Magic of Love๐Ÿ’–

Drama Romance Fantasy

Written in response to: "Write about a couple who have just moved to a place that one person loves, and the other hates." as part of Location, Location, Location.

โ€œUgh, I hate this place!โ€ Darcy says and falls on the couch. 


We are in a room in an old castle. This castle is a really big one with huge walls surrounding its garden but itโ€™s abandoned. The Royal family left it, just after Darcy was born, and moved to the new castle in the middle of the country. Now it is the home to spiders and rats. Some people come to clean it but they just do it from outside so its condition inside is awful. But unlike Darcy, I love this place.

Darcy is the Royal princess who is sent here to spend the weekendโ€ฆ..with me?


โ€œThis place isnโ€™t that bad,โ€ I reply.

โ€œThat bad?โ€ Darcy stops as I give her a look. โ€œOk, so, what are we even doing here in the first place?โ€

โ€œI donโ€™t know,โ€ I shrug. โ€œBut now we are here, so Iโ€™m going to explore this place.โ€

Darcy rolls her eyes. โ€œDo whatever you want, Iโ€™m not gonna come with you.โ€

I walk out of the room into the hallway. 

The walls of the hall are painted in a old, medieval styled paintings. I have to remove some webs to have a clear look at the paintings. 

They are so beautiful. Thatโ€™s why I love this place because it shows our past, it shows what we are supposed to be, it shows the things we had once but will never have again.


Every tiny detail is mentioned very clearly; how our planet used to be a land of magic long, long ago. But then space started getting polluted and that pollution came to our planet and started destroying the magical elements. After some centuries, people from a planet named Arth came and fully destroyed our planet, destroying its magic.

People with magic are exiled. People who even talk about magic are exiled. Everybody hates the word magic.


It destroyed one more thing. That thing is shown in the paintings but people donโ€™t notice it and even if they notice it, they don't understand it.

That thing is love.

Love of a mother towards her child, Love of a person towards its planet and family, Love of a King towards its citizens. Love of a spouse towards another, Love of a lover towards the other. They destroyed it all. People forgot what love meant. 

But I think I know what it means. 

โ€œWhat is this?โ€ Darcy speaks, making me jump. 

โ€œWhen did you come here?โ€ I ask.

โ€œI was standing here all the time,โ€ she says, โ€œNow tell me what is this?โ€

She is pointing towards a painting of the Magical Crystal. The magical crystal that gave power to all the magical people. The same magical crystal that the Arthlings destroyed to destroy the magical people.

โ€œItโ€™s our Magical Crystal,โ€ I say.

โ€œOur?โ€

โ€œOur ancestors.โ€

โ€œCas, these are all lies, there was nothing like this, there was no magic.โ€

โ€œNo, it is the truth, lies are what youโ€™re telling me now.โ€ 

Yes, lies are what they are telling us. They are all lies. This is another reason why I love this place and Darcy hates it. But Darcy hating this place doesn't mean that I hate her. I still love her and will always do.


We then explore other rooms in the castle, most of them are covered in grime and dust, their walls covered in paintings. 

After exploring many rooms, I enter a room. Darcy doesn't make any noise as she follows me into the room. It is just a simple room with plain walls but itโ€™s different. It doesn't have any paintings like the rest of the room here. The huge Royal bed, couch, and all other stuff are covered. I move around the room. The air is filled with dust as I remove the covers. Darcy coughs a little and Iโ€™m by her side the very next second. 

โ€œWhat happened?โ€ I ask.

โ€œN-โ€ *Darcy coughs* โ€œNothingโ€

โ€œDo you need water?โ€

โ€œNo,โ€ *cough* 

I gesture her to sit down on the couch and run out of the room. I run down the stairs to the room in which we were sitting earlier and grab the backpack. I run back to the room as fast as I can to find Darcy coughing violently. I take the water bottle from the backpack and hand it to Darcy. After drinking some water, her coughing stops. I sit next to Darcy and take her hand in mine. 

She looks at the ceiling and lets her thoughts race in silence. She looks even more beautiful as she sits there peacefully. Her long light brown hairs tied back in a ponytail. Her small perfect lips closed in a tight line. Her ocean-blue eyes staring at some point in the distance. I stare at her for a long time, because I donโ€™t want to look at anything else.


She suddenly looks up at me, โ€œYou really like me so much, right?โ€

I quickly look away, I feel embarrassed. 

โ€œYeahโ€ฆ.um...I mean I would have done the same thing for anyone in your place.โ€

โ€œBut you like me,โ€ Darcy says.

I stay quiet.

โ€œYou know, I also believe that what the paintings show is true. I said that they are lies because thatโ€™s what everybody wants us to say, they donโ€™t want us to know that this is the truth.โ€

โ€œI know, but we can change it, we can tell the people what is true and what is not.โ€

โ€œYeah, we can.โ€ 

Again there is an awkward silence.

โ€œYou know why I hate this place?โ€

โ€œUmm...no?โ€

โ€œBecause this place reminds me of my...of my mother.โ€ 

Yeah, her mother. She was killed soon after Darcyโ€™s birth, thatโ€™s what I think, by the Arthlings because she was a magical person. I donโ€™t know the whole story but I think it was something related to Darcy being born with magical powers. I have been with Darcy for about 16 years and I donโ€™t think that she has any magic, I would have loved it if she had magic but she doesn't have.

โ€œYour mother was a nice lady,โ€

โ€œMaybe...my father never talks about her, he hates her.โ€

โ€œNo, youโ€™re wrong, he loved her and he still loves her, but he is hiding it because people donโ€™t want him to love her.โ€

โ€œThen we need to change that too.โ€ I say with a little laugh.

โ€œYou know what?โ€

โ€œHuh?โ€

โ€œYour smile is the best smile I have ever seen.โ€ Darcy says.

โ€œYou know what?โ€

โ€œWhat?โ€

โ€œThat smile exists only because of you.โ€ I reply.


Posted Sep 19, 2020
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October 08, 2020 02:10

Hi!

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B. W.
October 07, 2020 16:34

Nononono. Bye?? Are you leaving Reedsy?? Everyone's just leaving it now..or it at least feels like everyone is. A lot of people i know i guess. Why are you leaving?? Are you maybe just leaving for a little bit, possibly??

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October 07, 2020 15:53

Deepshika Iโ€™m so sad youโ€™re going ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
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Goodbye sis, it was so nice being friends with you๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ซ

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October 07, 2020 15:39

Please!

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October 07, 2020 15:39

Come back! Let's spam Reedsy friends again! I will miss you! And sorry if I had been rude to you!

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YESSS COME BACK DEEPSHIKHA!!!

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Hey, Deepshikkha! You did a great job at 1st person! Upvote spree for upvote spree?

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D. Shikha
October 04, 2020 05:01

Thanks!!
Lol, why not? But you're probably asleep by now and I'm really busy so we'll do it in some time.

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Thanks, I'll upvote you now, too!

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B. W.
October 02, 2020 20:38

i made a new story :D come check out 'a savior?' and leave some feedback ^^

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Orenda .
October 02, 2020 19:25

hey heyyyy i finally have a story out, check it out!!!!!!

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D. Shikha
October 03, 2020 15:53

YASSS!!!! Going there noww!!!!

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Orenda .
October 03, 2020 15:57

thanks:)

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October 01, 2020 22:28

Ha! I love your โ€˜bioโ€™. And, yup, Iโ€™ve tried following myself too ๐Ÿ˜‚

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B. W.
September 30, 2020 20:53

Hey, i am almost done with a novel :)

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D. Shikha
October 01, 2020 12:00

Wow, that's good!!! Which one have you done??

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B. W.
October 01, 2020 14:08

well it's the one i'm doing for fun and won't publish but maybe i could but something like it on here

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D. Shikha
October 01, 2020 16:34

That horror game one?? You can publish it or make a series here...
Btw how long is it?

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B. W.
October 01, 2020 16:38

yeah that one ^^ Well i'm working on chapter 18 of it at the moment and there'll be a couple more chapters after that

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D. Shikha
October 01, 2020 17:25

Nice!! You should publish it as you've worked hard on it...

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B. W.
September 28, 2020 16:14

Hey could ya maybe help me with something? i thought of a new novel

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D. Shikha
September 28, 2020 16:18

Oh, nice!! Speak up!

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B. W.
September 28, 2020 16:20

Well i need help with the novel because i can't think of everything so could i tell you the plot or at least what i have so far so it would be easier to help?

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D. Shikha
September 28, 2020 16:21

Ok! I'm all ears.

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B. W.
September 28, 2020 16:24

Heres what i have: there's four friends, 2 boys and 2 girls. one of the girls is a 'guardian' (at first i thought of her being a guardian angel but i really wanna change it tbh) who protects the others and is friends with them while pretending to be a regular human. Though she can't reveal herself as one because a lot of bad things would probably happen and scientists would probably wanna get her

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D. Shikha
September 28, 2020 16:52

Nice plot!! What do ya need help with?

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September 27, 2020 18:38

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YOUโ€™RE Mackenzie Moon? Adihweuhfdufruhf HENLOOO

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D. Shikha
September 27, 2020 18:40

Hmm...
Mackenzie 'MOON'.

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B. W.
September 26, 2020 21:54

Hey i made a new story ^^ could ya check out "My older sister?" and leave some feedback?

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D. Shikha
September 27, 2020 04:42

I'll surely check it out!!

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B. W.
September 27, 2020 05:34

Thank's ^^ i'm excited to see what ya think

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Gip Roberts
September 25, 2020 19:30

I think you did great at both the 1st-person narrative and coming up with a story right at the last minute. That was a sweet ending too.

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D. Shikha
September 25, 2020 19:33

Thank you so much!!!

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B. W.
September 25, 2020 15:36

heya could ya check out "betrayed" and tell me what you think?

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D. Shikha
September 25, 2020 15:44

Will do in some time.

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B. W.
September 25, 2020 15:46

Yep ^^ well i do love writing and that's completely fine, just remember to leave some feedback

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D. Shikha
September 25, 2020 15:45

You write really fast.

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B. W.
September 25, 2020 12:40

Hey could ya help with something?

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D. Shikha
September 25, 2020 12:52

Yeah, what is it?

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B. W.
September 25, 2020 12:54

So ya know my demi-god series right? not sure if i told you yet but i'm turning it into a novel

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D. Shikha
September 25, 2020 12:56

Umm...sorry but I don't know about it. Does it include your story, 'The Goddess Child'?

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B. W.
September 25, 2020 12:57

Yeah "the goddess child" was the first part i made of it, i'm not sure if that's the only one ya know, i could give you a list?

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D. Shikha
September 25, 2020 12:57

You just give me the list of stories, I'll read them now.

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B. W.
September 25, 2020 12:59

Alright ^^ leave some feedback:
The Goddess child (ya already read it but it's still just the first one)
the camp
not his fault
Getting her back

It has begun (this part is kinda a part of a crossover but i want ya to see it because it adds some other characters)

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D. Shikha
September 25, 2020 13:01

Ok, I'll read them now.

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Aania S
August 26, 2024 06:58

sweet

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D. Shikha
November 02, 2020 13:37

Hii!!!

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D. Shikha
November 02, 2020 13:53

Hey, Snow, I tried to write a story recently... in the form of a poem... it's not good but would you mind reading it and telling what do you think?

https://allpoetry.com/poem/15517931-Part-1--To-her--fake--love---by-Kim-Mi-Young

And yeah, it's kinda related to teen pregnancy... but their is no mention of any sexual stuff. Just letting ya know~

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Wow that was- That was sooo beautiful and so sad and regretful! I actually wrote something just like that- NOT about Teen pregnancy but about love..and thinking someone liked me. Its that story I told you to read "Kinda Hurt. Okay?" This sentence really spoke to me
then, when I found you,
I suddenly felt happy,
I felt like I loved you.

but no, that wasnโ€™t love,
that was just my desire
for being loved...

...
What do you mean its not good? Your awesome at poetry!!!! Annddd thats amazing!
But um- something is really bugging me and if I am wrong then thats my fault and if you don't wanna answer my apologies butttt. Um is this poem true? I mean I felt all these emotions coming from it and I really think I was getting them from you. They were such strong feelings. (Yes I am that empathetic, its crazy) and it really feels- real. So is it true?

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D. Shikha
November 02, 2020 16:05

Thank you so much, Ugochi!! I never thought that you would like it!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!
Oh, I haven't read that poem/story yet, sorry๐Ÿ˜Œ

Yeah, those are my favorite lines... 'cause they are very true...

I don't think so... but whatever, actually, the problem with me is that I always keeps criticizing my work, idk why?๐Ÿ˜‚

And about it being true... well, it's not true... but umm, can we talk on NaNoWriMo?

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Of course I liked it!! Why wouldn't I! Well you need to start taking pride in your work, regardless if you think it is good or not๐Ÿ˜Œ. And if someone doesn't like it, hear their critique and next time remember it๐Ÿ˜Œmmkay!
But I don't know why wouldn't like it..they are just crazy cause how?
and surreeee!

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D. Shikha
November 02, 2020 16:31

Thank you!! I also think that I should start taking *pride* for my work๐Ÿ˜‚ (lol, not being rude here)
Yeah, that's why I want, people giving critique on my work so that I could improve...

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B. W.
October 23, 2020 17:33

hey

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B. W.
October 14, 2020 19:19

Hey, could you possibly help me with something? I'm having some trouble with stuff

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D. Shikha
October 19, 2020 01:56

Sorry, B. I didn't reply to your recent comments. I was really busy... I'm sorry๐Ÿ˜”
Yeah, what help do you need?

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B. W.
October 19, 2020 01:59

It's alright ^^ well i made a new story and i could use some help with other things for it, like romance and stuff

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D. Shikha
October 19, 2020 02:02

As you know, I'm terrible at writing romance but okay!!

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B. W.
October 19, 2020 02:06

oh dang it, sorry about that.

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D. Shikha
October 19, 2020 02:06

It's okay, I can try to help ya!!

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B. W.
October 12, 2020 16:04

Hey, i saw all the stuff from a while ago. so your not leaving then? That's good ^^ i hope we can still talk as well :)

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D. Shikha
October 12, 2020 16:18

No, I'm not leaving...

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B. W.
October 12, 2020 16:19

Yay ^^ could we still talk? i hope we can

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Well I see you deleted your bio..so your not leaving?? I'm gonna take it like that.
Also I wrote a new story๐Ÿฅบplease come read.
DON'T GO!!

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D. Shikha
October 11, 2020 11:38

It's okay, Ugochi! I'm not going any where.
Yay, I'll read it ASAP!!

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Nooooo!
Why are you leavinnngg๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿ˜ญ

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October 07, 2020 15:33

Please please come back! I miss you! Come back to Ap and Reedsy. Don't leave me so abruptly. Please come again and what's the reason?

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B. W.
October 07, 2020 00:55

Hey, do you possibly know how to draw very well? i need some help with something

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