The Last Table on the Train

Contemporary Fiction Romance

Written in response to: "Set your story in/on a car, plane, or train." as part of Gone in a Flash.

The Last Table on the Train

The man had been taking a sip of water when the waiter came up to the table, a woman walking behind him.

The train rocked beneath the dining car. A rolling motion that made the water in the glasses slosh and the silverware clink against the plates. Outside the window, beside the table, fields were sliding past in a dim glow of early evening.

“I’m very sorry,” the waiter said, lowering his voice. “It appears we double-booked this reservation.”

The woman had a folded ticket in her hand and an uneasy look on her face, realizing she might be having dinner with a stranger.

The waiter gestured to the empty chair across from the man.

“This is the only chair we have left.”

The man set his glass down.

“That’s fine,” He said, giving a smile to the woman.

She gave a small smile back and slid into the empty seat. Her bag brushed the table leg before she tucked it underneath her chair.

“Thank you,” She said.

The waiter placed a menu in front of her and then one in front of the man.

“I appreciate the flexibility.” He said, then turned and walked down the narrow aisle.

For a moment, neither of them spoke, just opened their menus and looked at the dinner choices.

The room carried the low voices of other conversations, a loud ring of laughter, and the chime of glass hitting glass as the train went around a turn.

Outside the window, it was now fully dark.

“Well,” the man said. “This feels like the beginning of a blind date.”

She laughed.

“Except neither one of us agreed to it.”

“And neither one of us knows the other’s name.”

The man set his menu down.

“What if we made a rule?”

“A rule?” She turned her head to the side.

“No names.”

Her eyebrows lifted.

‘No names.”

“If we are sharing dinner anyway,” He said. “We might as well make it interesting. Two strangers are having dinner on a train. No personal details that let us look each other up later.”

The idea seemed to amuse her more than it should have.

“That’s either a terrible idea,” she said, “or a very good one.”

“I guess we will find out.”

She closed her menu.

“Alright.”

He reached across the table with his hand.

“Nice not meeting you.”

She shook it.

“Likewise.”

The waiter returned to take their order, and when he left, the quiet between them again didn’t feel as awkward, just a comfortable silence before they spoke again.

Outside the window, a small town went past, lights glowing on the darkened buildings.

“So, “she said while she reached for the breadbasket in the middle of the table. “What are the rules besides no names?”

“Nothing that gives away where we are from.”

“That seems fair.’

“And nothing that would make it possible to find each other afterward.”

She tore off a piece of bread.

“You're very committed to the mystery.”

“I like mysteries.”

She handed him the breadbasket.

“So do I.”

They began talking about easy things.

Travel stories.

The comfort of trains over airplanes.

Their conversation was easy. The way it sometimes does with strangers you will never see again.

Sometimes one of them would pause and look at the other mid-sentence.

She caught him and decided to say something.

“What?” She asked.

“Nothing.”

“You were staring.”

“I was thinking.”

“That’s rarely a good sign.’

He hesitated.

“You look familiar.”

She gave a small smile while raising her eyebrows.

“That line is older than this train.”

“I’m serious.”

“So am I.”

But a moment later, she looked at him the same way.

“Actually,” she admitted. “I think you look familiar, too.”

The waiter returned with their salads, interrupting the moment.

The conversation moved to other topics.

They started talking about being teenagers,

The intensity of that age, when friendships felt like they would never end, and every decision seemed enormous.

About people who drift out of your life before you realize they mattered.

During dinner, he told her about a girl he almost asked out.

“Almost?” She asked.

“I was seventeen.” He shrugged. “I couldn’t get up enough nerve.”

“What happened?”

“She moved away before I could do anything about it.”

She rested her chin in her hand.

“Those are the kind of things that stick with you.”

“Sometimes.”

She smiled, thinking back.

“I had one of those, too. I thought a boy I liked was going to ask me out. He never did.

The waiter cleared their plates and returned with dessert.

They both had ordered a slice of chocolate cake.

Picking up their forks, they took a bite at the same time.

Outside the window, it was fully dark now, broken by the scattered lights of distant houses.

The train began to slow as it approached a station somewhere along the route.

She glanced out the window.

“My stop is coming up soon.”

He nodded, but something about that fact made the quiet feel awkward.

They finished their last bites of cake.

“I was just thinking about being a teenager,” She said. “That was the time of testing boundaries.”

He nodded.

“I remember one summer night.” A group of us sneaking out to go swimming in a lake outside of town.”

She laid her fork down.

“A lake?”

“Yeah, there was this crooked wooden dock.”

She stared at him.

“And a diner nearby,” She whispered. “That made terrible milkshakes.”

He leaned forward.

“You know it?”

They looked at each other.

Recognition went through both their faces.

“Wait,” he said.

“You have got to be kidding me.” She said.

Neither of them said the names that had come to mind.

They didn’t need to.

The train slowed, brakes creaking beneath the floor.

Passengers began gathering their coats and bags.

“All this time.” He said, shaking his head.

“And we made a rule about not saying our names.” She said.

“Technically,” he replied. “We are still following it.”

The train came to a full stop.

She stood and pulled her bag from underneath her chair.

For a moment, they simply looked at each other from across the small table where they had been strangers a couple of hours earlier.

“Well,” he said.

“Well,” She said back. “Thank you for letting me share your table.”

He gave a small smile. “It was the best surprise of the trip.”

She stepped into the aisle and moved towards the door.

The platform lights moved across the windows as passengers stepped down into the station.

Halfway down the platform, she turned.

He was still standing in the doorway of the dining car, one hand resting on the frame, watching the crowd move past.

For a moment, their eyes met again.

Then the conductor called for boarding.

The doors slid shut with a metallic clang, and the train started moving once more.

She stood on the platform until the last car disappeared in the dark, and thought about how strange it was that something unfinished could still feel complete.

Posted Mar 07, 2026
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