Secrets Can Hurt

Funny Adventure Kids

Written in response to: "Write a story that either starts or ends with someone asking, “Can you keep a secret?”" as part of In On a Little Secret.

“Can you keep a secret?” Miley whispered in my ear. 

I had never been a good secret keeper. Well, at least that’s what everyone told me. In first grade, my friend told me she might be moving and not to tell anyone. The next day everyone at school knew. I don’t know how it happened. I could have sworn I didn’t tell anyone.

“Yeah, sure. You know what yes. I mean not… um… I love secrets. Secrets are, well fun?” I blurted out

“Okay then. Well, this is a big secret. I haven’t told anyone yet. You're a pretty quiet kid, so I thought why not?”

“Pft, yeah! That’s me! Georgie the quiet kid!”

“Here it goes! Melony’s dad got this huge promotion at work, and now they're like billionaires or something. She told me they are buying some big house in California. So apparently Friday’s her last day of school.”

“Oh, wow. Wow, wow, wow, wow! That’s one big juicy secret. I bet she wouldn’t want anyone knowing about that! I mean not that I would tell anyone. I’m not that kind of--”

“Georgie! Chill! I know you're not gonna tell anyone! That's why I told you. Now I gotta get to soccer practice. Catch ya later!”

She left almost as soon as she arrived. I had invited Miley over to my house because we were starting to become friends. And of course, she hits me with my weakness, a secret! I promised myself I wouldn’t tell anyone. After all, I only had to keep the secret until Friday. Tomorrow was Thursday. I could handle it.

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I woke up to my alarm clock. Its beep had annoyed me for the last time. I picked it up off my dresser and slammed it to the ground. It broke in half, and my mom came in. “Just um... Don’t do it again,” My mom said while staring at her phone. There goes another great pep talk from my mom.

Ever since my dad left she had been like this. Now she called herself, a social media influencer. I don’t even know what that is. Lucky for me, I don’t have to.

I had almost forgotten about the whole secret thing until Karen from Junior High came up to me. “Hey! You! I hear you're the one that’s got all the secrets! Let me in on one. I won’t tell.”

This was probably one of the worst things that had ever happened to me. If I told Karen I might be in with the ‘cool kids’. If I didn’t tell her, well, then nothing bad can happen. See what I mean? Hard.

Karen was looking me straight in the eye. My guess was she wasn’t leaving until I told her. 

“What’s it gonna be squirt?” She spat on me when she said this. I had been called many things in my life but never squirt. I was very offended.

“I don’t have to tell you anything!” I started it out strong, but as soon as I said this I knew something bad was coming.

“What did you say?” Karen was built big. She had giant shoulders, and I’d guess she was about six feet tall. 

I was terrified. The only logical thing I could do was run. I ran as fast as I could. I looked back to see Karen chasing me. She was gaining fast. 

I saw my life flash before my eyes, and then I knew what I had to do. I kept running until I reached some bikes. I quickly got on one and peddled away. Luckily the school was on a downward hill. I eased on down and lost Karen.

I did two terrible things in one day. First: I stole a bike. That’s not so bad. The stupid person just left there bike sitting right there. That’s their fault. Second: I ditched an entire day of school.

Now that was bad. Luckily I had a mom who didn’t care. I snuck in the house, or at least I tried.

I started singing some spy music quietly. I did a couple of forward rolls and I was in the clear. Although I did break a couple of glass bowls in the act. 

My mom still hadn’t noticed me. And I doubt she would ever notice the broken bowls. I went up to my room and sat on my bed. 

I was very bored. I pulled my phone out of my pocket and started doing what I normally did on my phone. I looked through unnecessary videos. I kept scrolling through and through until I found the most disturbing video.   

It was me running away from Karen. It was me hopping on the bike I stole. It was me easing down the hill. It was me ditching school. 

My life was over. This video was proof that I stole a bike. It was proof that I ditched school. And worst of all, my mom had liked the video.

It already had seventeen thousand views. Everyone in my school probably saw it. I was never going back to school again.

I watched the video over and over again. Then I started reading the comments. Not all of them were people laughing at me. At least ten of them said: This girl can run.

Maybe there was a positive side out of this horrible day. The coach of the top running high school had also commented on this video.

She said: Wow! If this girl doesn’t end up in the slammer, I would love to have her run for me. 

I was honored, but still depressed. I laid back onto my bed and started crying. It was a mix of happy and sad tears. 

I almost fell asleep when my phone started ringing. It was Miley. I answered it but I didn’t know why. She saw my tears and started crying too.

“Thanks for keeping my secret Georgie. I know it was hard, I mean I watched the video.” We both broke out in laughter and then tears and then back to laughter.

Secrets can hurt, but they can bring out the best in you. Even if it means you have to steal a bike once in a while.

Posted Aug 17, 2020
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Maya W.
August 17, 2020 19:48

Nice story! There were a few grammar errors, but I overall liked the concept and thought the characters had good development. I'm not entirely sure what the secret had to do with the rest of the story, and I feel like it might have been a smidge better if you left it a mystery, but that's just my opinion. Overall, this was pretty great! Keep on writing! Also, if you can, could you check out my stories? I did a very different one with the same prompt. Thanks!

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Evelyn ⭐️
August 17, 2020 19:50

Thanks for reading! I will definitely check your story out!!!

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Maya W.
August 17, 2020 19:55

:)

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May 20, 2021 15:56

I loved it, obviously like everyone else...👏👏👏

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ALINA Manha
November 20, 2020 23:14

Hi, Evelyn. 👋🏻
I just read your story and I can't express how amazed I am.
It really good 👍🏻
I think I commented on this one before but anyway I am not sure so I am commenting again. 🤔
Have a great day ahead and happy writing. 😊
And we'll, you might know Safa. She asked you about your age and stuff right?🤔
Well, so me and Safa are actually making a writer's group for people who are 11-14 so that's the reason she asked you that question. (if you were wondering that is:)

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B. W.
September 16, 2020 14:14

Hey Evelyn? i was wondering if you could maybe help me with something real quick, if thats alright? its something with the novel and i think you've seen the little thing i did a bit ago. and i also saw the thing in your bio and they all really got to talk with him?? thats amazing

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Evelyn ⭐️
September 16, 2020 22:10

Totally! What's up?

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B. W.
September 16, 2020 22:12

Well its something with my novel, i plan for Harlow and Willow to get together, but i suck at romance so i was wondering if you could maybe help with that and how the two could get together?

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Evelyn ⭐️
September 16, 2020 22:15

This might not be the best idea, I am only in middle school so I don't know too much about romance but I do have an idea!

WARNING!!! THIS MIGHT BE REALLY BAD!!!

She could like trip into his arms or something. And then you could describe the feelings she feels for him at that moment as she looks into his eyes.

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B. W.
September 16, 2020 22:16

um- Both Harlow and Willow are girls, i don't know why people keep thinking one of them is a guy. The idea is kind of cute, but do you have any other ideas for it?

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Evelyn ⭐️
September 16, 2020 22:17

Oops, so sorry!! I totally forgot.... I can sleep on it tonight. You know just brainstorm some ideas.

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The Cold Ice
September 05, 2020 02:04

Dramatic story.Great job👍keep it up.I never thought keeping a secret could be also dangerous.
Would you mind to read my story
“The dragon warrior part 2?”

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The Cold Ice
August 26, 2020 06:49

Super story.Great job👍keep it up.
Would you mind to read my story
“The dragon warrior?”

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Evelyn ⭐️
August 26, 2020 14:30

Thanks for reading!

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The Cold Ice
September 12, 2020 05:34

Hey Evelyn
I had apvoted you for this story. Would you mind reading my story.
“The dragon warrior part 2?”

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Evelyn ⭐️
September 12, 2020 14:07

Sure No problem!

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