Lest I rest through autumn's crest
For many moons of discontent;
To thine soul mate, I professed
This cabin echoes my lament.
I wonder where thou hast gone
My once sanguine spirit of yore;
And why thy visage is withdrawn
From tranquil waves upon the shore.
I keep hearing whispers from the lake
Day by day, the voice draws nearer.
I find myself begin to shake
As the message becomes clearer.
“You have to…”
“I have to what?!”
“Please tell me!”
The spectral voice then faded away.
I swear I’ve heard that voice before.
Before my mind begins to fray
I long to hear that voice once more.
I took the boat out passed the birch tree
Then sat there, floating for hours.
Yet could not resonate her voice with thee
Then sullen skies brought forth showers.
On those placid days that followed
I dreamt a dream of darken waves;
That engulfed me, yet left me hollowed
Deep beneath their watery graves.
Tis mid November, I still remember
I shall not leave this bed of mine.
No saccharine breeze, nor torrid ember
Could free this sorrow, I confine.
On such a weary winter’s eve
I hear her whispers in my ear.
I race to the lake, in hopes to perceive
A woman in white then starts to appear.
“It can’t be… Eliza?!
But you…”
“You have to move on from past turmoil,
Too long, have you tortured yourself.”
“You were with me this whole time?”
“I can’t bear to see you hurting like this,
It wasn’t your fault my love.”
“I can’t help but to blame myself,
Eliza, If only I…”
We courted amidst the evening mist
Her eyes reflected the dying light.
The crickets where chirping, as we kissed
Down by the lake, what a perfect sight.
Eliza and I, felt so elated
Our lives were intermeshed as one.
The union that our hearts created
Shone bright enough for everyone.
Eliza was always beguiled
By how the lake glistened at sunrise.
With a single glance, she smiled
As rays of twilight flooded her eyes.
With my Eliza, I saw no faults
She always laughed whenever we tried
To dance a simple ballroom waltz,
As we stumbled along, side by side.
On every Sunday afternoon
Eliza and I would fish by the docks.
Yet found ourselves inopportune.
The only thing we caught was rocks.
Eliza laid festoons across our bed
That she assembled with delicate care.
Then used the flowers that were dead
To grace atop her golden hair.
We huddled by the fireplace
Whenever beset by December’s chill
Then fell asleep, pressed face to face
Much like the lake, so frozen still.
There was this most intriguing dove
That sang a song to greet the dawn.
Eliza fed it with such love
Atop the lamppost it perched on.
On sunny days we took the boat
Out to Driftwood Island Pass.
Then read aloud the poems we wrote
In laden fields of willow grass.
Eliza’s energy surpassed my kind
The times we ran along the sand.
Yet never once left me behind
For she would always hold my hand.
Autumn was Eliza’s favorite time of year
She told me so, with such a smile.
The leaves-a-luster, filled her with cheer
That season with her, made life worthwhile.
When we camped at Pale Stone Meadows
Eliza would catch fireflies in a jar
To intermingle with the shadows;
That could be seen from near to far.
A leaf afloat, on water’s glassy veil
Was how Eliza wanted to be seen.
A leaf so lovely, yet so frail.
A lake so lucid, and pristine.
On one stormy Thursday-break
Our anniversary had arrived.
Eliza began to kiss me awake
Despite the rain, our love had thrived.
The thoroughfare we took into town
Was paved with blocks of cobblestone;
And all the oak trees were cut down
Beside the road, where they had grown.
Grimville is where we went to trade
And barter with the common crowd.
The hustle and bustle of this arcade
We found to be most terribly loud.
Some days we rode our horse, D’Artagnan
Throughout the trails of Pine Grove Peak.
Then down the banks of Cradle Canyon
Arriving at Spring Hollow Creek.
Some windswept nights, Eliza spoke
In such a tone of slumbers deep.
She’d hold me close, when she awoke
Then slowly drifted back to sleep.
When I was fraught by daily stress
And couldn’t take the outside world.
I watched Eliza’s silking dress
That flew about, each time she twirled.
So summer fell on our homestead
Then autumn set into fruition.
Two years had passed, since we had wed
With such a graceful repetition.
Then in one fell swoop
My life would change forever.
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That familiar dove woke us to a brisk autumn day.
Eliza sprung out of bed with a childlike glee.
Then she jostled me awake in a playful manner,
which made it difficult for me to feel grumpy.
Eliza was drinking her tea on the edge of the pier,
with her legs dangling just above the
water’s surface.
I told her about my trip to Grimville, for an ongoing
bartering arrangement, and that I would be back
before nightfall.
Eliza brushed down D’Artagnan, as both of their
manes shone radiantly in the early morning sun.
She made a pouty face, then smiled before wishing
me a safe journey.
A final kiss farewell,
then I rode off to Grimville.
In retrospect, it occurred to me that Eliza and I have
never spent more than half a day apart from each other.
It took a little over an hour before I saw the Grimville
sign arching over broad iron gates.
I was starting to regret not having Eliza accompany me
for this particular bartering deal. For her beauty and
charm would smooth out any of my shortcomings.
This town was overpopulated with an array of
unscrupulous characters. It took me several hours to
form a binding agreement in the fine print, but I
managed all the same.
As I was walking down the smoke filled streets, a gypsy
woman had befallen me. “It’s not too late to know your fate”,
the gypsy said with a haggard voice.
“Ten coins for me
And you shall see;
How your life
Will truly be.”
So I inquired her persistent plea, then we sat down
inside a tavern. She took my palm, then cast some jewels
that scattered across the table. Then she closed her eyes
with deep contemplation, and told me what my future
entailed.
“What you cherish most in life, is never set in
stone”, she said to me.
I shrugged her off, and stormed out of the tavern in disbelief.
Then I loaded D’Artagnan for the journey home.
So I had returned to my Eliza, just as dusk was beginning
to illuminate the lake in a hazy shade of auburn. Then I
unpacked the provisions that I acquired back in town.
Eliza greeted me like a flower would greet the sunlight,
and we embraced each other in a most beloved way.
After we ate dinner, Eliza was walking to the lake, when
I watched her trip and get mud all over her legs. She
laughed then blew me a kiss through the cabin
window. She then lifted her skirt up to her hips and
walked a couple feet into the lake to wash off the mud.
I was searching for a towel to bring to Eliza, when I
heard a scream, a scream so piercing that it shook
me to the very core. Eliza was calling out to me,
then I saw it.
Pale arms flailing in the darkness. I ran to the boat
with a lantern and rope at hand. Eliza was an adept
swimmer, but there is no way she could have gotten
to the near center of the lake that fast. At that moment
I rowed to her with a pace that no one on earth could
dare match.
“No, Eliza!” I shouted at the sight of her descending
Into blackness. I used the rope to link myself to the
boat, then dove into the murky depths. I couldn’t
breathe, not from the lack of air, but from the sight
of Eliza’s dormant body as I lifted her onto the boat.
“This can’t be happening”, I kept saying to myself
over and over again.
”Come back to me!” I said, as I tried to breathe life
back into her. I kept pressing down, then breathing
into her soaked body. I was praying to see any signs
of movement, but I saw nothing. I looked at Eliza
with astonished eyes, to see no marks on her body
whatsoever. She was being pulled, I saw it!
What took her?
I couldn’t stop gasping in tears as Eliza’s cold lifeless
limbs hung in my arms. I couldn’t help but think of
that gypsy from Grimville. Did she foresee this moment?
For Eliza’s will, I laid her body in flames. Then I
took the boat and spread her ashes upon the lake
that she held so dear.
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“Eliza, if only I got to you sooner,
That night will forever be etched into my memory.”
“Shhhh, my love,
The only thing you’re responsible for,
Is how happy you made me feel each day.”
“I don’t have much time left here, my love,
But you have so much more life to live;
Away from this lake”
“Please don’t leave, Eliza.
Don’t leave me again!”
As I look back on that lake,
I feel calm, and frightened,
all at once.
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A well written bittersweet story about someone letting go of their past torment and finally being able to move on with their life. Not every day you see someone using a dual format of poetic stanzas and descriptive prose but you pulled it off quite well. Looking forward to seeing more of your stories.
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Thank you. I had that idea in mind with this particular story poem. I wanted to write the narrative of the story in both fixed form and prose. The modern English stanzas in contrast with the prose and dialog really offer a shift in the tone of the tragic love story.
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