Is This A Dream?

Fantasy

Written in response to: "You go for a walk in fresh snow. Suddenly you realize you're not leaving any footprints." as part of Winter Wonderland.

You see, I woke up and the snow was blue.

The snow was a bright baby blue.

Why was the snow blue?

No Idea.

I mean, there was no way that something I’ve known my whole life could just change one day.

Or could it... 

Oh gosh, now I’m just sounding delusional I really need some sleep.

This is probably just a bad dream.

---

I look over my diary entry in confusion. 

I wrote it last night. 

Jesus I must have been tired.

I don't even remember writing that!

Snow is not blue.

I mean, unless you put blue dye in it or something? But who the heck would do that.

Only a crazy person.

I brush away my curtains to glance at the world outside. 

To see if the snow has actually transformed.

I feel a rush of anticipation as the cloth of the long curtain gathers in my hands. What if the vision I wrote yesterday wasn't just a weird dream. What if…

With a jerk I woosh the curtains away from the small window.

The snow is not blue.

Of course.

Why would it be?

“Snow is not blue.” I whisper to myself while I shake my head.

I throw the writing in my notebook away.

I must have been delusional.

---

I decide to walk to work today so I can enjoy the snow. Get some sun this winter season.

The snow sure isn't blue, but it’s phenomenal all the same. Even though I know it’s cold outside, I can't help but feel like it’s a warm summer day and I am trudging through overgrown grass and not hills of snow.

Rather than feeling cold and frozen on the long walk to work, oddly, my body is warm.

Very warm.

Hot even.

I don’t feel a trace of cold. I was probably getting sick or something. 

It’s no matter.

I’m still going to attend work, this is no excuse. I am not one to make excuses.

But then again, you're also not one to imagine strange things… my brain points out.

I shake the thought away.

The walk to my office building is two miles away from my house. Not a bad little morning snippet of exercise if I do say so myself. It keeps me at least somewhat healthy and a little fit. But today it feels shorter, like i'm only walking a few blocks.

Weird.

In what seems like no time at all I am sitting at my boring desk. Not much ever happens here.

Nothing interesting anyhow.

---

When I leave work later that day, everything just seems off in a way. People all over the streets are running in specific directions with hoodies covering their faces. Usually I could tell if their scared, terrified, or just need to get somewhere fast based on their expressions.

Not today.

Today I can’t see the expressions. 

I felt left out. I was the only person on the streets without a hoodie, and not running. 

I hated feeling like this.

I felt a need to fit in.

And so I ran to the nearest store and grabbed a hoodie to buy.

“Hi! I would like to purchase this hoodie.” I said to the cashier.

Who was also wearing a hoodie.

He stared at me for a moment. A shadow was covering his face. It hit at the perfect angle, so I couldn't see it.

“Hello?” I said after a moment of awkward silence.

He took a sharp breath in.

“Come... follow us to the world of faces.” he mumbled.

“Huh?”

The light washed over his face.

Except, he had no face.

Just skin.

---

I awoke with beads of sweat clinging to my skin for dear life.

So it was all a dream.

Of course it was.

People definitely had faces.

Life was definitely normal.

---

I went through a day of work once again.

Except today wasn't boring.

It was actually quite the opposite.

Work was interesting and when I got home, there was somebody there watching me. He was tall and handsome, but in a creepy sort of way.

I looked out the window to see if he had a car. Maybe he was just here to visit.

I found no car, but the view was perfect.

Too perfect.

There wasn't even one indent in the snow that surrounded me. The snow that I had just walked on.

The snow hadn't fallen from the sky all day.

Which means…

I never left footprints...

This was not right.

---

I woke up again, but this time I was unsure of what was dream and what was reality.

There was a surgeon in front of me.

I was in a hospital of sorts.

“Are you real?” I asked him.

He laughed.

“For now.” he said.

I took an inventory of the room, but stopped short when I realised...

My mother was lying in a bed next to mine.

My mother who had died five years ago.

She was breathing steadily.

“Mom?!”

“Shh.” the surgeon said. “She’s under the serum as you will be soon.”

“Huh?”

I pinched myself and it hurt.

Was this real?

The surgeon pulled out a large shot.

“I will now inject you,” he said. “Thanks again so much for helping us in our efforts.”

“What?! I never agreed to this!” I screamed.

“I know.” he replied sadly. “But your family was chosen five years ago and now you are property of science.”

I tried to argue, but he injected me with whatever he was holding before I could speak.

I was at home.

But not my home.

When I ran outside, I tripped and fell.

Right into a fresh pile of strange snow.

Changed snow.

Blue snow.



Posted Jan 10, 2020
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Amany Sayed
April 15, 2020 21:16

This was an AMAZING story that kept me guessing 'till the end. Do you have any advice for a beginner writer?

PS. Thanks for liking my stories! :)

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Cam Croz
April 15, 2020 22:39

Thank you so much! I'm not the greatest at giving advice, but I think that reading really helps a beginner writer to learn new techniques and figure out how to flow their writing. That's what helps me anyway...
PS. your stories are very interesting!

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Amany Sayed
April 15, 2020 22:57

Thanks for the advice!

Also I'm glad my stories are interesting. :)

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Allie Pittman
January 17, 2020 18:24

That was fun to read! And so creepy!

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Cam Croz
January 31, 2020 14:18

Thanks! thats what I was going for!

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Mariyam G
January 16, 2020 17:15

I have read all of your brilliant stories and to this date, your stories top the lot! 👍🏻 No need to give luck when you don’t need any luck to create beautiful novels! If that makes sense🥴

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Cam Croz
January 31, 2020 14:18

Thank a ton! This really means a lot to me!

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Mariyam G
January 31, 2020 17:54

🥰

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Synia Sidhe
January 16, 2020 14:44

Very good, you formatted it like a poem. Made it feel breathless and tense, like violins were shrieking in the background. How cool.
Have you ever seen a hallucination while awake?

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Cam Croz
January 31, 2020 14:18

Thank you so much for your kind words!
(Also, no I have not ever seen a hallucination while awake,)

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January 13, 2020 17:43

Gosh, I was reading this with my sister and she said it was wonderful. I think it is beautiful. I mean blue snow? Cool.

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Cam Croz
January 13, 2020 18:49

THANKS a ton!!!!

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Philip Clayberg
October 28, 2020 20:27

Wow. Talk about surreal.

Reminds me of the Calvin & Hobbes' comic strip where Calvin wakes up, gets dressed for school, walks outside his house and falls off a cliff, then he wakes up again, and something else happens (I don't remember what), and then he wakes up a third time. His mother is calling to him, telling him to get up and get ready for school. He pulls the blanket up to his face and looks scared, as if wondering, "Is *this* the real world? Or am I dreaming again?"

Btw, if ghosts can have blue eyes (the late Emily Bronte said that they did), why can't snow be blue? A fictional weather forecaster might say, "Today's forecast: blue snow. Depending on where you live and how much you get, it may be indigo, periwinkle, sky blue, navy, dark blue, or just blue. It's nothing to get depressed about. Tomorrow's forecast: green ice and pink skies."

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Cam Croz
October 29, 2020 05:33

Ive honestly not read much Calvin and Hobbes' but that spunds super intriguing!
As did your insight to the fictional world of weather! very interesting. 😂

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Philip Clayberg
October 29, 2020 17:20

When it gets late at night, my imagination happily goes off on whatever tangent it chooses to go on. Which is probably why it's easier for me to write stories and poems late at night, and then edit them in the daytime when I'm more awake.

Emily Bronte did write a poem where she described a ghost as having blue eyes (I just don't remember which poem).

Unlike people about 10 years younger than me, I didn't grow up on Calvin & Hobbes. I grew up on Pogo, the Addams Family drawings, New Yorker cartoons, Doonesbury, Peanuts, Bloom County, and the like. I think I was about 15 or 16 when the first Calvin & Hobbes comic strip was printed on the Washington Post's comic page (back when comic pages had decent-sized panels,not shrunk-down like nowadays; Sunday comic pages are the only ones that are still at the old panel size).

If there's ever a Reedsy story prompt that has to do with weather forecasting, I'll see if I can expand on my "weather forecast" idea. I don't think it's as funny as when the late George Carlin did his fictional TV news routine back in the 1960s, but then, I'm me, not him. He even had the fictional Hal the Hippy Dippy Weatherman. "Tonight's forecast: Dark! With scattered light towards morning."

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July 28, 2020 00:25

AWEEEEESOME

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Cam Croz
November 02, 2020 19:47

haha thank you!

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Laiba M
April 22, 2020 00:36

I really loved the amazing story!!! Good job and keep writing :)

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Cam Croz
April 22, 2020 01:46

Thanks!

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Laiba M
April 22, 2020 11:28

You're welcome, Cam! By the way, your name is really interesting :D

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Cam Croz
April 22, 2020 14:39

Really!? Thanks again I guess! I like my name too!

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Laiba M
April 22, 2020 16:02

Haha, you're welcome again :)

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Cam Croz
April 22, 2020 16:14

😂

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Imogen Bird
April 15, 2020 22:24

Oh this is beautiful and so intriguing.
I saw someone in this comment section saying they were missing your stories. I've been through a lot of confidence issues with my writing but this place seems great to get a small slice of reality, that people actually do want to read what you write. And I certainly want to read more of what you write! See you in the next contest?!

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Cam Croz
April 15, 2020 22:46

Sure! I just posted a new story for Contest #37 (took a bit longer than I thought but hey I finished it!) And thank you a bunch!

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April 07, 2020 12:28

Beautiful story. Seriously, l miss your stories. Where are you?

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Cam Croz
April 07, 2020 14:38

Thank you so much! And sorry if i'm not writing on Reedsy as much anymore! It's really hard to find time these days!

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April 07, 2020 12:08

Hey Cam. It's been a while. Miss your stories

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Cam Croz
November 02, 2020 19:48

Thank you! <3
I am trying to write sometimes lol

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Millie Spence
April 05, 2020 16:46

Wow! I loved this. It was such a fascinating read.

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Cam Croz
April 05, 2020 18:29

thanks!

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Afrin A
April 01, 2020 12:51

This gave me the spooks ...Superb writing.
I was wondering if you could check out my story if you have the time ?

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Cam Croz
April 02, 2020 20:24

Of course!

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March 19, 2020 18:23

I liked the story as a whole, the pace is nice and quick. However, I did find that all of the short sentences made it feel a bit choppy, maybe that was intentional? The best part about it is that you've done a good job of confusing the reader, you made me wonder what was a dream and what was real.

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Cam Croz
March 31, 2020 18:00

Thank you so much for the feedback! I re-read over the story and did notice a few parts that were a bit too choppy for what I was writing. It was only meant to be a little choppy to show the bursts of confusion. Thanks again!

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Mariyam G
January 28, 2020 21:46

I love how your story is formatted so well that it is easier to feel the characters emotions and be a part of the story!

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Cam Croz
January 31, 2020 14:19

Thank you!

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Mariyam G
March 22, 2020 23:15

Haven’t seen a lot of you’re stories... missing my daily dose🥺 But seriously, are you okay, well? Especially during this time.

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Cam Croz
March 31, 2020 16:28

It makes me so happy to hear somebody missing my stories! Thank you! It really means a lot to me, Iv'e been doubting my writing for a while, and its really heartwarming to know that at least some people enjoy it! 💕
As for my current state, yes i'm perfectly fine, for now anyway... 😁 iv'e just had less and less time for my writing for a while. Its hard for me to find free time.
Again, thanks so much for believing in my stories!!! 💖

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Mariyam G
March 31, 2020 16:34

❤️ your stories. And when you have stories like yours, who needs a 🧠. Weird, I know. 🤪 Good to know you’re fine and well.

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Carol Coupland
January 16, 2020 00:42

I liked this. Great mixture of emotion and all tidied up at the end.

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Cam Croz
January 16, 2020 02:25

thanks!

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Roha Khan
January 15, 2020 09:37

A definition of aesthetic

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Cam Croz
January 16, 2020 02:25

True!

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Jenna Williams
January 11, 2020 00:07

Really cool idea! I like how you did some creepy-ish stuff, some funny stuff, and a lot of expressed personality.

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Cam Croz
January 11, 2020 14:34

Thank you!

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Phoenix's Fire
November 02, 2020 19:07

oh my god, this is so amazing! I feel like you should to a follow-up or something, I really liked this, it really had a doctor who vibe

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Cam Croz
November 02, 2020 19:48

Thank you! Ive never even seen Doctor Who lol, XD
maybe someday...

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February 12, 2020 06:33

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Cam Croz
April 07, 2020 14:36

Thank you!

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Todd Кelly
December 26, 2021 15:33

Cool! Strange. I like it

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Noor Barq
April 21, 2021 01:20

wowwwww!

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Zatoichi Mifune
May 30, 2023 08:57

Wow! I've just read this story and I loved it! It's really creepy, and just doesn't make sense! (but in a good sense if you know what I mean). Love the beginning, and especially the bit with the people with no faces. You've got to follow that up in a new story (unless you already have, this is the first of your stories that I've read)

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