The Portrait of Elisabetta

Historical Fiction Horror Mystery

Written in response to: "Center your story around a mysterious painting." as part of Colour Your World with Kobo Writing Life.

The painting arrived in a crate with no return address.

Margaret Holloway, the curator of the Linston Art Museum, had been expecting a shipment of Renaissance-era sketches, but when she pried open the wooden box, her breath hitched. Inside was a portrait, its gilded frame dull with age, yet the painting itself was untouched by time. A woman with pale, haunting eyes and a delicate smile gazed back at her. The nameplate beneath the frame bore a single inscription: Elisabetta, 1654.

Margaret ran a gloved hand over the canvas, feeling a chill prickle her skin. She had studied Renaissance art for years, yet the name Elisabetta did not appear in any records. There were no documented works from 1654 that matched this style. It was as though the painting had materialized from the void.

A small envelope lay nestled in the crate. Inside was a folded note, written in an elaborate script:

"Display the painting, and she will reveal herself. But beware—some things are meant to remain unseen."

Margaret frowned. A prank, perhaps? Some eccentric collector playing games?

Despite her unease, the painting was exquisite—too exquisite to ignore. She instructed her team to hang it in the museum’s Renaissance wing, where it immediately became the centerpiece. Visitors were drawn to it like moths to a flame, whispering about how the woman's eyes seemed to follow them.

That night, long after the last guest had left, Margaret remained in her office, researching. She scoured historical archives, consulted art databases, and even reached out to colleagues in Europe. Nothing.

At midnight, she decided to inspect the painting again. As she entered the darkened gallery, the air felt heavy, charged with something unseen. The only illumination came from the emergency exit sign, casting an eerie red light over the portrait.

Margaret took a step closer. The woman’s expression had changed.

Her enigmatic smile had faded. Her lips were now slightly parted as though she were about to speak.

Margaret’s pulse spiked. She turned on her phone’s flashlight and aimed it at the canvas. The paint had cracked subtly along the edges, as if aging before her eyes. The shadows in the background seemed deeper, shifting unnaturally.

A whisper.

Margaret froze.

It was faint, like wind through an ancient house. But she heard it.

She spun around. No one was there.

Heart hammering, she backed away. As she turned to leave, her gaze flicked to the plaque beneath the painting. Her breath caught in her throat.

The nameplate no longer read Elisabetta, 1654.

It read: Margaret Holloway, 2025.

---

The next morning, Margaret barely spoke. She had spent the night locked in her office, too terrified to return to the gallery.

Her assistant, Daniel, noticed her pallor. “Are you okay?”

Margaret hesitated. If she told him, he’d think she was losing her mind. Instead, she forced a weak smile. “Did anyone… touch the painting last night?”

Daniel frowned. “No. But it’s the strangest thing: one of our security guards quit this morning. He was on the night shift, and when I asked why, he just said, ‘I saw her move.’”

Margaret’s stomach twisted.

She had to know more.

She contacted an art historian, Dr. Helena Morano, who specialized in obscure Renaissance pieces. When Margaret sent her a photo of the painting, she received a reply almost immediately.

Where did you find this? This is impossible. I need to see it in person.

---

Dr. Morano arrived that evening, carrying a stack of old manuscripts. She studied the painting with wide eyes, her fingers trembling as she adjusted her glasses.

“This can’t be real,” she murmured. “I recognize the style—this resembles the work of Vittorio Salieri, a reclusive artist from 17th-century Italy. But every record states his final painting was lost in a fire.”

Margaret’s voice was barely above a whisper. “And the woman?”

Helena hesitated, then opened one of her manuscripts. She pointed to a faded charcoal sketch. The face was unmistakable.

“Elisabetta Farnese,” she said. “A noblewoman who vanished in 1654. The legend says Salieri was obsessed with her beauty. He painted her portrait over and over again, but he was never satisfied. The final time he painted her, she disappeared. Some say he trapped her in the canvas.”

Margaret’s skin crawled. “You mean… this painting?”

Helena exhaled sharply. “If this is Salieri’s lost work, then yes.”

Margaret felt the walls closing in. “I saw the nameplate change last night. It had my name on it.”

Helena’s face paled. “Then you need to destroy it.”

A sudden gust of wind swept through the gallery, rattling the paintings. The lights flickered.

Margaret turned toward the portrait—her blood ran cold. Elisabetta’s face had changed again.

Her expression was desperate.

Pleading.

A crack splintered across the canvas like a wound.

Then, the whisper came again. Louder this time. A voice, smooth as silk yet filled with sorrow.

"Help me."

Margaret stepped closer despite the terror clawing at her chest. Her reflection in the glass seemed… distorted. Wrong. As though she were already part of the painting.

Helena grabbed her arm. “We have to go. Now.”

Margaret resisted. “What if she’s trapped? What if we can free her?”

Helena’s grip tightened. “And what if she’s not the one trapped?”

The lights surged back on with a loud pop. The two women stood motionless, staring at the portrait. Elisabetta’s lips had curled into a knowing smile.

Margaret knew what she had to do.

---

The museum closed early that night.

Margaret and Helena carried the painting to the museum’s courtyard, where a fire pit stood unused.

Margaret hesitated, then threw a match into the dry wood. Flames erupted, casting an orange glow against the night.

As the fire grew, she lifted the painting.

For a split second, she swore Elisabetta’s eyes locked onto hers grateful, almost relieved.

Then she let go.

The painting ignited instantly.

A scream—high, keening, inhuman—pierced the air.

And then… silence.

Margaret and Helena watched until the canvas was nothing but ash.

The museum never received another anonymous crate. And though Margaret continued curating, she never again stayed past sunset.

But sometimes, in the stillness of night, she could swear she heard a whisper in the wind.

"Thank you."

Posted Mar 07, 2025
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