High Expectations (A short poem)

Contemporary Creative Nonfiction Inspirational

Written in response to: "Set your story at a convention for a hobby most people have never heard of." as part of Keeping Busy.

Hey all, hope your day has been going well. This is a really short poem I wrote. It doesn’t apply to the prompt, and it’s under the word limit, but I kind of felt like posting it so I did. I have a feeling it’s pretty bad, so if you choose to continue, proceed with caution. Also, feel free to tell me what you think.


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I have high expectations for myself,

For what I’m meant to do.

Then I see how small I am,

And wonder if it was ever possible at all.


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When I hear of all the sorrows of our world, 

I dream of changing it for the better.

When I see all those who have suffered,

I want to save them all.


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When I hear of all those who have succeeded,

I dream of being the next.

When I see the light they have given us,

I want to thank them for helping us all.


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When I listen to music at full volume,

I dream of dancing through the clouds.

When I stare at the world outside my window,

I want to see it all.


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When I forget about all that holds me back,

I dream of living the life I always imagined.

When I tell myself this isn’t false hope,

I want to allow for it all.


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When I look up at the wide-open sky, 

I dream of breaking free.

When I feel the wind in my hair,

I want to rise above it all.


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When I stare up at the starry night,

I dream of the galaxies above us.

When I hear of all this world has to offer,

I want to experience it all.


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I have high expectations for myself,

For what I’m meant to do.

Then I see how small I am,

And wonder if it was ever possible at all.




Posted Jan 25, 2021
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Maya -
January 25, 2021 04:35

Okay, quick random poll:
1. Would you rather travel to space or the bottom of the ocean? 🚀
2. Would you rather be a vampire or a werewolf? 🧛
3. Would you rather fly or be invisible? 🪄
4. Would you rather have burritos or tacos? 🌮
5. Would you rather the whole world be in warm colors (red, pink, orange, yellow) or cool colors (green, blue, purple)?🌈
My answers are: Space, werewolf, fly, burritos, warm colors
What are your answers and why? :D

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Nainika Gupta
January 26, 2021 02:50

heya!!!
I would...
1) ocean
2)werewolf....theyre hot :D...most of the time
3) invisible - THINK OF ALL THE STUFF YOU COULD DOOOOOO
4) Tacos....easy short and delicious
5) cool colors ... they suit mah mood XD

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 02:53

Nice!!! Lol you could do so much stuff being invisible! :)
XDD

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Nainika Gupta
January 26, 2021 14:42

yaass you could!!

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 14:48

:DDD

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- -
January 26, 2021 03:14

hellooooo
1. space causeeee jellyfishes :<
2. werewolf...floofy puppies...ehhh what's the difference? (I mean Nainika wasn't wrong when she said werewolves are hot most of the time ;)) And also, if vampires are iron defficient... can't they take multivitamins lol (pls. dont come for me vampires)
3. flyyy, if you had wings what would you do?
4. burritos, cause i never had tacos before
5. cool colorssss :)

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 03:22

Lol good idea, vampires should take vitamins. XD

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- -
January 26, 2021 03:28

Yeah, so much better than blood, it's gooey and sometimes there are chunks (I think I can hear a faraway vampire saying 'but that's the best part') lol

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 03:29

Ewwwwwww XDDD

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- -
January 26, 2021 03:31

Lol I didn't realize where I replied from, but yesss, ewwwww

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Amany Sayed
January 26, 2021 04:46

1. both are equally mysterious, but I'm more curious about space. are or are not aliens real??
2. vampire, 110%
3. fly, but it's gotta be on comand
4. haven't tasted a proper taco yet so *shrug*
5. Can't answer. I love all colors too much! Cool and warm colors each have their own vibe, cant live without one. Art would be less cool too.

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 12:48

Good choices! XD

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David Brown
January 27, 2021 03:23

God has high expectations of you too. Let the Holy Spirit help you make anything possible. Phil 4:13

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Maya -
January 27, 2021 03:32

Thank you, David!

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Sapphire 🌼
January 26, 2021 21:55

1. CAN'T CHOOSE!!
2. Hmm wolf
3. Be invisible, I've been wanting to do that my whole life lmao
4. I CAN'T DECIDEEEE I LOVE FOOOD
5. Cool colours

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 22:02

Yayyyy!!! Wolf group! :D

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Sapphire 🌼
January 26, 2021 22:25

Haha

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 22:29

Lol I honestly don't get why people say vampire, who would want to drink blood and always be in the dark? XD

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Sapphire 🌼
January 29, 2021 21:18

XD I dont mind the dark but its the blood part thats kinda creepy

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Maya -
January 29, 2021 21:30

Yeah. :)

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January 26, 2021 05:12

I loved this poem! I really enjoyed the way that at the end of each stanza, you ended it with the word "all". The moral to this poem was also a very relatable one for me, amazing work!

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 12:46

Thanks so much, Cookie! :DDD

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January 26, 2021 16:09

Yw! :D

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January 25, 2021 16:35

Loved this short poem. The hidden meanings were prefect and the simplicity was amazing.

For your poll:
1. Space. I hate ocean
2. Vampire
3. Invisible
4. Tacos
5. Cool

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 16:37

Thanks, Blue! Yay, more answers for the poll! :D

Btw a bunch of people from Reedsy are playing skribble (an online pictionary game) today at 3:30 EST if you want to play. :)

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January 25, 2021 17:16

I can't sorry because I would still be in school

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 17:20

Oh, okay. :)

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Nora K.
January 25, 2021 15:13

Hey, Maya!
This poem is told in such a simplicity, such an accuracy, such a magnificence. It is adequate, calm, quiet and inspirational, meanings hidden beautifully. Marvelous job! This was utterly spectacular!

As for your pol:

1. Would you rather travel to space, or the bottom of the ocean: The bottom of the ocean. Scuba diving is on my bucket list!

2. Would you rather be a vampire, or a werewolf: A werewolf. I mean, they’re awesome.

3. Would you rather fly, or be invisible: Given the fact that I could easily escape a murderous colony of snakes, fly!

4. Would you rather have burritos, or tacos: Tacos!

5. Would you rather the whole world be in warm colors, or cool colors: Cool colors!

Wonderful job! Keep up the fantastic work! :)

-Nora (Aka: Werewolf, scuba diving at the bottom of a purple ocean, stuffing her mouth with tacos, and flying from a murderous underwater colony of snakes)

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 15:56

Thanks so much, Nora! Lol XDDD

Btw people from Reedsy are playing skribble (an online pictionary game) at 3:30 EST if you want to play. :)

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Moon Fox
August 17, 2021 19:20

amazing

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February 04, 2021 23:38

OMG! THIS IS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING, BESTIE!
Everything you said reigned true, and it was absolutely beautiful. I could never write poetry, especially like this! :DDDDDDDDD
Your bestie,
Brooke

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Maya -
February 04, 2021 23:42

Thank you so much! Aww, I'm sure you could! :DDDDD
Your bestie,
Maya

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February 04, 2021 23:56

You're welcome so much! I doubt that, but thanks! :D
Your bestie,
Brooke

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Maya -
February 05, 2021 00:01

I don't doubt it!
;)))))))))
Your bestie,
Maya

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February 05, 2021 01:31

Aw, thanks, bestie!
:DDDDDD
Your bestie,
Brooke

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Maya -
February 05, 2021 01:45

:DDDDDDDDDDD
<333333333333

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Liling Wei
January 27, 2021 07:10

Hi, Maya! I love the poem, its beautiful and elegantly written. It's also super relatable and touching. Amazing!

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Maya -
January 27, 2021 13:41

Thank you so much, Lily! :D

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Liling Wei
January 27, 2021 17:47

Hehehehe ;)

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- -
January 27, 2021 01:12

Heyaaaa, how are you?
How long do you think the fruit names will last? Idk when to change it back...maybe when everybody changes theirs as well?

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Maya -
January 27, 2021 01:18

Good. :) But I can't work on my story cause I don't know what should happen. :/
Lol I was just about to change mine back, once I find a cool profile picture. :D

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- -
January 27, 2021 01:20

Ohh, I can't choose a profile picture either, but I found one with muted colors and I love it....

Oh, I can't work on mine either lol, I was supposed to post it yesterday, hoping I would've finished by then, buttttt......eh

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Maya -
January 27, 2021 01:28

I changed mine. :D
What the story about? (if you can say)
I wish I could finish mine, who knows, maybe if I concentrate. My brain isn't really working, though. XD

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- -
January 27, 2021 01:33

Oohh I'll probably change mine as well, lol it's getting awkward to pull it off since everybody's been changing theirs as well...

Hmm, it's in the form of a letter, the story....that why I don't think it can reach up to 1000 words

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Maya -
January 27, 2021 01:34

Oooh, that sounds really interesting! :D

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Poll-
1. Travel to space chause its cool:DD
2. Werewolf!!!! Love wolves<33
3. Invisible! I could do so much...
4. Tacos!
5. Cool colors.

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 23:48

Yay!!! :DDD <333

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Sapphire 🌼
January 26, 2021 16:33

I forgot if I did this or not?? 🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓🍓

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 16:36

Lololol thx
idk if you did

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Sapphire 🌼
January 26, 2021 16:36

Ha lol

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I don't believe it when you say it's your first time writing a poem. They sound kind of like Edgar Allen Poe's.
Awesome job Maya, keep writing more poems!! :)

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 22:27

Thanks so much, Haripriya!
Want to answer the poll? Lol :D

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Yessss.
1. Space
2. A vampire who doesn't suck blood...lol
3. Flyyyy
4. TACOS ALL THE WAY
5. Cool colors
Fun poll!

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 22:31

Yesss, vampires are cool and immortal but it would be gross to drink blood. XD
Thanks!

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Your welcome Maya, and yes, you're totally right. But I just wouldn't wanna be a wolf...that's all. :)

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 22:48

Vampires can't go in the sun. though.

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January 25, 2021 13:10

Okay... so maybe this is just absolutely astounding because I was listening to 'little miss perfect' (exact same vibes) in the background, but... wow. So many people need this, yet the same people ignore the problem that's always been there. Lol, time to answer the pol below too, bc I have literally nothing to do rn. 🍓

1. I have agoraphobia and hate water so... neither.
2. Lol... both
3. Invisible. But on and off.
4. Tacos
5. I'd want them to change depending on the season. Maybe cool in spring and winter and warm in summer and fall.

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 13:33

Thanks! I agree. Yay, someone did the poll! XD

Btw we're playing skribble again at 3:30 EST if you want to play. :)

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January 25, 2021 13:35

I'll try to join if I can! I used to have an entire custom list with my friends a year ago, but covid made us stop (and teachers, lol)

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 13:36

Yay! Lol :D

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January 25, 2021 20:01

What's the link?

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Maya -
January 25, 2021 20:05

I'll send it in like 20-30 minutes, at 3:30. Maybe we're in different timezones?

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Maya -
February 02, 2021 01:51

Someone that was coming on all of our Skribble games today and saying "AYYYYYY" and offensive stuff. We think he's either a hacker or more likely a troller/ spammer/ downvoter on reedsy (which might have been how he got the link) He was awful! :/ Ugh

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Like bad words? He sounds terrible!
ImsorryIhateHim UGHHHHHHHHHH

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Maya -
February 02, 2021 01:53

Like rude stuff, kinda like "Edward Cullen" did.
I do too. XD

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Wow...D:<<<<<<<<<<
XD

SHIP WAR XDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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Maya -
February 02, 2021 01:55

XDDDDDDDDD

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Maya -
February 02, 2021 01:56

Just a suggestion, maybe don't ship Isaac with anyone cause he's younger. Also, he would get upset maybe. XD

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