The Curve

Suspense

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes the words “déjà vu” or “that didn’t happen.”" as part of Stranger than Fiction with Zack McDonald.

I was twelve the first time I walked through a place I had no way of knowing existed.

It was the summer my family cruised along the Italian coast. The ship docked with a groan, gleaming in the sun like a polished pearl. The port was alive with movement, people haggling with vendors, the murmur of conversations blending with the distant hum of a street musician’s violin. The air was thick with the salty scent of the sea and the earthy aroma of fresh pastries from nearby bakeries. Everything felt new, bright, and slightly overwhelming.

We had been awake since dawn. By the time we stepped off the ship, I was starving. My parents wanted history. I wanted food.

We wandered down cobblestone streets, past pastel buildings, balconies spilling flowers. The narrow alleys twisted like veins, guiding us deeper into the heart of the town. Vendors shouted greetings, some in Italian, others in a mixture of broken English and hand gestures. Somewhere ahead, a violin played, its mournful tune weaving in and out of the vibrant noise of the market. Eventually, we stopped in front of a small stone building. Carved wood framed the entrance, and vines climbed the walls, as if time itself had wrapped them in its embrace. Adults looked excited. I looked at the menu.

Inside, the air was cool and damp, like a sanctuary from the sun. Thick beams crossed the ceiling, their deep, worn wood telling stories of centuries passed. Frescoes decorated the walls, some faded from years of smoke and humidity, others vibrant with colors that time had preserved. Tiles were patterned in blues and ochres, softening the light and casting everything in an ethereal glow. A mural on one wall showed the harbor centuries ago, ships billowing sails as they departed for distant lands. My parents marveled at the artistry. My brother, ever the foodie, tried to pronounce “squid ink pasta” and failed spectacularly.

I sat and drank water fast enough to alarm my mother.

I laughed, scraping my chair across the floor, the sound echoing through the room. Sunlight cut across the table, but I didn’t notice the layout. I didn’t realize then how important it was.

We ordered. We waited. I drank more water.

Then, without warning, the need for the bathroom struck.

“I’m going,” I told my mother.

“Ask someone where it is,” she said, barely glancing up.

I stood up, ready to ask a waiter, follow directions like any normal twelve-year-old in a country I’d never visited. But then, for a single heartbeat, I froze. Every tile beneath my feet, every beam overhead, every curve of the hallway, I knew it. Not as a guess, not in pieces. I knew it completely. I could see the bathroom door before it existed. I could feel the tiles beneath my shoes. I could hear faint voices echoing down the hall.

My stomach tightened. My pulse spiked. I’d never been here. And yet somehow, I had.

I walked, almost instinctively.

Past tables, past the mural, to the back of the room where hallways branched. Three options: straight ahead, right, or left where the corridor curved out of sight.

I took the left.

The hallway bent, and I followed. The curve was exactly as I remembered. My breathing steadied. My steps were sure. No hesitation.

At the end of the curve, the bathroom door stood where I had expected it to be.

I slowed. How did I know that?

Inside, the bathroom was small, tiled in blue. The mirror was framed in dark wood, worn at the corners. The air smelled faintly of soap and something older, stone that had stood the test of time. It was quiet. So quiet that I could hear the rhythm of my breathing, the hum of the old walls, as though the building itself was waiting.

I washed my hands slowly, staring at my reflection. The feeling settled over me, unmistakable: I’ve been here before. Not earlier that day. Not in a dream. Before.

Back in the hallway, restaurant sounds were muffled, distant. I didn’t immediately return. I stopped at the curve.

The familiarity shifted. Behind me, the feeling was stronger. It wasn’t just that I had been here before, it was that I had been facing the opposite direction, watching someone walk away.

If I go back, I’ll see myself.

Literally.

A twelve-year-old girl with sunburned shoulders, half-finished water glass, waiting at the table.

My skin prickled.

I forced myself back to the table.

The dining room looked exactly the same. My parents laughed, my brother reached for another chip. The sunlight fell just as it had before.

I slid back into my seat. No one noticed anything strange. I said nothing.

We ate. We left. The day continued.

Years passed.

The memory dulled, like a story almost imagined. It lived in my mind as something more than a dream but less than a reality, an in-between world where I could almost touch the edges of something that didn’t make sense.

Until recently.

I returned to Italy, wandering streets near that port, following the memory that had lingered for years. I found myself in front of the old trattoria, now a polished and tourist-friendly version of its former self. The sign read, “Palazzo della Famiglia Rossi, est. 1803 – now a trattoria.”

Something clicked. The name struck a chord, but I couldn’t place why.

Archives revealed that the palazzo had been a private mansion, home to a family of influence. I read old journals detailing their routines. A photograph showed a twelve-year-old girl in the very hallway where I had walked. Her braided hair, sunburned shoulders, posture, all identical to mine.

The Rossi journals described her routines: running ahead to the bathroom, tracing the tiles, admiring the murals. Every motion matched my memory. But the most chilling part? Her name was Isabella Rossi. She had lived in the mansion, in this very place, more than a hundred years before me.

I realized I had walked in the life of someone else. The hallway, the bend, the certainty, it belonged to her first.

I am the only one who remembers. My family experienced the trip normally. The mansion became a restaurant. My timeline and theirs never missed a beat.

Sometimes, in new buildings, that click of recognition stops me cold.

Because I no longer know if I am remembering the past, or reliving someone else’s.

Years later, when I tried to tell a friend about it, they laughed and asked why I’d never finished the story. I had no answer.

Somewhere, in a stone mansion turned trattoria on the Italian coast, a twelve-year-old girl moves through a curved hallway, confident she knows the path, waiting for someone to come back.

And sometimes, I think it might be me.

Posted Mar 03, 2026
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Zack Herman
21:47 Mar 19, 2026

Beautiful, descriptive language. As somebody who has had a somewhat similar experience, I can relate to this story. Well done!

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Carolina Mintz
16:26 Mar 19, 2026

Your story gave me goosebumps - I love writing and reading young adult fiction as you do - and was exposed to it for thirty-odd years as a middle school librarian. But I also like the notion of living past lives - I've seen many instances of it both in myself and other people. Well done, Lena.

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Lena Bright
18:22 Mar 19, 2026

Thank you so much, that really means a lot, especially coming from someone with your experience. I’m so glad it gave you that goosebumps feeling, that’s exactly the kind of atmosphere I was hoping to create.

The idea of past lives is so fascinating to me as well, and I love how it can blur the line between memory and imagination. I’m really glad that element resonated with you. Thanks again for your kind words.

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Mary Bendickson
00:39 Mar 17, 2026

Nice trip through time.

Thanks for going back and reading some of my previous stories.

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Lena Bright
18:20 Mar 19, 2026

Thank you, I’m really glad you enjoyed it! And of course, I’ve enjoyed reading your stories as well; you have a great way of drawing the reader in.

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Jim LaFleur
10:14 Mar 14, 2026

Beautifully eerie and wonderfully restrained. Excellent work!

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Lena Bright
18:19 Mar 19, 2026

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that. I’m glad the restrained tone worked for you; I wanted the eeriness to feel subtle and lingering rather than overdone.

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Eric Manske
16:13 Mar 12, 2026

Nice way to emote the sensation of déjà vu and to then shroud it in the possibility of walking in another's shoes. Nice turn of phrases in the writing as well.

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Lena Bright
18:19 Mar 19, 2026

Thank you so much, I really appreciate that. I’m glad the idea of stepping into someone else’s experience came through, and that the phrasing resonated with you.

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Chris Dreyfus
23:55 Mar 09, 2026

A great way to write about “déjà vu”, Lena. There is something about Italy that evokes memories, too or is it nostalgia, even if you're a visitor. So much of the world's history began there. Can I make a suggestion? You mention the violin in the first P and then again in the next. Try "Somewhere ahead, THE (not A) violin played, its mournful tune weaving in and out of the vibrant noise of the market." And BTW, the violin playing is a great image that could be sprinkled a bit more throughout the story... perhaps it's fading, or something similar, or perhaps the MC hears it again in different circumstances and is overwhelmed by the music and its significance. Anyway, just a thought. Terrific story.

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Lena Bright
18:18 Mar 19, 2026

Thank you so much, I really appreciate both the kind words and the thoughtful suggestions. I love your point about changing it to the violin, that continuity makes a lot of sense, and I’m definitely going to revise that.

And I really like your idea of weaving the violin back in throughout the story. Using it as a kind of thread, maybe fading in and out or returning at key moments, could add another layer to the atmosphere and the sense of connection across time. That’s such a great insight.

Thanks again for taking the time to share this, I’m so glad the story resonated with you.

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Makayla A
14:39 Mar 07, 2026

Very intriguing. The past and the future have combined. A fun way to interrupt the prompt. Well, done. :)

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Lena Bright
18:15 Mar 19, 2026

Thank you so much! I really appreciate that. I loved the idea of blurring the line between past and future, so I’m glad that came through.

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Theodore Bax
19:38 Mar 03, 2026

I like it. Clever. And actually a bit eerie and spooky but not frightening. Good job!

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Lena Bright
21:18 Mar 03, 2026

Thank you, that means a lot. I love writing stories that sit in that in-between space, not quite scary, but just strange enough to linger.

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