โUgh, I hate this place!โ Darcy says and falls on the couch.
We are in a room in an old castle. This castle is a really big one with huge walls surrounding its garden but itโs abandoned. The Royal family left it, just after Darcy was born, and moved to the new castle in the middle of the country. Now it is the home to spiders and rats. Some people come to clean it but they just do it from outside so its condition inside is awful. But unlike Darcy, I love this place.
Darcy is the Royal princess who is sent here to spend the weekendโฆ..with me?
โThis place isnโt that bad,โ I reply.
โThat bad?โ Darcy stops as I give her a look. โOk, so, what are we even doing here in the first place?โ
โI donโt know,โ I shrug. โBut now we are here, so Iโm going to explore this place.โ
Darcy rolls her eyes. โDo whatever you want, Iโm not gonna come with you.โ
I walk out of the room into the hallway.
The walls of the hall are painted in a old, medieval styled paintings. I have to remove some webs to have a clear look at the paintings.
They are so beautiful. Thatโs why I love this place because it shows our past, it shows what we are supposed to be, it shows the things we had once but will never have again.
Every tiny detail is mentioned very clearly; how our planet used to be a land of magic long, long ago. But then space started getting polluted and that pollution came to our planet and started destroying the magical elements. After some centuries, people from a planet named Arth came and fully destroyed our planet, destroying its magic.
People with magic are exiled. People who even talk about magic are exiled. Everybody hates the word magic.
It destroyed one more thing. That thing is shown in the paintings but people donโt notice it and even if they notice it, they don't understand it.
That thing is love.
Love of a mother towards her child, Love of a person towards its planet and family, Love of a King towards its citizens. Love of a spouse towards another, Love of a lover towards the other. They destroyed it all. People forgot what love meant.
But I think I know what it means.
โWhat is this?โ Darcy speaks, making me jump.
โWhen did you come here?โ I ask.
โI was standing here all the time,โ she says, โNow tell me what is this?โ
She is pointing towards a painting of the Magical Crystal. The magical crystal that gave power to all the magical people. The same magical crystal that the Arthlings destroyed to destroy the magical people.
โItโs our Magical Crystal,โ I say.
โOur?โ
โOur ancestors.โ
โCas, these are all lies, there was nothing like this, there was no magic.โ
โNo, it is the truth, lies are what youโre telling me now.โ
Yes, lies are what they are telling us. They are all lies. This is another reason why I love this place and Darcy hates it. But Darcy hating this place doesn't mean that I hate her. I still love her and will always do.
We then explore other rooms in the castle, most of them are covered in grime and dust, their walls covered in paintings.
After exploring many rooms, I enter a room. Darcy doesn't make any noise as she follows me into the room. It is just a simple room with plain walls but itโs different. It doesn't have any paintings like the rest of the room here. The huge Royal bed, couch, and all other stuff are covered. I move around the room. The air is filled with dust as I remove the covers. Darcy coughs a little and Iโm by her side the very next second.
โWhat happened?โ I ask.
โN-โ *Darcy coughs* โNothingโ
โDo you need water?โ
โNo,โ *cough*
I gesture her to sit down on the couch and run out of the room. I run down the stairs to the room in which we were sitting earlier and grab the backpack. I run back to the room as fast as I can to find Darcy coughing violently. I take the water bottle from the backpack and hand it to Darcy. After drinking some water, her coughing stops. I sit next to Darcy and take her hand in mine.
She looks at the ceiling and lets her thoughts race in silence. She looks even more beautiful as she sits there peacefully. Her long light brown hairs tied back in a ponytail. Her small perfect lips closed in a tight line. Her ocean-blue eyes staring at some point in the distance. I stare at her for a long time, because I donโt want to look at anything else.
She suddenly looks up at me, โYou really like me so much, right?โ
I quickly look away, I feel embarrassed.
โYeahโฆ.um...I mean I would have done the same thing for anyone in your place.โ
โBut you like me,โ Darcy says.
I stay quiet.
โYou know, I also believe that what the paintings show is true. I said that they are lies because thatโs what everybody wants us to say, they donโt want us to know that this is the truth.โ
โI know, but we can change it, we can tell the people what is true and what is not.โ
โYeah, we can.โ
Again there is an awkward silence.
โYou know why I hate this place?โ
โUmm...no?โ
โBecause this place reminds me of my...of my mother.โ
Yeah, her mother. She was killed soon after Darcyโs birth, thatโs what I think, by the Arthlings because she was a magical person. I donโt know the whole story but I think it was something related to Darcy being born with magical powers. I have been with Darcy for about 16 years and I donโt think that she has any magic, I would have loved it if she had magic but she doesn't have.
โYour mother was a nice lady,โ
โMaybe...my father never talks about her, he hates her.โ
โNo, youโre wrong, he loved her and he still loves her, but he is hiding it because people donโt want him to love her.โ
โThen we need to change that too.โ I say with a little laugh.
โYou know what?โ
โHuh?โ
โYour smile is the best smile I have ever seen.โ Darcy says.
โYou know what?โ
โWhat?โ
โThat smile exists only because of you.โ I reply.
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Nononono. Bye?? Are you leaving Reedsy?? Everyone's just leaving it now..or it at least feels like everyone is. A lot of people i know i guess. Why are you leaving?? Are you maybe just leaving for a little bit, possibly??
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Deepshika Iโm so sad youโre going ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
Why must you leeeeave...BOTH sites?! ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ซ๐ซ๐ซ๐ซ
Are your parents making you or something? Whyyyyy? Or are you just going? Double whyyyyy?๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ
Goodbye sis, it was so nice being friends with you๐๐๐๐๐ซ๐ซ๐ซ๐ซ๐ซ
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Please!
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Come back! Let's spam Reedsy friends again! I will miss you! And sorry if I had been rude to you!
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YESSS COME BACK DEEPSHIKHA!!!
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Hey, Deepshikkha! You did a great job at 1st person! Upvote spree for upvote spree?
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Thanks!!
Lol, why not? But you're probably asleep by now and I'm really busy so we'll do it in some time.
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Thanks, I'll upvote you now, too!
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i made a new story :D come check out 'a savior?' and leave some feedback ^^
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hey heyyyy i finally have a story out, check it out!!!!!!
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YASSS!!!! Going there noww!!!!
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thanks:)
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Ha! I love your โbioโ. And, yup, Iโve tried following myself too ๐
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Hey, i am almost done with a novel :)
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Wow, that's good!!! Which one have you done??
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well it's the one i'm doing for fun and won't publish but maybe i could but something like it on here
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That horror game one?? You can publish it or make a series here...
Btw how long is it?
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yeah that one ^^ Well i'm working on chapter 18 of it at the moment and there'll be a couple more chapters after that
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Nice!! You should publish it as you've worked hard on it...
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Hey could ya maybe help me with something? i thought of a new novel
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Oh, nice!! Speak up!
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Well i need help with the novel because i can't think of everything so could i tell you the plot or at least what i have so far so it would be easier to help?
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Ok! I'm all ears.
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Heres what i have: there's four friends, 2 boys and 2 girls. one of the girls is a 'guardian' (at first i thought of her being a guardian angel but i really wanna change it tbh) who protects the others and is friends with them while pretending to be a regular human. Though she can't reveal herself as one because a lot of bad things would probably happen and scientists would probably wanna get her
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Nice plot!! What do ya need help with?
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YOUโRE Mackenzie Moon? Adihweuhfdufruhf HENLOOO
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Hmm...
Mackenzie 'MOON'.
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Hey i made a new story ^^ could ya check out "My older sister?" and leave some feedback?
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I'll surely check it out!!
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Thank's ^^ i'm excited to see what ya think
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I think you did great at both the 1st-person narrative and coming up with a story right at the last minute. That was a sweet ending too.
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Thank you so much!!!
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heya could ya check out "betrayed" and tell me what you think?
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Will do in some time.
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Yep ^^ well i do love writing and that's completely fine, just remember to leave some feedback
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You write really fast.
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Hey could ya help with something?
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Yeah, what is it?
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So ya know my demi-god series right? not sure if i told you yet but i'm turning it into a novel
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Umm...sorry but I don't know about it. Does it include your story, 'The Goddess Child'?
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Yeah "the goddess child" was the first part i made of it, i'm not sure if that's the only one ya know, i could give you a list?
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You just give me the list of stories, I'll read them now.
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Alright ^^ leave some feedback:
The Goddess child (ya already read it but it's still just the first one)
the camp
not his fault
Getting her back
It has begun (this part is kinda a part of a crossover but i want ya to see it because it adds some other characters)
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Ok, I'll read them now.
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sweet
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Hey Moon!!
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Hii!!!
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Hey, Snow, I tried to write a story recently... in the form of a poem... it's not good but would you mind reading it and telling what do you think?
https://allpoetry.com/poem/15517931-Part-1--To-her--fake--love---by-Kim-Mi-Young
And yeah, it's kinda related to teen pregnancy... but their is no mention of any sexual stuff. Just letting ya know~
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Wow that was- That was sooo beautiful and so sad and regretful! I actually wrote something just like that- NOT about Teen pregnancy but about love..and thinking someone liked me. Its that story I told you to read "Kinda Hurt. Okay?" This sentence really spoke to me
then, when I found you,
I suddenly felt happy,
I felt like I loved you.
but no, that wasnโt love,
that was just my desire
for being loved...
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What do you mean its not good? Your awesome at poetry!!!! Annddd thats amazing!
But um- something is really bugging me and if I am wrong then thats my fault and if you don't wanna answer my apologies butttt. Um is this poem true? I mean I felt all these emotions coming from it and I really think I was getting them from you. They were such strong feelings. (Yes I am that empathetic, its crazy) and it really feels- real. So is it true?
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Thank you so much, Ugochi!! I never thought that you would like it!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!
Oh, I haven't read that poem/story yet, sorry๐
Yeah, those are my favorite lines... 'cause they are very true...
I don't think so... but whatever, actually, the problem with me is that I always keeps criticizing my work, idk why?๐
And about it being true... well, it's not true... but umm, can we talk on NaNoWriMo?
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Of course I liked it!! Why wouldn't I! Well you need to start taking pride in your work, regardless if you think it is good or not๐. And if someone doesn't like it, hear their critique and next time remember it๐mmkay!
But I don't know why wouldn't like it..they are just crazy cause how?
and surreeee!
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Thank you!! I also think that I should start taking *pride* for my work๐ (lol, not being rude here)
Yeah, that's why I want, people giving critique on my work so that I could improve...
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hey
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Hey, could you possibly help me with something? I'm having some trouble with stuff
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Sorry, B. I didn't reply to your recent comments. I was really busy... I'm sorry๐
Yeah, what help do you need?
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It's alright ^^ well i made a new story and i could use some help with other things for it, like romance and stuff
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As you know, I'm terrible at writing romance but okay!!
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oh dang it, sorry about that.
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It's okay, I can try to help ya!!
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Hey, i saw all the stuff from a while ago. so your not leaving then? That's good ^^ i hope we can still talk as well :)
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No, I'm not leaving...
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Yay ^^ could we still talk? i hope we can
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Well I see you deleted your bio..so your not leaving?? I'm gonna take it like that.
Also I wrote a new story๐ฅบplease come read.
DON'T GO!!
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It's okay, Ugochi! I'm not going any where.
Yay, I'll read it ASAP!!
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YAY!!
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Nooooo!
Why are you leavinnngg๐ฅบ๐ญ
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Please please come back! I miss you! Come back to Ap and Reedsy. Don't leave me so abruptly. Please come again and what's the reason?
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Hey, do you possibly know how to draw very well? i need some help with something
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