Leaf me alone

Fantasy Mystery

Written in response to: "Write about a character arriving in a place unlike anywhere they’ve ever been." as part of Location, Location, Location.

That day, my friend was sucked into the ground. I didn’t know when I would go in. The scientists and police officers came to the site.

They took samples of the ground to check what had caused it. I knew the reason but they didn’t know the seriousness of the issue that was going to happen. I was sad as well as happy.

The ground was barren. No trees and no water. It had been years since it had rained. The pale looking scientist with his glasses slowly rubbed on the floor and said, “This is not normal.” The commissioner looked at the large hole through which my friend disappeared.

“Yeah,” he said with concern.

It was all because of a man who had brown hair and curly black hair. He was an ox of a man. He worked so hard to save the trees.

*****

Meanwhile, the weather commission was called for. There wasn’t any weather change anyways.

They scanned the underground with their underground scanners. But, what they saw was unbelievable. A man, raging with fire, was sitting on a throne made up of twigs. I wondered how the twigs were not burned, because he was covered in fire.

“What is this, commissioner?” the scientist asked.

“I wanted to ask you that,” the commissioner replied, rubbing his head in confusion.

“Let’s go and check out,” another blond police officer whispered to the commissioner.

The miners were called and in minutes a large hole was dug. The police officers put on their headlights and went in. They had never been to a place like that.

Then too it was unlikely that anyone would go underground. The next second I was sucked in. I thought I was destined to see those events. I didn’t know who was going to come next.

*****

The man spent all the time talking with me about the effects of deforestation and asked all humans to stop cutting trees. But, nobody listened to him. Now, they are going to suffer under him.

*****

I was happy to see all my friends standing in a row. However, the fact I was stuck in the mud dimmed any joy I felt initially at the sight of my friends. The police slowly glided through the mud and followed the compass. Finally, they saw him, face to face. Most of the police officers ran away and some trembled with fear.

“Why did you come here?” He shouted.

“Who are you? And why are you causing trouble in our world?”the commissioner shouted. The fire headed man threw a fireball at the commissioner, which he dodged.

“I am the only one who can shout here. So, if you raise your voice, I will make you like a roasted chicken,” he said, standing up from his seat.

“Okay, sir.” Even the commissioner was afraid of him.

The fire headed man, named Flak, was a guy from Dragon planet.

*****

The man was unbreakable. He wanted to save my race. We were close to extinction. He planted trees everywhere. But, every time he planted, they cut it.

Now, he is dead, only for our sake.

*****

Dragon planet was already in pieces and thank god that this guy was here. We trees didn’t want to fight with humans, but, Flak was the one who said that all trees will come underground and be underground.

“How many trees did you plant yesterday?” Flak asked. The commissioner didn’t answer.

“Answer,” Flak hollered.

“Zero,” the commissioner replied, hanging his head down.

“How many did you cut yesterday?”

“Five.”

“Okay, I will do the same thing with you. I will kill five humans daily. Is that okay for you?”

“No,” the commissioner said and took out his gun.

“Sir, your weapons don‘t do anything to me.”

“I’m not going to hurt you, I am gonna shoot the trees,” he said, pointing the gun towards me. I cannot move, I couldn’t talk. So, it was up to Flak.

“No, stop. Don’t do that,” Flak said. I bet that he was not afraid.

“Then listen to me. Pack up all your trees and come to the above world,” the commissioner said.

Then, Flak started laughing. “Then you will use them for your sake.”

*****

The man never wished anything for himself. His only wish was that our race should not get extinct. I really loved him. Though I couldn’t talk, he was my best friend. I gave him shade and he gave me water and food. I was stupefied when I knew he was killed.

*****

“What’s the matter about that? They are born for our use,” the commissioner said which angered Flak very much. What he did was really wonderful.

He gave life to every tree over there and I was able to talk.

“How could you use us?” a tree asked.

“We are already on the verge of extinction,” another tree said.

I didn’t know what to say. So, I remained quiet. Then I realised. I could move. I moved towards the commissioner, who still had the gun in his hands and whispered, “Flak has completely no mercy. Go up and start planting your trees.”

“Will you guys come up?” he whispered to me.

“We work under his orders,” I replied.

But, this time Flak heard it.

“Hey, Greens. Come here,” he said. I moved my roots in the direction he was standing.

“Yes, master,” I said.

“I think from now on, you should lead this pack,” Flak said. I was rejoiced. He never lies.

“But, why? We love you so much,” I said.

“The dragon warrior has called me. He is expecting something big to come,” Flak said.

The dragon warrior, he is another guy from dragon planet. He has a key chain which can change into anything. I thought he was forming a team. After some time, everybody grew quiet.

*****

The man was shot dead right in front of me. They were rogues. But, I was sure that they were sent by someone. And all these things are happening for him. My friend never wanted didn’t revenge.a

*****

The commissioner immediately called the media. He gave a talk to them.

“From today onwards, everyone should plant a tree every day,” the commissioner said in between the camera flashes.

“But, why, sir?” a guy asked.

“We have cut trees and they are on the verge of extinction. We are having no rainy season because we don’t have trees. Global warming is also increasing,” the commissioner said and got into his car. He waved me a goodbye and I waved too, and the press couldn’t believe what they saw. So, I acted in front of them. Then I was sucked underground again.

It was the first death anniversary of my friend and the hardworking man.

So, they chose that day for my coronation. The crown was made of twigs. It was the best honour I could get.

*****

Now, if he was present, he would have been the happiest man in the world and hugged me tightly. Oh, how I loved his company! But, this was my time to save the trees and make up for his sacrifice. Flak was the man’s friend and he offered to help.

*****

I prayed that my head wouldn’t catch fire and it didn’t. Flak gave me a slight smile and that was the first time I have seen him smile. Suddenly, he fainted and some other guys with police uniforms came.

I couldn’t bear it and wanted to fight them.

“Uh uh,” the police officer said, taunting me. He was a handsome guy. But, it didn’t matter.

They caged Flak and lifted him. They approached their car and threw the cage on the front seat. I wanted to see him smile again. We were standing helpless.

They had arrested him for completely no reason.









Posted Sep 19, 2020
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Madison Smith
December 04, 2020 16:13

Hi! Great job! I really liked the way you framed deforestation as though it was both the extinction of endangered animals, but also personifying the trees. I think it doing so, it really helped highlight that sense of urgency and empathy for the world. I was a little bit confused with the italicized parts. I think they started to make a little more sense at the end, but maybe if you wanted to expand on this piece, that would be one of the places to do it. But overall, good job!

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 16:29

Thank you so much

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Madison Smith
December 04, 2020 16:32

Of course!

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 16:42

Hi

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Madison Smith
December 04, 2020 17:23

Hey!

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 18:57

Hi

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Makia Long
December 04, 2020 03:41

Great story! Very interesting storyline :)

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 03:58

Thank you

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Lourdes Cruz
December 03, 2020 19:00

This is such a good story! Good job!

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 03:13

Thanks

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December 03, 2020 17:00

Hi, Sahitthian! Nice story, I like the ending!

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 03:11

Thanka(like my story)

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 04:43

Hi

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December 04, 2020 15:45

Hi

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 16:00

Wyd

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Water Isdeep
December 03, 2020 05:49

👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼Great job! Would like to see more stories like this from you 😁

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The Cold Ice
December 03, 2020 05:54

Thanks for reading

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The Cold Ice
December 03, 2020 05:54

Hi

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Beth Connor
November 28, 2020 16:04

I enjoyed the creativity of this story, I loved the perspective!

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The Cold Ice
November 29, 2020 02:28

Thanks

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Corey Melin
November 27, 2020 21:09

Quite the entertaining read. With the use of your imagination you have performed a very good read. As long as we plant the same amount we cut we might be okay. Keep on writing.

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The Cold Ice
November 28, 2020 02:47

Thanks. Yes.
Keep writing.

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Cam Croz
October 29, 2020 05:43

I like this story! It was a very interesting take on the prompt and I enjoyed it! Great Job! Keep writing!

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The Cold Ice
October 29, 2020 06:03

I am glad you liked and enjoyed my story.Thanks.Thank you for reading.
Keep writing.Take care.

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Cam Croz
October 29, 2020 15:12

You too!

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The Cold Ice
October 29, 2020 15:41

Thanks.

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Jade Young
October 28, 2020 09:49

This is a good, imaginative story with some awesome flashbacks. I kind of expected your MC to be a tree, but it was nice seeing it confirmed at the end ;) makes me feel smart as a reader.
One negative for me was that I found it a bit hard in some places to really delve into your story, since there was a lot of telling rather than showing, but that is just my personal story preference.
Keep up the good writing :)

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The Cold Ice
October 28, 2020 10:14

Thanks.

I will work on it.

Thanks.Keep writing.

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Senthil E
September 19, 2020 05:53

Nice story

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The Cold Ice
September 19, 2020 05:57

Thanks.

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Ruth Smith
September 16, 2021 13:54

Very interesting idea, I loved the ending.

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The Cold Ice
September 17, 2021 08:45

Thanks .

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Dhwani Jain
June 28, 2021 05:57

BTW,
Your bio is being repeated quite a lot of times....you might wanna check that....

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The Cold Ice
June 28, 2021 06:03

Ok I cannot remove that so much times that’s why?

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Dhwani Jain
June 28, 2021 07:07

What do you mean?

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The Cold Ice
June 28, 2021 15:57

I put it so much times accidentally so I can’t remove it easily

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Dhwani Jain
June 28, 2021 16:04

Okay....just select a big chunk of it using the Shift key+ Left Arrow key. Then press 'Delete'.

All will be sorted :)

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The Cold Ice
June 29, 2021 09:27

I don’t desk top only a tab my tab can’t do that.

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Dhwani Jain
June 27, 2021 13:58

Nice story, The Cold Ice. (Any specific reason for such an interesting name?)
Please do check out my latest story and comment your review on it
=D

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The Cold Ice
June 27, 2021 16:27

Ok thanks. I will read your story.
(Please like my story)

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Arwen Dove
April 21, 2021 02:40

Absolutely amazing story! Well done!

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The Cold Ice
April 21, 2021 03:04

Thank you so much.

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Izzie Q.
February 23, 2021 15:14

hi Sahitthian!! ahhh it's been so long since we chatted! this story is AMAZINGGGGG you are so talented and this community is so lucky to have you be a part of it!! we should talk more! Hows life been? are you doing in person school or digital?

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The Cold Ice
February 23, 2021 17:43

Oh thanks. Yes. Nice. It digital. How’s life and how are you.

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Izzie Q.
February 23, 2021 17:51

hi!! I'm good! schools been digital for now but I'm going back in person soon! On april 8th I think! life just got better hehe somone left some hyacinths at my door and they smell really good! Do you have a fav flower or plant?

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The Cold Ice
February 24, 2021 03:09

Hi.oh nice lol. My favourite flower rose and my favourite plant mango plant.

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Izzie Q.
February 24, 2021 03:13

Ooooh! Mango plants are the BEST! My family is really big on plants and we literally have 5 million succulents everywhere haha
anyway, i'm probably gonna go to bed now, but it was nice chatting with you! I'll talk to you tomorrow!!

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The Cold Ice
February 24, 2021 03:52

Ok I will talk tomorrow.

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Laiba M
February 20, 2021 19:49

Hi, Sahitthian!! We haven't talked in a while. How are you? How's school going?

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The Cold Ice
February 21, 2021 17:19

Hi I am fine. How are you. Yes. I am not in real school only online class.

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Laiba M
February 21, 2021 18:00

That's good to hear~ I'm good! Yeah, same here T-T
Did it snow where you live recently?

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The Cold Ice
February 21, 2021 18:46

No it will not snow for us .ok. But it was very cold. 🥶

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Laiba M
February 21, 2021 19:01

Oh, okay! For us, it snowed and hailed, and now the snow is really icy and slippery.
It's okay if you don't answer this question, but just to get an idea of your weather, do you live in America?

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The Cold Ice
February 22, 2021 02:40

Nope I live in India

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Akshaya Sutrave
January 30, 2021 11:56

Hi Sahitthian!
I really liked reading this story! Especially how you added the italics in between. The dialogue was well written and the ending was great! I also liked how you incorporated imagination and creativity in your story! Awesome job! Can't wait to read more of your stories!

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The Cold Ice
January 31, 2021 13:34

Oh thank you so much fo this encouraging comment. Oh I will not write story anymore. If you have all poetry read my story.“the dragon and the temple.

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Akshaya Sutrave
February 03, 2021 06:07

No problem!
Oh, is there any reason why you won't? Yes, I do have Allpoetry! I'll check it out! What's your profile name there?

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The Cold Ice
February 03, 2021 06:33

Ok. My profile name Sahitthian. I want to write the dragon warrior part three but the prompt should come correctly for my story.

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Akshaya Sutrave
February 03, 2021 08:42

Sure! I would definitely read if you write it!

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The Cold Ice
February 03, 2021 08:54

Ok thanks for the support.

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Lucas Zhou
January 25, 2021 11:29

hi sahitthian

PLZ WRITE MORE STORIES!!!!!!

their so good

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The Cold Ice
January 25, 2021 17:46

Oh I trying to write are you on Ap right I written a new story called dragon and the temple.

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Lucas Zhou
January 28, 2021 05:00

cool

i'll check it out

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The Cold Ice
January 29, 2021 02:49

Thank you. Hi

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Lucas Zhou
February 01, 2021 10:38

hi

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The Cold Ice
February 01, 2021 15:53

How are you

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January 24, 2021 04:42

Hiii, how are you? Great story, I couldn't keep my eyes off the screen, and lol for some reason it reminded me of the lorax

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The Cold Ice
January 24, 2021 04:57

Ok thanks .hi I am great. I am glad you reminded Lorax.thank you for reading. We Can became became friends

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- -
January 24, 2021 05:06

Of course :)) what do you think of the new prompts?

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The Cold Ice
January 24, 2021 05:18

Oh I don’t see it because I will not write anymore

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- -
January 24, 2021 05:19

Oh why not?

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The Cold Ice
January 24, 2021 05:20

Exams coming

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December 04, 2020 14:29

Hi, Sahitthian! I just up-voted all of your stories. I'm not sure how many points were added, though.

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 15:59

Thank you

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December 04, 2020 17:05

You're welcome.

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 15:59

Umm we Can became friends

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December 03, 2020 19:51

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The Cold Ice
December 04, 2020 03:12

Thank you

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Jen Park
November 27, 2020 10:01

Nice story. This is a sequel to another story, right? I see Dragon Warrior mentioned and I saw story titled Dragon Warrior. (It's only a guess)
Well, idea that the main character was tree was mindblowing. It was hinted at the intro and shown more clearly throughout the story. I want to reveal things slowly too but I don't have that skill yet. You were so good at it😊
A nice fantasy with message in it. I enjoyed the read very much. Love the title.
P. S. Keep writing!

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The Cold Ice
November 27, 2020 15:42

Thanks.(like my story

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Jen Park
November 27, 2020 15:45

Oops sorry I forgot. I liked just now😂

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The Cold Ice
November 27, 2020 16:10

Thanks

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November 21, 2020 16:59

Ok I’m Anna wassup u already know me lo

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The Cold Ice
November 21, 2020 17:01

Yes lol hi

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The Cold Ice
November 23, 2020 04:45

Wyd

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The Cold Ice
November 21, 2020 17:36

Gtg bye

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Vajeda Kardar
November 11, 2020 22:26

Amazing...very well narrated and intelligently moulded. Keep it up.

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The Cold Ice
November 12, 2020 02:31

Thanks(would you mind liking my story)

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Tanishka Mali
October 13, 2020 12:04

Hey, thanks for leaving a note, I loved your story ;)

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The Cold Ice
October 13, 2020 13:14

Thanks.

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