Building the Future

Fiction Science Fiction

Written in response to: "Write a story with an unreliable narrator or character." as part of Not What It Seems.

Soleil closed her eyes against the glare of overhead LEDs and tried to relax. A man in white coveralls prodded at her face with the arcane instruments of progress.

Trust him, she urged herself. CacheCov is an innovative company. They’re saving humanity.

“This won’t hurt a bit,” he said. This was the first lie.

Forty minutes later, the technician elevated the exam chair and presented her with a mirror. Soleil held her fingers to her face. Her cheeks were tender and her throat burned like she’d swallowed rocket fuel.

“Subdermal implants,” the technician explained. “Essential for your role in the company.”

“How do I deactivate them?” she asked, her enhanced voice dulcet and strange to her ears.

“You don’t. The face of CacheCov doesn’t get time off. Company policy. Didn’t you read the contract?”

As with anything secretive and exciting, there had been a contract. A thick one. Earlier that day, Soleil sat in the gray, windowless room weeding through legal jargon while imagining the machinery of space exploration just beyond those walls.

She smiled at the technician and stood rose on unsteady feet. She closed her eyes to calibrate her bearings and quickly discovered smiling was the only expression the implants permitted.

The technician led her to another windowless room, black this time, and padded with soundproofing. Another CacheCon employee appeared, toting a microphone, a small camera, and a music stand.

“Read from this.” He clipped a script to the music stand.

Soleil studied the single sheet of paper. The script was only a paragraph; more white space than text. She shrugged. There were more arduous ways to earn a buck.

“CacheCon is building a brighter future off-planet! We’re deploying Earth’s greatest assets to develop communities at the far reaches of habitable space,” Soleil read. Across the room, workers adjusted lighting and sound. “CacheCon seeks highly motivated, fearless individuals to take the first steps in humanity’s next home. This is an unbeatable opportunity to push your boundaries and make the greatest contribution to society. No experience necessary. High compensation positions available.”

“That’ll do it.” The employee collected the equipment.

“That’s it? You don’t want…I don’t know, another take?” Soleil said. When he was halfway out the door, she called after him. “What about compensation? Should I wait for the check?”

“Stop by Human Resources on the way out,” he said with his back to her. She was alone in the padded room, left to her own devices.

Eventually, Soleil found her way to a lone desk in a nondescript atrium. A harried woman smiled at her, the first genuine smile she’d received all day. “You’re the new face of the company! I’ve been told to expect thousands of new hires, thanks to you.”

Soleil was puzzled. How did she know? Then, she found herself smiling too.

“Anyway, your first check will be deposited by end of day. It looks like—” the rattle of keys while the woman checked Soleil’s employee file “—you’ll receive bonuses for every new hire while your ad is being run, lucky thing. I can’t begin to tell you how many onboarding sessions I’ve had to prepare.”

“What will these new hires be doing, exactly?” Soleil asked.

“Building the future off-planet, of course.” The woman smiled again, tighter this time. “You’ve done your part. Now, go home and rest; the recovery for subdermals is murder.”

***

In the weeks that followed, Soleil’s grew to love her newfound corporate celebrity. CacheCon recruited aggressively, and she felt propelled to the nearest screen whenever her face appeared. The final product looked nothing like that padded room, no more than a stall. She was radiant. Giddy at her own beauty, she disregarded the words shaped by her voice.

In public, people flocked to her, quoting the story she was paid to tell. “Building a brighter future off-planet!” they called to her while she waited in the weekly queue for groceries.

While sheltering indoors during an intense heat flare, people shook her hand and requested photos.

“High-compensation positions available,” she’d remind them.

With each new hire, her compensation grew so steadily, she didn’t have to check her bank account before paying her daily rent. Whenever she looked up, she imagined the thousands of people she’d influenced, building a better future for humanity beyond this planet.

Weekly impressions reports became her newest obsession. She tallied up the spending on ad campaigns and the application rate.

Even without the data, she knew she was making an impact. The city felt different. The streets were emptier; her apartment building quieter.

Her face ached at the end of each day, but there were no breaks, not even for girls’ night. The liquid in her glass, bearing no resemblance to wine beyond being red and alcoholic, failed to take the edge off. Every few minutes her new voice emanated from every screen in their local bar.

Essie slid onto the stool next to Soleil’s, flushed and sweaty.

“I should appreciate the heat. It’s my last week living in it.” Essie hugged her friend and slid Soleil’s wineglass out of reach. “Dump the sludge. We’re drinking real shit tonight.”

“What’s the occasion?” she beamed at her friend.

Essie’s expression matched Soleil’s. “I accepted one of the high-compensation positions off-world you’re always talking about.”

Soliel felt her heart sink, but the implants held her grin steady. “You don’t have to do that,” she said.

Essie ordered the finest red: a 2043, the last vintage made from real grapes. “Of course I do. You convinced Alan to take the job. I received a transmission this week. He said things are going well and I decided to join him.”

“What else did he say? Did he mention anything about the journey? What kind of jobs does he have?” Soleil asked.

“Oh, not much. Men aren’t the greatest communicators, especially from 140 million miles away.”

“He sent his love, at least?”

Essie took a long sip. “Not in so many words. But we’ll be together soon.”

Wine roiled in Soleil’s stomach. Her brother sent a similar transmission a few weeks after accepting the job: the wording reminiscent of CacheCov’s recruitment propaganda, and so unlike him. There were no further messages.

“You have to tell me when you take off, at least. I’d love to come to your launch.” It might be the last time Soleil saw her friend.

“You’ve never seen one?” Essie asked, her forehead furrowed. She sighed and stared, dreamy-eyed, out the window. “I can hardly picture it. Me, in space? I’ve never been on an airplane! But if it were super dangerous, they wouldn’t let just anyone apply. It really is an unbeatable opportunity.”

Soleil followed her friend’s gaze, past the deserted street and into the smoky sky. Visibility was impossible; like gazing into a crystal ball. Who knew if they were up there: either the stars or the thousands of novice CacheCon employees between Mars and the asteroid belt. They might be thousands of bodies lying in an unmarked grave alongside the launch pad, if they even made it that far.

Either way, it meant fewer people on planet. Less competition for resources. This time next week, Soleil could have an entire bottle of wine to herself.

She’d had enough. She wanted CacheCov out of her mouth, the implants out of her head, and the blood off her hands.

Instead, she smiled and toasted her friend. Neither of them were long for this world, anyway.

Posted Aug 03, 2026
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Kristin Neubauer
August 18, 2026 17:54

What an interesting story.....there is a subtle sinister feel underlying it which is disturbing and delicious all at the same time. I love the open-ended ending where we are left to imagine what is actually going on for the people who went off-planet. I fear things have not gone well for them. I would be so intrigued to see this expanded into a novella....it is wonderful as is, but there are a lot of possibilities for where you might take us!

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Danielle Lyon
August 18, 2026 18:38

Wow! Thanks Kristin! This is the longer version of a practice short I did for a microfiction contest (around 500 words). It initially had a much more sinister ending-- things did NOT go well for the people who accepted the unbeatable opportunity!

So many novella ideas, so little time, right? I fear that so many of my concepts start out bigger than I have space for, I cut them down to "right size" them for Reedsy, and then throw them in a notebook for later. Thank you so much for the enthusiastic read! Your support means a lot.

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Kristin Neubauer
August 18, 2026 19:45

Oh, that is interesting too - I can't imagine how you could have fit that wonderful story into a microfiction piece. Microfiction amazes me and baffles me at the same time. I have tried it, and can't seem to do it (which is just not right for a journalist!). I don't know if you could post your microfiction version in the Comments - or if you'd even want to - but if you can and do, I'd love to read it. No pressure!

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Danielle Lyon
August 19, 2026 13:21

Microfiction is HARD (hence the practice shorts!). I can never tell if there's a burden to have a beginning, middle, and end OR if I can get away with the finished product feeling like a scene. Looking at my shorter draft, it looks like this story bears almost word-for word text except the intro- it starts with Soleil at the bar, waiting for Essie to show up. She has the implants already, I cut all the bits about her employment, but she's watching her commercial and disgusted by what she sees. And THEN Essie shows up and it's basically the same until she tries to stop her friend from taking the position.

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Kristin Neubauer
August 19, 2026 22:00

That sounds incredible and quite powerful as a microfiction piece....thank you for sharing! You are very talented at any length clearly!

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Aaron Luke
August 14, 2026 16:00

Hello Miss Danielle.
This is the first time reading your story and I have been seeing you in every story that I read and I just wanted to see what you had to offer. This was nice and I loved the way you made it unpredictable especially in the end. I knew the world was headed to its end but the way you put the last line just stuck to me, I really felt it for some reason and I loved it for that. Thank you for sharing it.

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Danielle Lyon
August 17, 2026 17:13

Hi Aaron! Thanks for reading my story! It looks like you've fallen in with the same circles I like to read as well! I'll be sure to check out your work and leave a note just as charming as yours.

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Akihiro Moroto
August 13, 2026 03:16

Corporations are herding people out like livestock. Not only does Soleil become a spokes person/mascot for CacheCov, but also their 'property' via Subdermal implants. These are all nightmare fuel for what the future might become if we let it. Thank you for sharing this impactful story, Danielle!

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The Old Izbushka
August 12, 2026 00:55

Well, this was a dark story! More than just the smile she couldn’t turn off, the loss of agency being forced to say things and inspire people in ways that violate her own conscience was the most horrifying part for me. Her words were literally being put into her mouth, and she realized that everything she hated was coming out of it. Very creative, well written.

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Danielle Lyon
August 12, 2026 02:07

Oooh yes, always cutting right to the core of my intentions! Thanks for the read, and for your thoughtful notes!

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Marjolein Greebe
August 11, 2026 16:46

The smile she can’t switch off is such a nasty little detail — especially once the story turns and it becomes clear she’s helping sell people on something she no longer believes in herself. I also really liked the way the emptier streets quietly change meaning as the story progresses. By the time Essie says she’s signed up, that “unbeatable opportunity” line has become genuinely sinister. This one stayed with me.

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Danielle Lyon
August 11, 2026 21:55

Thanks Marjolein! I appreciate your thoughts; these last two felt like I was slamming them out rather than really thinking too deeply about them. I'm taking a hiatus for a couple of weeks, and I'm looking forward to reading your entries in the meantime!

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Marjolein Greebe
August 13, 2026 09:25

Sometimes slamming them out is part of the fun too. 😄 Enjoy your hiatus — and I’ll happily keep you supplied with reading material in the meantime. 😂

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Elizabeth Hoban
August 10, 2026 17:44

Such an engaging story. Set in the 2040s, it totally intrigued me. You gave this a very relatable and real feel. The implants were a great touch. Although there is a doom-and-gloom feel to this, I believe it's steeped in a future reality! You have a wonderful imagination. Well done and great take on this week's prompt.

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Danielle Lyon
August 11, 2026 00:37

Thanks Elizabeth! Some days are sunshine and rainbows, others are doom and gloom 🤣

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Scott Speck
August 04, 2026 18:24

This is a very interesting take on a possible dark future for our world. Those implants were creepy, but I can definitely see them becoming a reality, to enhance one's appearance. I'd love to see you continue this one -- to let us live more and longer in this interesting future world. Great work!

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Danielle Lyon
August 04, 2026 20:40

Ooof Scott writing SciFi is tough for me- it always ends up dystopian. Unsurprising, since I read a fair bit of both.

ANYWAY this one came out of a practice series of prompts for another contest where the genre was Sci Fi, the character was "Storyteller" and the Subject matter was "Secret Plans". I feel like the final product has a leg here in Reedsy and elsewhere!

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Alex Merola
August 03, 2026 21:48

Your story felt like a dark, engaging piece of speculative fiction regarding corporate greed and ecological collapse. The concept of subdermal facial implants is a chilling, memorable metaphor. The story flows smoothly. “Weekly queue for groceries” and “intense heat flare” hint at environmental decay-great dystopian details. I really enjoyed your story.

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Danielle Lyon
August 04, 2026 20:38

Thanks Alex! The subdermals are meant to be a subterranean feature of the story! I wanted to take a character who'd become a mouthpiece (literally!) for a vaguely unscrupulous organization with an outwardly beatific mission statement.

I did have a lot of fun dropping little hints of "the world is doomed, let's get out of here" too. Thanks for reading!

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