“A Chance You Can’t Afford to Miss”

Drama Fiction Romance

Written in response to: "Write about a character who runs into someone they once loved." as part of Echoes of the Past with Lauren Kay.

People like to say that happiness lies in money. I used to nod politely whenever I heard that, though deep down I knew it wasn’t true. Happiness is quieter, subtler, more elusive. It hides in unexpected places — in a breath of warm wind, in a familiar voice, in the sudden return of someone you once loved.

I didn’t know that when I arrived in Argentina. I thought I was here on assignment — a simple trip, a few interviews, a taste of local wine. A harmless journey. A pause in life. Something between chapters, not a chapter of its own.

But life has its own rhythm. And sometimes it brings you back to the one person you thought you had lost forever.

The office of El Paraíso was perched above the kitchen, and the smell of roasted meat drifted up the stairs like a memory from childhood. The building looked ordinary — white walls, a narrow balcony, a staircase that creaked under my weight. Nothing suggested that my past was waiting for me on the other side of the door.

Inside, the office resembled a small apartment. Two desks, a folding screen hiding a sofa, a carpet on the wall. A quiet place. A safe place.

And then I heard it.

“Hi, Alex!..”

Her voice. Light, familiar, unmistakable.

I turned — and there she was.

Miriam.

Time didn’t stop, but it softened. The years between us folded like a map. She looked almost the same: the same spark in her eyes, the same half‑smile that once made the world feel less heavy. Only something new lived in her expression — a quiet maturity, a gentleness shaped by distance and time.

“Hello, baby,” I said quietly. “Long time no see.”

She tilted her head, amused. “Still dramatic.”

“Still beautiful,” I replied. “Still unforgettable.”

She didn’t answer — but her silence warmed the room.

There are people whose presence rearranges the air around you. She was one of them.

She found me a cottage in Los Altos — a quiet settlement tucked between hills and forest. A place that looked peaceful, almost dreamlike. The kind of place where mornings smell of eucalyptus and evenings glow with soft gold.

We walked side by side, and though we spoke of practical things — the pool, the minimarket, the waterfall trail — something unspoken moved between us. A warmth. A memory. A question neither of us dared to voice.

“You’ll like it here,” she said. “It’s calm.”

Calm. A word that felt strangely intimate when she said it.

The gravel crunched softly under our feet. A breeze lifted a strand of her hair, and she brushed it back with a gesture I remembered too well. It was strange how the smallest things — the tilt of her head, the rhythm of her steps — could bring back entire years.

“Do you ever miss London?” she asked suddenly.

“Sometimes,” I said. “But not today.”

She smiled, and for a moment the world felt lighter.

The next morning, she invited me for breakfast. Her villa was warm, lived‑in, filled with the quiet charm of someone who knows how to make a temporary place feel like home. A soft blanket on the sofa, a vase with wildflowers on the table, a faint scent of citrus in the air.

She moved with the same grace I remembered — calm, precise, as if every gesture carried a hidden tenderness.

“You could move in with me,” she said lightly, pouring coffee.

I looked at her — really looked — and for a moment the years between us vanished.

“That would be nice,” I said.

“One condition,” she added. “You don’t bother me at night.”

I laughed softly. “I wouldn’t dare.”

But something in her eyes — a flicker of warmth, quickly hidden — told me she wasn’t entirely serious.

We ate slowly, unhurriedly, as if breakfast were an excuse to stay in each other’s company a little longer. She told me about the local customs, the food, and the way the sky looked after rain. I told her about London, about the cold mornings and the fog that clung to the river like a stubborn memory.

At one point, she reached for the sugar bowl at the same moment I did. Our fingers brushed — lightly, accidentally — and she froze for a heartbeat. Then she withdrew her hand, but the moment lingered between us like a soft echo.

“Come by this evening,” she said quietly. “There’s something I want to talk about.”

Her voice held a note I couldn’t quite decipher — hope, maybe. Or hesitation. Or both.

Evening came softly, with a violet sky and a breeze that smelled of distant rain. I walked to her villa, feeling strangely young, strangely hopeful. The shadows felt gentle now, not threatening. The silence — expectant.

She opened the door before I knocked.

“You’re late,” she said.

“I like to make an entrance.”

This time she smiled — a real smile, warm and familiar.

“Sit down,” she said. “We need to talk.”

But her voice wasn’t tense. It was soft, almost hesitant.

She sat across from me, her hands wrapped around a cup of mate. The steam curled upward, catching the light.

“Alex,” she said quietly, “do you ever think about the past?”

“Only the parts worth remembering.”

“And… was I one of them?”

I looked at her — at the woman I had once loved, at the woman standing in front of me now, older, stronger, more real.

“You were the best part,” I said.

She lowered her eyes, and for a moment, the room felt too small for everything between us.

“I used to wonder,” she whispered, “what would’ve happened if we hadn’t gone our separate ways.”

“And now?”

“Now I wonder what happens if we don’t make the same mistake twice.”

The words settled between us like soft petals.

“Come tomorrow morning,” she said. “There’s something I want to show you.”

Dawn arrived gently, brushing the rooftops with pale gold. I stepped outside — and there she was, waiting for me at the end of the path. Her hair was tousled by the breeze, her hands tucked into her jacket pockets. She looked both fragile and unbreakable.

“You came,” she said.

“Of course.”

She nodded, as if she had expected nothing less.

“Walk with me,” she said.

We took the forest trail — the one that led away from Los Altos, toward the hills. The air smelled of pine and morning light. Birds stirred in the branches. The world felt new.

After a while, she spoke.

“Do you ever wonder,” she said softly, “why people meet again after so many years?”

“Maybe because they weren’t finished,” I said.

She smiled — a small, luminous smile that reached her eyes.

“Maybe,” she whispered.

We walked in silence for a few minutes, the path narrowing, the sunlight filtering through the leaves like scattered gold. The forest opened into a small clearing — a place where the hills rolled gently toward the horizon.

“This is what I wanted to show you,” she said.

The view was breathtaking — but it wasn’t the landscape that held my attention.

It was her.

Standing there in the morning light, she looked like the answer to a question I hadn’t dared to ask.

“Alex,” she said, turning to me, “I don’t know what happens next. I don’t know where this road leads. But I do know one thing.”

“What’s that?”

She took a breath — a quiet, steady breath — and looked at me the way she used to, when the world was simpler.

“Some chances,” she said, “you can’t afford to miss.”

The morning light wrapped around us like a promise. The forest opened ahead, wide and bright. And for the first time in a long time, I felt something warm and certain rise in my chest.

Hope.

I reached out my hand. She took it without hesitation.

And together, we walked toward whatever waited beyond the trees — not as strangers, not as shadows from the past, but as two people who had finally found their way back to each other.

Posted Feb 07, 2026
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