American Drama Romance

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

Sparks Fly

Parson Graves listened to Sheriff Claiborne's explanation why he brought Nellie-Rae Sparks to his house next to the church in Hollow Springs, Georgia so late in the evening. Sixteen-year-old Nellie-Rae shifted uncomfortably on the high wagon seat gripping her coat around herself as she watched the men discussing her fate on the front porch. The bodies of her parents still lay in the bed of the wagon, victims of a brutal attack by a gold seeking robber at their mountain cabin homestead in the woods.

The only reason she survived was because she spent the day hunting in the woods bringing home deer meat for the coming winter trying to help out her ailing father. Now her father and her mother were gone along with the only home she ever knew claimed by her mother's brother, Ray, according to a ten-year-old will he suddenly produced upon his unexpected arrival.

It made her sick to her stomach to be around this unknown uncle because the stench of gold was so strong in his presence. She suspected he murdered her parents for the gold hidden beneath the floorboards in their bedroom where he claimed he found them slain when he arrived unannounced. The small bags of gold dust in various clothing pockets on herself she sneaked away from the homestead in her hasty retreat down the mountain with the sheriff were beginning to take their toll on her well-being.

When the parson ducked back into the house to consult his wife the sheriff returned and reached up to help her down. She immediately ran to a nearby bush and heaved.

He handed her a kerchief. “You poor dear. Of course, it's been upsetting to ride all this way with your parents right here in the wagon. I'll get them to the undertaker. The Graves will be happy to welcome you to their home for a few days until after the funeral.”

Mrs. Graves rushed to her, “Come, Child. You must be freezing. Let's get you inside and warm you up. Thank you, Sheriff, for bringing this grieving child to us. We'll be pleased to help in any way. Such a horrible tragedy!”

Inside the generous couple bustled about trying to make Nellie feel welcomed and comfortable. “Let me take your coat.” “Sit here by the fire.” Wrap up in this blanket.” “Here, have something to eat.” “You must be starved.” “You need to eat something.”

“Thank you so much for your kindness but, really, I'm exhausted and only want to sleep for a little while.”

“The guest room is right this way. There's a nightgown on the bed. Let me know if you need anything else.” Mrs Graves realized Nellie was already sound asleep on top of the covers fully dressed. She placed a blanket over the shivering orphan and eased the door shut.

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Nellie awaken to impossibly bright sunshine streaming in impossibly gleaming windows. It took her a few moments to collect her impossibly scattered thoughts to remember where she was and why. Even surrounded by soft colors, fluffy textures and lace awash in glorious morning light she was overcome by an anguishing sense of loss. She wasn't in her cozy cocoon of warm wooden walls and beams in her loft bedroom ladder steps away from her loving parents preparing a farm fresh aromatic breakfast over an open fire.

Those magical loving moments were gone forever. Reality set in once more as she recalled the horror of the day before. Her parents murdered. Even her home stripped away from her by an uncle she couldn't remember. Whatever else happened, she could never live with the conniving conman. What was she to do now? Three days. Three days to figure it all out.

For now, she changed out of her wrinkled clothing, washed her face using the pitcher of water and bowl on the washstand, brushed her matted dark hair, said a quick prayer and headed toward voices and aromas coming from what must be the kitchen. After so much nauseousness yesterday she discovered she was hungry. Her gold was safely tucked away off her person for the time being. Four bags holding about fifty dollars each meant she somehow needed to start her new life with $200. Could she manage?

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Three days. In a blink of an eye three days were gone. She stood at the grave site as her parents were laid to rest. Comforting Christian words spoken by the parson failed to soften the blow. The many consoling wishes by members of the community failed to lessen the lost feelings. Her parents and her whole world as she knew it were gone forever. Kindly Mrs. Graves took Nellie under her arm and led her back to the parsonage.

All afternoon church members brought food and offered platitudes, “If there is anything I can do, let me know.”; “So sorry for your loss.”; “They're in the Lord's arms now in a much better place.”; and on and on. None of it helped with her decision. What was she to do now?

Oh, sure, during my time in town I talked to the sheriff more than once to see if any progress was made on discovering who was responsible. I tried my best to make him see my long lost Uncle Ray was the guilty party. But without proof nothing could be done and it would give away my secret if I told him I could sense stolen gold reeking from him. The fact I don't trust the slick, fancy dressing gold thief makes no difference to the lawman.

And the men. Whenever I ventured out men approached offering to marry me. The bachelor in his fifties with scraggly hair, dirty clothes and tobacco stained teeth; the widower with six needy children; the lonely, overly obese, mentally challenged fellow I was sure would crush me if he crawled atop me; then, of course, the county drunk, Otis Crawford, repeated his comment from the day he found me on his property dressing the deer I wounded and followed across the creek. Something about I wasn't much but he hadn't had a woman in a long time...E-EWE!

Exhausted and trying to avoid all the visitors, she sank down on a back porch step and smoothed out her new black dress Mrs. Graves helped her make. She gritted her teeth but the tears came anyway.

“Ya never seem to have a kerchief when ya need one. Here.” Cody Crawford, her neighbor and friend and Otis's abused teen-age son, offered his to her.

“Thank you. I never needed one so often before losing my family.”

“Mind if I sit beside ya?”

“Oh, please do. All these people mean well but none of them will be around to really help me solve my problems.”

“It's hard to believe this happened to ya folks. I'm so sorry for y'all's loss. What can I do for ya?”

“Did you hear about my mother's brother, Ray, come to save the day? Never knew anything about his existence but he has what he claims is a will made by my folks ten years ago saying he inherits the homestead, mine, and guardianship of me. I don't trust him one iota. But there's nothing I can legally do. The sheriff doesn't believe me when I insist he's the guilty murderer. No way can I live with him but I don't see any other option.

“It's too dangerous for me to travel alone looking for a safe place. Guess I could disguise myself as a boy and hire on to some wagon train traveling west. I know I don't want any plans that cheat has for me. Besides, he may hunt me down where ever I go. I'm getting sick simply thinking about it.”

Cody looked around making sure they weren't being watched and no one was within hearing range before whispering to her, “Nellie, I have something to show you.”

He pulled out a bag of small stones and poured a few into her hand, “I've been panning in the creek where you told me to. These are a few of what I found so far. They look like the one ya gave me the other day. I want you to marry me if you'll have me and we can escape together to where ever you say. I love you. Will ya become my wife?”

“Oh, Cody! I'd be pleased to be your wife. Looks like you have at least $500 dollars of gold nuggets here and you say you have more? It's enough to give us a good start. If you don't mind your bride wearing black let's go find the parson and do it now before Uncle Ray becomes suspicious why I don't return home. I love you, too, ever since we chased each other in the creek as kids.” She threw her arms around his neck and they kissed making sparks fly.

“Come, now,” he helped her stand. “We have plans to make.”

Posted Nov 20, 2025
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Beverly Goldberg
07:49 Dec 03, 2025

These characters are so real, the setting wonderful, so what's next for them?

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Mary Bendickson
21:21 Dec 03, 2025

I finish this series with 'Happily Ever After'. It started with 'Wind beneath my Arrow'. Thanks for the comment and the follow.

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07:56 Dec 01, 2025

What a lovely continuation. Had to check it out. Great job. I agree.

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Mary Bendickson
02:02 Dec 02, 2025

Thanks.😊

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Daniel R. Hayes
05:21 Nov 28, 2025

This story was fantastic! I love the title and it fits perfectly. You have quite the talent of painting the picture with vivid imagery descriptions. I love it when I read a good story and my mind doesn't wonder. I see things happening as the writer (you) intended! Great job!! 🏆

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Mary Bendickson
13:55 Nov 28, 2025

Thanks for the trophy.😅

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Daniel R. Hayes
18:20 Nov 28, 2025

You're welcome. You've earned it!!

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Alexey Williams
23:29 Nov 26, 2025

For me this story has a strong sense of place, this small town in Georgia with all this gold, and this is the thing that I love most about reading stories: the way the place can almost become a character in the story. I really enjoyed reading this one, Mary.

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Mary Bendickson
05:12 Nov 27, 2025

Thank you.😊

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Daniel Rogers
03:41 Nov 26, 2025

You've got me hooked. I need to know if her parent's murderer will be caught. If the young couple marry. And if the will is legitimate.

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Mary Bendickson
06:08 Nov 26, 2025

Watch for this weeks episode.😉
Thanks for liking

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08:12 Nov 25, 2025

Your people are so real! I can hear their distinct voices. I did almost wonder if Nellie had been the murderer. The ambiguity kept me hooked.,
Nice job!

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Mary Bendickson
13:07 Nov 25, 2025

Thanks so much.😊

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Abby Reap
07:28 Nov 25, 2025

Wonderful work yet again, Mary! Looking forward to seeing more of your stories :)

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Mary Bendickson
13:06 Nov 25, 2025

Thanks for liking and the follow.😊

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Stevie Burges
09:48 Nov 24, 2025

Thanks Mary. Well written that made me want to keep on reading and find out where it was going.

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Mary Bendickson
17:41 Nov 24, 2025

Thanks. Started with 'Wind Beneath My Arrow' will probably finish this week.

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Helen A Howard
09:16 Nov 24, 2025

Relieved things are looking up with Cody. Pleased she said yes. Plenty of fresh adventures to come hopefully.

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John Rutherford
09:01 Nov 24, 2025

Story continues. Howdy Nellie Rae!

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Mary Bendickson
17:38 Nov 24, 2025

Nellie says 'Hey' and thanks.

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Iris Silverman
03:27 Nov 24, 2025

You really captivated this time period well. Here's to more of Nellie Rae's Adventures in the future

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Mary Bendickson
17:33 Nov 24, 2025

Thank you.
May have the finishing touch this week.

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Akihiro Moroto
02:31 Nov 23, 2025

It's amazing that you're writing Nellie-Rae in these series. I hope happiness and sense of peace be found for her soon. Thanks for sharing, Mary!

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Mary Bendickson
05:54 Nov 23, 2025

Thanks. Think I have final episode this week.😊

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Rebecca Lewis
19:50 Nov 22, 2025

Hey! First off, I enjoyed the story. It pulled me in right away — super emotional start with Nellie-Rae, and you did a great job painting the setting. I could picture that small Georgia town and feel how heavy everything was for her. It just felt real, from the sheriff bringing her to the parsonage to her throwing up after everything she’d just been through. You did an awesome job showing Nellie’s grief and fear without overdoing it. Her reactions made sense — like clutching the gold, not trusting her uncle, and being overwhelmed by all the people. The relationship with Cody was sweet and gave the ending a nice hopeful lift with that “sparks fly” payoff. That tied things together well. Though — this works. It’s got heart, tension, and a satisfying ending. I love how you're building this into a longer story.

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Mary Bendickson
19:55 Nov 22, 2025

Thank you. Have the last installment written. Could have fit it into this past week's prompts but decided it could be made to work in current ones , too.

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Mary Butler
23:15 Nov 21, 2025

Gold, grief, and grit. Mercy me.

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Mary Bendickson
07:36 Nov 22, 2025

Glad you liked it.

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Jack Kimball
00:12 Nov 21, 2025

Mary, your stories always make me smile. There’s always real people under the grit. Speaking of grit, have you read, True Grit, by Charles Portis? Published in 1968, your writing reminds me of his.

Favorite line:
Otis Crawford, repeated his comment from the day he found me on his property dressing the deer I wounded and followed across the creek. Something about I wasn't much but he hadn't had a woman in a long time...E-EWE!

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Mary Bendickson
03:45 Nov 21, 2025

Thanks for liking. Saw movie 'True Grit' so thanks for compliment. This one is about fifth in series starting with 'Wind Beneath My Arrow'. Wrapping it up with next one, I hope.

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Suzanne Marsh
21:35 Nov 20, 2025

great storyline, hooked me from the start

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Mary Bendickson
03:39 Nov 21, 2025

Thanks.

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