The South Forty

Drama Horror

Written in response to: "Write about the moment a rivalry began — or the resentment that outlived it." as part of Two Sides to Every Story with Emily Martin.

When Amos Vick died, the red dirt under his fingernails was the only part of the farm he took with him. The rest went to his sons. That was what everyone in Weller, Oklahoma, believed until the will was read in the back room of Daugherty Funeral Home on an afternoon so hot the flies had gone quiet against the windows.

Clive Vick sat in his father’s church suit, though it pinched under the arms and smelled faintly of mothballs. Across from him, his younger brother, Ellis, wore clean jeans and a white shirt without a tie. Ellis had always been able to make plain clothes look honest. Clive had always hated him for that. The lawyer, Mr. Peale, unfolded three pages of yellow paper and read in a soft, apologetic voice. The farmhouse, barns, equipment, mineral rights, and 320 acres went to Ellis. Clive received the south forty.

For several seconds, neither brother spoke. The south forty lay beyond the creek, separated from the good pasture by cottonwoods and a rusted cattle gate. The soil was thin, broken by sandstone, and salted white in places where nothing grew but broomweed. Their father had quit planting it before either boy was born. Clive leaned forward. “That all?”

Mr. Peale looked down again, as though another inheritance might be hiding between the lines. “There is also the sum of one dollar.” Ellis turned his face away, but not quickly enough. Clive saw the twitch at the corner of his mouth. Their rivalry began in that room, although the resentment was older. It had begun, perhaps, when Ellis came home from the hospital pink and perfect while six-year-old Clive watched their mother place him in the cradle that had once been his. Or when Amos first said Ellis had “a feel for cattle.” Or when Ellis married Mary Clay, whom Clive had taken to the junior prom and planned, without ever telling her, to marry.

But those had been sparks in dry grass.

The will was lightning.

Outside the funeral home, the sky had turned the color of a bruise. Ellis followed Clive to his truck. “Daddy had his reasons,” Ellis said.

Clive stopped with one hand on the door. “What reasons?”

“You left.”

“I went to Tulsa for work.”

“You stayed gone 18 years.”

“And sent money every month.”

Ellis looked toward the church steeple rising over the cottonwoods. “He needed hands more than money.”

Clive smiled. “You practiced that?”

“Practiced what?”

“Sounding like him.”

Ellis stepped closer. He was four inches shorter than Clive but wider through the chest. “The south forty is still land.”

“It is a graveyard with a fence.”

“It could be improved.”

“Then trade me.”

Ellis did not answer. That was the first cruelty, though Clive would later tell himself it was the last chance Ellis had to prevent everything. Clive moved into an old travel trailer on the south forty. He told people it was temporary. He would clear brush, drill a well, and build a house. He bought a tractor older than he was and spent three weeks coaxing it to life.

At night, he watched the lights of the farmhouse glow beyond the creek. Sometimes he saw Mary in the kitchen window. The town took Ellis’s side because Ellis attended First Baptist, coached Little League, and had stayed through Amos’s cancer. Clive heard the whispers at the feed store. Poor Clive. Hard thing, being cut out. But Amos knew his boys. That sentence spread through Weller like a hymn. Amos knew his boys.

One night, Clive drove to the cemetery with a fifth of bourbon and sat on his father’s grave. The headstone was new, the dirt still soft. “You knew me?” he asked. June bugs battered themselves against the security light. Somewhere beyond the fence, cattle bawled. “You knew exactly what you were doing.” He poured bourbon onto the grave and watched it disappear.

The next morning, he began building the fence. It was six feet high, made from oil-field pipe and heavy woven wire. It ran along the entire northern edge of the south forty, cutting off the shortest route from Ellis’s home pasture to the stock pond. Ellis came down in his pickup before noon. “You cannot block that crossing.” Clive kept welding.

“Cattle have used that trail forty years.”

“My land.”

“The creek ford is on the easement.”

Clive lifted his helmet. “Show me the easement.” Ellis stared at him. There was no easement. Within a week, Ellis had to drive his herd nearly two miles around the section road to reach water. Clive sat beneath a cottonwood and watched him do it.

That winter, Clive reported Ellis’s hay barn to the county for an electrical addition without a permit. In spring, he called the state about runoff near the creek. When Ellis began leasing pasture to a neighboring rancher, Clive scattered roofing nails along the shared access road. He never admitted that one.

Ellis retaliated in smaller, cleaner ways. He convinced the bank not to finance Clive’s irrigation plan. He bought the abandoned parcel adjoining the south forty before Clive learned it was for sale. He told the county assessor Clive was using the trailer as a permanent residence. Each brother became fluent in injury. Mary tried to intervene. She came to Clive’s trailer on a windless August evening carrying a peach pie under a dish towel. “You always did think food fixed things,” Clive said.

“No. I think food gives people something to do with their hands while they lie.” He let her in. The trailer smelled of cigarettes, metal filings, and heat. Mary set the pie beside the sink and looked around. Her hair had silvered at the temples, but she still had the same steady gray eyes. “Ellis says you poisoned the north pond.”

“Ellis says a lot.”

“Did you?”

Clive sat at the table. “No.” It was the truth. He had only poured diesel near the bank where he knew Ellis would find the sheen. The pond was untouched.

Mary sat opposite him. “He is scared of you.”

“Good.”

“That is not a victory.”

“It is the first thing I have inherited that he wanted.”

Her face tightened. For an instant, Clive regretted it. Then he remembered her dancing with Ellis at the Weller Centennial, her cheek against his brother’s shoulder. “Why did Amos leave it all to him?” Clive asked. Mary looked toward the narrow window. “You know why.”

“I know what Ellis says.”

“Your father asked you to come home.”

“I sent money.”

“He asked for you.”

“And I said I could not leave my job.”

“You said you would rather burn the place than spend your life smelling manure.”

Clive felt the room contract. “I was 23.”

“He remembered.”

“So this is punishment?”

Mary’s voice softened. “No. I think he believed you did not love the farm.”

Clive laughed. “And Ellis does?”

“Yes.” It was the second cruelty, and because it came from Mary, it cut deeper. Three years passed. Then five. The feud became part of the town’s weather. People spoke of it the way they spoke of drought. At the café, men took bets on which brother would die first and whether the survivor would attend the funeral. Clive improved the south forty out of spite. He hauled topsoil, dug terraces, planted bluestem, and drilled two wells. He built a square metal house on the highest rise, with windows facing north.

Every evening, he watched Ellis’s farm. Ellis prospered at first. Then cattle prices fell. A tornado peeled the roof from the hay barn. Mary developed ovarian cancer, and the treatments in Oklahoma City drained their savings. Clive heard all of it. He sent nothing. When Mary died, the entire county attended her funeral. Clive stood across the road beneath an elm and watched from a distance. Ellis saw him. For a moment, Clive thought his brother might cross the road. Instead, Ellis turned away. Afterward, Clive found a note tucked beneath his windshield wiper.

SHE ASKED FOR YOU.

He kept the note in his wallet until the paper softened like cloth. By the tenth year, Ellis was borrowing against the farm. That was when Harker Development arrived. The company had already swallowed wheat fields east of town and replaced them with streets named after the things they destroyed: Meadow View, Quail Run, Cottonwood Estates. Their representative, a young man named Sutter, wore pointed boots that had never touched mud. He offered Ellis $2.4 million for the farm. The sale required access through the south forty for sewer and drainage.

Sutter visited Clive with maps, contracts, and a smile polished for difficult men. “We are prepared to compensate you generously.”

“How generously?”

“Two hundred thousand for the easement.”

Clive looked through the window at Ellis’s fields. Winter wheat bent in long green waves beneath the wind. “Make it five.”

Sutter blinked. “Five hundred thousand?”

“Five dollars.”

“I do not understand.”

“You can have the easement for five dollars if Ellis asks me himself.” Sutter studied him, perhaps seeing for the first time that money was not the currency in use.

Ellis came three days later. He stood on Clive’s porch in a pressed shirt and held his hat in both hands. He had aged badly. His shoulders had narrowed, and the skin beneath his eyes was dark. “I need the easement,” he said.

Clive leaned against the doorframe. “I heard.”

“The bank will foreclose by September.”

“Heard that too.”

Ellis looked beyond him into the house. “Sutter says you will sign for five dollars.”

“If you ask.”

“I am asking.”

“No. You are stating.”

Ellis’s jaw worked. Clive waited. “Please,” Ellis said. The word was almost too small to hear.

Clive smiled. “Come inside.” On the kitchen table lay Amos’s will, framed beneath glass.

Ellis looked at it, then at Clive. “I want you to say Daddy was wrong.”

“Clive.”

“Say he chose the wrong son.”

“I cannot.”

“Then no easement.”

Ellis gripped the back of a chair. “You would let the bank take everything?”

“You let Daddy leave me dirt that would not grow weeds.”

“You left him.”

“He left me first.”

“No,” Ellis said. “He loved you until the day he died. He just did not trust you.”

Clive felt something old and poisonous stir behind his ribs. “Say he was wrong.”

Ellis looked at the framed will. Then he spoke slowly. “He was wrong.” Clive waited. “He chose the wrong son.” Clive slid the easement contract across the table. Ellis closed his eyes.

“Sign it,” Clive said. Ellis signed. Clive signed beneath him. For five dollars, Harker Development obtained the right to trench through the south forty.

The farm sold a month later. Ellis moved into a small rental in town. Bulldozers arrived before winter. They tore down the barn, crushed the corrals, and uprooted the cottonwoods beside the creek. Clive watched every day. He had thought revenge would feel hot. Instead, it was cool and spacious, like stepping into an air-conditioned room. Then Sutter came back. “We have revised the drainage plan,” he said. “Your property sits at the natural low point for the western phase.”

“My property is the highest land in the section.”

“The house is. The southern acreage is not.” Clive unfolded the new maps. Blue lines crossed the south forty. A retention basin the size of a lake covered thirty acres. The easement Ellis had begged for allowed “all drainage infrastructure necessary for development.”

Clive read the sentence three times. “You said sewer line.”

“I said access for sewer and drainage.”

“You knew.”

Sutter’s smile was gone. “Mr. Vick, your attorney reviewed the contract.” Clive had not hired an attorney. He had been too busy watching Ellis break.

Construction began in March. They dug through the terraces Clive had shaped by hand. They uprooted his bluestem and buried the wells beneath concrete junction boxes. By summer, the south forty held a vast, muddy basin surrounded by chain-link fence. Clive sued. He lost. The contract was clear. For five dollars, he had signed away the land he spent a decade saving.

The first heavy rain came in May of the following year. Water poured from the new streets, carrying motor oil, fertilizer, trash, and red clay into the basin. It rose over fence posts and drowned the last stand of blackjack oak. Clive stood on his porch and watched the south forty disappear. A truck came up the drive through the rain. Ellis stepped out. He wore no hat. Water flattened his white hair to his skull.

Clive met him in the yard with a shotgun. “You knew,” Clive said.

Ellis looked past him at the brown water. “Yes.” The word seemed to silence the rain.

“You knew what the easement allowed.”

“Yes.”

“You set me up.”

Ellis turned toward him. “Sutter showed me the drainage plan before I came here.”

Clive raised the shotgun. Ellis did not move. “Why?” For the first time in years, Ellis smiled. It was not a kind smile. It was Clive’s smile, the one from the kitchen table, returned intact.

“Mary’s note,” Ellis said. “Do you still have it?” Clive felt the softened paper in his wallet.

“She did ask for you. At the end. Could barely speak, but she kept saying your name.” Clive’s finger tightened against the trigger guard. “I told her you were not coming.”

“You did not call me.”

“No.” The rain ran down Ellis’s face like tears, though his eyes were dry. “She died thinking you chose not to come.” Clive’s breath left him. “That was for letting her believe all those years that she picked me because I was better. She picked me because you never asked her.” Clive lowered the barrel an inch. Ellis stepped closer. “And the basin? That was for making me kneel for land you never loved.”

“I made it good.”

“You made it useful for hating me.”

Lightning whitened the sky. Thunder rolled over the drowned field. Clive lifted the gun again. “I will kill you.”

Ellis nodded. “Then you will have won.”

Clive fired. The blast struck Ellis in the chest and threw him backward into the mud. For several seconds, Clive stood deaf beneath the rain. Then Ellis moved. Not much. One hand opened and closed beside him. Clive walked over and looked down. Blood spread through Ellis’s shirt, bright at first, then thin and pink beneath the water. Ellis’s lips moved. Clive bent close. “You still lose,” Ellis whispered.

Clive pressed the shotgun muzzle beneath his brother’s chin. “Not this time.” The second blast was louder. The sheriff arrived 40 minutes later. Clive did not resist. He sat on the porch steps with the shotgun across his knees and watched runoff fill the basin.

At trial, the prosecutor called it a murder born from jealousy and greed. The newspapers called it the Vick Land Feud, though there was almost no land left to feud over. Clive received life without parole. Harker Development completed the subdivision the following spring. They named it Vick Heritage. The retention basin remained behind Clive’s empty house, fenced and posted with signs warning children not to swim. In dry months, it shrank to a shallow pool filmed with algae. In wet months, it swelled across the old south forty. People in Weller said Clive had thrown his life away. They were wrong. The revenge was not his.

Years later, after Ellis was buried beside Mary and Amos, Mr. Peale retired and donated his files to the county historical society. Among them was an earlier draft of Amos Vick’s will. In that version, the farm was divided equally between his sons. Attached was a note in Amos Vick’s hand.

ELLIS,

CLIVE WILL COME HOME IF HE THINKS HE HAS BEEN WRONGED. ANGER IS THE ONLY ROOT HE HAS EVER PUT DOWN. GIVE HIM THE SOUTH FORTY. HE WILL EITHER MAKE SOMETHING OF IT OR IT WILL FINISH HIM.

YOU KNOW YOUR BROTHER. DO WHAT MUST BE DONE.

The note had been witnessed by Ellis. For twenty years, Ellis kept it secret. He let Clive believe the rivalry began with their father’s choice. He fed it when it weakened. He gave ground when surrender would sharpen Clive’s appetite. He allowed Clive to build, to watch, to hate, and finally to demand humiliation as the price of mercy. Then Ellis handed him a contract that turned his victory into water.

Clive learned of the note from a newspaper clipping mailed to him in prison. There was no return address. He read it alone in his cell. His father had known him. Ellis had known him better. That night, a storm crossed Oklahoma. Rain struck the prison roof and rushed through gutters, culverts, ditches, and creeks. Forty miles away, the retention basin filled over the bones of the south forty. Clive lay awake listening to the water. For the first time, he understood that Ellis had not come to the house expecting to survive. He had come to collect. And he had.

Posted Jul 28, 2026
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