Her Strange but Loving Family (part 1)

Fantasy Teens & Young Adult

Written in response to: "Write a fairy tale about someone who can communicate with woodland creatures." as part of Springtime Flowers.

~17 years ago...~

It had been quite peaceful in the dead of night, and almost everyone there was drifting off into sleep, except of course some of the Owls and some of the other exceptions that were up in the night.

Though unluckily for them it didn't last long before it was anything but peaceful anymore. Sounds of crying that almost sounded like shrieking began, along with an occasional rustle coming from a couple of Shrubs. It seemed to be a little far away, but almost everyone there could hear it.

Davina, a young Fawn, eventually had enough of all the noise though. "Come on, all I want is to sleep...I was having a good dream! It's so late, what could be causing this noise..." she crankily mumbled to herself.

As she left her own home to go check out the cause of the noise, she could hear the flapping of wings behind her. "Who...who's there?" she mumbled as she turned around, slightly letting out a yawn.

When she turned around to see the cause of the other noise, she didn't see it at first. Instead, she saw her mother still in their little home, fast asleep, and curled up. "How can she even sleep through the...AH!"

Before she managed to finish that sentence, a young dragon fell in front of her, causing her to jump back in shock. "Solo! What do you think you're doing? You know I don't like it when you do that." she growled.

He let out a small laugh at her reaction, with his wings slightly twitching behind him. "Sorry...though I was looking for you, I knew you'd probably go looking for that source of the noise, but I didn't want you to go alone," he explained.

She let out a small sigh before a smile started to spread across her face, "Well thanks for coming to help me I guess, with you, it should be easier to find it now..." she yawned.

They walked around for what seemed like ages until they could both tell that the source of the noise was right next to them now. There was someone else though with the source as well, like Davina and Solo weren't the only ones who had the same idea.

A Raccoon, a little younger than either of them, was standing nearby and looking down at what had to be the source of the crying and shrieking. She began to step a little closer to him, "Rio? Are you-"

"Shhh...both of you, come over here and take a look..." he replied to her, barely above a whisper. It was a miracle though that she was even able to hear him, as they were right next to the shrieking and crying.

The two of them then joined their Raccoon friend and took a little look at what was causing all of the noise. Davina's eyes widened slightly, as the three of them were staring at a young abandoned human baby.

~Present Day...~

She sat on a tree branch that was luckily able to support her, all while she stared up at the cloudy yet beautiful sky. "Oh, there you are! I knew I'd find you up here." she could hear her older brother say from nearby.

After a few moments of her just hearing the flapping of wings and some specific noises that only his kind made, Solo popped up in front of her. "Heya big bro" she replied with a small smile, while slightly patting one of his wings.

"Artio, what are you doing up here again? If you like being up high so much, you know I could take you out for a little ride if you want?"

She shook her head before resting one of her hands down on the old tree, "No thanks Soll, I just like coming up here to relax from time to time. I just finished doing something with Rio as well," she told him.

He let out a small laugh as he then asked, "And what would that 'something' be? Playing little tricks on some of the Owls? You know they'll eventually get angry with both of you if you keep doing that."

Artio proceeded to jump out of the tree, luckily with a soft landing and managing to hurt herself. She let out a little laugh, though it was more of a snort-laugh. "Well they've gotten mad at us before and let me tell you, they are so adorable when they get upset."

"Hm, that's what you say about almost everyone here when they get mad..."

"Well it's true, don't you think? Especially whenever sis gets mad...or maybe that's her at least trying to get mad about something."

"Oh, there you are Art! You know it's so hard to find you sometimes...you have a lot of favorite places here." Rio, a bit happily and exhausted said.

Besides the exhausted Raccoon that had found the two of them, Davina was walking right next to him. "We've only been looking for them for seven minutes...are you really that tired?"

Artio smiled as she ran over to them and gave Davina a small hug, while instead picking up Rio and giving him a little kiss on the forehead. He let out a low hiss but she just seemed to laugh again as he told her, "Arttttt...you know I don't like those..."

"So sis, is there something you two need from us?" she asked as she set Rio back down next to her, who then jumped up and sat on Davina's back.

She nodded a little bit as she began to head in the other direction, both Solo and Artio quickly beginning to follow her and Rio. "Yes actually, and it's something a little fun that I was wanting us to go do for a while."

Artio tilted her head like a confused or curious puppy, "And what is it?"

She looked back at the two of them with a large grin on her face, "We're going to go on a little trip through the bigger areas of this place, I don't think any of us have actually been over there so it's new for all of us."

Artio's eyes widened and almost seemed to have stars in them, "Like an adventure? Soll is already a dragon, maybe there'll be some sort of princess or something! Just imagine all of the stuff that could happen."

Davina's grin grew a little more as she saw how excited her sister was, "Hm yes it could count as an adventure if you'd like, now come on let's go!"

The four of them began to head to the much deeper areas of the home everyone lived in, it was going to be a great adventure. Rio was letting out squeaks of excitement on Davina's head, while Artio was riding on Solo's back.

Posted Mar 19, 2021
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Amaya Reddy
May 28, 2021 02:31

oh my god B im incredibly sorry for misgendering you for so long, and I'm proud of you for putting your pronouns in your bio :D

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B. W.
May 29, 2021 00:00

No no, it's alright, I *was* still going by She/her for quite some time, but I've only recently decided to go by they/them now. It just kinda feels better. Though its only with a few people so far...and by a few people I mean on here, I'm too nervous to say anything to anyone else yet.

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Amaya Reddy
May 29, 2021 00:19

that's awesome, and i hope one day you'll feel comfortable to ask people you know irl. and I'm especially glad you found pronouns that are more comfortable for you :]

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B. W.
May 29, 2021 00:29

Thanks, ^^ Besides me finding my pronouns, something else happened that I'm really excited about. I'm becoming a Voice Actor :D I've wanted to become one for a long time, and I've also been wanting to tell some friends about it.

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Amaya Reddy
May 29, 2021 01:21

WHAT?!?! i'm going to need more specifics than that ur becoming a voice actor?? that's amazing though im so excited

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B. W.
May 29, 2021 04:24

Well, for the past few years, maybe like 5 or a bit longer, my dream has been to become a Voice Actor in animated shows/cartoons. It's just always seemed so fun and exciting ^^ So, for the past few months, some of my family has been helping me with all of this. And basically, I did a lot of stuff, along with an application, and now I just have to wait to meet up with somebody else who'll help me further with all this. I'm a bit nervous though, but I just hope all of it goes well.

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Julian Race
May 27, 2021 16:20

https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/julian-race/

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Jewels 🌊🐅
May 16, 2021 20:22

B.W. IM BACK ITS JULIETTEEEEEE HIIIIIII

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B. W.
May 17, 2021 04:10

Oh, how have ya been doing??

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Jewels 🌊🐅
May 18, 2021 00:51

Good, i see your going up in the reedsy world!

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B. W.
May 18, 2021 19:32

Why did ya say so many of these? Though anyway, I'm a little curious, do ya plan on doing any new stories or anything like that eventually?

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Jewels 🌊🐅
May 22, 2021 03:04

Oop, idk why, and yes i am! I’m working on one rn

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B. W.
May 24, 2021 20:34

Could you tell me whenever its out?

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Jewels 🌊🐅
May 22, 2021 03:04

Oop, idk why, and yes i am! I’m working on one rn

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Jewels 🌊🐅
May 22, 2021 03:04

Oop, idk why, and yes i am! I’m working on one rn

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Jewels 🌊🐅
May 18, 2021 00:51

Good, i see your going up in the reedsy world!

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Jewels 🌊🐅
May 18, 2021 00:51

Good, i see your going up in the reedsy world!

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Philip Clayberg
May 15, 2021 06:53

Here's the new thread (continuing our lengthy conversation):

(your previous response first, followed by my reply to it)

1. How do ya even think Axel would react once it happened? Like once the two of them do end up switching, or whatever is going to happen, I don't think they'd be able to avoid Axel the entire time.

2. I still don't understand that much stuff about Star Trek, so what exactly happened with this "Hobus Supernova" ? It'll probably take me a while to pick what happened in the AU, but maybe the three of them at least learn what AU Cora and AU Reboot have been doing, along with how sort of depressing/bland the AU world seems.

3. Hm, what do you think of this: I'm sure this idea has happened a bunch of other times, though what Cora disappeared and split into some of her other emotions? Like her fear, sadness, and anger. So Axel and Reboot have to try and bring back the real Cora.

4. I actually really LOVE that idea. Cora would probably have a bunch of abilities and all of that sense she's a hybrid and everything. What about this for a scene: She get's captured while out for a late night walk, and the aliens/people call Axel and Reboot a bit later, explaining why they want Cora, like the ability or whatever. So I guess like a little ransom thing would be going down, though I don't know what they would want in return to giving Cora back.

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1. Maybe a little humorous scene where Axel talks to Cora and hears something that sounds like Reboot; then he talks to Reboot and hears something that sounds like Cora.

2. This is what makes it so difficult to refer to something and running into things you haven't read or seen. Try this link: https://memory-beta.fandom.com/wiki/Hobus

If that doesn't make any sense to you, then that severely restricts things that I can refer to in these conversations.

3. That sounds a bit too much like that Pixar animated movie about the girl's different emotions. Maybe if Cora were traumatized (for whatever reason), she might retreat into herself and then Axel and Reboot would have to find some way to "go in after her" and try to bring her back to her normal self again.

4. Sounds good ... but what sort of ransom would benefit the aliens *and* be something that Axel and Reboot could find (if they don't already have it) and give to the aliens? What if the aliens said, "We will return the hybrid female to you ... in return for your android."? I don't think Axel would agree to that. They'd have to find *something* that the aliens want that Axel *would* agree to give them.

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B. W.
May 15, 2021 19:17

1. Like do you mean when he's talking to Cora, he'd hear her say something that Reboot would most likely say, and then the same way with Reboot? or do you mean something else?

2. I'll check that out soon probably, though question, how many Star Trek movies and shows are there? Also, I do think that eventually and somehow the AU Cora would be able to meet the PU Reboot and Axel, but since there isn't an AU Axel, how do you think she'd react to the PU Axel?

3. Ya mean "Inside Out" or are ya talking about something else? Well I do like the idea that you mentioned a little better, so what about this for a scene that you could do: Cora deals with something that's maybe about her father or something else about her past, so she retreats into herself and both Axel and Reboot manage to go into her mind, although they don't meet her emotions. Instead, maybe they meet a much younger version of Cora that is there, maybe around 9 or 10 years old. And young Cora decides to help them.

4. Well, what if the aliens don't exactly have the best weapons or something, so they request that Axel hands over some of his weapons, since those are quite powerful in a way. (not the ship weapons, some of the weapons that he carries) And they'd just request a couple of them, not all or something.

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Philip Clayberg
May 16, 2021 00:45

1. I was thinking more of a switch in minds, where Cora is in Reboot's head and Reboot is in Cora's head. When they speak, obviously Cora-in-Reboot's-head would sound like Cora, and Reboot-in-Cora's-head would sound like Reboot. It probably wouldn't be anything permanent, but even temporary, it could prove beneficial to both of them.

2. There are at least seven Star Trek series now. I've seen a little of "Star Trek: Discovery" in review videos on YouTube. I've had no interest in "Star Trek: Picard", so I haven't even watched review videos of it. I think I've seen all of "Star Trek: The Original Series", as well as most of the movies (except the 2nd and 5th movies) adapted from the series: "Star Trek: The Motion Picture" through "Star Trek VI: The Undiscovered Country". I did some of "Star Trek: The Next Generation", but didn't like it much. I've seen some of "Star Trek: Deep Space Nine" and it was interesting. I've seen quite a bit of "Star Trek: Voyager". I've also seen most of the animated "Star Trek" series that was on TV in the mid-1970s. I've also seen much of "Star Trek: Enterprise" and was sad when it was killed off at the end of the 4th season. I also used to have the James Blish adaptations of the ST:TOS scripts: "Star Trek 1" through "Star Trek 11", as well as the Alan Dean Foster adaptations of the animated series scripts, "Star Trek: Log One" through maybe "Star Trek: Log Ten" or so. Plenty of material for you to watch and read. If you want to go in chronological order (what takes place earliest to what takes place latest), I would start watching "Star Trek: First Contact", then ST:E, then ST:TOS, then the animated series, then the movies adapted from ST:TOS, then ST:TNG (and the movies adapted from it, except for "Star Trek: First Contact" which mostly takes place before ST:E), then ST:DS9, and then ST:V. I'm not sure where "Star Trek: Discovery" fits into all that. Ditto for "Star Trek: Picard" (but I'm guessing it might come between ST:TNG and ST:DS9). And then there are the novels inspired by the TV series. Plenty of those to read. If this is confusing to you, I apologize. I grew up ST:TOS reruns in the 1970s and Star Trek novels and collections of Star Trek short stories, never knowing that 1979 would be the rebirth of Star Trek.

3. I think that's the movie's title. I haven't seen more than bits and pieces of it on YouTube. I'd like to see the entire movie, "Inside Out", someday.

Interesting idea. Not like the Teen Titans episode, "Nevermore", which deals with the inside of Raven's head (which episode I really enjoyed, btw). Maybe young Cora knows things that adult Cora doesn't know (or has forgotten). Maybe young Cora helps adult Cora to remember what the latter didn't know or had forgotten? The inner landscape of Cora's mind could be an interesting place to explore.

4. But what if those weapons are illegal for the aliens to have (because they can reverse-engineer anything that Axel can give them)? What if Axel gets into trouble with human authorities for giving the weapons to the aliens? Reboot and Cora would have to help rescue Axel if he gets thrown into prison.

Axel: "Aren't you a little short for a Stormtrooper?"
Cora: "Oh! The uniform." (takes off the helmet)
Axel: "Cora?"
Cora: "And Reboot. He's keeping an eye out for any guards. We need to get you out of here ASAP, if not sooner."
Reboot: "We have company, Cora. Please inform Axel that he must leave this incarceration cell immediately. We cannot remain here any longer without risking being caught and incarcerated ourselves."
Cora: "You heard the android, Axel. Get moving. Reboot? You lead. Axel, you're in the middle. I'll bring up the rear."
Axel: "You honestly think we can escape from this prison?"
Cora: "We got in here, didn't we? Then, obviously, we can get out."
Reboot: "Hurry, my friends. We do not have time to waste on any discussion."
(etc.)

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B. W.
May 16, 2021 02:33

1. Oh! Here's actually an idea for a scene that's still related to this thing: The two of them can't switch back for some reason when they want to, so Cora is still stuck as Reboot, and Reboot is still stuck as Cora. Axel's trying to fix the thing, while Cora just starts getting nervous and misses her body, Reboot would probably be calm about it.

2. I'm still not that interested in Star Trek that much, but I am curious about one thing. Are the main characters just humans in space doing stuff, or are some of them like complete aliens? I might have forgotten a few things about Star Trek that you've told me about.

3. Honestly, I haven't watched the original Teen Titans show in a long time, but I do know that "Nevermore" is still my favorite episode tbh. I think young Cora would simply sometimes just help adult Cora remember things, not tell her about things that she didn't know. She's sorta from the past since shes the younger one, so it kinda makes sense, and they'd still be the same person in a way, so I'm not sure how one can know something and the other can't, unless something very bad happened. Also, for the scene, I could imagine Axel (and maybe even Reboot) thinking that young Cora is the real one that they are looking for, but the young Cora would explain to them how she's just sort of a part of the mind.

4. Even though we've mentioned that Axel may have stolen the ship (or at least found it abandoned) and maybe he even stole a few minor things, but nothing else. I think he would contain legal weapons because if he did have illegal ones or anything like that, he would have definitely been in jail by now. They could simply be quite powerful and legal because maybe Axel even built the weapons, since he's built Reboot and a few other things, and the Aliens know this.

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Echo Sundar
May 11, 2021 19:54

Wow, great story!!

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B. W.
May 12, 2021 04:39

Thanks :) did ya have a favorite part?

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Echo Sundar
May 12, 2021 16:45

You know I think I liked the beginning I was curious about what the noise could be I thought it was maybe an animal in danger or something but then it was the baby which was even better. And it's cool how you managed to pull off a prologue almost with that little words. But yeah I liked the beginning and I think you did a great job with the animals because I could remember which animal was which and in some stories, there's just too many characters and you get a little mixed up. But yeah great job.

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B. W.
May 12, 2021 19:05

Thanks again ^^ at the moment I'm still trying to make a part 2 for this. Did ya maybe have a favorite character as well?

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Echo Sundar
May 12, 2021 20:18

Probablly Daviana.

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B. W.
May 13, 2021 00:58

Is there anything you'd like to see in the next part or anything like that?

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Sapphire 🌼
May 09, 2021 17:59

Hey B!

It's been a while since we've talked o.o

How are you doing?

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B. W.
May 09, 2021 22:45

I guess I'm alright, what about you?

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Sapphire 🌼
May 10, 2021 16:19

I'm pretty meh.

Working on anything recently?

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B. W.
May 10, 2021 20:33

Hm, I've been working on a novel and a few other small things lately.

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Sapphire 🌼
May 11, 2021 15:45

Oh wow that's great! What genre is your novel?

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B. W.
May 12, 2021 04:37

I guess it counts as a Fantasy, there's a lot of Mythology stuff in it, like Greek and Egyptian.

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May 07, 2021 10:16

HIIIII

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B. W.
May 09, 2021 00:57

How are ya doing?

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May 09, 2021 20:20

Great! You?

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B. W.
May 09, 2021 22:45

Eh I'm alright, just a little tired and bored though :/ Have ya seen the new prompts?

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May 10, 2021 14:58

Yes, I like them a lot!

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B. W.
May 10, 2021 20:23

Ya think you'll make a new story with one of them then?

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SAMANTHA LANGLEY
May 06, 2021 14:57

Hi, I saw on your bio that you feel like no one talks to you much.

What's your favorite color?
Favorite animal?
Favorite board game?
Favorite book?

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B. W.
May 07, 2021 01:46

1. Tbh I don't really have a favorite color, but I do really like the color purple, though I wouldn't say that it's my favorite.
2. I love a lot of animals, but I think I really love Chinchillas.
3. Hm, I actually don't know. I do like Monopoly, but I mostly play video games.
4. Tbh I love any sort of book that is Fantasy or Horror, along with books about mythologies.

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SAMANTHA LANGLEY
May 07, 2021 12:16

1. I like purple too! Purple is my favorite color.
2. AWW CHINCHILLAS... my favorite animal is a koala.
3. Disney Monopoly, and a game called Word Bits.
4. Everything, Everything, The Zee Files, The Fault in our Stars, Five Feet Apart, The View From Saturday, Fairy Tale Reform School series

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B. W.
May 09, 2021 00:59

1. Whenever I try to make things, I either go for Purple or something like Gold tbh.
2. Koalas are really cute as well and I've wanted to meet one, though have ya seen them in the rain?
3. How many Monopoly games even are there? I didn't know there was a Disney one
4. Fairy Tale Reform School series? That one actually sounds really interesting

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SAMANTHA LANGLEY
May 10, 2021 12:57

1. niceeee
2. No I haven't seen them in the rain
3. I. Don't. Know.... Lol
4. yep!

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B. W.
May 10, 2021 20:23

So what do ya think of the prompts?

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Coco Longstaff
April 28, 2021 22:34

Hi B!!!!
Heyo! How are you??

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B. W.
May 01, 2021 23:34

Eh I guess I'm alright, what about you?

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Coco Longstaff
May 02, 2021 02:00

Great!
So..how’s your writer block?

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B. W.
May 07, 2021 01:44

Its still been really bad recently

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Coco Longstaff
May 07, 2021 07:39

Ohhhh. I’m sorry.
Is there anything i could do to help?

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B. W.
May 09, 2021 00:56

I dunno, ya got any advice?

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April 26, 2021 01:33

New story posted if you wanna check it out!! <333

ALSO WHEN. ARE. YOU. POSTING AGAIN SISS??? Lol writer’s block or..?

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B. W.
May 01, 2021 23:30

I'll check it out soon, promise ^^ And I don't really know when I'm gonna post a new story, I don't have writers block though because I'm working on a few other things. Though I just don't feel like there'll be that much people though, since you probably know that not a lot of people have been on here for a while. Though how have you been doing?

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May 01, 2021 23:50

Aw thanks B! Ahh, yeah. Although it’s definitely great you’re working on your novels too lol!
Good! It was my sis’s b-day today so we just at out and I consumed like 10k calories XD Wbu?

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B. W.
May 07, 2021 01:40

I've just been trying to relax lately, and I've honestly been watching a lot of the "Transformers" shows and movies. I've been doing alright, and that sounds nice. I'm not sure whenever my novel will be finished and all of that, but I really hope that a lot of people will read it.

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May 07, 2021 14:32

Ahhhhh nice! Yeshh I’m sure they will lol XD

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B. W.
May 09, 2021 01:00

Wait speaking of Novels again, how's it coming with yours and all of that? Also I redid my Bio again, could you check it out and tell me what ya think?

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Palak Shah
April 15, 2021 21:24

I just read your bio and I saw that you were a Virgo. To be honest, I have not met many Virgos on this app, you might even be the first or second lol :))
Also, I love Greek Mythology. Percy Jackson was was my favourite series growing up and in fact, it still is.

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B. W.
April 16, 2021 01:40

I sometimes talk to people on here about the whole Zodiac thing, and I don't think I've even met another Virgo either. Do ya possibly have a favorite Greek God or Goddess?

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Palak Shah
April 16, 2021 09:45

I just found out that Virgos are not a rare sign nevertheless I haven't met any on this platform.
I have met a lot of Pisces though lol :))
I did the Greek Godparent test of Buzzfeed and I got Athena however my favourite is Hades because he is so misjudged.
Anyway, do u have a fav Greek God or Goddess?

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B. W.
April 16, 2021 17:58

I think I did a Greek Godparent test at some point as well, and I might have gotten Artemis. I like a lot of them, though I also really like Hades too, I can agree that he's always misjudged and I don't like how a lot of things show him as pure evil. I don't really like Zeus though.

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Palak Shah
April 16, 2021 22:18

OMG same I don't like Zeus either, I feel like he just controls everyone.
Nevertheless, I like Poseidon mainly because he is Percy Jacksons' father and I don't think he is that bad.

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B. W.
April 17, 2021 02:33

Do ya have any favorite Egyptian Gods or Goddesses? I honestly really like both Anubis and Set.

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Anii ✨
April 15, 2021 20:58

Hey B.W! :)
(It's me, "Anvi VerMUAHAHAHA." I just changed my name and pfp to join the Marvel Trend.)
Anyway, I love your story! The names of the characters and creatures are really cool, and the prologue part seems supa interesting!

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B. W.
April 16, 2021 01:38

Oh, well that seems a little fun. And thanks, I'm glad that you liked the story ^^ do you maybe have a favorite part or something?

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Anii ✨
April 18, 2021 23:21

I'd say the ending was really amazing. :)

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B. W.
April 19, 2021 18:45

Did ya maybe have a favorite character?

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Anii ✨
April 20, 2021 15:35

Oh, Artio for sure! Her personality is really nice!

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B. W.
April 20, 2021 21:44

I'm glad ya liked her ^^ is there anything you'd wanna see happen in the next part of this?

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Palak Shah
April 15, 2021 09:49

Can you please check out my latest story.
I am so sorry that you got downvoted

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B. W.
April 15, 2021 20:05

Sure I don't see why not, I'll check it out soon

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Kate :)
April 13, 2021 13:40

Hi! It's been forever since we talked. This was a great new story :) I have a question- how do you pronounce Artio?

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B. W.
April 13, 2021 18:24

Yeah, I just realized that and was actually about to go talk to ya. How have you been? I guess how you'd be able to pronounce her name is "Arty-o" and I'm glad you liked the story ^^ did you have a favorite part in it or anything like that?

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Kate :)
April 13, 2021 18:38

I liked reading about the world you made. It sounds really cool, and I like that there are so many species that interact with each other.

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B. W.
April 13, 2021 20:58

Did you have a favorite character? And is there anything you'd wanna see happen in the next part? I've actually been trying to make a part 2 for this for a while.

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Kate :)
April 14, 2021 00:03

My favorite character was Artio, and I guess in the next part a clue on her backstory would be interesting.

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B. W.
April 14, 2021 02:23

Alright then, also what do ya think of the prompts?

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Mila Van Niekerk
April 12, 2021 14:59

I love this story! I read your bio, and you're actually right, it's been super quiet around here lately. Except for all this downvoting drama, and the Summers and Sileverserpent thing going on. Dang, Reedsy's getting problematic and I don't want that to happen and ruin the awesome vibe we have.
I absolutely ADORE Artio; but Solo's definitely my favourite character. He kinda reminds me of dragon Kirishima (from bnha)
I really love Artio's enthusiasm about this whole adventure, and her excitement about meeting a princess. I'd love to know more about what the characters look like though.
I've been SUPER busy, started high school and we wrote our first exam today, so I'm having trouble posting, and I kinda wanna give up. But your story inspired me to try again!!
I'd love to read more about this, it sounds awesome!!
-Mila
PS: please don't feel pressured to do this but: I kinda see Artio meeting a princess and just falling head over heels for her. Or meet a nonbinary knight or a bi wizard ....idk... JUST A THOUGHT PLEASE DON'T FEEL PRESSURED TO DO SO 💗🧡

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B. W.
April 12, 2021 19:46

I'm really glad that you liked this story ^^ Well the thing is, I actually *have* been wanting to introduce a nonbinary character and a few other characters and stuff into a few stories, you aren't really pressuring me, so I'll think about it as I've already been considering to do things like this. I do like the idea of Artio meeting a princess (or really anyone) and falling in love with them, though she'd probably be really nervous around them and might try to impress them. What do ya mean by the whole "Summers and Sileverserpent thing going on" ? I don't think I've heard of anything about that.

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Mila Van Niekerk
April 13, 2021 04:47

Two accounts here on Reedsy are having a ''fight'' I guess. I don't really know what's going on, except that their bio's are telling people to ignore and unfollow the other one. Not sure why though, Apparently someone left rude comments on someone else's story, or something like that. I'm just going to try and avoid it as much as possible.
But if you haven't heard of it that's actually awesome.

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B. W.
April 13, 2021 18:21

Why did you say so many of these though? I think I heard about it once but then completely forgot about it, until now maybe :/ Do you know how long this has even been going on for or something?

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Mila Van Niekerk
April 13, 2021 04:47

Two accounts here on Reedsy are having a ''fight'' I guess. I don't really know what's going on, except that their bio's are telling people to ignore and unfollow the other one. Not sure why though, Apparently someone left rude comments on someone else's story, or something like that. I'm just going to try and avoid it as much as possible.
But if you haven't heard of it that's actually awesome.

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Mila Van Niekerk
April 13, 2021 04:47

Two accounts here on Reedsy are having a ''fight'' I guess. I don't really know what's going on, except that their bio's are telling people to ignore and unfollow the other one. Not sure why though, Apparently someone left rude comments on someone else's story, or something like that. I'm just going to try and avoid it as much as possible.
But if you haven't heard of it that's actually awesome.

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Orenda .
April 03, 2021 17:14

henlo!
everything goin' good?

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B. W.
April 03, 2021 18:20

Eh, I guess. Though how have you been doing? It's been a while.

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Orenda .
April 03, 2021 18:23

i am doing okay :))
yeah, it's been a long, long while.

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B. W.
April 03, 2021 23:40

So are you planning on doing any new stories or anything like that?

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Orenda .
April 04, 2021 05:39

I won't write here for a while. but offline, yes, trying to, at least XD.

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B. W.
April 04, 2021 15:43

Alright then. I've actually been working on a new novel for the past month or so ^^

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April 02, 2021 22:14

Heyyyyy
And frick, just saw you were downvoted to
OH MY GOD YOU WERE DOWNVOTED TO 666 TOO?!?! Oh my goshhhh these downvoters really do love taking thousands of points 😭 I’m sorryyyy sis I’ll upvote you later <3

But anyways what’s up?

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B. W.
April 03, 2021 00:21

I don't really care about the points anymore that much, but it is still annoying that they are all still doing it. But I guess I've been doing fine recently, a little bored and tired though :/ I'm wanting to try and make a new story soon, what about you?

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April 03, 2021 00:25

Yea, exactly, like bruh does the dv have nothing else to do???
Yeah lol, “bored and tired” is pretty much my standing emotion half the time ;) Ooh that sounds awesome, tell me if/when it’s out!!
I mean, just posted the new story I’ve been working on, so yay. I’m also pretty tired/bored, but at least there’s two days before spring break ends, right?? 🥲 Ty!

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B. W.
April 03, 2021 00:47

You're still having Spring Break? I had mine a long time ago. I guess I'm also pretty bored because a lot of people aren't on here anymore, and there's just not a lot of stuff to do anymore.

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April 03, 2021 01:28

Yup!
Yeaaa... Like I just told Lone Wolf, a lot of the younger, chattier members of Reedsy are busy with school and stuff so there’s just not as many random convos as like last summer :/

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B. W.
April 03, 2021 01:39

Lone Wolf is still on here? I kinda thought that they left at some point, or did they not do that?

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March 31, 2021 22:57

Hiya! I just posted a new story! I'd love to hear your feedback! :D

Btw, I've noticed your points have been low, were you downvoted?

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B. W.
March 31, 2021 23:22

Sure, I'll check it out soon. And yeah, I got downvoted a lot a while ago. I don't really care that much, but its still a bit surprising.

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April 01, 2021 01:42

Yeah, that sucks though. Do you have any ideas on who they are?

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B. W.
April 01, 2021 01:54

Not really, I know it's still probably a lot of people doing it though :/

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April 01, 2021 02:25

Yeah probably. I really dont get why they do this :T

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B. W.
April 01, 2021 04:25

I don't really care about the points anymore though

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Keya M.
March 31, 2021 12:57

Hi B.W.! I don't know you very well, but I saw that you followed me, and I thought we could chat a little to get to know each other?

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B. W.
March 31, 2021 14:31

Sure I don't see why not, so how are you doing?

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Keya M.
March 31, 2021 14:55

I'm good! I've been wearing sweatpants for what feels like forever lol! What about you? What have you been doing during the pandemic?

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B. W.
March 31, 2021 15:45

Not a lot of stuff tbh, but I have been writing a novel.

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Keya M.
March 31, 2021 15:47

Oh, that's cool!

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B. W.
March 31, 2021 15:48

It features a lot of Mythology stuff, including Greek, Egyptian and a couple other ones.

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Daniel R. Hayes
March 30, 2021 20:25

Hi, this was a great story. I enjoyed reading it :)

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 20:58

Thanks ^^ did you have a favorite part?

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Daniel R. Hayes
March 30, 2021 21:19

Hi! Yes I did have a favorite part. I loved how you built up to the noise to reveal a human baby. The story also left me wanting to read more, so I hope you write part 2 :)

Also, the names Solo and Artio, reminded me of Star Wars - which is really cool ;)

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 22:24

I'll probably do a part 2 at some point ^^ I don't watch a lot of Star Wars, but I remembered Han(?) Solo and so I just kinda liked that. I'm not really sure what Artio reminds you of in Star Wars though.

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Daniel R. Hayes
March 30, 2021 23:25

Hi, Artio - sounds like R2, but that's just me ;) This was a good story, can't wait for the next one!

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B. W.
March 31, 2021 00:50

Are ya talking about R2D2 and C3PO? Those were honestly my favorites in the ones I watched.

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✨Abby ✨
March 30, 2021 17:56

Heyy bee! It's been forever (it's Abby btw)! How are you?

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 18:24

I guess I've been doing good, what about you?

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✨Abby ✨
March 30, 2021 18:45

I've been pretty good. Just super busy. I'm just posted a story tho if u wanna check it out at some point that be great! :). Are you doing a story for this set of prompts?

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 19:23

Well I really want to try and make a story for the trickster god prompt, but I don't think I actually will. And don't worry, I'll check it out soon ^^

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March 30, 2021 15:34

I can talk!

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 18:23

So how are ya doing today? Have ya seen the new prompts?

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March 30, 2021 22:10

Yeah, I like them.

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 22:25

Do you plan on doing one of them? I really like the trickster god prompt.

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March 30, 2021 22:44

me too

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B. W.
March 31, 2021 00:49

Do you know any mythology?

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B! Your points!
This is important, I'm not sure if this is a prank or not, but someone messaged me:
"Hey, Reedsy executive here. I am sorry to inform you that nothing can change this reedsy website, but we are thinking about it for sure. I have informed them about the downvoted in my bio and I have even messaged her. So, please free to read my bio. Devaki Inamdar has 8 accounts in her name which she uses for heavy downvoting to others and upvoting to herself."
His/her bio link: https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/author/brian-kits/

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 03:23

Yeah, I already noticed my points a bit ago, it's more annoying than anything. Has anything happened to yours or something? And I'll go check that out soon.

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TJ Squared
March 30, 2021 00:50

heyyy I know we haven't talked much, but we can change that :) 'Be the change that you want to see in the world' :)
How have you been?

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 01:16

I guess I've been doing fine, but I'm really bored and tired. What about you?

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TJ Squared
March 30, 2021 01:26

I'm kinda lonely (which isn't anything new), but excited because my tortoise is up now :)

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 01:47

You have a tortoise as a pet? Nice, I have two dogs.

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TJ Squared
March 30, 2021 02:35

ooh nice :)
read anything lately?

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B. W.
March 30, 2021 03:04

Well, I guess I've been reading a lot of horror books lately. Like The Shining.

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Coco Longstaff
March 29, 2021 08:22

Hey B
How’s it going?

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B. W.
March 29, 2021 14:32

Eh, I guess i've been doing fine. What about you?

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