Dragon watcher

Fantasy Teens & Young Adult

Written in response to: "Write about someone getting a job offer they never would have thought to apply for." as part of Shocking Developments.

I had recently turned sixteen years old about a week ago or so, my mother was already telling me that there were a lot of jobs I could do now. She was even telling me a lot of the jobs when I was around twelve years old.


I wasn't planning on getting a job anytime soon though, I don't even think anyone would want to hire me. It would probably just be a waste of time to apply for one.


Though, somehow, about three days ago I got something in the mail. "What's so strange about that?" You may ask, well it was apparently a job offer. I haven't told my mother about it yet, I'm probably not going to do the job anyway.


What I had found was a letter which read, "Dear Scarlett, we've been looking into teenagers your age for the past couple of weeks to see who would best fit our job, we believe you are the perfect one. After the recent and sudden passing of the previous watcher, we would love for you to be the new Dragon watcher."


Even though my mother probably wouldn't find this out, or at least for a while, I already have a feeling about what she would tell me. "Honey, you should go get the job! it would be the perfect job, and after all, you've always loved Dragons."


I knew she would be right about that or anything she'd say though, ever since I was around five years old, little me had always adored dragons.


It was the middle of the night though, and basically, everything was closed. I'd have to wait until sometime in the morning to go to the place, and that's exactly what I'll do now. Huh, that was a quick change in mind.


"Scarlett, breakfast is ready!"


It seems like my mother had made pancakes and scrambled eggs, my favorite type of food! well anyway, once I finish eating and all that, I should probably tell her that I'm gonna take the job.


Once I got downstairs into the kitchen, she was already at the table and eating some toast, she never liked any of that other stuff but only made it for me. "Dig in kiddo!" she told me with a smile.


That's exactly what I did after reaching the kitchen and the breakfast table, and believe it or not, I managed to eat everything in about ten seconds total. This wasn't the first time this happened, though my mother stared at me with a total look of shock and surprise.


"My my...um...I'm guessing you're really hungry again, right kiddo?"


"Yep, I have a big day ahead of me."


She ate the rest of the toast that was on her plate before asking me, "Big day? well, what are you going to do today Scarlett?"


I put a finger up as I then quickly rush upstairs and then come back down to her with the job offer. "Read this Mom, I think you'll enjoy it." I handed her the paper.


I had begun to clean up the table while she was reading it when she then suddenly squealed like a school girl seeing a spider or something. "Do you like it?"


"Like it? Honey this is so exciting! when are you going to go there?"


"I'm actually going to go right now, Mom."


The rest of the time at the house was a bit of a blur, I think mother wanted to pick my clothes out for the job though, just this once. It was kind of funny.


I finally reached the large dull building about fifteen minutes later, I could see a woman in purple waiting for me. "Um, hello there...I am Scarlett, its nice to meet you."


The woman smiled as she held out her hand and then said, "I'm Eve, its nice to meet you as well Scarlett, I knew you would come for the job."


"Um Eve, are you supposed to interview me or something for the job?"


"No you got it all wrong dear, you just had to show up now you don't have to have an interview or anything like that, you already got the job."


I was going to tell her something else, though before I could she gave me some keys and then drove off in her car. I'm guessing that the keys are for the building.


I unlocked the door to the building with the key she gave me, so I guess I was right about that part. The building seemed extremely big and tall with many rooms, though I could already see where they wanted me to be.


The door to where I had to be was at the end of a very long hallway, it almost looked like something you'd see in a horror movie. speaking of horror movies, why do almost all of them have these?


I swear, if something manages to escape then it'll really turn out to be like a horror movie. Though anyway, the key she gave me could unlock that door as well, was it for everything there?


In the room I entered, it didn't really like a room in a building at all, it almost looked like a type of forest or something. I'm not entirely sure how to describe it, though I was easily able to find something like a nest.


I looked into the nest, a tad bit confused, there was only one dragon in there (at least that's what another letter told me) and it was a male. The nest was incredibly small...it looked like it would have a baby or something.


Though that was exactly what was in the nest, a small red and gold dragon, it seemed to be asleep. I thought they had said that the dragon was full-grown, though that doesn't matter that much, it's still adorable.


What did matter was the type of dragon he was, there weren't that many of these ones anymore. They were endangered, people in the past kept thinking they were already extinct, I believe six times or something.


The little dragon then suddenly yawned and spread its wings, it turned to look at me almost like a curious little puppy. I carefully picked him up, which he actually seemed to enjoy.


He climbed up onto my head and lay there, I had to be really careful though, I didn't want something happening to the little one. "Don't worry, I'll keep you safe..."

Posted Dec 15, 2020
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B. W.
December 15, 2020 01:24

I'm terribly sorry if this story seems a bit rushed or just...different in a way. Though I do hope that you all like this one.

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This was such a cute story! It was so informative, even if it all came just about 1,000 words! Great job!

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 02:28

thanks, did ya maybe have a favorite part or anything like that?

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I really liked the ending.
Also, I have a serious question, are you being attacked by downvoters recently? I've lost a lot of points and got many dislikes, so I just want to ask. I don't like adding these things in my bio to get more publicity, but I'm tired of loosing my points. :(

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 02:53

would ya wanna see another part of it or something? and yeah, I guess I sort of have been

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✨Abby ✨
December 15, 2020 03:30

Sorry for butting in, but I have been downvoted like crazy. They kept doing it until I had 0 points.

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 05:16

they have?

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✨Abby ✨
December 15, 2020 05:19

Ya then you and I think her name was Raquel (ugh im So bad at names) got me back up 100 🥺🥺🥺

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December 16, 2020 13:21

OMG B YOU GOT DOWNVOTED LIKE 2000 POINTS!!!!!!!!! I'M GONNA GET YOU BACK TO 4!!!!

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 16:46

Wait what??

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. .
December 16, 2020 16:47

You were at 6 and I got you back to 4

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 16:47

what do you mean by that? I was at 6 and you got me to 4?

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. .
December 16, 2020 16:48

You were at 6th place, with 12000 points, but Mira Ria and I helped get you back to 13500

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 16:48

Oh, thank you ^^

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Mira Caplan
December 16, 2020 13:52

Hi, B! Me, again. I just upvoted you cuz it looked like you got downvoted...

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 16:48

I did?

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✰ Jennie ✰
December 16, 2020 13:56

me toooooooooo
Mira, LitLover, and Jennie will upvote ANYBODY and EVERYBODY who needs it!!!!!! tell us and you'll get automatic +3 upvotes for all of your posts

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Mira Caplan
December 16, 2020 13:59

Yessssssssss!!!!!!!!

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Laiba M
December 16, 2020 00:13

Hi, Ri~ Do you want to do an upvote spree? I've just been downvoted 100-ish points.

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 00:15

I'm not really sure, do you want 100 points or a bit more? or maybe lower?

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Laiba M
December 16, 2020 00:35

Whatever's convenient for you :) Thank you so much!!

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 00:46

No problem ^^ though can ya still help with the other stuff we were talking about? Like the thing with my story, I started the new thread

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Laiba M
December 16, 2020 02:17

Sure!

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 02:45

Could i just tell ya the scenario thing on this one? The scenario is that Evelyn is either sad or crying about something that happened, how would each animatronic react and what would they do?

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Amel Parvez
December 17, 2020 15:26

did you get the name for the dragon?

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 16:51

still not yet

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Amel Parvez
December 17, 2020 17:21

Umm.....
Btw u r choosy☺
Anyways what about Inferno and Black-Fire

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 17:25

what do ya mean?

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Amel Parvez
December 17, 2020 17:31

I am suggesting you a name
Inferno
Black Fire

And if u r asking about the first thing leave it.

I hope u got the name of your baby dragons soon💙

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 17:41

I sorta like Inferno a bit

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Raquel Rodriguez
December 17, 2020 15:04

Hey, Bee! I got a new story out, and even though it's cringe, could you check it out? ;)

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 16:48

ye ^^

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Raquel Rodriguez
December 17, 2020 17:02

Thank you so much! :)

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 17:03

no prob ^^

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Raquel Rodriguez
December 17, 2020 17:39

:)

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 17:43

:D

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Raquel Rodriguez
December 16, 2020 20:56

Hey, what's up? How are your novels going? Need any help? ;)

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 21:12

I guess their going good

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Raquel Rodriguez
December 16, 2020 21:14

Oh, alright! So, how's your day going? I'm still waiting for the snow, lol :)

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 21:15

I'm just kind of a bit tired, I tried sending the link for one of my stories to another friend, but it didn't work and I don't know what else to do.

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Raquel Rodriguez
December 16, 2020 21:16

Oh, same. Don't worry, maybe Reedsy will create a feature that can let you share with friends.
Are you expecting snow too, or no?

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 21:33

It actually did snow like 2 days ago or something here, it hasn't snowed in like 5 years or something.

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Philip Clayberg
December 16, 2020 02:38

I liked your story. The only regret I had was that it had to end. I wish I could read about how their friendship develops, how he takes care of the dragon, and where the dragon could be hidden as it grows until it reaches full size. I mean it's one thing to try to hide a VW Bug, but a full-grown dragon? Maybe the next story (if there is one) could be called something like "A Little Dragon Can Be Quite A Handful". And if there's a sequel to that, maybe call it, "How I Hid a Full-Sized Dragon". Especially if it's a fire-breather who sometimes sneezes. Better keep fire extinguishers nearby.

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 02:50

"he" ? Scarlett is a girl, not a guy. I am already planning on there to be a sequel to this at some point, if there's ever a good prompt idea for one I could use and stuff. Though your correct about the thing with the dragon, he is a fire breather and would sometimes sneeze, it of course wouldn't be that bad when he was this small in the story though. I already have a LOT of ideas for the next parts of the story.

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✨Abby ✨
December 18, 2020 20:40

New thread

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B. W.
December 18, 2020 20:41

I guess we have to think of the characters first

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✨Abby ✨
December 18, 2020 20:50

Yea. We're doing the bird one right?

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B. W.
December 18, 2020 21:20

I guess so

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✨Abby ✨
December 18, 2020 21:24

Would you rather do a different one?

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B. W.
December 18, 2020 21:31

nah its fine, could i do the POV of the bird?

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January 05, 2021 00:13

im about to read part two put a few things first
- "speaking of horror movies". The s should be capitalized
- "it didn't really like a room in a building" it sounds like you're missing a word
thats all the minor critiques i have

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B. W.
January 05, 2021 00:49

Thanks for pointing those out, but i don't think that I can fix them by now.

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Maya -
December 21, 2020 18:14

This is so cute!!! The voice of the narrator really made the story flow well, and Scarlett is such a pretty name. I loved the job you made up, dragon watcher, it was so interesting to see what your main character would do for her new job. Also, I loved the description of like the forest inside the room where the dragon was. Excellent job!!! I'll go read part two now! :)

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B. W.
December 21, 2020 19:21

Thanks, im glad that ya liked the story ^^ what did ya think of the little dragon and did ya have a favorite part or anything like that?

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Maya -
December 21, 2020 19:22

I thought the dragon was absolutely adorable! :D My favorite part was probably when she met the dragon and went into the room where he lived. That part was really cool! :)

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B. W.
December 21, 2020 19:23

I think this might be one of my favorite stories I've done to be honest

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Maya -
December 21, 2020 19:24

Great! This story is really fun! Do you have a certain genre that is your favorite to write?

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B. W.
December 21, 2020 19:43

Fantasy

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Radhika Diksha
December 20, 2020 06:54

Hi B, I know you have hurt me sometimes and, maybe I have hurt you sometimes. Let's leave all our bitterness and misunderstanding from now itself. I want us to jingle out our differences and let's be friends. I loved your bio, and we should do give people a chance to prove themselves.
You are an amazing girl, who I know will become a great author someday.
I like your initiative to clear the things between us and I feel that we do need each other for real cool stories and feedbacks.
Let's start afresh, shall we?

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B. W.
December 20, 2020 18:08

Uh sure, i dont really see why not and sure we can. I ain't that sure that ill become a great author or at least a well-known one, though that's kinda sweet ^^ I'm kinda working on 9 novels at the moment.

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Radhika Diksha
December 20, 2020 18:10

great, its better to start rather than dreaming about it.

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B. W.
December 20, 2020 18:11

The last time we actually talked was somewhere in November until now, right? I mostly just remember talking to ya on one of my stories.

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Radhika Diksha
December 20, 2020 18:13

yep, you know you can lighten your mood by watching movies.
I would recommend inside out. a Disney Pixar movie.

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Radhika Diksha
December 20, 2020 18:16

well i would love your feedback on my stories, I know you are kind enough to give us 10/10 but I want to see what you liked sincerely the most.

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B. W.
December 20, 2020 18:15

Have ya ever seen Wall-E? thats one of my favorites ^^

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Radhika Diksha
December 20, 2020 06:49

The story is amazing whereas the plot is smooth. I loved the character of Scarlet and will be shifting to the next part of the story soon.
This is all I want to say about the story. Please don't ask me more.

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B. W.
December 20, 2020 18:05

Thanks. There weren't really that good of prompts, at least the new ones that I thought were good enough for the second part or really any of my other things, but I just found one and kinda went with it. Though I'm glad ya liked it ^^

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Wirda Bibi
December 19, 2020 12:26

This is such a nice story. I liked it.
Keep it up.

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B. W.
December 19, 2020 16:19

thanks ^^ did ya have a favorite part?

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Wirda Bibi
December 20, 2020 20:18

Well I was thinking of myself when Stella was eating as....you know 😉

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Wirda Bibi
December 20, 2020 20:19

And yeah also the yawning of baby dragon was so cute😍😙

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B. W.
December 20, 2020 21:02

who?

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Wirda Bibi
December 20, 2020 21:49

Can't understand. 😶

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B. W.
December 20, 2020 21:49

You said "Stella" whos that? There was never a Stella in this story, Do you maybe mean Scarlett?

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Estelle Westley
December 18, 2020 07:49

I am so pleased I got to read this.
Thoroughly enjoyed and well written

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B. W.
December 18, 2020 16:38

Thanks ^^

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Lucas Zhou
December 17, 2020 04:26

i really like the idea:)

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 05:01

thanks, would ya wanna see another part?

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Lucas Zhou
December 17, 2020 05:35

sure

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 05:53

i can do that at some point then ^^

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Lucas Zhou
December 17, 2020 05:35

sure

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Mira Caplan
December 16, 2020 22:32

Hi, B!!! Part 7 of TDR is out!!!

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 22:36

Nice, ill check it out soon ^^ also, thanks for upvoting me earlier with someone else :)

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Mira Caplan
December 16, 2020 22:36

np! :)

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 22:39

Maybe ill upvote ya later or something ^^

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Mira Caplan
December 16, 2020 22:40

Thank you in advance!!!!!! :)

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 22:42

no prob

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Laiba M
December 16, 2020 21:10

Hi!~ Just a refresher, you sent me the link for your story.
It didn't work T-T

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 21:13

Dang it, i dont know why it didn't work, any other ideas on what else I should do? maybe if I do something else it'll work.

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Laiba M
December 17, 2020 02:50

I'm a bit confused and annoyed right now, as my reply button freezes when I click it, and it looks like the comment isn't posted. But when I refresh, there's like 3 or 6 duplicates of it, weird.
Yeah, hmm. I don't know what else you could do.

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 03:12

Thats going on with everyone, you can just press the reply button once and stuff, hopefully it'll be fixed tomorrow or something.

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Laiba M
December 17, 2020 13:49

Ohh, okay, that makes sense. I was wondering why others' comments were duplicated as well~
Yep! That's what I've been doing~~

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 16:44

How do ya think Freddy and Spring-Trap should speak? He's sort of been gentle like and calling Evelyn either "Darling" or "kiddo" though should there be anything else? and still what about SpringTrap?

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✨Abby ✨
December 16, 2020 02:09

Heyyyy.... I'm bored 😒

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 02:14

ya wanna talk then?

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✨Abby ✨
December 16, 2020 02:14

Yeahhh

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 02:15

what have ya been doing?

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✨Abby ✨
December 16, 2020 02:16

School and riding. Nothing too exciting. U?

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 02:38

Riding? riding what?

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December 15, 2020 19:01

Hi!

I was able to connect with the story when I read the very first line! My parents started telling me to "be more responsible and start learning new things" once I reached 16-17 too!

It was a cute and lovely story. The idea of a "Dragon Watcher" is quite interesting!

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 19:02

Thanks, im glad ya liked it ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part in the story or anything like that?

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December 15, 2020 19:09

Yes, I did!
I found the idea of having jobs like "Dragon Watcher" creative, especially that moment when she held the dragon in her arms for the first time! It was so sweet!

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 19:12

I always like doing Fantasy stories

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December 15, 2020 19:15

Me too!
I love fantasy and romance.

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 19:15

Ive done some romance stories, but i suck at doing them

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Aveena Bordeaux
December 15, 2020 18:08

Hey, BW. I really like this and the way it matches the prompt perfectly!

Friendly critique :

1. You have a lot of "seemed" and "or something" throughout your story. Eliminating these or at least, the majority of them, will make this piece clear and concise. Ex, in this sentence, "The building seemed extremely big and tall with many rooms..." You would know if a building was big and tall just by looking, especially if you're on the inside, so seemed here is wordy and you could do without it.

2. I've read a couple of your other stories and your punctuation gets better with each one. For this one, there are still a great deal of places where you place a comma where there should be a period or semicolon. This one is a hard one to nail though, lol, so i understand the difficulty. Looking it over, I'd say there's a comma mistake in every paragraph. Here's an example - "I finally reached the large dull building about fifteen minutes later, I could see a woman in purple waiting for me." Either say "and I could" or place a period where there's a comma.

3. BARELY any of these but it'll be less confusing. Tense switches. Ex - "..., I already have a feeling about what she would tell me." Have should be had. And the other one I saw - "I put a finger up as I then quickly rush upstairs and then come back down to her with the job offer." The sentence could flow better if you just write, "I put a finger up and then quickly rushed upstairs and came back down to her with the job offer."

Okay, done with the critique! Hope this didn't feel harsh, BW. You've got potential and the plot line in this was was great! :)

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 18:54

I always end up using those two words a lot for some reason and I don't know why, I guess its a habit a lot with some other words, though I can go and fix that, along with some of the other stuff you said ^^ I've been using Grammarly lately with my stories and it mostly works out, though it sometimes shows me the wrong thing and I forget to change it.

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Amel Parvez
December 15, 2020 16:22

I liked it, the way your story flowed: so smoothly.
And yes the best part, it was kinda cute the ending 'the little one'. It reminded me of a book I have read.
Anyways, loved your story:)

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 16:49

Thank you, im glad ya liked the story ^^ would ya ever want a second part to this or anything like that?

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Amel Parvez
December 15, 2020 18:03

yeah! sure, why not?
i would love to know how scarlett took care of the baby dragon without others suspicions.

btw, you're welcome:)

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 18:46

do ya have any name ideas for the baby dragon?

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Amel Parvez
December 16, 2020 11:13

Firstly I am very grateful that you asked me my opinion. Secondly have u read Eragon? If u hv then let me know.

Yes name . There goes:
-Jura
-Hírador
-Fundor
-Galzra
-Briam
-Ohen
-Gretiem
-Berrands
-Roslarb

I am telling u these names from the book😆
And the dragon in the book actually it was a girl so it was named Saphira (I love this name)

Anyways if u want to ask anything else I am here😉

Happy writing!

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 16:41

ya got any other ones?

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 16:40

Any other ones?

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 16:40

Any other ones?

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 01:49

thanks ^^

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 02:05

anything else?

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B. W.
December 15, 2020 02:25

what?

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Phoebe DeNeve
January 04, 2021 01:38

This was an adorable story, and I really liked the ending. Do you mind taking a look at my books and giving me some feedback?

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B. W.
January 04, 2021 01:51

Thanks ^^ do ya have a favorite part or anything like that? and sure ill do that soon.

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Phoebe DeNeve
January 04, 2021 02:19

I really like the ending with the little dragon climbing onto Scarlett's head. It was super cute. I have a soft spot for cute scenes

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B. W.
January 04, 2021 02:21

I did make a second part to this story, would ya wanna check it out?

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Phoebe DeNeve
January 04, 2021 02:33

Okay, I'll check it out right now!! I've also finished novels on my own, btw.

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B. W.
January 04, 2021 02:54

Nice ^^ are ya gonna publish them?

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Phoebe DeNeve
January 04, 2021 02:19

I really like the ending with the little dragon climbing onto Scarlett's head. It was super cute. I have a soft spot for cute scenes

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