Leaf me alone

Fantasy Mystery

Written in response to: "Write about a character arriving in a place unlike anywhere they’ve ever been." as part of Location, Location, Location.

That day, my friend was sucked into the ground. I didn’t know when I would go in. The scientists and police officers came to the site.

They took samples of the ground to check what had caused it. I knew the reason but they didn’t know the seriousness of the issue that was going to happen. I was sad as well as happy.

The ground was barren. No trees and no water. It had been years since it had rained. The pale looking scientist with his glasses slowly rubbed on the floor and said, “This is not normal.” The commissioner looked at the large hole through which my friend disappeared.

“Yeah,” he said with concern.

It was all because of a man who had brown hair and curly black hair. He was an ox of a man. He worked so hard to save the trees.

*****

Meanwhile, the weather commission was called for. There wasn’t any weather change anyways.

They scanned the underground with their underground scanners. But, what they saw was unbelievable. A man, raging with fire, was sitting on a throne made up of twigs. I wondered how the twigs were not burned, because he was covered in fire.

“What is this, commissioner?” the scientist asked.

“I wanted to ask you that,” the commissioner replied, rubbing his head in confusion.

“Let’s go and check out,” another blond police officer whispered to the commissioner.

The miners were called and in minutes a large hole was dug. The police officers put on their headlights and went in. They had never been to a place like that.

Then too it was unlikely that anyone would go underground. The next second I was sucked in. I thought I was destined to see those events. I didn’t know who was going to come next.

*****

The man spent all the time talking with me about the effects of deforestation and asked all humans to stop cutting trees. But, nobody listened to him. Now, they are going to suffer under him.

*****

I was happy to see all my friends standing in a row. However, the fact I was stuck in the mud dimmed any joy I felt initially at the sight of my friends. The police slowly glided through the mud and followed the compass. Finally, they saw him, face to face. Most of the police officers ran away and some trembled with fear.

“Why did you come here?” He shouted.

“Who are you? And why are you causing trouble in our world?”the commissioner shouted. The fire headed man threw a fireball at the commissioner, which he dodged.

“I am the only one who can shout here. So, if you raise your voice, I will make you like a roasted chicken,” he said, standing up from his seat.

“Okay, sir.” Even the commissioner was afraid of him.

The fire headed man, named Flak, was a guy from Dragon planet.

*****

The man was unbreakable. He wanted to save my race. We were close to extinction. He planted trees everywhere. But, every time he planted, they cut it.

Now, he is dead, only for our sake.

*****

Dragon planet was already in pieces and thank god that this guy was here. We trees didn’t want to fight with humans, but, Flak was the one who said that all trees will come underground and be underground.

“How many trees did you plant yesterday?” Flak asked. The commissioner didn’t answer.

“Answer,” Flak hollered.

“Zero,” the commissioner replied, hanging his head down.

“How many did you cut yesterday?”

“Five.”

“Okay, I will do the same thing with you. I will kill five humans daily. Is that okay for you?”

“No,” the commissioner said and took out his gun.

“Sir, your weapons don‘t do anything to me.”

“I’m not going to hurt you, I am gonna shoot the trees,” he said, pointing the gun towards me. I cannot move, I couldn’t talk. So, it was up to Flak.

“No, stop. Don’t do that,” Flak said. I bet that he was not afraid.

“Then listen to me. Pack up all your trees and come to the above world,” the commissioner said.

Then, Flak started laughing. “Then you will use them for your sake.”

*****

The man never wished anything for himself. His only wish was that our race should not get extinct. I really loved him. Though I couldn’t talk, he was my best friend. I gave him shade and he gave me water and food. I was stupefied when I knew he was killed.

*****

“What’s the matter about that? They are born for our use,” the commissioner said which angered Flak very much. What he did was really wonderful.

He gave life to every tree over there and I was able to talk.

“How could you use us?” a tree asked.

“We are already on the verge of extinction,” another tree said.

I didn’t know what to say. So, I remained quiet. Then I realised. I could move. I moved towards the commissioner, who still had the gun in his hands and whispered, “Flak has completely no mercy. Go up and start planting your trees.”

“Will you guys come up?” he whispered to me.

“We work under his orders,” I replied.

But, this time Flak heard it.

“Hey, Greens. Come here,” he said. I moved my roots in the direction he was standing.

“Yes, master,” I said.

“I think from now on, you should lead this pack,” Flak said. I was rejoiced. He never lies.

“But, why? We love you so much,” I said.

“The dragon warrior has called me. He is expecting something big to come,” Flak said.

The dragon warrior, he is another guy from dragon planet. He has a key chain which can change into anything. I thought he was forming a team. After some time, everybody grew quiet.

*****

The man was shot dead right in front of me. They were rogues. But, I was sure that they were sent by someone. And all these things are happening for him. My friend never wanted didn’t revenge.a

*****

The commissioner immediately called the media. He gave a talk to them.

“From today onwards, everyone should plant a tree every day,” the commissioner said in between the camera flashes.

“But, why, sir?” a guy asked.

“We have cut trees and they are on the verge of extinction. We are having no rainy season because we don’t have trees. Global warming is also increasing,” the commissioner said and got into his car. He waved me a goodbye and I waved too, and the press couldn’t believe what they saw. So, I acted in front of them. Then I was sucked underground again.

It was the first death anniversary of my friend and the hardworking man.

So, they chose that day for my coronation. The crown was made of twigs. It was the best honour I could get.

*****

Now, if he was present, he would have been the happiest man in the world and hugged me tightly. Oh, how I loved his company! But, this was my time to save the trees and make up for his sacrifice. Flak was the man’s friend and he offered to help.

*****

I prayed that my head wouldn’t catch fire and it didn’t. Flak gave me a slight smile and that was the first time I have seen him smile. Suddenly, he fainted and some other guys with police uniforms came.

I couldn’t bear it and wanted to fight them.

“Uh uh,” the police officer said, taunting me. He was a handsome guy. But, it didn’t matter.

They caged Flak and lifted him. They approached their car and threw the cage on the front seat. I wanted to see him smile again. We were standing helpless.

They had arrested him for completely no reason.









Posted Sep 19, 2020
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Hriday Saboo
October 13, 2020 04:51

Hey pls read my new story

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The Cold Ice
October 13, 2020 05:30

I will read it.Iam in school I will read it afterwards.

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Hriday Saboo
October 13, 2020 07:32

No problem

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The Cold Ice
October 13, 2020 07:53

Now I will read your story

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Hriday Saboo
October 13, 2020 07:59

Thanks

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The Cold Ice
October 13, 2020 08:00

I am reading your story.

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Hriday Saboo
October 13, 2020 07:59

Thanks

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The Cold Ice
October 13, 2020 08:00

I am reading your story.

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The Cold Ice
October 13, 2020 08:49

I had read your story and left a comment.Very good.

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Niveeidha Palani
October 06, 2020 08:42

Hi Sahitthian,

I loved your title! It was quite unique, and certainly suited the prompt!

As for the last line, it certainly was catchy, but next time, try to write it with emotions, one-word shocking phrases or words with deep-hidden meanings.

Since you have progressed exuberantly, I recommend trying to get other words from "said" and "asked". Use more descriptions, and try to get a wider vocabulary!

Other than that, your plot was a lovely one and the title was quite a unique take!

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The Cold Ice
October 06, 2020 08:46

Thanks.I am glad you liked the tittle.

I will work on it.

Thank you for reading.

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Niveeidha Palani
October 06, 2020 08:56

No problem :)

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The Cold Ice
October 06, 2020 09:08

Ok.

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September 26, 2020 17:57

Great story!!
I really liked the flashbacks and the names, they were super unique.

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The Cold Ice
September 27, 2020 03:06

Thanks.I am glad you liked the flashbacks and the names.Thank you for reading.

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September 27, 2020 15:15

No problem!!

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The Cold Ice
September 27, 2020 16:30

Ok.

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November 27, 2020 23:27

Hi!
I just posted a new story and was wondering if you could check it out and leave some feedback (If you have time and want to of course). If not it is totally okay! :)

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The Cold Ice
November 28, 2020 02:48

Yes but later

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November 28, 2020 03:51

Okay! Thank you so much :)

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The Cold Ice
November 28, 2020 07:02

Welcome

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The Cold Ice
November 28, 2020 07:02

Umm we can became friends

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Tessa Takzikab
September 23, 2020 13:57

I love the title! (Edit: I read through some of the comments and saw that you got it from Charles Stucker, so I just wanted to add that taking good advice is a skill not everyone has.)

I can see how much your writing improves from story to story, so amazing job.

It is a bit confusing how you have the flashbacks, at first I thought that it was a different point of view, but by the end, it's clear.

Also, I love how the narrator turns out to be a tree. This reminds me a bit of The Lorax in that sense, which is really cool!
Keep writing!

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The Cold Ice
September 24, 2020 05:09

Hey Tessa
I am glad you loved the title.

Thank you.

Okay. I am glad you were clear about it.

I am glad you loved that the narrator was a tree. Lorax is cool. Glad you got Lorax in your mind after reading my story.
Keep writing and thank you for reading.

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Javith Hussain
September 19, 2020 05:46

Very good story

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The Cold Ice
September 19, 2020 05:47

Thank you.

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Angel {Readsy}
April 29, 2021 13:03

Very admirable story you have grest potential in writing

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The Cold Ice
April 29, 2021 13:16

Thanks

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March 04, 2021 13:13

Heya, new thread? :))

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The Cold Ice
March 04, 2021 15:31

Hi oh nice how are you

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March 05, 2021 06:20

I'm great :)) how are you? :b

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The Cold Ice
March 05, 2021 07:05

I am great wyd

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March 05, 2021 07:53

Ohh nothing, just assignments, hbu?

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The Cold Ice
March 05, 2021 07:55

Just lying on the bed.

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February 24, 2021 03:12

New thread :))

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The Cold Ice
February 24, 2021 03:52

Thank you how are you

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- -
February 24, 2021 04:02

I'm great, you??

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The Cold Ice
February 24, 2021 06:48

I am fine.wyd.

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February 24, 2021 07:21

Nothing, you??

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The Cold Ice
February 24, 2021 13:27

Studying.

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B. W.
December 16, 2020 19:10

Happy birthday :D

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The Cold Ice
December 17, 2020 02:34

Thank you :D

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 02:47

no prob, i hope you have a good birthday today ^^

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The Cold Ice
December 17, 2020 03:36

Today is a birthday a

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B. W.
December 17, 2020 03:43

what?

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The Cold Ice
December 17, 2020 04:32

Today is your birthday I ask

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December 08, 2020 14:15

Wow! Very good story; I love your writing style!! <3 I love how the MC was a tree, and your ending was awesoeme!

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The Cold Ice
December 15, 2020 17:54

Thank you so much

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Sarah H
November 25, 2020 21:41

𝐻𝑒𝓎

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The Cold Ice
November 26, 2020 16:36

Wyd

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Sarah H
November 16, 2020 07:15

Hi!

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The Cold Ice
November 16, 2020 08:02

Hey

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November 11, 2020 12:28

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The Cold Ice
November 11, 2020 17:26

Thanka

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November 10, 2020 21:50

I upvoted you to 1474 points! Hope you enjoy
-Lemon

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The Cold Ice
November 11, 2020 03:30

Thanks.Ya I enjoy it.So much.

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The Cold Ice
November 11, 2020 03:30

I will also upvote you

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November 11, 2020 05:00

Thanks

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The Cold Ice
November 11, 2020 05:24

Umm we Can became friends

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November 12, 2020 03:42

Oki! :>

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The Cold Ice
November 12, 2020 05:59

Hi

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The Cold Ice
November 20, 2020 05:44

Hi

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November 10, 2020 21:43

Hi, this story was super interesting! I just read ur bio and I feel so bad that people would try to take points away from someone :(
Some people on here really suck....
I'll go on a small upvoting spree for you, rn ur at 1314 I'll update you later!
-Lemon

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The Cold Ice
November 11, 2020 03:29

Thanks

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Bianka Nova
November 05, 2020 21:00

I guess we all agree that making your main character a tree was a great idea! Keep up the good work! :)

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The Cold Ice
November 06, 2020 03:32

Thank you so much.

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Skyler Grey
November 05, 2020 16:45

This is a really cool story. I love your characters, especially the tree. It was very unexpected for the main character to really be a tree!

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The Cold Ice
November 06, 2020 03:34

Thanks.(would you mind liking my story)

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November 05, 2020 00:46

Wonderful piece.

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The Cold Ice
November 05, 2020 03:07

Thanks.(please like my story

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The Cold Ice
November 20, 2020 05:47

Hey are you Aerin

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Sia S
October 28, 2020 05:44

Nice twist of the tree! Good job!

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The Cold Ice
October 28, 2020 05:44

Thanks.

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Autumn Williams
October 26, 2020 20:35

Sahittian, I loved this. I read it twice! I was very blown away when you finally reveiled the main character as a tree, and I had to go back and re-read it. I'm sad that they took away Flak, but I'm excited to see what you're going to do with this. Sorry it took me so long. Really though, good job!

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The Cold Ice
October 27, 2020 04:26

I am glad you loved this.Thanks.
Yes.
It’s ok.Thanks for reading.

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The Cold Ice
November 23, 2020 07:15

Hi

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B. W.
October 24, 2020 20:22

I made a new story, could you check out 'A strange night' and leave some feedback?

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The Cold Ice
October 25, 2020 10:20

Sure.

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B. W.
October 25, 2020 16:01

thanks ^^

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The Cold Ice
October 25, 2020 17:17

Welcome.

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B. W.
October 25, 2020 17:51

:)

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The Cold Ice
October 26, 2020 04:17

:)

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Laiba M
October 23, 2020 15:00

I love the story! The end was great and added a lot to the story~ There are some grammar issues, but those are easily fixed with grammar editors :) Great job!

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The Cold Ice
October 24, 2020 04:13

I am glad you loved my story.Thanks.I will work on it.

Keep writing.

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Laiba M
October 24, 2020 13:16

No problem! You keep writing as well :)

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The Cold Ice
October 24, 2020 13:46

You also
Keep writing ✍️

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B. W.
October 22, 2020 21:41

10/10 :)

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The Cold Ice
October 23, 2020 02:18

Thanks.(would you mind liking my story)

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B. W.
October 23, 2020 02:28

i think i already did?

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The Cold Ice
October 23, 2020 04:30

But you didn’t .Please like my story.

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B. W.
October 23, 2020 04:32

alright alright i will

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The Cold Ice
October 23, 2020 05:09

Thanks for the score.

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Tina Laing
October 11, 2020 01:21

Very nice story

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The Cold Ice
October 11, 2020 04:59

Thank you.(would you mind liking my story)
Would you mind reading my story
“The dragon warrior part 2?”

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Rose CG
September 27, 2020 19:00

Interesting plot. I like the tree characters.
Nice basic story. Some parts are a bit confusing, but I understood most of the storyline. Take care and keep writing ~Rose

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The Cold Ice
September 28, 2020 02:14

Thanks.I am glad you liked the tree characters.Thank you for reading.
Keep writing.

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