The Ladder

Contemporary Mystery Suspense

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes a betrayal." as part of Whodunit?.

Greg frowned. The body slumped over the keyboard in his cubicle was still warm but stiff. The letter opener from his desk protruded from the base of the back of her head. A trail of blood darkened her blue blouse and highlighted the wound. He hoped she had not suffered much.

So, the corporation intended to frame him. Providentially, they appeared uncertain of his involvement, but he would have to work fast.

Greg sat down his satchel and jiggled the computer mouse until the screens came to life. A presentation of the Bogota facility report filled the first monitor, and the corresponding documents competed for attention on the second. Greg cursed softly. If only the Mogadishu facility report had greeted his eyes, he would have had several angles with which to work, but he would have to make do with what was given. He toyed with the idea of simply pulling up the preferred documents but decided against it. The company probably logged what was opened and when. They were not going to make it easy for him.

Bogota. Greg recalled the details of the report as he located security on his cell phone. Revenue was up. Expenses were down. Despite the loss of one wing of the facility to a fire the year before, the numbers from Bogota looked good, even better than anticipated. The numbers hid the suffering of the workers there.

“Security. Jeff speaking.”

Greg pushed back his fears and anger and kept his voice steady. “Hey, Jeff, this is Greg Barton from Finance.”

“Yes, Mr. Barton.”

“There is a dead body in my cubicle.” Greg knew her, but he would let them determine her identity.

“Sir?” Greg heard chair legs scraping against wood flooring.

“You may want to review the overnight video feed, but I suspect it’s tampered with.” Greg knew they would not be careless about that. “You’ll need to call the outside authorities, but send someone to secure the area before others arrive.” He glanced at the closest monitor and thought how fortuitous it was that he had come in early that day. “You should have a couple hours, unless someone else arrives early.”

“Right away, sir.”

Greg ended the call and stepped away from his cubicle. He spent only one moment determining his next step. He was good with computers, but even he could not force evidence to align with his wishes. He would have to see what was present and construct the context from it.

Gillian Moorehead was his co-worker, sharing ambition and talent that spurred him on to greater and deeper challenges at work. She knew that he was researching their corporation’s unethical practices at the factories outside the US, but she had not known how much he knew. And she was not aware that he covered his trail by dispersing his actions among the workstations in their department, primarily hers. Greg had anticipated the likelihood of his or her eventual release one way or another. He had not expected her death in his cubicle. That was inconvenient.

Security would expect Greg to be there, but he had a little time before they arrived. He trusted the video feed was still compromised. With methodical precision, yet rapidly as he could, Greg rummaged through the other cubicles, stealthily opening and closing drawers and bumping keyboards and optical mouses. Most of his co-workers kept their computers on when they left, but screen savers protected the workstations from unauthorized entry. A few showed the work from the previous day, and Greg clicked through e-mail accounts and notes for anything of use but found nothing worthwhile. He purposely avoided Gillian’s desk, knowing the proper authorities would much more carefully scrub there.

“Mr. Barton?”

Greg heard the call while in a room adjoining where his cubicle stood. He immediately shut and left the desk, walking through the door to greet the newcomer. “In here. Just trying to figure out where I might be able to work while my cubicle is unavailable.”

The security personnel, one man and one woman, stood together looking at Gillian’s lifeless form. The man was younger and unfamiliar to Greg, but the woman--Black, frowning and glaring--was a staunch and seasoned officer. Rumor had it she was holding on until she could retire in a few years. Greg could already see the change of color in the young man’s face. The woman addressed Greg with pompous formality, asking his business there.

“I found her like this,” Greg replied. “I touched her on the back before I realized what I was doing, and I moved the mouse to see if she may have been working on something--”

“At your workstation?” Her tone and eyebrow rose, and she cocked one fist on her hip.

Greg remained calm. “I don’t know why she was here instead of at her desk.” He challenged the guard with a stare. Her gaze never wavered. He flicked his eyes to the side. “I went by her desk but saw nothing out of the ordinary.” The Black woman’s eyes hardened. “Don’t worry. I didn’t touch anything.”

Greg heard an exhalation of breath to his right. He turned and saw his boss, Jeremy Cobbin, standing at the entryway to the room. His face grew pale, and he had dark circles around eyes that bulged, flitting from the body to the security guards. His mouth gaped several times. “What happened?”

The black woman glared at Jeremy. “Mr. Barton claims he discovered her like this.”

Greg chose to let pass the implied affront to his veracity.

Jeremy spoke in hurried phrases and with vague gesturing. “We were working late last night. I left about one this morning. She said she just had a few things left to check and then she would lock up afterwards.” His hand groped in his pocket, and he pulled out his cell phone and glanced at it. “How long ago did this happen?” He glared at Greg. “Why is she at your workstation?”

Greg shrugged, and the Black woman took charge before he could respond. “I’m sure we’ll get answers to those questions in time, Mr. Cobbin.”

Jeremy stepped into Greg’s cubicle and jostled the mouse. Greg smiled at Jeremy’s incaution and intently watched his reactions. The Black woman uttered a warning, but Jeremy ignored her and stared from one screen to the other. His forehead wrinkled.

“Bogota? We weren’t even working on anything with Bogota last night.” Jeremy peered at Greg. “Were the two of you preparing a presentation?”

“No,” Greg said and shook his head. “I have no idea why she was on my computer.” No idea that would fit within the realm of their daily work.

“But here she is,” said the Black woman, stepping between Greg and Jeremy with her commanding presence. “Please don’t touch anything else, and if we could use your office, Mr. Cobbin, I think the two of you can wait there.” She ushered them to Jeremy’s office after sending her cohort to lock the outer doors.

Greg waited through the next several minutes as Jeremy complained at the inconvenience and loss of production and as the Black woman harried and accused them. Greg kept quiet and allowed them to quarrel. He learned much from what Jeremy explained, and he confessed nothing that might in any way implicate him in Gillian’s death. But someone high up, possibly even the CEO, was out to get him, and he needed to act soon to divert that course of action.

Finally, the Black woman groaned. “I’m done arguing with you.” She clutched the door handle. “Stay here until I bring in the county police.”

“But I have things to take care of,” whined Jeremy. “We were in the middle of important negotiations. I need to ask our clients for more time, given the circumstances.”

“Fine,” she relented, “but do not leave this area,” she swept her arm in a circle,” and do not touch the crime scene.”

“I’ll stay put,” chimed in Greg with a smirk. If he had believed in a higher power, he would have thanked it for such providence; instead, he marveled at his good luck.

Once he had the room to himself, Greg pecked at Jeremy’s keyboard and pulled up his e-mail account. Systematically glancing through the subject lines, Greg spotted some chains that might be useful. Greg perused the contents of a few and smiled. To think that Jeremy’s wife would send objections of such a personal and compromising nature to his work e-mail account. Stupid woman! And Jeremy was equally as dense to not have immediately purged these messages.

Greg’s fingers flew over the keys as he forwarded a few e-mails, adjusted some security parameters, and then repositioned the highlighted entry to Jeremy’s first message and returned the desktop on the computer to its original state. He glanced at the time in the bottom right of the screen and noted that he had spent only a little over five minutes finding what he needed. He really did have a talent. He deserved a promotion.

After waiting another few minutes, Greg poked his head out the door and saw Jeremy duck in Gillian’s cubicle. Greg resisted the temptation to leave the room to sneak up and view Jeremy at work, but he felt no guilt at alerting the Black woman to Jeremy’s whereabouts when she returned. Jeremy was unceremoniously escorted back to his office.

“I don’t see why it should be a problem that I check her queue,” griped Jeremy as he plopped into his chair and sulked. “After all, I’ll need to follow up on her accounts. I was her supervisor.” The Black woman only glared at Jeremy before leaving them.

Another few minutes passed. Jeremy continued to complain about not knowing what was going on. Greg felt increasingly impatient dealing with Jeremy’s petulance when so much needed to be done. He yearned earnestly for escape.

A uniformed officer appeared in the doorway. “Which one of you is Greg Barton?”

Greg raised his hand and felt it tremble. He steeled his body to mask his anxiety. The officer excused Jeremy, who could not leave without expressing his disapproval over the use of his office as an interrogation room. The officer tolerated Jeremy’s displeasure but shut the door once he had stepped out.

Greg answered the many questions the detective asked. Yes, he and Gillian were co-workers on many of the same projects. No, he had not stayed the night before and did not know why Gillian was found at his workstation instead of hers. Yes, Jeremy was their direct supervisor and often worked with one of them on reports without involving the other. No, he did not know why the reports and data on Bogota were appearing on his computer; he had not entered or reported on anything significant concerning their Bogota operations for roughly one month.

Greg felt antsy but periodically pinched the underside of his thigh for distraction until the officer had exhausted all his questions. He asked Greg to stay on the premises and let him go. On his way out the door, Greg spotted Jeremy seated in another cubicle with the Black woman hovering over him. The sight made him grin.

Greg asked if he would be allowed to work at his desk, and the Black woman informed him that the entire section of the floor had been blocked off. The uniformed officer called in Jeremy and let the Black woman know that Greg was free to go. Greg recovered his satchel and followed the Black woman to a door leading out of the department. Apparently, his workday was over; but, he had plenty of work to keep him occupied.

Later in the week, the police arrested a protesting and belligerent Jeremy Cobbin for the murder of Gillian Moorehead. According to the police report that was later filed, Jeremy and his wife were having marital problems over an affair between him and Gillian. E-mails had surfaced, which were construed to reveal that the affair had been growing over the past year, and Jeremy, torn between an obsession he could not pursue and a duty he felt increasingly difficult to fulfill, finally broke and lashed out at his lover one night when they were working late. An argument over a situation at the Bogota plant, which was really under the responsibility of Greg Barton, who worked closely with Gillian but was not present the night of the murder, prompted the disagreement and eventual rage that enveloped Jeremy, provoking him to unleash all the frustration he felt over the past year. His ruse to implicate Greg was easily seen through and added to the severity of the punishment being sought. Clearly, Jeremy Cobbin’s pathetic career was over.

Exactly one day after Jeremy’s arrest, Greg received a summons from the company CEO, and his heart skipped a beat. Here was his final test. Greg took the time to tidy his office and secure his workstation before riding the elevator to the top floor of the building. The doors opened to the elegantly paneled halls of the executive floor, and Greg felt light-headed and giddy as he stepped out. He took a deep breath.

The executive assistant to the CEO greeted Greg warmly as he entered the foyer to the corner office. She assured him that the CEO would be with him momentarily and that if he could please have a seat, she would let the CEO know he was there. Greg thanked her and accepted the offer of coffee with a little cream. An intern appeared with his steaming cup of coffee, and Greg sipped it while he waited. The executive assistant returned and welcomed him into the presence of the CEO.

The CEO sat patiently as Greg maintained eye contact and moved to the proffered seat. The assistant closed them in to the silence of the inner office. Greg controlled his heart and admired the view of the city from his vantage point. The CEO cleared his throat.

“It seems that under the unusual circumstances in Finance, we are left without a supervisor and one of the two associates who worked closely with him.” The CEO fixed Greg in his gaze.

Greg remained still and quiet.

The CEO coughed. “I must admit, we were quite surprised that Jeremy was charged with her murder.” His eyes did not waver.

Greg returned the challenge in silence.

The CEO let the pause linger before sighing. “Were you aware of the affair?”

“No, sir,” Greg replied.

“Were you aware that someone was threatening to reveal to the government authorities that this company was involved in alleged illegal and unethical practices in our international factories?”

Greg watched the CEO’s piercing eyes. “No, sir.”

The CEO’s glare stiffened. “Do you feel our international tactics are illegal or unethical?”

Greg thought about the many lives that were being traded at that moment overseas in order for their company to make a profit. Mogadishu was the worst, but Bogota was nearly as bad. “No, sir.”

The CEO breathed slowly. Greg struggled to hold steady under the CEO’s stern stare. He felt the perspiration building under his arms. The strain of maintaining his façade over the past year had cost him sleep, and his eyes burned in their sockets. Even if he survived the ordeal, Greg anticipated a pounding migraine that evening.

The CEO smiled, and the tension eased. “We are prepared to offer you a promotion.”

Greg relaxed but kept a benevolent smile on his face. “I’m interested.”

“Obviously, we need a new Finance Supervisor.” The CEO’s intent gaze never wavered. “Do you feel up to the job?”

“I do, sir,” answered Greg, keeping his eyes locked on the CEO. “I accept.”

The CEO nodded and stood up with majesty from his seat. He strode over to the plate glass window and beckoned for Greg to join him. Greg obeyed the command and joined him looking out at the city below.

“What has happened at some of our international branches is regrettable but expedient,” said the CEO. “Our lives here are more complex and involved than anything that goes on over there, and a disturbance there does not magnify like a disturbance here.”

Greg listened carefully and matched his physical responses to the cues, nodding his head a bit here, watching the traffic there. His test was not completely over, but he had worked hard over the past few days for this promotion and felt he had most definitely earned it. “You agree with Stalin then.”

The CEO smirked but did not turn his watchful eye from hovering over the city. “Stalin understood the nature of global response to the faceless man, but he was a monster.” He angled his broad shoulders enough to watch Greg out of the corner of his eye. “The fate of the faceless masses has been the same throughout history.”

Greg nodded in agreement. “Just a statistic against the backdrop of the larger achievements of more powerful men.”

The CEO chuckled softly. “I didn’t realize you had it in you to understand.” He turned away from Greg and the window and sat back in his seat. “Please close the door after you.” He resumed his work and ignored Greg’s departure.

Greg shut the door behind him, thanked the executive assistant, who smiled warmly, and breathed with relief. A pang of conscience helped him to feel sorrow for Gillian and for the nameless, faceless others at the corporate factories around the globe, but thinking of Jeremy, Greg felt he could accept that this was the way of the world. He returned to his cubicle, excited about his promotion, but ready to work on his resume to scope out his next job.

Posted Jul 17, 2026
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Maisie Sutton
July 30, 2026 21:22

Eric, thank you for reading my story for the Critique Circle--here are my thoughts about yours. This story pulled me in from the start, despite my growing distaste for Greg. It was hard to tell if he was still in it for the right reasons, but I guess that's the whole idea that people often start out with good intentions...You pulled the details together nicely and made for a compelling ending.

I thought the small suggestions a few of the commenters made were helpful, can't think of anything else to add.

Good luck in the contest!

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Helen A Howard
July 29, 2026 05:47

We enter into a muddy world of corporate greed and corruption and betrayal. None of the characters come out too well. Some nice twists and turns that kept me reading, Greg was a character who justified his actions — in spite of the cost.

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Eric Manske
July 29, 2026 11:55

Thank you for reading and commenting. Yep, hard to really root for someone in this one.

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Helen A Howard
July 29, 2026 12:04

Interesting to take on an “unsympathetic” character.

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Louise Chambers
July 27, 2026 01:33

My first thought was how callous Greg’s reaction was in finding his colleague slumped over the keyboard in his kiosk. His corporate world is as dark as his motives! I like how the ending implied Greg was embarking into murkier waters. Thank you for an enjoyable read.

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Eric Manske
July 27, 2026 12:12

You're welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed reading my story. Greg has a long road ahead of him.

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Katherine Howell
July 26, 2026 18:49

This story was very well done. Greg’s journey from someone who appeared concerned enough to investigate the company’s wrongdoing to someone willing to exploit a literal death for his own protection and advancement was handled effectively. The opening immediately hooked me and made me want to know what had happened—and, especially, why Greg assumed the company would try to blame him. With every new choice he makes, first to protect himself and then to advance his career, he takes another step down the slippery slope.

I also loved the ambiguity of the ending. Will Greg simply wait for his next opportunity to move up, or will he eventually decide to create that opportunity himself? Could he even commit murder next time rather than merely taking advantage of one? An exaggerated but well-written commentary on the "sharks" found in corporate workplaces everywhere.

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Eric Manske
July 27, 2026 12:11

Thank you, Katherine. I appreciate hearing how the story impacted you and what thoughts it brings up. I hope Greg is able to find a new position somewhere else, but in some ways, the damage has already been done. Thankfully, that doesn't have to be the end of his story.

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Jim LaFleur
July 21, 2026 16:48

Greg’s calm precision from the very first line was deeply unsettling in the best way possible. Turning a crime scene into a routine career mov e was brilliantly executed. Such a fantastic, dark read!

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Eric Manske
July 21, 2026 16:51

Thank you. Yes, he had to work with what he was given, but yikes.

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Marjolein Greebe
July 19, 2026 16:40

Hi Eric,

I liked this one. Greg kept me guessing all the way through, and I thought the office setting worked surprisingly well for a murder mystery. I also liked the moral ambiguity—you never quite know who you're supposed to trust.

My only tiny note would be the conversation with the CEO. I wondered if it could trust the reader just a fraction more, because the story had already shown me what kind of people these men are.

Always a pleasure reading your work.

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Eric Manske
July 20, 2026 12:00

Thanks, Marjolein. Yes, it's hard to find someone to really root for in this one.

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The Old Izbushka
July 18, 2026 13:26

Greg truly embodies the image of a shark swimming in corporate waters, climbing each step of the ladder on the backs of others. The ending is haunting, in that he builds his resume with eyes fixed on new horizons to conquer. My lingering thought was: how many more lives will he step on to advance? Your story is sharp and unsettling. Honestly, I can’t think of anything major to change or improve. Perhaps giving the security officer a name could add a touch more dimension, but that’s only a minor detail. Thank you for sharing such a compelling piece!

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Eric Manske
July 18, 2026 13:39

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thankfully, corporate America is not really like this (or is it?).

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The Old Izbushka
July 18, 2026 14:34

I wouldn’t know personally if America is truly like this, but I’ve heard accounts from people who describe ruthless individuals climbing the corporate ladder. I think maybe yes and no at the same time. Human nature is at its worst when greed and pride becomes the baseline motivation.

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