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Overview

Editor and co-founder of the award-winning Holdfast Magazine (British Fantasy Society award for Best Magazine 2015) and Bookseller Rising Star 2017, I have over eight years of experience working in the publishing industry as an editor. I am comfortable working on a wide range of fiction, from women’s fiction to thrillers, literary to historical romance, with a specialism in science fiction and fantasy. Whether you want to prepare your manuscript for submission to industry professionals or polish your book for self-publication, together, we can get your work ready for the next stage of its journey.

My time at Canelo and Bloomsbury have given me a breadth of experience not only as an editor, but also as a proofreader and seasoned submission reader.

'The best thing about working with Laurel (apart from her overflowing energy and enthusiasm) was her ability to put her finger on things that weren’t quite right in my book. There were inconsistencies that had bothered me for ages, and loose ends that needed to be tidied up properly – Laurel found them all and made gentle suggestions that helped me make a better book' – Helen Wright, author of A Matter of Oaths

Developmental Edit

This is the big picture edit, where we will consider the order of events, if there are any plot holes, and if the tension, drive, balance and narrative clarity of your manuscript can be improved. We will address if your book is hitting your target audience (or if you aren't sure who that is yet, we can find out who that might be!) We will also look at things like character development, theme, and dialogue.

If you go through the traditional publishing route, an in-house editor at your publisher will do a structural edit for you there. I know from experience however that the more ready your book is for publication the more likely it will be accepted by a publisher in the first place. There is so much work involved in getting a book ready for publication that the less revisions an editor feels are needed the more likely they are to take you on. If you are getting your work ready for self-publication, it is really helpful to get this level of edit from a professional pair of eyes to make sure your book is ready to wow your readers.

Copyedit

This comes after the structural edit, once you are confident that your story is in the best shape it can be. This is where sentence-level detail is looked at such as typos, spelling errors, sentence clarity, fact-checking and consistency. This makes sure you smooth out any issues you are having with language and avoids inconsistencies such as the black cat on page 31 miraculously becoming a tabby on page 100. I will also be looking at the flow and feel of your prose and making suggestions in order to avoid clumsy phrasing, which can interrupt the communication between author and reader. If you are self-publishing this could be an important service in order to get your book to the best standard possible.

Proofread

The proofread is the final stage of polish before your book reaches your readers. This is the last chance to catch things such as typos, punctuation and spelling errors before publication. No matter how meticulous your copyedit was I would always recommend getting a proofread completed as the final stage of your book's journey. This is to ensure a fresh pair of eyes with excellent attention to detail can catch anything missed by you or your editor (and some remaining mistakes are, alas, inevitable!) and make sure your book is as clean and ready for the world as it can be.

Query Letter Review

As a veteran of reading through submissions, I can assure you that the covering letter (or email, these days) is vitally important. Have you introduced yourself and the work succinctly while making it enticing? Have you thought through your readership, pitched your synopsis right and noted the relevant comparison authors? If an editor or agent has a hundred submissions to get through and you've sent them a genre that they do not publish or your synopsis is confused then they may not even read the first line of your carefully crafted book baby. Getting a professional pair of eyes to offer detailed advice could help you stand out from the crowd.

I love working with authors to get the most out of their writing and work with clear communication and friendly professionalism.

Services

Developmental Editing

Copy Editing

Query Letter Review

Languages

English (UK)

Fiction

Dystopian

Fantasy

Historical Fiction

Mystery & Crime

Science Fiction

Thriller & Suspense

Urban Fantasy

Women's Fiction

Certifications

MA Creative and Life Writing from Goldsmiths University
Digital Proofreading - Publishing Training Centre
Introduction to Editorial Skills: Copy Editing and Proofreading - Publishing Training Centre

Awards

Bookseller Rising Star

Senior Commissioning Editor

Canelo

November, 2017 – October, 2019 (almost 2 years)

Editorial Production Manager

Bloomsbury Reader

May, 2015 – November, 2017 (over 2 years)

Editor and Co-founder

Holdfast Magazine

June, 2013 – May, 2015 (almost 2 years)

Editorial Assistant

Bloomsbury Reader

June, 2012 – May, 2015 (almost 3 years)

Athena's Champion (Olympus Series Book 1)

David Hair, Cath Mayo

A prophecy condemns him, a goddess binds him, but what will set Odysseus free? A thrilling tale of a legendary Greek adventure, perfect for fans of Madeline Miller and David Gemmell.Young Prince Odysseus is about to have his world torn apart. He has travelled to the oracle at Pytho to be anointed as heir to his island kingdom, but instead a terrible secret is revealed, one that tears down ever... read more

Oracle's War (Olympus Series Book 2)

David Hair, Cath Mayo

Gods and mortals collide in the thrilling second instalment in the historical Greek fantasy the Olympus Series.When Prince Odysseus is sent on a quest to recover his family honour, he’s led to Delos where a mysterious new prophecy has captivated the gods. Caught in a tangled web of intrigue, he discovers that this prophecy is tied to his own destiny and the fate of his patron goddess, Athena.W... read more

Crisis Point: A fast-paced international espionage thriller (Sam Driver Thrillers Book 1)

Rob Aspinall

Crisis Point is a new espionage, high-octane, action-packed tour de force.CIA operative Sam Driver is at the top of her game, until she is betrayed, captured, and disavowed by her country. Left to rot in a Siberian prison, the future looks bleak. But when the world is threatened by a series of terrorist attacks bringing civilization to the brink of nuclear war, she may have a chance to earn he... read more

A Matter of Oaths

Helen S. Wright

'A compelling, mind-bending future that's finally come home to the present' – Becky Chambers, author of The Long Way to a Small, Angry PlanetWhen Commander Rallya of the patrol ship Bhattya hires Rafe as their new Web officer, she knows she is taking a risk. As an oath breaker, Rafe has suffered the ultimate punishment – identity wipe – but luckily for him, there's no one else around qualified... read more

The End of the Line: A powerfully dark and chilling thriller

Gray Williams

A race against time on a perilous journey through Siberia with a murderous demon, in this gritty fast-paced horror thriller.Con-artist Amanda Coleman lives in a London rife with undercover magic. Abras, as they are known, can harness these illegal powers, but for Coleman – whose father was a powerful and abusive practitioner – magic is anathema.When her criminal crew hire an Abra to help with ... read more

Watchmen Of Rome (Carbo of Rome Book 1)

Alex Gough

After twenty-five long years serving in the Roman Legions, Carbo returns to Rome to retire in peace. Life has moved on in the time he’s been at the front, and he finds himself friendless and homeless.But when he comes across Rufa, a childhood friend he swore an oath to protect, he must fight to rescue her from an evil priestess, liberate her from slavery and save Rome from total annihilation. ... read more

Kemp: The Road to Crécy (Arrows of Albion Book 1)

Jonathan Lunn

An epic Medieval adventure of the Hundred Years WarWhen Martin Kemp joins the English army in order to avoid the hangman, he may just be delaying the inevitable. While he remains hopeful that at least there’s the chance for some heroics, the reality is very different. Kemp's war is instead a terrifying odyssey through the panic and confusion of his first battle, the brutal realities of siege w... read more

The Soul Thief: An epic Viking historical adventure (Life and Times of Corban Loosestrife Book 1)

Cecelia Holland

A devastating Viking raid leads Corban on an epic quest – the first in an extraordinary adventure series.Corban and Mav are twins born to the lord of an Irish coastal farmstead. Mav has the Second Sight, and is her father's favourite; Corban, however, is a deep disappointment. Exiled for refusing his father's command to take up his sword in the name of the High King, he is long gone when the d... read more

A Vision of Light

Judith Merkle Riley

A village girl receives a divine vision that will lead her into the chambers of the English Inquisition...Young, wealthy and twice married, Margaret has a modest enough ambition: she wishes to write a book. But this is 1355, and the notion of a woman wanting to record her experiences and thoughts is not just arrogant, it’s possibly heretical.Three clerics contemptuously decline to be Margaret’... read more

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Professionalism

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Communication & Punctuality

Very valuable feedback!

N.G. Azpeitia, April 2021

Laurel carefully went through all of the documents and provided valued feedback to make the package more successful. I greatly appreciate her work and effort.

Jeffrey Mallinger, April 2021

I am very happy with Laurel's feedback on my writing. She not only caught mistakes and offered insightful suggestions, but she also shared her personal reactions to some parts of my story. Much appreciated!

Jurgen Appelo, April 2021

I hired Laurel because I wanted someone who knew the publishing industry. She was very professional, and she was able to give me great feedback and find all the little mistakes in my story! She also went through my manuscript and corrected all the glitches that had appeared after I sent it to her. I also learnt a lot from her feedback and I am grateful that I can use the knowledge going forward...

Sandra Parkins, April 2021

Laurel was great to work with. She has a keen eye for detail and really helped me to refine my query letter and submission materials. Her help was much appreciated.

Joe Lee, March 2021