The Last Witness

Adventure Fantasy Fiction

Written in response to: "Write a story from the POV of a sidekick, or someone who is happy to stay away from the spotlight." as part of Two's a Crowd with Kirsiah Depp.

Every year, they told the story wrong.

Children sat cross-legged in the town square beneath the bronze statue of King Aldrick the Bright with the Hero Rowan, their faces turned upward like flowers to the sun. The magistrate’s voice rolled over them, rich and practiced, reciting the tale they all knew by heart: how Sir Rowan had crossed the poisoned Ashen Vale, climbed the jagged heights of Blackspire Mountain, and struck down Malakar the Dark with his final, heroic blow. How good had triumphed over evil. How the kingdom had been saved

The same story. The same lie.

I sat on the edge of the crowd, wrapped in a threadbare gray cloak that smelled of woodsmoke and tattered to the point of matching my age. No one recognized me. Time had done its work well. Heroes become legends, carved in metal and song. Sidekicks become old men no one remembers.

When the applause finally faded and the magistrate bowed with theatrical humility, I pushed myself up with my cane. My knees cracked and popped, but I ignored them as I usually do.

I think it is time. “That’s not how it happened,” I exclaimed.

The words weren’t shouted loudly. They didn’t need to be. They cut through the dying cheers, causing heads to turn to my outlandish remarks. A few people chuckled, an old fool interrupting tradition was amusing, at first. Then, once they saw my face, the laughter died.

The magistrate frowned, adjusting his fine velvet robes. “What did you say, old man?”

“I said that’s not how it happened.”

A heavyset man near the front crossed his arms. A woman beside him, his wife, by the look of it, pulled her daughter a half-step closer, as if I were something to be guarded against. The girl stared at me with interest; she looked unafraid and rebellious with the innocent curiosity of a child.

“Who are you?” the woman asked.

For a moment, I considered giving them a comfortable lie. Instead, I reached beneath my cloak and drew out a small silver emblem. A hawk, wings spread, its edges worn smooth by decades of handling. Rowan’s crest.

The square went still.

“My name is Thomas Reed,” I said. “Most of you never knew me. For those that do remember nei Forty years ago, I was Rowan’s squire.”

The magistrate’s face drained of color. Behind him, a young clerk dropped his ledger and did not stoop to retrieve it.

* * *

I was fifteen when I met Rowan. He wasn’t a hero then, just a knight with a dented shield, a terrible sense of direction, and eyes that saw too much. He caught me stealing apples from a market cart in a dusty border town. Instead of dragging me to the bailiff, he bought the entire cart and handed me the reins.

“Carry it,” he said. That was Rowan. Kind enough to help a starving boy. Stubborn enough to make him earn his keep.

I followed him for twenty years. Across battlefields and broken kingdoms, through places where sensible men feared to tread. I watched him become the legend, one hard choice at a time. What the stories never mention is that legends are made in the quiet moments, in the decisions no one sees, the truths a man cannot unknow once he has uncovered them.

The crowd had gone quiet. Even the children had stopped fidgeting.

“Did he really fight the Dark King?” the girl asked, her voice clear as an angel.

“Yes,” I said. “Three times.”

Murmurs spread through the square.

“The first time, they tried to kill each other. Swords ringing, hatred burning. The second time, they talked, really talked across a scarred wooden table in a crumbling tower. And the third time…” I looked toward the distant, hazy mountains. “The third time, they chose to become friends.”

A gasp moved through the crowd like wind over the ocean. The heavyset man uncrossed his arms. The magistrate opened his mouth, then closed it again.

* * *

Blackspire was no fortress of nightmares. It was a crumbling tower filled with books, desperate refugees, and quiet fear. Rowan had ridden to find a monster. He found a man, brilliant, angry, hunted, who had uncovered inconvenient truths and paid the price that the powerful always extract from those who will not stay silent.

They argued for three long days and nights beside a dying hearth. I watched, holding my tongue, stoking the fire when it began to die. I watched two enemies go to war with their certainties and come out the other side with something harder and more durable: an honest reckoning with the world as it actually was.

Rowan came to me on the morning of the fourth day. Outside, the first snow of winter was falling.

“The kingdom needs a story,” he said. “Not the true one; the people aren’t ready for that. They need something to hold onto. A hero to follow. A darkness to stand against.”

I looked at him for a long time. “And Malakar agreed to this?”

“He suggested it.” Rowan smiled, and there was something tired and luminous in it. “He said the truth would keep. That someday, when the kingdom was strong enough, it could afford honesty.”

“And you believed him?”

“I believed he was right that people need hope before they can bear truth.” He set his hand on my shoulder. “And I believed the least we could do was make it real, really climb that mountain, really fight. So that whatever story got told, we’d know it had been earned.”

* * *

“The battle atop Blackspire happened exactly as the stories say,” I told the silent crowd. “The clash of steel. The final blow. But it wasn’t hatred that drove them; it was sacrifice. They died as friends so the rest of us could go on living in a world simple enough to believe in.”

The woman who had pulled her daughter close was crying now; something they thought was solid turns out to be crumbling, revealing a more amazing truth, just differently shaped. The heavyset man beside her looked at the statue of Aldrick the Bright with an expression I recognized: the slow, uncomfortable work of revision.

Only the magistrate’s face was bewildered. He stared at Rowan’s bronze likeness as if waiting for it to speak.

“How can you possibly know all this?” he said at last; his voice had lost its confidence.

I reached beneath my cloak and withdrew the letter. The parchment was thin and fragile now; the ink faded but was still legible. I had not looked at it in years. My hands trembled, not from age, but from the anxiety of carrying it alone.

I unfolded it carefully and read the final lines aloud.

If they remember me as a hero, let them. If they remember him as a villain, forgive them. But someday, Thomas, tell them the truth. The world is already full of enemies. What it needs is more people willing to become friends.

The square fell into a silence so complete that I could hear the flag above the civic hall snapping in the wind.

The girl stepped forward. She had gotten free of her mother’s grip without either of them noticing. She stood at the edge of the open space that had formed around me and looked up with those clear, serious eyes.

“Was he still a hero?” she asked. “Even if he made it up?”

I looked at her. Then I looked up at the statue, at the cast-bronze face that bore only the faintest resemblance to the man I had known, the man who had bought a cartful of apples and handed a starving boy the reins.

“He didn’t make it up,” I said. “He chose it. There’s a difference.”

She considered this with the gravity of someone who intended to think about it for a very long time.

I turned to leave. No one tried to stop me. As I walked slowly out of the square, I glanced back once. The children were looking up at the statue, but not the way they had before, not the open-mouthed wonder of an unasked question. They were looking at it as though trying to understand the moral complexity of a good man.

It was a start.

I had been his shadow for twenty years and his secret-keeper for forty. I had buried him on a lonely mountain beside the man the world called his enemy, and I had carried their truth alone ever since, waiting for a day the kingdom could bear it. Whether today was that day, whether that girl would grow up to tell the story rightly, or whether the magistrate would have me quietly discouraged from further speeches, I genuinely did not know.

But I had said it out loud. After forty years, the words existed in the world.

That would have to be enough.

Posted Jun 03, 2026
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Lauren Doesitall
00:49 Jun 23, 2026

Hey there! I just finished your story and wow I couldn’t stop imagining it panel by panel. Your writing has such strong visuals. I’m a professional comic artist, and if you’re ever curious about adapting it, I’d love to chat. You can find me on Discord (laurendoesitall) Instagram (elsaa.uwu).
Warm regards,
lauren

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C.J. Riley
13:45 Jun 23, 2026

Amazing! Thank you!

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Eric Manske
17:40 Jun 16, 2026

This story is one of the top stories in the Fantasy genre for this contest. Congrats!

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C.J. Riley
20:59 Jun 16, 2026

Thank you! It was fun to write.

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Eric Manske
14:42 Jun 14, 2026

Nice. It would be fun to hear the backstory behind all this. Clever take on the prompt.

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C.J. Riley
15:14 Jun 16, 2026

I have been thinking of a couple of ideas. Brainstorming is slow to come up with an original idea.

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Patrick Druid
19:57 Jun 12, 2026

Nice take on the hero and sidekick. That line about the public needing a hero so that they can have hope, reminded me of a bit from Terry Pratchett's Hogfather. It was something about the people needing the lie so that could believe in something.

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C.J. Riley
21:49 Jun 12, 2026

Thank you! I think we have all had to hide something for the greater good at one time or another. Whether it be a serious issue or Santa, sometimes a secret is the better way.

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00:43 Jun 11, 2026

What a beautiful story. I felt like one of the townspeople in the crowd.

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C.J. Riley
12:28 Jun 11, 2026

That warms my heart. Truly.

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12:53 Jun 08, 2026

Thoroughly enjoyable read. Rowan was even more of a selfless hero than anyone knew

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C.J. Riley
14:12 Jun 08, 2026

Thank you so much! I like it when my heroes set an example of true moral values. It makes a happier story for the soul, in my opinion.

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18:49 Jun 08, 2026

It does. I should try it myself some time! 😬😅

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Elizabeth Hoban
18:35 Jun 07, 2026

What an uplifting story - I enjoyed this very much - it sends a very positive message, and I could envision all of this! Great take on the prompt as well.

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C.J. Riley
14:07 Jun 08, 2026

I appreciate it! It was fun to write, and I love a good, heartfelt fantasy plot.

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MJ Brewer
03:22 Jun 07, 2026

Smart. Really quite brilliant. The balance of the storyteller pushing someone's untold story into the hero's spotlight was magnificently choreographed. There were several points the story stirred emotions within my chest, but I believe this one is best, for it caused me to read it several times and absorb its meaning:

"I watched two enemies go to war with their certainties and come out the other side with something harder and more durable: an honest reckoning with the world as it actually was."

Thank you for writing this with your heart as persistent as your mind.

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C.J. Riley
14:05 Jun 08, 2026

Thank you! It's important for me to capture an important message when I write, or I will lose focus on the project. With so many differences in our world, having an open mind toward others reveals a kind of truth we can all benefit from. It is impossible for wisdom to be one-sided.

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Rabab Zaidi
00:36 Jun 07, 2026

Wow! What a beautiful story...' the world is full of enemies, what it needs it is more people willing to become friends...'
Well done, Riley !

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C.J. Riley
14:01 Jun 08, 2026

Your words touch my heart. I wholeheartedly agree.

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07:47 Jun 04, 2026

You did an excellent job of balancing fantasy elements with real human emotion. I really enjoyed how it challenges traditional ideas of heroism and legend. The emotional honesty in Thomas’s perspective made the narrative feel authentic and powerful. The subtle details and moral complexity kept me engaged. The ending was poignant and hopeful. Great work!

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C.J. Riley
14:01 Jun 05, 2026

Thank you SO MUCH! I have always loved the story told from the sidekick's point of view. Sometimes the hero is secretly a creep, or he is better than everyone imagined. I liked getting into the plot, given that we need more understanding and less violence nowadays.

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14:37 Jun 05, 2026

You're welcome.

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