Daughter of Zeus (part 4 of Next Gen)

Fantasy Teens & Young Adult

Written in response to: "Start your story with one character trying to convince another to take up their favorite hobby." as part of Keeping Busy.

Zio sat across from me on an old couch nearby, which I'm surprised was even still standing and hadn't collapsed yet. Why do I even keep that? "You and me? You're saying we're siblings?"

My "brother" nodded at the question and then spoke, "Yes, I've been trying to find one of my siblings for the past couple of days. Now that I managed to-"

I put one of my fingers up to shush him while staying where I was (No way am I gonna go near or touch my so-called "brother") and then proceeded to ask, "Hold on. Why have you been looking for one of your siblings?"

"Well, I was honestly hoping that we could-"

"You planning on trying to kill me or one of the others when you have our trust??"

While I wasn't looking in his direction anymore, I managed to hear what was probably him falling off of the couch. "Huh?...no no of course not! I'd never try to do any of that, I promise."

There were light footsteps after he said that (I honestly thought it was just the old floorboards creaking at first.) as a cold and light hand was set on my shoulder. "Now, if you would please just let me explain and-"

"Don't. Touch. Me." I quickly slapped his hand away from my shoulder, then backed up a little bit. What does he think he's doing? Also, why was his hand so cold?

"Oh gosh, I'm sorry I didn't..."

"Whatever. You can still explain whatever it is you wanted to explain, but just don't touch me."

He put himself back onto the couch and patted the other side of it like he wanted me to come and sit down. It's not that close to him, fine...though he better not try anything.

It didn't take long for him to start explaining after that, I swear he could explain for over twenty-four hours if nobody stopped him. I didn't care that much though, so I was zoning out a lot.

"...And I was thinking that if me and some of my siblings went together, we'd have a little chat with our father and maybe stop him? All of the children of Zeus get treated like they're just like him, I hate it."

Alright, he's probably crazy. Going and trying to take on your father, who is one of the most powerful gods, what could go wrong? This idea in general is a bit crazy...I like that.

I'm not sure how long I was zoning out for again, though he was still going. "...Well, that's all that's happened to me when others figured out who I was the child of...has anything happened to you?"

Even though the last part was in a mumble, I managed to hear him say, "Wait no, why did I ask that?! That was stupid. Who would want to talk about it?" he had probably said some more, but I didn't care or manage to hear the rest.

"I...I don't want to talk about it."

"Did I-"

"Shut it. Though you really want to go and do and do that?"

He nodded a little bit and then asked, "Yes, it would be for all the children of Zeus! I'm sure you must have thought about doing it sometimes, so what do you say?"

"...Sure...let's do it."

***

I think it's been about twenty minutes since I've been walking through the forest, though I had a little feeling that I'd find someone soon.

Luckily Lia or none of the others had decided to come with me, what if they got hurt? Or what if they got killed? Who knows what Zeus would do to them, wait actually...

"Hah! Finally!"

Without much thinking after hearing the voice, I started to head towards it. Maybe it would be someone I was looking for? Or maybe it was someone that could help me find someone I was looking for.

After going through a couple of large trees, I finally spotted someone. There was a girl standing in the center, a tree was on its side in front of her. Was she the one I was looking for?

Wait a minute...was that tree struck by lightning? Huh, could she have done that...?

"Wow..."

"Huh? Who's there?!"

***

"Hey, I didn't actually get your name yet."

"My name? It's Zinaida."

He had this certain look on his face (I think I know what he was thinking when he heard that...) as he then started to ask, "Wait a minute, doesn't that mean of Z..."

"Yeah yeah I know, now shush."

It was probably about an hour of silence between the two of us (at least that's what it felt like to me though, it could have been a few minutes.) while he awkwardly coughed.

"So, what do you usually like to do?" we had asked in unison.

"Ah jeez, I've never really done that much stuff. I just hang out with my friends and wife when I can, what about you?"

"Train."

He got off of the couch and began to pace around me, or at least that's what I think he was doing. "What else do you do?"

"Nothing, I just train."

"Wait, are you serious?"

"Why would I be lying?"

He sighed and sat back next to me, he was a bit closer but luckily he still wasn't touching me or anything. "You know what? I'm going to make sure you relax, you're not gonna train for a while. It's quite nice to just have some fun..."

"But what about the whole thing we just talked about? Going to see our father and try to stop him? Shouldn't we be training instead? You definitely need to..."

"Listen, you'd still need to be feeling well and rested when we eventually do it. You might just push yourself or something if you always do this."

"But-"

"How about this? If you relax and just have some fun with me for a while, you can help me train if you want, or just really anything you'd wanna do. Your probably correct about me needing to do this anyway..."

"Fine..."

"Good, now come with me, please. I have the perfect idea on what we could do first."

Posted Jan 26, 2021
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February 22, 2021 00:35

New thread? The other one was getting long :/

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B. W.
February 22, 2021 06:51

yeah sure, what do ya wanna talk about now?

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- -
February 22, 2021 06:52

Hmm, I read this joke yesterday..
Pressing F5 is so refreshing lol

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B. W.
February 22, 2021 06:54

Where'd ya find that joke?

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- -
February 22, 2021 06:59

On r/one liners.... But you know like.. they could've gotten that from anywhere else and reposted it :/

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B. W.
February 22, 2021 07:00

did you find any other ones?

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Laiba M
February 20, 2021 19:29

I thought this downvoting was over, but someone decided to start again for me... T-T do you want to do an upvote spree?

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B. W.
February 20, 2021 19:52

Eh? I don't think its really even a big deal anymore or anything, I kind of forgot about it all. How much did ya even lose though?

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Laiba M
February 20, 2021 21:20

Yeah, same here. I stopped paying attention to my points a few months ago but only realized when I was going through one of my threads with you to respond and notice all of my comments were downvoted T-T
I think I have an idea who it is, but I'm not going to say who :)

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B. W.
February 21, 2021 02:15

It also still just feels really empty or lonely on here for some reason, at least just for me :/ barely anyone has still been talking with me and its only you and a few other people, is that the same with you?

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Laiba M
February 21, 2021 03:33

I've been really busy recently, so I've basically only talked to you and a few others occasionally T-T
But today, since I finished my last exam, I reached out to a ton of people and most of them responded. So it's been pretty social for me :D
Hmm, I don't know why that's happening. It might be because this is the time where a lot of people have to apply and go through a lot of processes for certain programs/schools/etc. for the next year. Or because a lot of people have left Reedsy or stopped checking it as often TT_TT which is really sad.
Sorry that was so long! Do you still have writer's block?

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B. W.
February 21, 2021 16:38

Eh, its fine and yeah, unfortunately I still DO have writers block and i really just don't know what to do :/

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February 17, 2021 19:41

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B. W.
February 17, 2021 21:36

Yeah, I'm actually still pretty bored and I don't really mind what we talk about. Uh, ya got any favorite songs?

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February 17, 2021 23:19

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B. W.
February 17, 2021 23:33

I've always loved a lot of sad songs for some reason as well, I kind of have a play-list of them. A few of them are "Hold on" "Let You Down" and "Before you go"

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February 17, 2021 23:37

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B. W.
February 18, 2021 01:43

Yeah they are, so do you have any favorite movies or something?

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Maya -
February 12, 2021 19:10

If you want to play Skribble at 3:30 EST I'll put the link at the bottom of my bio. :)

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B. W.
February 13, 2021 01:38

I never felt like playing today, though was it at least fun?

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Maya -
February 13, 2021 01:39

Aw that's fine.
We actually didn't end up playing, I had to do something else last minute. Oop XD

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B. W.
February 13, 2021 01:41

Oh alright, also have you maybe seen the new prompts?

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Maya -
February 13, 2021 01:50

Yeah, I did! I like them! I think I'll continue my reedsy-cast series, cause I have a ship in the story. Hehe (Don't worry, I'm not gonna start a war like Brooke did)
How about you?

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B. W.
February 13, 2021 06:47

A ship? Well did ya ask the two people if it was alright at least? and eh, I'm not really sure. I think I might have writers block and I've had it for a little while, I could use some help.

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Maya -
February 11, 2021 04:35

Reedsy-cast out! :D

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B. W.
February 11, 2021 06:47

I'll go check it out ^^

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Maya -
February 10, 2021 19:44

If you would like to play at 3:30 EST I'm going to put the link in my bio (at the bottom XD) :)

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B. W.
February 11, 2021 02:34

that one person hasnt shown up recently, right?

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Maya -
February 11, 2021 02:37

Nope, thank goodness. XD

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B. W.
February 11, 2021 02:40

Have a lot of people been playing though recently?

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Maya -
February 08, 2021 17:53

We're playing Skribble again at 3:30 EST, and if you want to join the link will be at the bottom of my bio. :)))

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B. W.
February 08, 2021 20:09

I'm not sure if I will today, though I'll think about it.

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Maya -
February 08, 2021 20:22

Okay, that's fine! :)

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B. W.
February 09, 2021 03:51

Was it fun?

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Maya -
February 09, 2021 13:26

Yeah! A lot of people played and the spammers didn't come. :)

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B. W.
February 09, 2021 18:36

when are you playing next?

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Maya -
February 06, 2021 05:47

If you would like to be in the first part of my new reedsy-cast series could you fill out this form? :)
https://forms.gle/GYJ6V5zaU7mQct5v5

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B. W.
February 06, 2021 19:09

I'll do it ^^

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Maya -
February 06, 2021 19:48

Yay!!! Thanks!

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B. W.
February 07, 2021 01:01

So i did it, did you find mine yet or something?

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Maya -
February 07, 2021 16:08

Yes, I did! I'll probably start writing for this week's prompts. :)

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B. W.
February 07, 2021 19:32

When do ya think it'll be finished?

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Kate :)
February 05, 2021 18:52

Hi B!

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B. W.
February 05, 2021 20:20

Hey how are you doing?

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Kate :)
February 08, 2021 18:17

Pretty good; I added a new story. How about you?

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B. W.
February 08, 2021 20:10

I want to make a new story and stuff, but I just can't think of anything with these prompts. I don't like them that much.

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Kate :)
February 09, 2021 19:50

Maybe next week will be better.

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B. W.
February 10, 2021 03:37

Maybe, also do you maybe wanna hear a joke or something?

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Maya -
February 04, 2021 22:31

The skribbls now have a doc for chatting (kinda like Aerin's doc) and if you want to be on it the link is in my bio! :)

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B. W.
February 05, 2021 04:43

Aerin's doc?

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Maya -
February 05, 2021 04:48

It's similar to Aerin's doc of randomness (if you've seen that in her bio)
Also, I made a writing quiz if you want to do it!
https://forms.gle/KhviFKES3ZoNo6bs7

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B. W.
February 05, 2021 16:10

Alright I'll check both of those out soon, so how are you doing today?

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Maya -
February 05, 2021 16:11

Great! I'm so happy it's Friday! You? :)
Also, I love the new prompts! Do you like them?

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B. W.
February 05, 2021 16:15

Eh, I don't really like them that much

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Maya -
February 04, 2021 19:37

We're playing skribble again at 3:30 today, if you want to join the link will be at the bottom of my bio. :)

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B. W.
February 04, 2021 20:38

Eh, I'm not sure if I'll play it today. I'll probably play it next time though ^^

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Maya -
February 04, 2021 21:37

That's alright!

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can you play scribbl today?

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B. W.
February 03, 2021 20:21

I think I might be able to

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Maya -
February 02, 2021 17:08

If you want to play skribble at the same time today I'm putting the link at the bottom of my bio. (So it's less visible to he who must not be named) XD

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B. W.
February 02, 2021 21:36

Eh, I don't think I'll be playing it today, though don't worry I'll play it next time if i don't show up today.

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Maya -
February 02, 2021 21:44

Okay, we finished playing, but that's okay. You can another time! :)

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B. W.
February 03, 2021 04:13

Did that one person ever show up?

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Maya -
February 03, 2021 04:15

Yeah, but this time they were "Luke" so we all thought it was Luke until we realized it was Ayy.

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B. W.
February 03, 2021 04:17

How do they even keep finding it??

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Sia S
February 02, 2021 05:18

I got a new story out!!

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B. W.
February 02, 2021 15:58

You did? I'll check it out soon ^^

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Sia S
February 02, 2021 16:59

:)

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B. W.
February 02, 2021 21:35

Sorry I haven't been able to read it yet or anything, I've just been doing some other stuff

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Sia S
February 03, 2021 03:07

Its okay

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Maya -
February 01, 2021 20:34

https://skribbl.io/?WiwlzjGzBwuU

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B. W.
February 01, 2021 20:53

Yay ^^

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Maya -
February 01, 2021 15:01

Hey! Hope you're having a nice day! :D
✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪✪
We're playing Skribble again today at 3:30 EST, would you like me to send you the link? :)

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B. W.
February 01, 2021 17:24

Yeah sure ^^

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Maya -
February 01, 2021 17:31

Yay! :DDD

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B. W.
February 01, 2021 19:28

This'll be fun ^^

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Maya -
February 01, 2021 19:56

Yeah! :)

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Maya -
January 29, 2021 20:25

https://skribbl.io/?QMzdRNtmkoMk

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B. W.
January 29, 2021 20:46

Thisll be fun ^^

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Maya -
January 29, 2021 21:28

It was fuunnnnn playing with ya! :D

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B. W.
January 29, 2021 22:30

:)

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January 29, 2021 00:29

hiiii
im bored too so i came here :)

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B. W.
January 29, 2021 02:03

do ya think the new prompts will be good?

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January 29, 2021 02:07

hmm, i don't know, the topics always are kinda random.

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B. W.
January 29, 2021 03:39

Have ya made a story recently?

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January 29, 2021 15:52

Yep I wrote part 5 to my series called Golden Music
The first part was an idea off an idea generator and it kinda transformed into a series :P

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B. W.
January 29, 2021 18:15

nice ^^

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Maya -
January 27, 2021 16:44

New thread? Also, I posted a new story. :)

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B. W.
January 27, 2021 18:41

You did? I'll check it out soon if you want ^^

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Maya -
January 27, 2021 18:42

Okay, thanks! :D

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B. W.
January 27, 2021 20:34

I'm a bit busy though, so it might take a while

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Maya -
January 27, 2021 20:34

That's fine.
Here's our game link if you want to play: https://skribbl.io/?hwBGtYgaB9f6

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B. W.
January 27, 2021 20:39

Whos all playing?

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Hey, I think that this is one of the best parts I read in this sequel you wrote B! Great job! :)

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B. W.
January 27, 2021 02:40

Thanks ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part or anything like that?

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I just loved the way you described the characters and everything going on in the story in so much detail.

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B. W.
January 27, 2021 23:58

Thanks :) whats something you wanna see happen in the next part?

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Hmm...you know what? I like the element of surprise. ;)

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B. W.
January 28, 2021 20:54

alright, so how have ya been?

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Megan Sutherland
January 26, 2021 19:16

I loved it!!!
Your dialogue flowed so smoothly. Great improvement!!
-Meg

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B. W.
January 26, 2021 20:48

Thanks ^^ did you maybe have a favorite part or anything? I wrote the story at like 3am or something, so I'm surprised that its good.

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Megan Sutherland
January 27, 2021 00:47

B I liked it allllllllllllllll.
I am really impressed by your dialogue thooooo like it flowed so nicely

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B. W.
January 27, 2021 02:46

Is there anything you'd wanna see happen in the next part?

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Megan Sutherland
January 27, 2021 02:50

hhmhmhmhmhmhmmhmmhmhmmhmhmhhmmhhmmhmhmhmhmhmhmhmmhhmmhmhh
like an epic battle? idk eheheheheheheh

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B. W.
January 27, 2021 04:19

Like a battle between Zio and his father?

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 18:17

Yay! This was so great! The dialogue between Zio and his sister was realistic and flowed well. You showed their relationship where she was cautious of him and he was being careful not to upset her well. You described the problem with being children of Zeus perfectly throughout the story and the plot was really interesting. Amazing job! I can't wait for the next part! :D

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B. W.
January 26, 2021 19:10

Thanks so much, I'm glad you liked it ^^ did you maybe have a favorite in the story, and is there something you'd wanna see happen in the next part of the story?

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 19:29

No problem! My favorite part was just seeing the characters again and the plot was well thought out. I'm not sure what should happen next, you left off this part at an interesting part of the story, though.

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B. W.
January 26, 2021 20:51

You could probably tell that his sister doesn't really like to be touched and stuff, do ya wanna guess why that is?

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Maya -
January 26, 2021 20:52

I don't know, why?

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B. W.
January 26, 2021 20:57

There's a few reasons, would you wanna wait until it might be said in another part or something? I could maybe tell you some of the stuff if you want though now?

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January 31, 2021 15:42

Wooo I love where this series is going! “ Zinaida” is such a cool name. Awesome :D

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B. W.
January 31, 2021 16:26

Thanks so much ^^ and I might be wrong, but "Zinaida" actually means "Of Zeus" or something like that.

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