P.T.S.

Crime Mystery Fiction

This story contains themes or mentions of physical violence, gore, or abuse.

Written in response to: "Write a story about a character who fails to understand something until they have the full context." as part of Antanaclasis.

Slowly, I pulled into the driveway of the house labeled 2269 in silver letters. The sound of waves crashing on the shore reached me the moment I was out of the car. A salty breeze blew my red and yellow cape every which way. I gathered all of my courage, then strutted up to the front door. With one last deep breath, I knocked three times.

A young woman opened the door. Her piercing blue eyes widened as they scanned my outfit.

“Uh, hi. Is there something I can help you with?”

“Are you Avenlee Hursch?” There was no time to waste.

“Yes. Who are-” Before she could finish, I grabbed her by the arm. I wrapped a blindfold over her eyes, slapped handcuffs on her wrists, and we were gone.


Fifteen minutes late, I parked the car next door to an apartment complex. I left Avenlee after locking the car doors and headed to the apartments.

I repeated the same process I went through with Avenlee, picking up a middle-aged man. From what I knew, his name was Graham and he was a chef.

Two down, two to go.


Another house, but this time was different. Kavya put up a fight. The moment I tried to take her out of the house, she trashed and threw a quick right hook.

Crack!

“You broke my nose!” I screeched. She threw cuss words, tried to loosen my grip, but I pinned her arms behind her.

“Leave me alone; let me go!” Kavya yelled. Without another word, I put the cuffs and blindfold on her.

Maybe she is a good fit, I thought as I shoved Kavya into the car.


Hoping the next candidate was easy like Avenlee and Graham, I jogged to the door. After her talk of escaping in the car, I didn’t want Kavya to have the time to. I pounded on the door, but it didn’t open. I rang the doorbell, knocked again, and finally, a groggy man revealed himself. He was in a bathrobe and had heavy bags under his eyes. His actions were sluggish.

“I’m guessing you’re a writer. Let’s go.”

Still half-asleep, the man made no move to stop me as I went through the motions and sat him in the passenger’s seat. He was asleep before we left the property.


A tiny handle stuck out of the ground, almost unnoticeable. After checking no one was watching, I pulled on it, and a hatch opened to steps.

“These are steps. Might want to hang onto each other going down,” I advised. Avenlee reached out and put a hand on my shoulder. I began the descent down, our footsteps echoing on the metal. 

“Close the door!” I said. It clanged shut.

“Where are we going?” Graham questioned.

“This feeling would be great to describe in a book,” the writer, Devan, said. I rolled my eyes.

“If you don’t tell me where I’m at, someone’s gonna die!” Kavya was one brave soul, but I knew it was fake. Avenlee gasped at the threat but didn’t say a word. I refused to reply to any of them.

We were now walking down a metal hallway. The organization couldn’t afford something to hit ground level and crack the walls, that being the reason for all of the metal.

“Why are we walking so far? I can’t see! I’m starving, too.” Graham continued to complain.

“Shut UP!” I snapped. All four of the captives stayed quiet. I stopped in front of a mustard yellow door and had the number 67 at the top.

“When we enter this room, I will take your handcuffs off, but don’t be getting any ideas. Once I’m out of the room, you can take your blindfolds off. Anyone who does otherwise will be executed,” I explained. It was an empty threat, but it sure did the trick.

I pulled my ID card out of my checkered jeans and swiped it on the scanner next to the door, which automatically opened. Determinedly, I marched the group into the room. Using a key stored in the pocket of my pants, I unlocked each person’s cuffs, then led them to their seats.

“Enjoy.” I left the room, then lifted my watch to my mouth. “Potential recruits are in the dining room. Reporting to your office now.

“Wonderful,” a voice snickered back. I smirked, jogging down long, twisting hallways. I passed hundreds of different colored doors. These were all the rooms of my organization’s members.

To my relief, I finally reached the forest green door. Two beefy guards stood in my way. I raised an eyebrow. Both men quivered.

“So sorry, miss. We forgot your-” the bodyguard on the left started. My eyes narrowed.

“You forgot my importance? Do that again and I’ll show you how important I am,” I scolded.

“Of course, ma’am. We’re so sorry,” the other idiot said. I nodded, satisfied. They stepped aside and the door swung open. Rock music blared from an electric guitar played by an older man.

“Richard! You should be watching the cameras! I’m surrounded by idiots.” I watched as he continued to spin around in his chair behind the desk while he played his guitar.

“They’re going to find a way to ESCAPE!” I screamed. Reluctantly, Richard stopped strumming strings and looked at me.

“I’m not stupid, Athena. I know Kavya could leave if she wanted to. But, you see, these glasses I’m wearing have a built-in screen connected to the cameras.” Richard rolled his eyes at me, then waved me away. Furious, I walked to the room next door.

Computer screens lined the walls. As most of the rooms’ occupants didn’t allow cameras, a lot of the screens showed the hallways.

“Which room?” the tech guy, Adam, asked from the corner.

“Dining,” I replied. He nodded, tapped a few buttons on the wall, and every screen switched to show the dining room at every angle. The four people I took sat at the table. They stared at each other, seeming to be in a silent argument.

“Kavya’s looks the most savage, she should try it first. Unless she’s a chicken, of course,” Graham sneered.

“I am not a chicken. I’ll do it.” After a hesitant moment, Kavya picked up a fry that sat in front of her. She lifted it to her mouth, and with a glance around the yellow room, took a bite.

Swallow.

“I’m not dead. Eat.”

Still a bit worried, the other three ate a few fries and a bite of their burger. I smiled, glad that they trusted each other.

“I got a message from Richard. He says you should go down there now,” Adam stated.

“Tell him not yet. It’s not time.”

“But-”

“Just tell him no for Pete’s sake!” I exclaimed. People were so scared of Richard for some reason.

Turning back to the screens, I sighed. The men and women weren’t talking to each other. Just great.

Minutes passed. The bland noise of plates and glasses clinking on the oak table was excruciating.

“Tell Richard I’m going in,” I said, already out the door. As quickly as possible, I maneuvered my way back to the mustard yellow door, immediately going inside. All eyes were on me.

“My name is Athena Mondue. I am a part of the P.T.S. organization. The four of you are potentially going to be new members. Enjoy your dinner.” Then I left.

Waiting for me in the screen room was Richard; he watched the many screens intently. I came up next to him to see three mouths moving almost fearfully. Avenlee stayed quiet, but she still seemed interested in the conversation.

“What kind of name is Athena?” Kavya asked.

“I don’t like her! She broke my nose earlier!” I shouted, turning to Richard.

“She’s feisty like you. She’s in. Adam?” Richard beckoned him from his corner.

“Yes, sir?”

“Tell Marshall to get Kavya to join and to tell her what she has to do to become a member. Thanks.” Richard waved Adam away.

“What do you think P.T.S. stands for?” It was Devan. I turned back to the screens.

“Why didn’t she tell us more? And this food is atrocious,” Graham whined. It was so annoying.

“He’s out,” Richard and I said in unison. I heard Adam tapping buttons right away.

Shortly after, we watched two bodyguards walk into the dining room. One of them grabbed kavya, the other snatched Graham. The two were lugged out of the room, half-eaten plates left on the table. Avenlee gasped and Devan’s eyes widened. They both jumped when the door slammed shut. That was P.T.S.: quick, but leaving with a bang.

“The ‘s’ in P.T.S. probably stands for society since Athena said it was an organization,” Avenlee whispered. It was surprising to hear her talk, considering she hadn’t said a word since I collected her.

“You know, you’re right! And the ‘p’ could stand for professional!” Devan exclaimed.

How were they cracking this?! I thought.

“But what would the ‘t’ be?” Avenlee furrowed her eyebrows in deep thought while she nibbled on a fry.

“Athene seemed sneaky, and those guys were strong enough to crack skulls during a getaway. Maybe that has something to do with it,” Avenlee said. She smiled, knowing she was getting close to the name of my organization.

“Man, this would be a great plot for a book!” Devan took a celebratory bite of his burger.

“I like his energy, good for when we have a big project. But he’ll expose us in his writing. He can’t be recruited.” I looked at Richard, hoping he was on the same page.

“You’re right. He and the complainer will have to be… you know. The girls will become members.” Slowly, a smile came to Richard’s face; he was proud of me. I didn’t say anything, but I grinned ear-to-ear.


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Six of us stood in the middle of a forest. Avenlee and Kavya each held a pistol. Devan and Graham were across from them, styling blindfolds yet again.

“Avenlee and Kavya, repeat after me. I will dedicate my life to P.T.S.” Richard stated.

“I will dedicate my life to P.T.S.” Kavya and Avenlee repeated.

“And I will do whatever is asked of me, no matter the cost,” Richard continued. The women copied him.

“Great! Complete your first assignment, ladies,” I ordered. Confidently, two guns were raised.

Bang!

Bang!

Graham and Devan dropped.

“Welcome to the Professional Theft Society.”

Posted Jul 09, 2021
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July 20, 2021 00:16

QUICK I’M BORED BE FUNNY

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July 20, 2021 02:33

MY INSPIRATION TO WRITE IS GETTING SOME SORT OF SOME THING CALLED WRITING FINISHED BEFORE THE REEDSY CONTEST ENDS

not really funny but I'm trying...

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July 20, 2021 15:24

OOH SMORTTT

lol np~

(Also new story posted if you feel like checking it out~ Thank you! :3)

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July 20, 2021 15:54

XDD

lol

(OH YAY!!!!!! me gonna go read it rn~ my pleasure! <3)

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July 20, 2021 17:22

okay so uh-
reading anything good rn?

(OOP THANKSS!)

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July 20, 2021 18:00

I've been re-reading Harry Potter, wbu?

(NO PROBLEMM!

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July 09, 2021 00:16

*wipes sweat off forehead*

After almost a month, I have a new story! :D It was super fun coming up with the whole idea for it. ^^
I'm aware that it doesn't really match up with the prompt, but I decided that it was worth it to submit this with a not-perfect prompt than wait another week to submit it.
This may be my longest story that is just a stand-alone and doesn't continue at all, at ~1,700 words! Yay!

I hope you enjoyed reading! :D

-Brooke D. <3

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Dhwani Jain
July 31, 2021 12:19

Hey, Bronana
I heard about you a lot from fellow Reedsy-ers and I was curious, so I dropped over.
I have a challenge for you: MAKE MY 'BANANA NAME, IT SHOULD MAKE SENSE.
If you complete this challenge successfully, AND at least 10 friends of mine on Reedsy like the name, I will use it to sign off my comments for a month. If you lose..
Well, if you lose, I don't know what you'll do, but tell me what you think about htis in the reply.

Also, I am eager, very eager, to read your stories. Have any funny (I mean ULTRA funny) ones?

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August 01, 2021 03:32

Hi!
Aw, that makes me so happy to think that you've heard about me from others. :D
CHALLENGE ACCEPTED!
Your new banana name shall be d h w a n a n a. If that does not meet your standards, I can try again to finish the challenge. :)

Yay! Thank you! Well, I wouldn't necessarily say it is ULTRA funny, but you could check out my story called "Waiting." :)

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Dhwani Jain
August 01, 2021 05:01

Hello!
Yeah, people like Aerin and Luna talk about you!
GOOD!
dhwanana is kinda weird (no offence) because if I pronounce it, it sounds like "धोना ना" in Hindi, which means to not to wash something.... XD
Okay, I'll read it!!!

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August 02, 2021 14:17

Aw!
Ooh! And none taken.
But did I beat the challenge?

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Dhwani Jain
August 03, 2021 03:20

Yeah....I'll ask people and then tell.

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August 03, 2021 12:47

Um okay!

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Dhwani Jain
August 01, 2021 05:03

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August 02, 2021 14:14

Thanks so much! :D

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Dhwani Jain
August 03, 2021 03:20

Yeah....

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Dhwani Jain
August 01, 2021 05:05

I HAVE BEEN DOWNVOTED!!!!!!!
I HAD ABOUT 1100+ POINTS, AND NOW I AM LEFT AT 660+....
PLEASE HELP ME, MY REEDSY FRIENDS
STOP DOWNVOTING NOW!!!!!

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August 02, 2021 14:14

Of course! I'll head over to your account.

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Dhwani Jain
August 03, 2021 03:19

Thanks!

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August 03, 2021 12:47

No problem!

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LMAO SHIP WARS

also https://forms.gle/rv5PyTk3We5JcryY9

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November 23, 2021 01:15

😂😂

I’ll check it out soon :)

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HAHAHAHAHAHAA

okkkk

sHiP wArS

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November 25, 2021 16:46

:) I filled It out! Thanks so much Leste! <33

tHe BeSt KiNd

nOw Im TeMpTeD tO bRiNg iT bAcK
bEtTeR rUn WhIlE yOu StIlL hAvE a ChAnCe

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ofcccc :D

oH Ma gOd

oH nO

(the reedsycast is out btw :D)

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November 26, 2021 00:33

oH yEs ChIlD

I hAvE bEgUn PrEpArAtIoNs

(omg yay ima go read it asap)

wait Leste I'm confuzzled-
I'm reading TSAU rn, and then Ima read EUTW
EUTW is the reedsycast right- or am I insane-
I'm confuzzling myself

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October 18, 2021 19:42

HELLO
HELP
THIS IS EM
I'M BORED TO DEATH

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November 03, 2021 21:45

HELLO
I WILL TRY
THIS IS B R O N A N A
DUDE ME TOO
IDK WHAT TO SAY THO

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November 04, 2021 11:53

I'M SOOOOO BORED
DO YOU LIKE ROCKS

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November 07, 2021 23:40

ME TOOOO BUT I HAVE HW TO DOOOOOOO
YES I LOVE ROCKS THEY ARE THE ESSENSE OF MY EXISTENCE
DO YOU LIKE ROCKS

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November 08, 2021 23:06

I LOVE ROCKS
ESPECIALLY THE SHINY ONES
AND THE SMOOTH ONES
THE ROUGH ONES ARE UNCOMFORTABLE TO HOLD
I LIKE SMALL ONES

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November 08, 2021 23:12

THOSE ARE LITERALLY THE BEST ROCKS
OOH AND I LOVE THE ONES THAT ARE PINK
BUT LIKE CLEAR
AT THE SAME TIME
THE PURPLE AND
GREEN ONES LIKE THAT ARE GREAT TOO

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October 11, 2021 19:11

I literally love ur bio
And I know I already said this but
IT’S GOLD

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October 15, 2021 11:08

Awww, thanks! It’s really just a lot of rambling Brooke-ness
Your chaotic ness is even better tho!!!!!! I love it so much :) I’ll try to get to your TikTok acc soon

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October 16, 2021 00:50

yessss which is the bestttttt
aksjajsjsjajdfj thank you!!!! wait lol *dies of embarrassment even tho I’m posting links places anyways* ty-

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October 16, 2021 04:34

duuuuude thank youuuuuuuuuuu
my pleasure! *lol ofc* yw-

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Liling Wei
October 09, 2021 18:33

I-
That was...
Well...
They're...dead now...so um...wow.
Uhh...
Moving on...
I really liked the story!! I think it fit in well to the prompt and really dramatized the whole thing. Hope there'll be a sequel???

Livia

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October 10, 2021 20:13

Yeah…
They are…
Thanks so much, Livia! I’m thinking about it, although I have had block for months now and can’t get out 😭

Brooke

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Liling Wei
October 10, 2021 23:25

Ugh for some reason sequels are so much harder than the first ones 😣😣
Good luck though!!

Liv

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October 15, 2021 11:05

They are *sobs eternally*
Thanks!

the fourth Sanderson sister

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Liling Wei
October 15, 2021 16:24

:)

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Dhwani Jain
October 02, 2021 08:28

The post is out guys! I can’t believe it the number of views it has gotten! Please do check it out! I am really happy with the response and would love it if you guys too check the post out!!!
~ Dhwani Jain {02-10-2021}

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October 04, 2021 11:06

I’m sorry, but I’m not sure I know what you’re talking about. ❓

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Ava F
September 29, 2021 15:02

pls look at my new story up!

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Sapphire 🌼
September 26, 2021 21:59

AH AH AH AH A BROOOOOOOOKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

BROOKE + COOKIE = BROOKIE

I MISSED YOU

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September 29, 2021 01:59

SAPHIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

SAPPHIRE + FIRE = SAFIRE

GURL I MISSED YOU MORE

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Sapphire 🌼
October 13, 2021 03:05

WOAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SAFIRE

OMG HOW HAVE YOU BEEN

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October 15, 2021 11:09

YASSSSSSSSSSS
SAFIRE

I’M BETTER NOW WE’RE TALKING AGAIN!!!!!! WBU???

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Sapphire 🌼
October 15, 2021 15:38

YASS SAME!!!!!!

IM SO HAPPY TO BE BACK AIUFNAIUGNVAOIEJ

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October 16, 2021 04:35

DUDE SAME I CAN ACTUALLY BE ACTIVE ON WEEKENDS NOW

(but only weekends. :( )

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September 20, 2021 02:51

YES I LOVE THAT MOVIE

I need to rewatch it soon omg

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September 20, 2021 23:12

IKR ME TOOOOOOO

I just watched it recently and I was like "omg this is a whole vibe and I need it"

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September 22, 2021 00:21

yesss

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September 20, 2021 23:13

YOOOOOOO

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September 23, 2021 01:09

SUPPPPPPPPP

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September 23, 2021 11:17

GR8888888 WBUUUUU

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Dhwani Jain
September 01, 2021 06:05

So it turns our everyone LOVES my nickname. And now acc. to our deal, I am using it as my name.

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September 03, 2021 19:56

Yay! I’m so excited!

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Dhwani Jain
September 04, 2021 10:52

Yeah

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Can I get a name???

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August 30, 2021 20:48

Sure! Your name shall be b r e c k n a n a

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YAYYYYYYYY!!!!

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September 03, 2021 19:57

😁😁😁😁😁

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:)
How are you doing?

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September 04, 2021 04:01

Good, you?

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I LOVE it! Also, i think that you should be on the leader board, with all the stories that you have, and the cool name, I don't know how you're not on it.
-Breckin N :)

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August 26, 2021 01:03

Aw, thank you so much, Breckin! I actually used to be on the leaderboard, around 20th place I believe, but a downvoter (or multiple) went on a spree and got rid of a bunch of my besties' and my own points. We're all over it now, though. :)
-b r o n a n a

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Aww. I wish you were still there. Bronana is the best!

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August 30, 2021 20:49

Awwwww, thank you so much!

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TJ Squared
August 21, 2021 16:10

Heyyyy Brooke!
Ivy Carter is coming back sometime next week along with Abigail Cross, spread the word!

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August 23, 2021 19:37

Hey, Wolf!
It's already in my bio! :DDD

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TJ Squared
August 23, 2021 22:19

Great :D
How have you been?

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August 26, 2021 01:03

:D
Pretty good, you?

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August 20, 2021 00:06

Hey, Bronana! (hehe that's fun to say)

I am suddenly seeing you EVERYWHERE so I was like, hmm let's go see his page.

I really like this story! Like a lot a lot a lot! Great job! Happy writing!

Oh and before I forget, can you make my banana name? 🥺

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August 21, 2021 12:24

Hi, Bella! (haha thanks)

Aww, that's so awesome for me to hear! :D (By the way, I don't mean to be rude, but I go by she/her, not he/his. Sorry if something was confusing. :) )

Thank you so much!

Of course! Let me think... b e l n a n a! :D

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August 21, 2021 12:32

:D

Oops, I even read your bio and saw that you were Brooke, and I still ended up putting his? Sorry!!

You're welcome!

thanks! :D

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August 21, 2021 12:37

You're totally fine! :D

No problem!

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August 21, 2021 12:41

:D

-❤- b e l n a n a

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Megan Sutherland
August 18, 2021 15:49

okay, okay.
AMAZINN

i love the plot to this, and it kept me hooked the whole time. not exactly seeing how it fits with the prompt but whatever i loved reading itttttt. i would love to get to know more about Athena's backstory- why she's in the P.T.S., why she recruited those special people, etc, etc.

my critique: (pls don't be offended)

1. i will love your writing to death, buttttttt when you write it sounds more like you're talking to me, and not writing a story. i think this comes out especially when writing in first-person, which is why i usually try to avoid writing in that perspective as much as possible. im not saying you have to do that, it's just my take on it and i would say try and focus more on using professional (i don't know how to say it) wording? you sound like you're talking instead of letting the words speak for themselves. if that makes any sense.

2. you do a lot of telling and not showing. ive read a lot of stories like that so don't think youre the only one who does this lollll. ill tell you what i tell everyone else: try to use more adjectives, and then what i usually do is reread the story or have a family/friend read it and see if you or they can visualize what you're writing. you want the reader to have an image in their mind of what is going on and you can't do that if you're just telling the story.

3. i understand on reedsy the struggle with the word limit, but you should try to be more detailed. like, in the scene where Athena just busts in and is like "hey im a member of pts" and she just leaves, you left the other characters and myself in a spot of confusion. try to be a bit more descriptive i guesssssss.

sorry im bad at explaining things lol but i hope you get what im trying to say

ilyyyyyyyy
your bestay
meg

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August 21, 2021 12:36

thanks so much! yeah, I knew that the story didn't fit perfectly with the prompt (I mentioned that in my comment abt this story)

yk i'm never offended!

1. a little confusing, but i think I know what you're getting at. i'll try to write in third person more, even if it isn't what i'm most comfortable with ^^

2. ugh ikkkkk, i try to do show-not-tell but i swear my brain does not allow me to (lol). thank you for the tips, though, i'll definitely try that out

3. i see where you're coming from, but that was kindaaaa the point of that scene, to leave everyone sort of confused on what Athena is talking about. but i will try to be more descriptive overall. :)

lol it's fine, and i do

ilyyy
your bestay
b r o n a n a

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Megan Sutherland
August 21, 2021 17:40

yayyyy im glad i could help!!

your bestayy
megan

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August 23, 2021 19:36

you def did! :D

your bestaay
brooke

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Megan Sutherland
August 18, 2021 15:36

🍌
omg brooke. please don't say you get all your inspo from me because im about to cryyyyyyyy

i wish we talked more!!!! i wish i wasn't so freaking busy!!!! i wish we didn't have to be scared of like identity theft or whatever so we could swap email/snapchat/other socials!!!!!!

rawrrrrrrrr

ilysm thank you for all the credit but i don't deserve itttttttttttttttt

im going to try and spend more time on here, also gonna go read this story, start a few convos with people and also i just submitted tooooooo it's called Lethal Games if you wanna check it out :DDD

your bestayyyyyy
meg

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August 21, 2021 12:30

shanks!
but I doooooooo, you're my literal idollllllll

Sameeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

rawr

ilysm too, my pleasure, but you totally deserve it! you're literally like the best person here. period.

yay! ooh yesssss, I've been waiting on a new one from you (;

your bestayyyyyy
b r o n a n a

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Megan Sutherland
August 21, 2021 17:39

ahhhh ty ty ty ily

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August 23, 2021 19:37

yw yw yw ilyt

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bronononononnonnononononnononnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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August 21, 2021 12:37

celnananananananananananananananannnnnnnnnnnnnnnaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Check my bio, I'm leaving but not sure how to say it.

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August 17, 2021 03:29

Okay. Aw, we’re going to miss you so much, Jade! Also, I hope that you feel better and have fun with music!

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Thank you so much! I will! :.)

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August 21, 2021 12:25

My pleasure! :D

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August 10, 2021 18:25

*darkness
*spotlight on me
*evil voice
Well well well
HELLO THERE

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August 10, 2021 22:23

*shivers
*gasps
*ohnos
...
hi

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August 11, 2021 01:12

*hehe
ayyyyyyyyyy wassup?

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August 11, 2021 20:37

*lol
yoooooooo nuttin much, just chillin
wassup with you?

i can't-
i'm literally lol-ing

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August 12, 2021 01:00

Oooh noice!
Same here, went to the beach then ate about 1500 calories so yippee :D

Wdm lol-
MSKANAJHSA YEET

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August 14, 2021 14:46

Haha thanks
Oh funnnnnn

Nvm haha-
JDICYENSOYDH YEET YEET

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Palak Shah
August 08, 2021 14:31

I love the story Bronana, it was written very well.
Great job :))
Also, I love your profile picture :)))
Could you please read my latest story if possible :))

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August 09, 2021 21:23

Thank you so much! :D
Of course, I'll add it to my list. ;)

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Palak Shah
August 10, 2021 18:12

Thanks :))

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August 10, 2021 22:23

No problem.

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Palak Shah
August 11, 2021 16:55

:)))))))))))))))))))

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Ayush Kakar
August 07, 2021 01:50

🍌. :D

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August 09, 2021 21:23

Thanks!

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TJ Squared
August 06, 2021 13:36

Just to let ya know, Reedsy finally did update, but not in the way most were expecting. They just changed the contest a bit.
https://blog.reedsy.com/creative-writing-prompts/faq/

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August 09, 2021 21:25

Thanks, Wolf! I'll check it out. :)

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TJ Squared
August 09, 2021 21:26

:)

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