Legends 8

Adventure Fantasy Friendship

Written in response to: "Write a story in which the same line recurs three times." as part of Antanaclasis.

July 6th, Epsilon

Kadiya Callisto

“And so today,” I sob, accepting a handkerchief to wipe away fake tears, “we mourn the death of my beautiful daughter. Rest in peace, Lucia.” 

Among the crowd, some murmur, some wail, and some cry, but all mourn the death of the girl I loathed the most.

My sea-foam green Bugatti waits for me in the parking lot where I left it, windows darkened to near-black. Pulling my phone out of my back pocket, I dial a number, opening the car door and sitting in the driver’s seat — the only one not stacked ceiling-high with bag upon bag of cash, all my hard-earned money. Our hard-earned money. 

“Kadiya, love. Are you on your way?” My husband’s voice soothes me the way it always has. 

“Yes.”

“Do you have the money?”

“I withdrew it all. It’s with me in the car now.”

“Not our account-”

“Lucia’s. I know.”

“And the rights to Dasha’s?”

I sigh contentedly, tossing my hair over my shoulder. “I’m working on it.”

He chuckles, his warm laughter fuzzy over the speakers. “We’ll work on it. But no rush, we’ve got time. We run Taxitas now.”

We run Taxitas now.


Read on for an after scene!

July 7th, Epsilon

Lilium Umbra

I shuffle my feet, the farthest and fastest I can move them with the brass chains that link my ankles together. Coming upon an empty cell, the jail master shoves me in, my knees scraping against the rough concrete and staining it red with my blood. 

“Enjoy your free time,” he says, picking the key to the cell off the large loop on his belt and double padlocking the cell door shut, “cause you don’t get much of it. One meal a day, choose now or I’ll choose for you.”

Whimpering as I pick myself off the floor, I ignore the stinging pain long enough to hear a soft whisper from the other side of the cell wall. “Lunch,” it whispers.

“Lunch.”

The jail master scribbles something on a sheet of paper tacked to a dusty, scratched-up clipboard, then looks up at me again. “You get one shower a week, and you’re blindfolded to go and come from everywhere. You crap in that corner,” he points to a hole in the furthest corner of the cell, “and you piss there.” He points to the one opposite it. “Once you outgrow what you’ve got on, you get one shirt, one pair of pants, and one pair of shoes each year. No more. Maybe less. The rest,” he turns and begins to walk away, “you figure out sooner or later.”

I let out a shallow breath, sitting against the wall. 

“Lilium. Are you there?”

Indigo. “Yes,” I whisper eagerly, tipping my head to the side so that I can hear her. “What are you doing here?”

She sighs, rapping her knuckles on the ground. “Accomplice to the murder of Dasha Halax. Xander, too.”

“Is he there?”

“Sure am,” he calls. I can hear him shrug up to the wall on the other side. This is how we talk now. 

“This is my fault. You guys don’t deserve to be here.” I stare at my thin fingers in my lap, wondering what life will be like. I turn nineteen in two years. I guess I don’t have too long to think about it.

“What happened, Lilium?” Xander asks, his voice a soft contrast to the forcefulness he usually brings to every conversation. 

“It’s…” I flash back to the memories of the last few days. All this in days. Days. “It’s a long story.”

“We have a long time.”

“Well…” I trail off, trying to think of how to start. “It’s July 2nd, Epsilon. I twirl a bright pink lock of hair between my fingers while I shuffle down the sidewalk, humming a song I barely know over the incessant honking and beeping of the traffic beside me…” 



And that's the end! Thanks for making it here!


Posted Jul 05, 2021
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Ed Vela
July 05, 2022 03:19

Oooooooo, COOL 😎

Latest adventure in the Luger/Pyke saga...

https://blog.reedsy.com/short-story/rnqtsk/

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Graham Kinross
February 06, 2022 10:22

Been busy? You should keep this going. Writing a book instead?

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Phebe Emmanuel
February 06, 2022 21:08

Yeah, yeah. I'm in my first year of high school now, so I've got all that plus I'm writing a novel so :)
Got a lot on my plate, but once it clears out, I'll be back here posting regularly.
Thank you for the concern though -- it really means a lot to me that people still care :)

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Phebe Emmanuel
February 06, 2022 21:54

Hey,
Your comment just... made my day :)
Tried to return the favor -- brought u up a few points (not too many :)
Thank you for making me smile!

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Graham Kinross
February 06, 2022 21:59

No problem. I hope you’ve got more stories in the works. Thanks for the likes. Are you working on the next one?

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Phebe Emmanuel
February 07, 2022 00:35

Of this series? I was thinking that I would leave it here and just have it be a constant retelling... wasn't really intending on going into life at the prison or how they die at a certain age and all that, but now that you mention it, maybe I will.
I am, however, still going to finish up the choices series, maybe (possibly) turn that into a little book of short stories (since every path is its own story). I've gotten high praise for that one -- if you want, that's the series that I really recommend.

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Graham Kinross
February 07, 2022 01:20

I’ll have a look at it. Thanks.

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January 20, 2022 23:29

Hullo

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Phebe Emmanuel
January 24, 2022 18:51

heyyyyy its been a while
missed u and this place

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November 26, 2021 01:12

Phebe, it sounds like you have a good plot line going. Let the reader fall into it, it is interrupted by the 'thank you for reading' style which is very junior high. Let the reader follow as if they are peering into another world. We readers need to get hooked onto at least one character. Let us build a relationship with one before spreading out our attention to too many others. Thanks for posting. I look forward to more!

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July 21, 2021 19:26

Woooooooo! You're back!

(I'm speed reading this series and it's so good!)

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Phebe Emmanuel
July 24, 2021 05:17

I am!!!
Yay, thanks!

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July 17, 2021 03:52

Oh my goodness Phebe! I need another part for sure. It’s been a long time since I’ve been on Reedsy but I wanted to come back and see what you’ve written, and I’m so glad I did. This story was so compelling, can’t wait until you publish the next part of the series!

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Phebe Emmanuel
July 17, 2021 20:42

I know! I kept looking at your profile thinking it'd always be the time you'd posted another story, but it wasn't :( I'm so glad you're back!!!!!! I actually intended to leave the story there... maybe I will do something with it later though! Pleeeeeease stay!

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July 18, 2021 23:06

Aw that’s so nice thanks! I know, I really want to come back and write more, but unfortunately, preparation for my senior year of high school has been keeping me super busy! I will definitely stay and keep up with your writing, though, and hopefully I’ll be able to write at least a little!
Oh my gosh do not end the series like this, keep it going!!! There’s so many ways you could do it, and I know you’ll be able to come up with something brilliant!

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Phebe Emmanuel
July 20, 2021 16:45

Aww :( Come back soon!
I'm also a tad bit inactive because I'm going into high school for the first time as well...

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Phebe Emmanuel
July 20, 2021 16:45

Aww :( Come back soon!
I'm also a tad bit inactive because I'm going into high school for the first time as well...

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July 20, 2021 22:14

I hope so! Ooh good luck, it’s an interesting experience for sure!

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Phebe Emmanuel
July 21, 2021 16:45

:) i hope you graduate well!

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TJ Squared
July 05, 2021 23:24

reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
once again, so caught up in reading that I couldn't comment XDDD lkjhgftyuijhgfdgjkhgfrtyujhgfghg
I really like this series despite the deaths. It was full of action and fantasy and friendship just like the tags lol
i like how it's on of those on-going stories, kinda like a loop, cause it ended with her retelling the tale to her friends.
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super great job with this!!!

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Phebe Emmanuel
July 06, 2021 16:04

yayayayayay! *jumps up and down*
YAYAYAY
i think i forgot to mention my teacher loved it :)
i'm glad you do too!

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TJ Squared
July 06, 2021 21:05

*joins in the jumping*
XD I can see why!
:D

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Phebe Emmanuel
July 13, 2021 19:11

lol

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TJ Squared
July 18, 2021 19:16

:)))
how you been?

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Phebe Emmanuel
July 20, 2021 00:05

Great, you? How was your weekend?

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Nicole Of 2022
May 14, 2022 23:06

I LOVED IT!! It was different and new. Also, well written👏🏼👏🏼

....read mine?

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