One Good Turn

Crime Friendship Mystery

Written in response to: "Write a story that includes a betrayal." as part of Whodunit?.

Harry Hartley walked out of the prison gates with his head held high and his hands in his pockets, as if he’d popped in for a chat. Behind him, the guard called, “See you soon, Harry.”

He didn’t turn. He’d heard it before.

At the bus stop, he breathed in the cool morning air. Six years thinking, refining, polishing a plan that would change everything. A plan he’d kept tucked behind his eyes like a winning lottery ticket.

The bus rattled him into Winchester in half an hour. Another twenty minutes’ walk took him to a row of tired terraced houses. He stopped outside one where weeds had taken over.

He frowned, walked the path, and pressed the bell. The ringing echoed deep inside the house. After a long wait, bolts clattered, and the door creaked open.

An old woman squinted at him. “Is it you, Harry? My eyes aren’t so good these days.”

“Yes, Mum.”

She threw her arms around him, thin and warm. “If you’re staying, you’d better come in.”

The kitchen smelled faintly of toast. Harry sat at the table.

“I’ll make the tea.”

“Are the lads still using the pub down the road?”

She paused. “If you want my advice, stay away from them unless you fancy going back inside.”

“I’m never going back. I’ll sweep streets first.”

She chuckled. “I’ll believe that when I see it.”

“I start next month. Trainee refuse‑disposal officer.”

Her smile softened. “I’d better make your bed then.”

“I’m not going back, Mum.”

He looked out at the garden, a jungle of nettles and brambles. “I’ll start on that tomorrow. Make it look good. Somewhere you can sit and enjoy the sunshine.”

“That’ll be nice.”

Harry wandered into the front room while his mum washed the dishes. A row of old photographs stood on the sideboard, their frames dulled with time. One showed him at ten, grinning with a football under his arm, his dad beside him, hand on his shoulder.

His mum came in quietly, drying her hands. “You always looked so proud in that one,” she said. “Your dad used to say you’d go further than he ever did.”

Harry swallowed. “He said that?”

“Every chance he got.” She touched the frame, her fingers trembling. “He’d be glad you’re home. He worried about you, even at the end.”

Harry looked away. “I’m not that lad anymore.”

“No,” she said. “But you don’t have to be the man they think you are either.”

He rubbed his palms together. “I’m trying, Mum.”

“I know.” She squeezed his shoulder. “Just don’t let those boys drag you back. You’re worth more than all of them.”

For the first time in years, he felt something close to hope.

After dinner, Harry wandered to The Crossed Keys. The pub smelled of old beer and dirty carpets.

“Jammy Hartley’s back, boys,” said a man at the bar.

Harry nodded to the four men. “Mine’s a pint of best.”

They chatted about football, beer prices, and women.

Halfway through his second pint, Harry asked, “Are you lot still busy?”

Silence dropped like a stone.

Tom Edwards, tall and built like a cyclops, set his glass down. “Why?”

Harry nodded at a table. Once they’d all sat, he said, “I’ve got a plan to make us rich. But I need help.”

Tom snorted. “Out less than a day and you’ve got a plan? You’re talking through your arse.”

Harry grinned. “Not my plan. The old fella I shared a cell with. Poor sod died. But if you’re not interested, I’ll find someone who is.”

“This cellmate of yours. Give me a name?”

“Bill Sumner. Gravedigger. Light fingers. Helped himself to the church silver.”

For an hour, Harry laid out the details. The men listened in silence.

“I’ll get the pints in,” Harry said.

“Before you do,” Tom growled, “I run the show.”

“Fine. But remember it’s my plan, and I get two shares.” Harry sauntered to the bar.

Two weeks later, everything was ready.

Harry parked their stolen Transit beside the church and graveyard. Five men in dark blue overalls followed him through the overgrown shrubbery. At a heavy wooden door at the back of the church, he stopped. With a locksmith’s tools, he coaxed it open. Air tainted by oil and petrol drifted out.

“Torch,” he whispered.

They descended worn stone steps into an arched cellar. The place felt ancient enough to resent their presence. Torch beams cast bizarre shadows as they moved forward.

A sudden clatter bounced off the walls. Pete cursed. “Dropped my bloody torch.”

Harry turned. “Pick it up. And keep your head. These tunnels are older than all of us put together.”

Pete retrieved it. “I hate these places. Feels like something’s watching us.”

“It’s just stone,” said Harry. Bill Sumner had described it perfectly: a Roman vein running under the town, still pulsing if you listened long enough.

The tunnel narrowed to single‑file.

“Easy,” Harry whispered.

Tom pushed through, exhaling hard. “This place is a coffin.”

“A coffin full of money,” Harry said, though his pulse thudded. Bill had warned him about weak spots where the sandstone had eroded to nothing. Harry scanned the ceiling, noting cracks like spiderwebs. If the lads panicked… He brushed the thought aside.

“Keep moving. Not far now.”

A rust‑covered steel door blocked their way. Harry sprayed WD‑40 into the lock and waited. It opened with a heavy click.

Beyond lay a brick tunnel.

“A Roman water channel,” Harry said, pulling a click‑wheel odometer from his rucksack. “This leads straight under the bank in the town square. One thousand metres and we’re beneath the strong room. Then it’s up to you boys.”

Fifteen minutes later, he stopped beneath a patch of ceiling. “Right above us is a fortune. Once you break through, I’ll fetch the Transit; we’ll load up and get out.”

Tom tapped the stones with his hammer. “We need to be careful. Once the keystone’s out, the roof will collapse.”

He inserted a long steel chisel and levered the bricks free. “Piece of cake.”

For two hours, they hammered, dust coating their masked faces.

“We’ve hit concrete!” someone shouted.

“Diamond cutter,” Tom ordered.

An hour later, they broke through.

Harry clapped Tom’s shoulder. “See you soon, rich men.”

He headed back alone. At the steel door, he closed and locked it, jamming an iron roof prop against it. Further along, he locked the crypt entrance and wedged it shut.

Outside, he breathed fresh air and laughed. Somewhere in the distance, a dog barked.

At a public phone box, he dialled the city centre police station. With layers of handkerchief muffling his voice, he squeaked, “You might be interested in a bank robbery happening right now. Westminster Bank, town centre. Thieves are inside, opening every deposit box.”

He yanked the wire free.

An hour later, washed and changed, he knocked on his parole officer’s door. A well‑dressed man answered.

“Come in, Mr Hartley. I’ve been expecting you.”

Harry sat, hands relaxed on his knees. “Sorry I’m late.”

“No problem. How’s the job going?”

Harry smiled, slow and genuine. “Great bunch of guys. Love it.”

Outside, sirens wailed.

Harry stepped into the sunlight and strolled home, hands in his pockets, feeling great.

His mum was in the garden, wearing old gloves and hacking at nettles with surprising determination.

“You’re back early,” she said.

“Thought I’d give you a hand.”

She smiled, softening everything. “Start on that corner. It’s been a jungle for years.”

Harry picked up a spade and drove it into the earth. The soil gave way easily, rich and dark. He worked in silence, listening to the distant sirens fade. For the first time in a long time, he felt the honest ground beneath him.

His mum watched him. “You look different.”

“Do I?”

“Yes. Like you’ve decided what sort of man you want to be.”

Harry paused, leaning on the spade. “Maybe I have.”

She nodded. “Good. The garden could do with a man like that.”

Harry smiled. The sun warmed his back. The earth smelled clean. And somewhere beneath the town, behind locked doors and ancient stone, the past was where he wanted it.

Posted Jul 18, 2026
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The Old Izbushka
July 19, 2026 13:32

I loved this story! I especially loved the twist for Harry at the end. That line: ‘he felt the honest ground beneath him’ truly captured it for me. The ending works and is such a great contrast of his former life behind locked doors with the brightness and beauty of his future, which now looks so much brighter!! Great story!!

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