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Drama

Written in response to: "Start or end your story with a countdown beginning, an alarm ringing, or a timer going off." as part of In Real Time.

In 1994, Leo had a dream. He was thirteen years old. In the dream, his mother was in a boat when a crocodile suddenly attacked her. She fought it fiercely. Somehow, she managed to fight it off, and eventually the crocodile disappeared. She was badly scarred, but she survived.

Leo didn’t think much of the dream when he woke up. To him, it was just a strange dream that a thirteen-year-old might have and forget by breakfast. What Leo didn’t know was that his mother was already fighting for her life. 

Two weeks later, his parents told him that she had breast cancer and was going to have surgery because she was very sick. Leo struggled to understand it. She didn’t look sick. His mother was there. She was talking, moving around, living her life. Nothing about her seemed to tell him that something inside her body was threatening to take her away. 

Leo kept having the same dream. Not once. Not twice. Again and again, he found himself back on the boat with his mother. The crocodile would appear, almost as if it had been waiting for her. It would attack, and his mother would fight back with everything she had. She was never helpless. She fought fiercely, refusing to give in. And every time, she survived. 

Every time Leo had the dream, he noticed something new. At first, he had paid attention only to his mother and the crocodile. Then, one night, he noticed the boat. There was a number painted on its side. He didn't know why it caught his attention. It wasn't particularly unusual, but once he noticed it, he couldn't stop seeing it.

7 9 9 

The next time he dreamed of the boat, the numbers were still there. Every time he had the dream, they were there. Leo thought it must be a coincidence, or maybe it was a boat he'd seen somewhere, and the numbers had stuck with him. Before Leo gave it too much thought, his mother had the surgery and began to slowly recover. Life slowly returned to normal, and the fear that had surrounded the surgery began to fade. For Leo, the dream became something he rarely thought about. Days turned into weeks. Weeks turned into months. And slowly but surely, he forgot about the boat, the crocodile, and the numbers. It all became nothing more than a strange dream from when he was thirteen.

Or so he thought.

By the time Leo was a senior in high school, he had forgotten all about the dream. Life had moved on. He was seventeen now, busy with school, friends, and thoughts about what would come after graduation. The dream belonged to another time; a strange fragment of childhood that had disappeared as completely as the crocodile itself. Until one day, something happened that brought it all back. 

A few days after the 1999 New Year, his mother felt a sharp abdominal pain near her ribs. She ignored it for a few days, but when she noticed her dark urine, she scheduled an appointment with her doctor, who felt a lump below her right rib cage. Given her medical history, she was referred to an oncologist who delivered her the devastating news. The cancer returned. This time, it came back with a vengeance. 

The doctor sat down with the family and told them the news no one wanted to hear. She had only a few months left. At best. Leo couldn’t understand. How could his mother suddenly be dying? She was too young to die. He was too young to lose her. 

His mother had survived before. She had fought it once. She had beaten it. Why couldn’t she beat it again? But the moment the doctor said those words, Leo knew. He looked at his mother. Her face said it all. She knew she wasn't going to win this fight. And in that moment, something inside Leo broke. The doctor had taken whatever small sliver of hope remained and crushed it with those merciless words. There would be no miracle. No second chance. 

The next few months passed slowly. At first, there were still moments when it was possible to pretend that things were normal. They would all sit together and eat dinner. She would laugh at something on television. She would ask Leo about school and listen to his plans for the future. But little by little, she grew weaker. Walking across the room became an effort. She slept more. She ate less. Leo watched his mother disappear in pieces. There were days when she couldn't get out of bed. Days when the pain was written across her face. And days when Leo would sit beside her, not knowing what to say, so he said nothing at all. Sometimes, it was too unbearable to watch. He would stay longer in school when he didn’t need to. He would go visit friends just so he wouldn’t see her suffer. He tried not to think about it. He tried to live as though there would still be a future in which his mother was there to see it. He was seventeen. There was no instruction manual for watching your mother die. 

Then, on a late spring night, the old crocodile came back to visit him. But this time, it was bigger, stronger, and more terrifying than Leo remembered. And this time, he understood that the crocodile was the cancer. In the dream, his mother was once again in the boat. And once again, the crocodile came for her. Leo was standing on the shore watching his mother alone on the boat. She was weaker, and the crocodile was enormous, its head rising from the dark water; two yellow, cold, unblinking eyes moved toward her. Leo tried to call out to her, but his voice wouldn't come. The crocodile’s armored back broke the surface inch by inch, water streaming from the ridges of its hide. Its jaws opened, revealing row after row of long, yellow teeth. Leo could see the water bulging upward. The boat rocked as his mother grabbed the side to steady herself. In an instant, the crocodile lunged. Water exploded over the boat as it tilted sharply. His mother screamed as the crocodile snapped at her again and again, its jaws slamming shut with a sound that echoed across the water. Leo darted toward the water, but no matter how quickly he moved, the boat remained the same distance away. 

The crocodile struck again. This time, Leo saw something he had not seen in a very long time. The number painted on the side of the boat.

7 9 9.

The numbers were bright against the weathered wood. He stared at them. He couldn't explain why they frightened him. They were only three numbers. As Leo kept staring, he realized that everything had become silent. No wind. No birds. No water. Nothing. Then his mother's scream shattered the silence. The crocodile was on top of the boat. Leo watched in horror as the boat turned over and his mother went under the water.

By May of that year, his mother was too weak to walk. Most days, she remained in bed, her body growing thinner and more fragile with each passing week. But when Leo’s high school graduation approached, she made one thing clear. She was going. She insisted on being there. She wanted to watch her son cross the stage. So they brought her to the graduation. She was weak, exhausted, and barely able to stand, but she refused to miss it. Leo kept looking toward her throughout the ceremony, making sure she was still there. For everyone else, it was supposed to be a moment of celebration, a milestone, a beginning, a day filled with photographs, laughter, and congratulations. For Leo, it was something else. Her presence mattered more than the diploma in his hand. 

Afterward, the celebratory dinner at his favorite Italian restaurant had to be canceled because his mother barely made it home. She was too sick. Leo understood that there would be no celebration of his graduation. There was only the quiet knowledge that his mother had fought to be there long enough to see him cross that stage. And that she might not be there for much longer.

Before the summer ended, his mother died on a hot summer day in July, just a month short of her 46th birthday. The days after she passed felt like a blur. He felt like he couldn't understand what had happened or fathom the loss of his mother. The realization came in pieces. The couch where she sat was empty. Her medications were still on the nightstand. Her clothes were still hanging in the closet. Her favorite things were still exactly where she had left them. But she wasn't there. 

He moved through those days almost mechanically. In one of those quiet days, he understood that losing someone wasn't only losing the person. It was losing the future you had imagined with them. There would be no more birthdays with his mother. No more holidays. As he thought about the word holiday, a strange thought came into his mind. A strange sensation moved through him, almost like recognition. Then he remembered. Not the whole dream. Not yet. Just the numbers.

7 9 9

The numbers painted on the side of the boat. Leo looked at the calendar in front of him. July. 1999. His stomach tightened. Seven. Nine. Nine. They were never just a number. They had been a date. The date his mother would die. And somehow, years before he could have known it, his dream had already told him. 

That night, Leo couldn't sleep. How could he have known? How could a thirteen-year-old boy dream about something that hadn't happened yet? How could his mind have created a date that would not become meaningful until four years later? Leo opened his eyes. Maybe it wasn't a prophecy. Maybe it was a coincidence. Maybe his brain had simply connected three meaningless numbers to an event that happened years later. But the more he tried to explain it, the less convincing the explanations became. This was not a dream he had once or twice. This dream started four years ago, and it kept repeating. Leo pulled his blanket closer around him and whispered the numbers into the darkness. “Seven. Nine.Nine.” 

For a long time, Leo could think of little else. He wondered about them in the quiet moments—while lying in bed, driving, sitting in class, or staring out a window. He replayed the dream in his mind, searching for something he had missed. He searched for an explanation. He read books, articles, and even talked to psychics, but never found an answer. Eventually, though, the ordinary machinery of everyday life slowly began moving again, and Leo moved with it. The grief didn't disappear. It simply became quieter. There were still moments when he missed his mother so intensely that it felt like the loss had happened only yesterday. But those moments became less frequent, and the dream became nothing more than a distant memory. Life moved forward in ways he once couldn't have imagined. There were jobs, relationships, travels, mortgages, birthdays, school forms, and sleepless nights. There were ordinary problems to worry about and ordinary joys to celebrate. As the years passed, Leo built a life with a family and a future that his mother had never lived long enough to see. 

Normally, this is where the story would have ended. And perhaps it should have been. But life is not simple. There is always a twist, a complication, or a scare. Just when Leo felt safe and forgot all about the crocodile, the boat, and the numbers, it all came back again after decades of lurking in the dark. 

In 2026, Leo’s 45th birthday was nine months away. The age stopped him whenever he thought about it. His mother had been forty-five when she died. Leo had tried not to attach any meaning to that fact. Forty-five was simply an age. . . a number. Yet, as his forty-fifth birthday approached, he began to feel uneasy. He couldn't explain why. But he knew that feeling. He had felt it before. And surely enough, on a warm summer night, while putting his son to bed, he fell asleep unaware that somewhere between midnight and morning, he had crossed into a place he had not visited in nearly thirty years. 

He was standing ankle-deep in warm water. The surface was perfectly still, black as oil, stretching endlessly in every direction. There was no shore, no birds, and no trees. Only a pale gray mist hovered above the water. Leo felt the water move and looked down to see ripples. Then he heard an unmistakable sound... wood creaking. Slowly, a boat emerged from the mist. It was the same weathered wood. In it sat a figure with its back turned toward him. As the boat moved closer, Leo froze. It wasn’t just the figure that scared him. It was the numbers painted across the side that seemed to pulse in the mist. 

10 26

"No."

The word barely escaped his mouth. Then the figure slowly turned toward him. Leo stopped breathing. The figure had a thin, deathly-pale face, with eyes that were open yet empty. Leo was staring at an older, paler version of himself. The other version of Leo looked down at the water as it began to churn. Something enormous moved beneath. Then the crocodile's head slowly emerged from the black water, its eyes fixed on Leo. It had never forgotten him. It had simply been waiting. Waiting for the right year. Waiting for the right age. 

Leo woke violently, gasping for air. The bedroom was dark, and his son was still sleeping next to him. For several seconds, he lay perfectly still, trying to convince himself it had only been a dream. Then he looked at his watch.

10:26

For the next few weeks, Leo became obsessed. He tried to prove himself wrong. He searched through old calendars. He checked dates. He started writing the numbers everywhere, hoping to find a solution. As the days went by, he stopped sleeping normally. Every night, he dreaded closing his eyes. When his wife confronted him about his weird behavior, he just lied. How could he explain that he believed a dream had given him the date of his death?

When September came around, he made a countdown for October. He knew exactly how many days remained. Twenty-nine days, then twenty-six, and at twenty days he quit his job. The closer October came, the more convinced he became that the dream was repeating itself. At fifteen days, his wife and family tried an intervention, but he just sat there watching the clock and said nothing. 

On the last night, Leo sat alone at the kitchen table with a bottle of bourbon, staring at the calendar. His mother's photograph was on the wall above him. Forty-five years old. The same age he was now. He looked at her face.

"Did you know?" he whispered. Alas, the photograph gave him no answer.

At ten in the evening, the house was quiet. Outside, a car passed while a dog barked somewhere down the street. The world had no idea that he was waiting to die. Or maybe it didn’t really care. By eleven, the world around him became completely silent. There was no more traffic. No refrigerator humming. No pipes. No dogs barking. Nothing. Leo could hear his own heartbeat.

He looked at the clock as he took another gulp of bourbon. There were only a few minutes left. His breathing became shallow. He thought about his mother in that hospice bed. He thought about the calendar. July 1999. He thought about the boat and the crocodile in his dream. He finally understood the cruelest part. The dream had never told him how he would die. It had only told him when. 

At 11:58, Leo took the last sip of his drink and put the glass in the sink. He then went up the stairs and lay next to his son. He smiled at him and held his breath and watched the clock change at midnight. Then, he closed his eyes. 

Posted Sep 05, 2026
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Bob Faszczewski
September 16, 2026 14:54

Very interesting and absorbing story. I like the way it kind of keeps you guessing about the ending while giving you hints along the way.

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