Heart of Ice, Soul of Fire

Fantasy Drama Suspense

Written in response to: "Start your story with someone looking out at the snow, and end it with them stepping tentatively onto a frozen surface." as part of Snow Day.

Two specks traveled across a sea of white. Two, one dark and one light, together they moved through a horizon of snow. Two girls ran for their lives.


Before, a wall of red blocked their way. Behind, a wave of scarlet swiftly closed in. Around, the jaws of crimson slowly tightened. Nearing the barrier, the two girls skidded to a stop.


The first was a girl of dark black hair and seemingly similar colored eyes. Raven her name, demon by fame. Slightly cowering behind was Alynthi, hair the color of pale gold and icy blue eyes.


Together they gasped for air, winded from the escape. A shared look told all that was needed, breath too precious for words. 


The only way through is through. Find the weakest link. Stay close.


But in their hesitation, valuable time was wasted. The crimson was almost upon them.


In fear, Alynthi let out a little squeak, but Raven grabbed her arm and led them onward into the incoming enemy. The little girl bit her lip and followed, straining to keep up with her friend.


Wide eyes full of anxiety gazed at the army ahead. Breathe. Inhale. Exhale. They could do this. 


As reality sank in, a whole new side of Alynthi was revealed. Gone was the terrified youngster a moment before. Here was the viscous demon (albeit still a bunny) fighting for their lives. The girl set her jaw and cleared at the scarlet wave before, matching Raven’s fiery vengeance with an icy hate of her own. They would not stop here.


Forward. Forward. Forward. All at once, the three forces collided. crimson before. crimson behind. The two trapped in the middle. The girls were soon enveloped in the sea of red. There, they let their true colors show . . .


With a resounding roar, Raven unleashed her fury in a the form of her gift. Pyro. Fire. Flames licked at her hands, scarring the face of one who came too near.


Equally dangerous (though a bit less controlled), little Alynthi struck out with hers. Cryo. Ice. Shards of said elements were hurled at all she could reach.


Together, the two girls fought bravely, back-to-back. With arcs of fire felling dozens and spears of ice, dozens more, the sea of crimson slowly gave way. With all their force focused at one point, the ranks were thinning. They seemed to be breaking through. 


But, like all epic battles, victory wouldn’t come that easy . . .


Only amateurs in their abilities, Raven and Alynthi were soon tiring. The began to lose control. At the end of their energy, they slowed. But the crimsons did not.


Again and again they moved up to take the fallen’s places. There seemed no end . . .


Raven’s fire started to overtake her, burning all it could reach. She could not tame it. It was too far gone. Hands as scarlet as the surrounding enemy, Raven fought back the urge to scream. Scream in fury. In pain. In hate. In defeat.


But she could not. There was Alynthi. Covered in frost from her unleashed power, she pressed on through the biting cold. If the demon bunny could go on, so would the demon herself. But it was too late . . .


With a howl of pain, Alynthi fell to her knees, an arrow having pierced her leg. Furious beyond recognition, Raven lashed out with newfound energy. A whirlwind of fire erupted around the two, providing them a moment of respite. A wall of flame holding out the scarlet. The two huddled in the eye of the storm.


A startled cry and the arrow was removed. Raven gently helped Alynthi to her feet, love for her friend evident in the dark eyes. Carefully yet swiftly, Raven slung Alynthi’s arm over her shoulders as the little girl gasped in pain. But now was no time to stop.


Together they managed a few staggering steps, but all at once, the firestorm receded. Raven’s energy was nearly spent. 


But they were so close. The river was just up ahead. The river. Their goal. Their freedom. Just up ahead, yet bordered by the crimsons. There was no way through but through. 


A death wish.


Yet they had nothing left to lose. 


And all to gain . . .


 Onward they went. 


Raven took a few of the approaching crimsons down with well-aimed fireballs. The rest seemed to be milling around in a confused mayhem. Thankfully for the girls.


But they were tired. Oh so tired. Raven sagged under Alynthi’s weight as it was all the little girl could do to keep from crying out at every jarring step. 


Almost there. Almost there. Almost th-


A shout and a new assault was launched at the two. This one, they could not fight off. Unless . . . 


Alynthi pulled them to a stop and faced the crimsons, leaning almost entirely on Raven for support. Here goes nothing . . . 


The girl closed her eyes and the snow around them began to swirl. Around and around it twisted, wind howling with a vengeance. Alynthi’s outstretched hands finally dropped and the storm instantly ceased. Sitting there, between the crimsons and they, was a . . . snowman? 


Oops. A look that could only be described as sheepish invaded Alynthi’s eyes as everything paused to stare at her creation. Suddenly remembering what was going on, she pulled Raven away and they staggered away as fast as possible. 


A roar echoed from behind. Raven glanced back and eyes widened. Demon snowman. Alynthi’s little snowman had waged a war of its own and could no longer be called what it was. More like a snowmonster now.


But not all were preoccupied with fighting the beast. A section had broken away and were now back on their trail. And gaining fast.


As hard as they tried, Alynthi with her leg could not move any faster than a slow walk. The crimsons were at a full-on sprint. 


Oh please . . . 


Raven felt Alynthi give way, eyes closed. She was done. The snowmonster had taken too much out of her and now it was all Raven could to to help her move.


Almost there. 


She looked up, eyes determined. 


The river was just up ahead. They were nearly there. But so were the crimsons. 


Almost there. Almost there. 


With a start, Raven noticed the river icing over. She glanced at Alynthi, but the little girl was on the verge of collapsing. It couldn’t be her... Could it?


But across the river stood another group. Clothed in white they were, almost invisible against the snow. They seemed . . . different . . . in some way.


Almost there. Almost there. Almost there.


Raven gave them no more thought than a quick glance. She had Alynthi to think about. The crimsons were almost upon them. 


Suddenly . . . They were gone . . .


Never looking back, the girl of fire knew only that they had a chance. A hope. 


At the river’s edge, she paused a moment, looking out over the ice. Was it strong? Would it hold?


There was no time to know. The sounds of battle grew ever nearer. 


With a deep breath, Raven took a step forward.


Onto the ice. 


Over the border. 


Raven and Alynthi were finally free.


They had finally returned home . . .

Posted Jan 22, 2021
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My gosh...this is such an amazing suspense. Your story kept me eager and endlessly waiting for what's gonna happen next. Lovely job!

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January 22, 2021 23:22

Aw, thank you! :D

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Your welcome.

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January 22, 2021 23:12

Ginger. Tell. Immediately. When you have new story. I LARBED THIS SO MUCH BUT YOU NEED MORE DIALOGUE!!! GREAT JOB!!

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January 22, 2021 23:24

Oops— Well only if you tell me when you have one too! :D
“LARBED.” That is so gonna be a new word... XD
YAY! YEA, I KNOW... WHAT DO YOU MEAN ‘MORE’? I DIDN’T HAVE ANY! XD
THX!!!

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January 23, 2021 00:07

I WILL!!! ALSO YES IT IS!!!

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January 23, 2021 00:36

XDDD

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Nainika Gupta
February 04, 2021 18:10

I gotta say..this title?? OUT OF THIS WORLD
honestly, omg i loved everything about this story as well as the suspense, the lack of dialogue...
I LARB!!
-N

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Nainika Gupta
February 04, 2021 18:11

it needed another comment bc I LARBED IT SO MUCH

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February 04, 2021 19:39

Aw, thanks! I seriously thought of that title at 2AM... XD
oOoOo! Thank you!
OMG, LARB! XD

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Nainika Gupta
February 04, 2021 19:46

Yesss no problem!!
YES LARB!!

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Salma Jarir
January 29, 2021 12:52

OMG !! THERE'S SO MUCH SUSPENCE IN THIS STORY ^_^ can't wait fr more !!!

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January 29, 2021 14:43

Aw, thanks! :D But unfortunately... I’m not gonna do another part! I will almost never do a second part/continuation of a story. Ends in a cliffhanger? It stays a cliffhanger. XD Sorry!

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Nainika Gupta
January 26, 2021 17:02

Hey Fearless!! This was a really interesting story, and I thought the suspense was amazingly formatted to fit not only your style, but the prompt!!

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January 26, 2021 19:15

Aw, thank you! :D
I was actually half-asleep while writing it, so the plot line isn’t that good... XD But I’m glad you liked it!

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Nainika Gupta
January 26, 2021 19:16

ahah - the best stories come from those half-asleep-written-stories XD
and yeah! it was so cool!! :D

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January 26, 2021 21:09

Haha! XD Yes, yes they do. XD

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Cassandra Durnin
January 25, 2021 21:43

Amazing! Well done, ‘Ginger’ ;)

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January 25, 2021 22:23

Aw, thanks! ;D

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February 25, 2021 19:49

WOW.

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Hi Ginger! Wow, such a wonderful story. Loved every detail put into this<333
Great work!!!

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January 27, 2021 23:54

Heyo! Aw, thanks! :D

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Anytime!!!! Mind checking out my story? It'll mean a ton <33

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January 27, 2021 23:58

Of course! Heading over now! :D

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Kate Reynolds
January 27, 2021 13:36

Ok, how are you not a bestselling author yet?????????? I swear if you ever publish a book I will def buy it. THIS STORY WAS SO DARN GOOD OMG
THE WAY IT WAS WRITTEN WAS WONDERFUL, AND THAT TITLEEEEEEE IS SOOOOOO BEAUTIFULLLLLL
And it was all under 3000 words?!?!??!?!
This deserves a WIN!!!!!!!!!

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January 27, 2021 15:42

XD Maybe because I’ve never actually finished anything? JK, JK! I’m seriously not that good. XD But THANK YOU! :D
Aw, thx! (I honestly thought the whole thing was pretty lame? I mean, I wrote that super late at night when I was half-asleep. Half the sentences don’t even make sense... XD)
Yep! 1,195 words exactly! I was straining to reach the thousand mark. XD
AWWW! THX! :D

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Kate Reynolds
January 27, 2021 15:46

XDDD NOOOO YOU AREEEEEE
OMG NOOO IT WAS NOT LAME AT ALLLLLLLL I LOVED IT SO MUCHHHHHHH
:D it's quite hard to write a fantasy story in under 3000 words, especially since I really understood what was going on SO THAT WAS REALLY REALLY IMPRESSIVE
I SPEAK ONLY THE TRUTHHHHH

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January 27, 2021 16:19

HEHEHE. NOOO, I’M REALLY NOT... HAVE YOU EVEN READ YOUR OWN STORIES? XD
WELL I BET I COULD DO BETTER IF I TRIED, BUT I’M TOO LAZY TO... XD
Oh really! I tend to barely make the mark on all my stories. XD Short and concise is more my thing. Then ya don’t have to explain a bunch of stuff and it feels a bit more cliffhangery. (NEW WORD! XD)
Anyways, THANK YOU! You don’t even know how much that means to me! :)

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Kate Reynolds
January 27, 2021 17:01

YESSSS YOU AREEEEEEEEEEE
You are already SO GOODDDDDDDD
XDDD YAS CLIFFHANGERY
OFC!!!!!! :D

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January 27, 2021 17:42

AW, WELL THANK YOU! :D
BUT YOU’RE TOTALLY AMAZING TOO!!!

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GENSHIN IMPACT?????????????????????????????????

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January 23, 2021 00:37

HM? I KNOW THE GAME, BUT WHADDYA MEAN???

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January 23, 2021 00:39

OHHHHH. XD
WELL ACTUALLY I DIDN’T EVEN THINK OF THAT. I JUST WENT WITH THE SHORTER FORMS OF PYROKINETIC AND CRYOKINETIC. XD

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OH WOW
I was looking for anemo XDDD

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January 23, 2021 01:25

XDDD

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March 23, 2021 15:53

HEY HEY HEY! How are you?

Question: Are you a Genshin Impact fan? (I mean, I’m guessing so, but just checking.)

Well, if you are, a writer by the name of Ethan Vacacas just posted a Genshin fan story about the Windblume festival! (I can give you the link if ya want! :D)

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March 23, 2021 16:30

NEVER MIND! XD Ethan said you already stopped by. Hehe...

But anyways, how’re ya doin’? I feel like I haven’t talked with you in foreeever. XD

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YESSS I AM LOL-

Great XD
ME TOOO AND THEN THE CONVO JUST DISSAPEARSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS HHH XD

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March 23, 2021 16:37

HEHE...

COOL!
I KNOWWWWW! XDDD I SOMETIMES LOOK THROUGH COMMENTS, AND CONVOS ARE ALWAYS AWKWARDLY ABANDONED... XD

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XD lol me tooo
what are your fav genshin impact charaters?

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Radhika Diksha
April 06, 2021 17:05

Such a beautiful story, i regret not reading it before. You described the plot at very best. Great work. Nice end.

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April 06, 2021 17:50

Oh, thank you!

I honestly didn’t think it was all that good, but so many people, are telling me that love it, so...? XD

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Radhika Diksha
April 06, 2021 17:56

Yeah it was pretty good. I would love your opinion on my diss track.

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April 07, 2021 15:43

Aw, well thank you! Of course! Checking it now-

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Mira Caplan
February 22, 2021 17:59

I just have to say this- I LOVE THE NAME ALYNTHI!!!!!! It's BEAUTIFUL!!! The entire story was SO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love the whole concept and the way you described everything at the beginning. PERFECTION!!!!

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February 22, 2021 19:31

Aw, THANK YOU! :D It’s prooobably one of my favorite names now... XD Oh, thx!
(I honestly didn’t think this story was all that good, so...?)

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Mira Caplan
February 22, 2021 19:35

I LOVED it!!!

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Mira Caplan
February 22, 2021 19:35

I LOVED it!!!

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February 22, 2021 21:42

Oh, cool! Thank you!

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February 19, 2021 01:35

ViCtoRy Is OuRs!

Apparently its a challenge where you say it to someone and then have them pass it on. I got it from luna who got it from sapphire who got it from kate who got it from jade who got it from emerald

sorry this is really random XD

p.s. this story is amazing!!!!! the names were ALSO amazing, and the descriptions were superrrrrr :D

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February 20, 2021 16:03

Haha! I have passed it on! XD

Oh, thank you! :D

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February 20, 2021 17:33

:D yayyyyy

np!!!

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