to hear that you enjoyed my take on the prompt. I appreciate your kind words and feedback.

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Shanice Lawton
September 11, 2025 22:47

Beautiful piece, what i wouldn't give to travel back in time and talk with my grandparents in their younger life. How I miss them so much.

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Willis Rice
September 12, 2025 00:52

I think the ability to travel back in time and visit with a loved one would be something many of us would love to do. Happy you enjoyed the story.

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Kim Carter
September 10, 2025 18:04

Loved your story. I was transported in to that wonderful time period.

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Willis Rice
September 10, 2025 18:08

Thank you. One of my absolute favorite time periods.

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Sylvia Worden
September 09, 2025 19:43

I'm still wiping my tears. This is a beautiful, haunting story, not just because the writing is very high quality, but because of the wistful desire it expresses to touch the work of an underrecognized poet and provide him some understanding and encouragement. Damn!

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Willis Rice
September 09, 2025 20:36

I appreciate you. Looking forward to reading your works!

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Story Time
September 09, 2025 16:51

The emotional layers to this were so expansive. I really felt like upon a re-read you'd discover even more beneath some of your beautifully chosen words. Congratulations.

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Willis Rice
September 09, 2025 17:24

Thank you so much for your very kind feedback. I really appreciate it.

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Craig Johnson
September 09, 2025 12:48

I've been in a writing funk trying to get started, trying to find my voice. Reading this story kicked me in the rear like a tuba (to use your musical references). Thank you so much for this and your great work - look forward to reading more of your stories.

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Willis Rice
September 09, 2025 14:25

I fear I have set the bar too high in my initial story here :) Looking forward to reading your stories soon as well.

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Craig Johnson
September 10, 2025 11:32

I appreciate your response Ovett. I don't believe you have.. I think it's in your style and I assume that will always come through no matter the topic of your tale. This place seems like a great place for support so hopefully that will keep us both going as great recontours.

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Willis Rice
September 10, 2025 18:07

Thus far it really has been such a supportive place. Keep at it!

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Georgie Peryton
September 09, 2025 01:01

This is really well written! I love the way you describe the surroundings I could picture it perfectly. I really enjoyed this sentence "But if he was right, and Theo Marshall put more faith in science than faith, he had time-traveled by accident. Again." I laughed a little at the sentence because in my head Theo was just mildly annoyed by it as if he'd just dropped his pen instead of being astounded by being able to time travel. Really good story congratulations on the win:)

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Willis Rice
September 09, 2025 14:23

I almost deleted that line. In one of my revisions I removed it as I was worried it was a little too jokey. Going back I decided to add it back, so happy to hear you appreciated the line. Thank you!

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Georgie Peryton
September 19, 2025 02:01

I'm so glad you kept thank you :)

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EK Wingate
September 05, 2025 17:09

I love your voice. One of the best I've read on here in the last 3 years.

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Willis Rice
September 05, 2025 20:55

Wow! That is so very kind. Thank you!

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Saffron Roxanne
September 05, 2025 15:32

Masterful. I love it. Congrats on the win ☺️

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Willis Rice
September 05, 2025 20:54

Truly thank you!

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Mary Bendickson
September 05, 2025 13:41

Congrats on your win and welcome to Reedsy.🥳
I'll come back later to read.
Took me awhile but finally got this one done. Been working on other projects.
You deserve the praise here.
Walking between the past and the present depicted with flourish.

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Willis Rice
September 05, 2025 20:54

Thank you for the warm welcome. Looking forward to you coming back and reading.

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Mark O'Reilly
September 04, 2025 17:03

This story makes things come alive. Details like the description of the central heating pipes heard in musical terms, or the “Ink and coal [that] hung heavy in the room” make present and past Harlem real and perceptible places, and emphasise the similarity between them rather than the difference. And another thing that comes alive is the dead hand of literary criticism, now a handshake between distant relatives who can only meet with the help of time travel. And that is one of the great things about art, especially literature: the ability to “hear” long-dead voices telling what it was like to live in their world, what it was like to live as them.
But then there is an infraction. A fundamental law of time travel is broken: that a time traveller must not change the past. Theo contributes a line to Elias’s work, and it turns out to be the only line of the obscure poet that anybody remembers. Does that mean that Elias deserves to be forgotten? Is it meant to invoke one of the inherent paradoxes of time travel? Or perhaps something else. Whatever the intended meaning, including the possibility that there isn’t one, it makes the reader think. And it makes time travel seem entirely natural, except where Theo says, “You... write Torchlight Verse. Published next year.” Theo is too clever to make that mistake.

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Willis Rice
September 04, 2025 19:26

I appreciate your take on my story. Theo's mistake was really meant to frame his shock, displacement, and disbelief in what he was experiencing. I really like how you thought about that line and drew several possible meanings. Thank you!

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Niddie Bone
February 25, 2026 00:36

Very inventive--fantastic use of history!

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